SkywalkerRules Posted June 30, 2007 Posted June 30, 2007 I wanted to make poems about the characters of Star Wars. Hope you enjoy it! Mara to Luke My dear Luke. Long ago, I wanted revenge, but suddenly my heart changed. We've been going through hard times, but our hearts have been rearranged. Love is all I need. Some say it can heal our sorrow. Others say it can make us bleed. But remember this, Luke... I will always be with you in spirit and heart.
Empress Padme Posted July 14, 2007 Posted July 14, 2007 Man this makes me miss Mara. You captured their love beautifully.
JediMaster12 Posted July 16, 2007 Posted July 16, 2007 Very nice. It is short and sweet. It talks a bit of what she used to feel and how she does now. I know that her nephew Jacen Solo kills her in the latest of the EU books. Looking at it, it seems as a reminder to Luke too. I hope you write another.
SkywalkerRules Posted July 16, 2007 Author Posted July 16, 2007 Thanks! And and I promise, I'll write more poems! I'm glad you guys liked it.
SkywalkerRules Posted July 21, 2007 Author Posted July 21, 2007 This one's from Star Wars: Legacy. Broken Broken. What does that word mean? My heart is heavy, and I feel darkness is almost taking over me. Broken. What a stinging word. It cuts through my heart like a dagger. This burden I carry is so deep and dark. Broken. Anger, fear, and revenge is taking over me. I must stop them, before the Dark Side has won. Bring me to the Light. I pray... I stay in the Light. Broken. That's what I am. - Cade Skywalker
JoeDoe 2.0 Posted July 21, 2007 Posted July 21, 2007 Very nice. It is short and sweet. It talks a bit of what she used to feel and how she does now. I know that her nephew Jacen Solo kills her in the latest of the EU books. Looking at it, it seems as a reminder to Luke too. I hope you write another. Master you forgot the spoiler tag!!! I liked both poems very much, good work! Keep it up!!
SkywalkerRules Posted July 21, 2007 Author Posted July 21, 2007 Thanks, Joe! Glad ya like it! I'll write more soon.
SkywalkerRules Posted July 25, 2007 Author Posted July 25, 2007 Thank you, everybody. I can make a Difference As a Farmboy, I've always wanted to make a Difference. People at Tatooine use to call me "Wormie" or "Daydreamer," just for laughs. But deep in my heart... I knew there was adventure out there Waiting for me. From a Farmboy, to a Rebel pilot, to a Jedi Knight, I've expierenced lots of things in the Galaxy. Now that I'm a Jedi Master, I'm making a Difference To the Galaxy. No matter how old you are, no matter how you look... We all can make a Difference. - Luke Skywalker
JoeDoe 2.0 Posted July 25, 2007 Posted July 25, 2007 Another nice little poem SWR You made an spelling error though on 'expierenced' (it's experienced) Other than that I like it.
SkywalkerRules Posted August 3, 2007 Author Posted August 3, 2007 Thanks! ^_^ Lost Love When I first saw you, I felt joy inside me. Your green eyes made me feel warm, and I loved it when you feel serious. I wanted to keep you company, you see. And I didn't want to see you perilous. As you and I were together, I felt whole. But now... where did you go? -Deliah Blue
SkywalkerRules Posted December 18, 2007 Author Posted December 18, 2007 This one is based on Lyna and Cade, from my RP. Feelings I'm in love. I can't deny it. Every time I see him... I cry. His eyes are green like the grass. His hair... like the sun. But whenever he's really angry... His eyes turn yellow and evil. The Dark Side is trying to grip him. I won't let that happen. These feelings torture me. I want to Tell him. I will. And will protect him from Darkness. -Lyna Honso I see fear in her eyes. I see a broken Spirt... like mine. Her eyes... bright as the sky itself. Her lips are soft and warm. Deep inside... I love her. My own feelings are captured by her beauty. It taunts me... it haunts me. Her spirit, however, is as calm as water. I don't care what happens to me... My feelings for her are uncontrollable. I will protect her, no matter what. -Cade Skywalker
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