Mitth'raw'nuruodo Posted February 11, 2002 Share Posted February 11, 2002 Once there was a girl most beautiful, With hair that shone like the sun. Her eyes glittered and sparkled, With happiness, joy, and fun. Her hair fell about her shoulders, Beautiful, soft, and long. Her neck was slender and graceful, Her chin firm and strong. Her body was perfect in every way, So elegant and fine. Her heart pure and true, Her path a perfect line. I know that she's in love, I would never get in her way. But if I ever got the chance, I'd forever come to stay. I'd love her dearly, Hold her tight. And take her out, For a fun-filled night. If she said no, I would obey. I'd give myself, To keep her safe. It may not happen, And still it may. I just wanted her to know, That I feel this way. . . She has a bf, but I figured I'd just leave my AIM sn, if she want's to know who it is, then I could tell her. Whadaya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue15 Posted February 11, 2002 Share Posted February 11, 2002 ya, that sounds like a good idea. good poem too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sithcloak Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 Good poem. Good luck. Sithcloak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygomaticus Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 my god this is inspirational, good job, good luck, and such a poem is sure to move a girl. You have taken my poem writing interest another step higher.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand_Admiral_Ice Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 I'd say no, unless you two have been dating for awhile (not too long just dating before). If you start a relationship with a poem or whatever, depending on the girl, she might expect you to write a poem for her quite often or expect a lot out of you. However if this is an existing relationship, you're girlfriend would not what kind of person you are and know you only did this to make her feel special on a special occasion and so on and son on. Anyway this post is all based on observation and theory not through experience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Nine Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 Well...sounds like a touchy situation. If she's got a boyfriend, then I'd not recommend doing anything. Another thing, are you interested in her as a person, or just in her body. From what I gather from the first stanzas, that's what you talk about. Basically what I'm saying is...re-examine your feelings for her. If they are still the same, then you've got to make a choice whether or not to go through with your plan. I leave that decision up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue15 Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 cause once u get tired of the body, there's nothing left to enjoy. /end useless comment... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chrisw_30 Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 I say go for it...you only live twice..i mean once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygomaticus Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 Originally posted by Rogue Nine Well...sounds like a touchy situation. If she's got a boyfriend, then I'd not recommend doing anything. Another thing, are you interested in her as a person, or just in her body. From what I gather from the first stanzas, that's what you talk about. Basically what I'm saying is...re-examine your feelings for her. If they are still the same, then you've got to make a choice whether or not to go through with your plan. I leave that decision up to you. exactly! what if shes the proud kind of person who want to go out to dinner every night and wants you to buy her expensive stuff.........gotta look at other things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
captain_drake Posted February 12, 2002 Share Posted February 12, 2002 well thrwan thats a good poam and if it dosn't work and she dumps you. you can come down to Texas and we can sing an old song called ALL MY EX'S LIVE IN TEXAS gurrentted to make you feel better or make you cry even harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitth'raw'nuruodo Posted February 13, 2002 Author Share Posted February 13, 2002 Guys, I'm not just interested in her body! I talked to her every single day last semester for an entire hour. . . while I was supposed to be paying attention in Health class. Hehe. I know her. She's a great person, and I like her not just for her looks but for her personality too. Also, you can't write an entire poem about someone's "beuatiful personality!" They'd think you didn't think they were hot! Anyway, because she has a bf, I'm just leaving it in her locker with my AIM sn. That way we can just talk a while, and maybe I could ask her out when she breaks up with her bf. I just think this would be a great opportunity to get to know her better (her personality, not her looks). Well, now whadaya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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