Divine Spirit Posted July 21, 2002 Share Posted July 21, 2002 Previously... Divine Spirit swiped his card through the dusty terminal and the door creaked but eventually opened. It had been a long time since he last travelled in his assualt shuttle and his personal quaters had, of course, not been used since the last time he was here. As he strode into the room a strong aroma of recycled air entered his nostrils. "Lights" he called and the room was lit up. The cleaning staff had been into his room before he left the Sith Academy and had left it immaculately clean. He walked over to the nearest relax-chair and sat down. He shut his eyes and gradually let the air out of his lungs. A smile crossed his face. A smile which twisted and became a grin. He had just captured and executed Obi-wan Kenobi and he was very satisfied. He let his mind wander into the dark side.....it felt so good. A Sith Trance was more refreshing than any shower thought Divine, as he began to relax every muscle from head to toe. An alarm bell rang in Divine Spirit's head. "I feel distress, panick, anger" thought Divine. "What could this be?" he pondered. He let his mind reach across the ship. Every corridoor, every appartment. "There it is!......its a worthless clone regaining consciousness and feeling these emotions. But why?"though Divine. "It must be Obi-wan!" exclaimed Divine. "I sent him to the executioner over an hour ago! Divine leapt from his chair and hit the door release button in his chamber. But just in that instance, the ship was put on red alert and sirens blared throughout the whole ship. An officer sprinted around the corner and skidded to a halt in front of Divine. The captain bowed, "My Lord, an unidentified person is--" "I know. Send all your troops to the hanger bay!" "Yes My Lord" replied the captain. Divine Spirit Force ran up to the command deck to try and regain control of the situation. He used his anger to spur him on, going ever faster with each step. When he reached the command deck the whole room was a hive of activity. Soldiers shouting commands at one another and other shouting out reports but this commotion was cut short as the shuttle was rocked by laser beams. Divine grabbed hold of a table and he knew then that obi-wan must have got into a fighter. "Transfer energy from lasers to the tractors beams" he shouted to one of the soldiers. "Yes my Lord" was the instant reply. Another pummeling of shots hit the ship and there was loud explosion. After regaining his balance, the viewscreen at the front of the command deck whirred into life. "My emporer, the jedi has ecape..........." The captain fell to the ground, dead. The emporer didn't even raise his hand, or look at him. He was so powerful, he could kill someone by just thinking of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Kessel system: "sir! an unidentified ship has entered the system and is demanding to speak with you by order of the dark emporer." said galono on sensors. "very well ill take it in my private chambers" said the director of kessel neimus flirk. moments later flirk looked on at a shrouded visage, imediately he dropped to one knee. "my lord, what can the kessel system do for you today?" he said trying to impose as much sincerity into his voice as possible, truly he hated these sith. "you will start by informing me as to why production is slowed" s aid Darth Talliusc. "Slowed? production? my lord the men have to get used to the mines more before production can rise again" sputtered the fat spice dealer. "is that so? or is it possible that you have been skimming some resources off the top for your private operations? i shall be with you soon to discuss the situation" and with that the comm flickered and shut off. "this is no good, no good at all" he flipped the comm so as it would send a direct message to stitch, his security director "director, please gather a host of soldiers and conduct our visitor to the... ehhhh, special chambers on the fifth floor, tell him i shall meet him there" and with that he flicked the comm off as rudely as the sithlord had. on the landing platform: " greetings visitor, if my lord would please follow me ill take you to master Flirk, this way please" the sith said nothing but followed, his mind was elsewhere or else he may have noticed the deception. "i wonder how long these fools intend to keep me here? ill just slay the leader and be done with it, then i can return to the matter of that cursed Starblazer" Talliusc thought to himself. Talliusc ran his hands along his two new lightsabers, he had been angered that his master had decided to dispose of his old ones, yet pleased that he was allowed the opportunity to design his own new ones. very few among the jedi would be able to steel themselves against his saber attacks, for this design was unknown to them all. "right through there m'lord, the master is inside waiting" stitch said. "hmm something is wrong, i sense noone in the room beyond at all.... the pitiful fools mean to destroy me" thought Talliusc. he slowly scanned the minds of all the security force present, it appeared as if the bulk of the troops didnt like the idea of killing a sith and enjoyed their service, "very well" thought Talliusc "only the leaders need be punished, the workers have waranted no punishment yet". with a flash of his hand the stout security director was dead on the floor. none of the guardsmen moved, "admirable of them not to flinch at the death of their leader" thought Talliusc as he entered the room knowing full well of the trap beyond "clean that mess up" he called back as the door slid open "and instruct his second in command that they are now first in command by order of the Sith" no one else spoke but one man nodded so Talliusc started for the door again. "m'lord, do not enter that room, i fear my leader means to destroy you" the man who had nodded said. "yes i know" came the reply and he was through the door. As soon as Talliusc was through the door it slammed shut behind him and gas started to flow in through the air vents. Calmly Talliusc sat in a chair in the room and waited. a holoimage sprung up of Flirk. "as you will find that gas is quite toxic and you will not survive, i will inform your master that you must have travelled to close to the maw cluster and were sucked into the black hole, he will believe me for all you sith are reckless" said Flirk. "quiet arent we?" asked the fat director when he got no response "no you wouldnt want to waste the breath. perhaps you wonder why im telling you this? its because i want to see you DIE sith, you and your whole Academy!" with that Flirk sat back and waited. minute after minute rolled by and eventually Talliusc gasped and slipped in his chair to the floor. he made a sick hacking sound and went limp. the pudgy director ordered his comm to send only to the security personnel monitoring the base, "watch the sith for one hour and then, if he doesnt move in that time send security director Stitch to remove the body to my personal chambers, i want to know everything about this man as possible!" "im sorry sir" the voice came back "but Director Stitch was slain by the sithlord before he entered the room." "damn! thats a loss, not many men in this organization are as loyal to me as Stitch, ah well inform his second in command that he leads now" "that promotion went through 10 minutes ago sir" came the voice. "what?" sputtered the fat man. "wretched sith muddelings." and with that once again he shut off the comm, this was not a good day. one hour and fifteen minutes later in the directors private rooms: "we're ready to begin the autopsy director" said lead doctor Sviddle. "very well, you and your team may begin when ready" said Flirk with that the team of 7 doctors started to arrange the necessary tools. two guards waited nearby in case something odd happened, you could never be too careful around sith, even dead ones! "wait, first grab me his weapons, i want those as trophies!" said flirk. the doctor began taking off the weapons of the dead sith, first he handed him a double bladed lightstaff that had clung to the siths back, then two curved lightsaber blades with odd ends. "what the hell?" said Flirk. as he examined the odd blades inspiration struck him and he connected the curve handled blades together at their ends. "strange, its almost like another doublebladed saber but it forms more of an S figure then a line. ive never seen this type of saber before... anything else?" he asked the lead doctor "yes, these" and with that he handed him what appeared to be sharp blades that were attatched to the ends of Talliusc nuckles. "careful director, they appear to be poisoned" "very well" replied Flirk "begin the autopsy." slowly the doctors began removing Talliusc clothes, they left his shorts on as they were going to start in the chest. He was a pale man, all his body was a near white colour, no not white. white was too nice for this colour. this was beyond White. Talliusc was not a massive man, he was only about 5"10 with short black hair that flowed towards the sides of his head and outward. his arms were slightly above average size but not huge. they were toned as was his whole body so that it appeared as if he was flexing everything at once. "magnificent specimen" was all the doctor could say. after several moments of the doctor feeling his stomach and back he gave a yelp "GAHHH" "what? what is it?" asked Flirk quickly "director pardon me but are you sure this man is dead?" asked the doctor as he stepped backward. "yes of course he... SECURITY TO THE DIRECTORS CHAMBERS" he screamed. in a flash Talliusc's eyes opened and he kickflipped upright onto the table. " they shall never arive in time Director" was all he said before he became a blur of motion. he leaped first ontop of the guard nearest him and laid him out with a snap kick to the neck. he then twirled over the mans already dead falling body and shoved his hand into the eye socket of the second guard, a rodian. he was already in the midst of turning on the first doctor when the rodians eye was pulled free. the doctors raised their hands and were cut down all the same, the first three with punches to the throat. the next ones with snap kicks that crushed hearts. soon it was just Talliusc and the fat director. "so this is how you treat honoured guests" said Talliusc "i thought you would simply have me shot but this way took much more guts" finally remembering that he still held Talliusc lightsabers he ignited one "stay back" he called. "while i have been presumed dead i have been thinking over your operation, i have come to the conclusion that kessel itself is fine, but its head needs removing" and with that the lightsaber that Flirk held turned on its wielder and cut off his head. "how poetic" sighed Talliusc and recovered his garments and weapons. he then picked up the comm system and flicked it to send to all citizens of kessel "System of kessel, your director is dead and his security chief with him, you will vote tomorrow for your new leader and that person shall name a new security chief, all who hold allegiance to the fallen director Flirk may wish to evacuate the planet before they are killed" he flicked off the comm pleased that he had finally finished his errand here. one day later on the landing platform: "Thank you m'lord for deposing the former director of kessel" said newly appointed director islek. "my task was not for you director, but the income that feeds my masters soldiers in their campaign. replied the dark lord of the sith. "very well my lord, if i may ask though. why did you feign death when you were in the gas chamber, you could have surely defeated anyone that was sent against you" said Islek "simple, this way only those who deserved death got it, and i was able to weed out my enemies on kessel" came back his response. the director was about to say something else when his comm beeped "WHAT? i specifically said that i did not wish to be disturbed!" there was a muffled reply but Talliusc's sith hearing told him all he needed to know. "lord Talliusc im afraid that a couple of-" "i know and i go to destroy them, send none of your troops" came back the interupting reply of an angry sithlord. 5 minutes later on the south landing platform: the people loyal to the former director had appropriated a ship for themselves and were firing at any who came near. calmly Talliusc ignited his S shaped saber construct and walked towards the vessel. it was a correllian class corvette. blocking laser blasts left right and center Talliusc moved ever closer to the enemies ship. "you said we would be allowed to leave!" came a startled yell from the main hold. "no, what i said was that you may wish to leave before you were killed, you have stayed too long" and with that he deflected the most recent blast into the throat of the yeller. "this blade is most exceptional" thought Talliusc. "i must inform my master of the new designs success. privately of course so that the jedi do not steal my invention" it took less then 6 minutes for Talliusc to clear the entire ship of the foolish loyalists. he came last to the backmost quarters and was pleased to find 6 men and aliens huddled near the door. with his lightsaber he swiftly beheaded them all. "these fools offer little resistance" thought Talliusc "i must fight among my equals again. i must fith Reb Starblazer once more" well there it is, the third installment in the Darth TAlliusc story. Reb we should try and come up with a good storyline that we can wright up different views on. it promises to be good fun =) oh and sorry for the bad spelling and grammattical errors, a little tired tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Excellent job of working our posts together Talliusc. I rather like that whole, thought it was real, find out it's a dream, find out it was really a Sith induced nightmare thing:D As I said in my last post, Reb has a dark and winding path ahead of him. This is not going to be pretty ladies and gentleman. It deals with death( lots of it), life, finding your path, and true heroes. I even gave it a title:D Without further ado... Into the Dark The last rays of the sun had long since faded as Reb trudged along the snow covered plain, Kordkelly still unconscious over his shoulder. "He should be awake soon" he thought. Being half Zabrak came in handy sometimes, otherwise, he would probably be still unconscious too. No matter how hard he tried though, he couldn't get that dream out of his mind. He relived the moments of watching Kordkelly die, over and over. He couldn't bear the thought of losing someone under his command. "Not this time." He thought, "Not again. No one gets left behind this time" He also couldn't shake the fear. Yes, he admitted to himself. He was afraid. Afraid of taking a false step on the tightrope of his life, once again falling into the dark. He had seethed with rage as he felt his leg being dismemebered, and it was this that made him strong enough to summon the Force and strike down Talliusc. But Talliusc had his revenge and the last laugh. "It was just a dream. No more, no less" He told himself as he reached the peak of the hill he was climbing. "By... the ... Force." Reb spoke slowly. He couldn't even comprehend what he saw before him. In the soft glow of the twin moons, Reb saw it. A battlefield, as far as the eye could see, littered with fallen imperial walkers and clones. And Reb's allies. Hundreds upon hundreds of bodies, guards and infantry alike, strewn about, never to rise again. In the distance Reb could see smoke rising from the Academy. "The hangar" Reb spoke as he feared the worst. Seeing his beloved Academy burning in the distance, his fellow members lying dead on an icy grave, was more than Reb could take. His right hand clenched, every knuckle cracking as his grip tighted. Then Reb spotted another fire, one which was of a smaller scale. "A camp" Reb realized. "But why would someone have a camp when the Academy is right there... An imperial camp." he thought. Reb stood at the peak of the hill, "The question that has plagued me has finally been answered. My destiny is not fixed, my choices are mine and mine alone." Reb lay Kordkelly down in the snow, and covered him in the thermoblanket that was in his backpack. He gripped his lightsabre tightly and stared at the base camp with slit eyes. "I am a warrior. Let the battle be joined" He broke into a run, with only the Dark side and a thirst for vengeance pushing him on. As he neared the camp, he pressed the release button on his lightsabre. It dissconnected at the centre and became two separate lightsabres. He slowed to a walk, and stealthily entered the camp. A trooper, out on night patrol, thought he heard a noise and went to investigate. He saw a shadowed form walking towards him. "Hey! You there!" shouted the trooper. "Stop! I wanna see some I.D. What's your name? The reply was simple. One word, just one word spoke countless volumes. "Death". A snap-hiss was heard, a blue and a green streak made their way towards the trooper, sealing his fate. Reb continued into the camp, striking down anyone in his path. One clone managed to yell " Intruder " before he was permanantly silenced. This brought troops out of the bunks, brandishing their weapons, firing at the two floating streaks. "MURDERERS!" Reb yelled. Then another glow appeared, this one red, and in the shape of a humanoid. Red energies surrounded Reb's body, as a Dark Rage took over, the Dark side entering his very being. He became a multicolored whirlwind of death, deflecting blaster bolts, and then striking down those that fired them. Over and over again they fell, with more coming to replace them. This only increased Reb's fury, as he doubled his efforts. Then, all was quiet. All except the hum of two lightsabres, and Reb's heavy breathing. They were dead, all of them. Reb suddenly felt weak, his strength leaving him following his rage. He extingiushed his lightsabres, and took deep breaths, calming himself. He looked around him, at the bodies strewn everywhere. Just like the massacre on the battlefield he had seen earlier. Except this had been his doing. "No... what have I done? What have I done..." Reb said, staggering his way out the camp. As he reached the edge, he fell to his knees, too exhausted by his earlier rage to go any farther. "YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS EMPEROR!" He yelled into the night. "YOU'LL PAY FOR WHAT YOU'VE DONE, AND WHAT YOU'VE MADE ME DO! IT MAY NOT BE BY MY HAND, BUT YOU, WILL, PAY!" he finished as he fell to the ground weeping. And this is how Tyrion found him, lying face first in the snow. "Reb, are you OK? Say something." said Tyrion, shaking him. Reb suddenly pushed Tyrion away. "No, don't touch me! Stay away, I don't know what I may do to you!" he said, backing along the ground away from Tyrion. "It's alright Reb, you're going to be just fine. We went out on foot to check your speeder, and followed your footprints. We found Kordkelly on top of the hill. He's fine, and awake now. We've recieved word that we need to head back, and also tend to XERXES. I've already sent a few troops ahead for him. We're leaving now." Said Tyrion "No" replied Reb. "No?" "I said no. I'm not going. It's too dangerous for me to travel with you, I don't know what I might do. Go on without me, I need some time to think about my place in this war. I need to cotemplate my path." "Reb, your being irrational. I know you're having some doubts, but you're a part of this Academy. You're a part of our family. Besides, you're a hero. You survived a speeder crash, saved Kordkelly's life, and defended yourself against an..." Tyrion said. " I didn't defend myself. They didn't even know I was coming. They barely had time to prepare. I slaughtered them. I killed them, I killed them all..." Reb interrupted, his voice faltering on the last sentence. "You defended yourself. This is a war we're fighting Reb. And no matter what you did, taking out an entire battalion by yourself is a great accomplisment. You're a hero of this war Reb. We're all gonna be heroes. Besides, they were only clones serving the Emperor." "No, we're not heroes Tyrion. These ..." said Reb, pointing out towards the battlefield, to the bodies he saw before." These are the heroes. The ones who died in battle for something they believed in. Us, we're just the lucky. We're teachers, we survive to tell the tale of the heroes, so that something like this never has to happen again. So that the lives of good people are never wasted. Even though they were 'only' clones, they were alive. And I stole that from them. Every lifeless body on this entire planet used to be somebody. Every one of them had a name." "Yes, they did Reb. Ensign Kanos, Ensign Torrez, Leftenant Antilles... the list goes on. All good men who fought bravely and died under my command. I knew everyone of them, and their names are etched in my memory for as long as I live." Replied Tyrion, a sad, faraway look in his eyes. Reb saw something in the young captains face, something he hadn't noticed before. This war had changed Tyrion, made him no longer naive and brash. He seemed much older than he really was. Tyrion had seen things that never should have been revealed to him in his young life, and that made him strong, and determined. Determined to go on, or go out, fighting. So that when the young padawans at the academy reached his age, they would not have to face the same plight as he did now. Seeing Tyrion, standing over him, offering him his hand, it gave Reb strength. But more importantly, it gave him hope. With that, Reb took his hand, and Tyrion helped him to his feet. "Come on" Said Tyrion. "We've got an Academy to save" I hope everyone enjoyed it. It kinda portrays my thoughts on this "war", and war in general. I'm sorry if you don't like the way I portrayed you in my story Kordkelly. I also hope you don't mind me using you in the story Tyrion. I tried to write you well and I hope you like it. I also made you someone wise beyond his years, because that's what I feel you are. I didn't really mean what I wrote in the "Why I should be a mod thread", to sound bad. I'm not ageist against you, or anything. Well, consider this my form of apology:) Reb has now taken another step in his journey, but is he headed in the right direction? Find out, in the continuing tales of "The Academy Wars". DUN DUN DUN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Reb, was that a dream of some kind? Obi-wan walked along side several soldeirs. His limp was still with him, and it would be for the longest of times. He walked up to a man in a highly-brassed uniform, who was giving commands to another soldier. As Obi-wan walked up, the other soldier went away. "Master! your back!" Darklighter shouted. "Only by the will of the force, Admiral. I must construct a new lightsaber. My old one was destroyed. Also, the Imperial Star Destroyer has left this planet, and Left the forces on this planet alone, and without support. I am going to leave the next course of action to you, Admiral. I will be in my quarters, *Look at Clone uniform* removing this damned thing if you need me." "Very well, sir. Glad to have you back. Sir, is there.....anything else you would like to share? I sense, a feeling of......fright...." Darklighter said. "No, nothing." obi-wan replied. "Yes there is something. Whats wrong?" Darklighter insisted, his curiousity growing. Obi-wan sighed. "I was captured on the Star Destroyer, and they gave me a truth serum to tell me everything about the acdemy, and....." "NO! I don't beleive you are weak enough to fall to simple drugs!" Darklighter exclaimed. "......I didn't fall to the drugs........I resisted, and the emporer didn't get any information from me. However, The emporer is more powerful then we had thought. I engaged him in a duel,which was cut off. The thing that is troubleing me is, They are building proto-type Tie's that can jump to hyperspace. They can come without any warning, and without a mothership." Obi-wan finished. "Damn. That's not good. I will have a few specialists gather into an assault team to take out the Production facility when it is located." Darklighter said. Obi-wan nodded his head. "I shall retire for the day then, old freind." Obi-wan said, as he walked away, and went to his room. He removed the Trooper uniform, and Slipped into his sleeping cloths. He got comfortable in his bed, and slept. ..........Obi-wan! NO!..............MOVE! MOVE!MOVE!..................We cannot escape, we must surrender...........You are beaten..................... The words rang in Obi-wan's head, as they had done before. Still the voices where garbled, and he couldn't make out a meaning. However, this is the second time he has heard these words, and it was up to him to find out what they meant. To be continued.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Well, seeing as you asked, I'll try to explain it as someone else might wonder too. The one I posted about my duel with Talliusc. That was a dream. Turns out he did it(once again, good job Talliusc. Adding another angle to this). My last post about Reb's continuing descent into the Dark side(uhh, I didn't just say that), that wasn't a dream. Reb basically goes berserk, and kills everything in his path, then realizes what he's done and can't live with the shame. Tyrion the comes along and gives him a ray of hope to cling to, and that's enough for now. Also, I put that part in about XERXES so that it would tie in with Darklighter's post. I liked that blatant "Damn. That's not good" ripoff by the way. Then again, I ripped of Dark Rage, and also the first clones lines(had to do it, it seemed so funny for a clone in the war to say "Hey! You there!") so who am I to chastize:D BTW, I'll probably just edit this and have my next chapter here. Unless of course a bunch of people post and a dirtload of stuff happens. As for now, it's 3:00 am, and I'm going to bed. More work awaits me when I wake up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by Reb Starblazer I liked that blatant "Damn. That's not good" ripoff by the way. LOL!!!! I couldn't think of anything better for him to say, so I just ripped off luke, because I figured Luke wouldn't care. It's 2 am here, so Im goin to bed now. see yall tommorow(if the forums aren't screwed up again, that is ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Hey guys! The forums are really screwed up:( I was writing my next part of the story which would have fitted in soooo well, and then they started moving in the middle of writing, and it erased evrything when I replied:( I came back today after trying to remember what I had said (writing it out all again) when you'd carried on:( Oh well... ...I am writing my story now, so bear with me please:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 I will advise you, that this is an extremely long post, so please bear with. I did not want to leave all of my previous story out of, so I combine it and my new improvised version together. Sorry about this. The air was warm and comfortable inside the Academy halls, a refreshing relief from the icy chill of the planes where the battle had taken place. Everything seemed calm, but tensions were running high, and urgent matters had to be attended to. Obi-wan had arrived not a few hours before, aboard a tie interceptor which crashed among the forests around the Academy, adjacent to the lake. He had been through much, but refrained from speaking of it...the thought of the enemy being more powerful was too much for him to comprehend, even begin to understand. Darklighter now stood, pacing in the courtyard-like garden area circled off by the Jedi Council building and the Academy main building. His steps were light, almost unheard. His ghostly silouette only a black shadow against the dark green grass shining in the moonlight. "Beautiful isn't it?" a figure emerged from behind the tree next to the doors of the building. "The sound..." "Yes" he quickly replied. "The sound of the grass whistling in the breeze. The splash and drop of water in the lake. The calming soothness of the air" he laughed to himself, "even though it cannot be heard" he stood thinking, recollecting, "I remember Obi-wan telling me that." The man now fully emerged. AB_legion stood before Darklighter, his hands folded behind his waist, across the back of his silk brown cloak. His hood covered his face. "The calm before the battle" added Legion. "There is nothing beautiful about battle" Darklighter's eyes narrowed, his gaze now towards Legion was unsettling. "True, true...yet it is all we have left. I sensed this in Divine when I taught him. I knew he wouldn't obey what he was told. I sensed the darkside in him. He was never a focussed student" Legion began, when he was cut short. "Not all of them are" Darklighter's voice was now harsh, he turned to face Legion and they stopped in each other's paths. "No one could have foreseen this...not even you Legion" the remark was cold and direct. "No...you can't tell...but you can think it and I did" Legion replied. "Everybody is hurt at times like these...Obi-wan was powerful enough to escape the torment of the enemy because of his link to the force, can you say the same about Agen" it hit Darklighter like steel hammer. Agen would not last much longer. A plan had to be arranged. "You're right" he replied with a blank look, and standing tall walked back to his quarters. He paced pondering the thought, of what he should do. We cannot go as a grouped force, he thought frustratingly. I will have to go alone. Obi-wan would object with the upmost concern, insisting if anyone were to go it would be himself. Tidus was not about to put his master through the same torment as before. He removed his uniform and placed on his white Jedi garments. It was up to him now. ------------------------ He snuck off between the Academy's defenses in the dead of the night towards the side of the hanger bay. The defenses were so tight only a Jedi could get past them. As he reached the rim of the Academy boundaries, Darklighter looked out towards his destination. It was far to the West, a long run, but he could make it easily, and with that thought, he set off. "The emperor will attack again" Darklighter’s voice was harsh and almost shrill in the cold night air, as he spoke into the comlink. He continued to wade across the open land, his black boots tainted with the clear white snow that splashed and crunched under his feet as he ran. Apart from that and the sound of his lightsaber hilt hitting against his black belt, nothing was heard. He moved swiftly and stealthily across the snowy plane, camouflaged by his white-beige garments. The warmth of dusk had long since passed, and the night was now drawing to an end. Darklighter could see the warm glow of early sunlight creeping above the hills, the red and orange tint of morning already beginning to surface. The bright penumbra of the sun was beginning to rise towards the east. He would have to hurry to avoid being seen in the daylight. "He knows our weakness. There is a gap in the energy force field surrounding the Academy. Re-route all power available to the shields before it is too late. It’s our only chance." His voice seemed desperate. "Yes Admiral" the voice of that was Greedo, his only contact, and the only man he could trust to obey his wishes. "Do not inform Master Obi-wan of my position. The bunker will be swarming with the Emperor’s troopers. Infiltration is the only option here." Dark Jedi too, he thought to himself. Sith apprentices trained by the Emperor himself. He would want to avoid confrontations with them at all costs. "Yes Sir" Greedo’s loyalty was unmatched. He would carry out orders from his superiors, and always respected their decision. "May the force be with you." He swallowed hard and replaced the com to his belt on his side. Darklighter continued his long run into the west. The bunker he was heading for was not unbeknownst to him, as the Academy itself had undergone its construction. The small, compact outward appearance of it was a thin veneer, hiding a large network of underground corridors and monitoring equipment. It had also been used to contain captured prisoners, rebels and enemy soldiers forced to surrender in battle. But that was a long time ago. The tables had turned, now Agen was being kept there. Just thinking about it made him angry. He arrived just in time. The light was just dim enough to hide him in the shadows. The bunker was made of stone and metal, surrounded by a thick forest. Two sentries were positioned guarding the entrance. With a wave of his hand, a twig snapped loudly to the right of the guards, diverting their attention, giving just enough time for Darklighter to sneak around the back. He jumped to the roof of the bunker, and stooped down as the guards began talking about Agen. "Apparently he’s someone important" came the voice of the first, muffled through the clone trooper helmet, "Almost as much as that Obi-wan fellow." "This ain’t gonna be easy for this guy though. The Emperor has given strict instructions to use any methods necessary in obtaining the information we need" replied the second trooper. "I’d be interested to see how long he holds up" both laughed to themselves, "These Jedi can’t be so tough." His friend was in danger and needed help. He removed the ventilation shaft cover from the roof of the bunker and dropped down into the darkness. 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Dath Maximus Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 is this still messed up?? i posted 3 things yesterday and they all showed up after my previous post and not at the end of the thread so i say again. i just got my story to get to obi-wan13 and he leaves and now im with the emperor. Go ME... ohh forget it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 I think they've just about worked it out...everything seems to be going okay now. BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while:) Just kind of stick to that order for now...I know Shadow doesn't post much, so you can kind of leave him out if he's not around:( sorry Shadow.... BTW, once we have finished this first Episode (I'll call it episode, as the first chunk of the Academy wars:D ) we have to compile them and give them chapter names...but we don't need to worry about that now...I think the stories are going great, so keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 i had a nemesis but i killed him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 i had a nemesis but i killed him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Already Max?...lol:D It really doesn't matter what order you fo the stories in. If there is no one else around, just put a little warning saying you are giong to carry on with your story, then write it. BTW Reb, you know you have invisible mode on, well we can't see when you're online. Its not a big deal really, just can't tell if you're online, so don't know if you're writing at all, so make sure you let us know:) Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Divine Spirit Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while:) I think i might write my next bit of story independent of everyone else - that means i get a bit more freedom about it So someone else should be going next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Okay guys, you can really write anytime, just not twice in a row, ok? We should try to keep this going for a while, its really fun:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Well i will be unable to finish the story cause im leaving for a week again. but you guys can finish it for me. ok i was planing on having the emperer some how making me sorta like like vader and turning me against you guys but you will turn me back to the good side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
s0ulblihtr Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by s0ulblihtr Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK? go for it:) Obi-wan woke, and meditated on the words he had heard in his dreams. He played them over and over, like a broken record. Later, he stood, and limped to the cafeteria for a cup of Earl Grey. He took his drink, and sat down at one of the Local tables, with a few soldeirs. They saw him, and stood up at attention. "As you where." Obi-wan told them, and they continued to eat their breakfast. Obi-wan hardly ever ate anything, and thie morning was no different. He finished his tea, and walked to the Saber Training gorunds. WhiteDragon and one of the students where having a mock'Duel, and Obi-wan watched. It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had. He thought about it, and brought his attention back to the duel. The young padawan took a swing at WhiteDragon's leg, and WHitDragon blocked, and brought the other side of the wooden saber onto the Padawans side. "Your dead." WhiteDragon told him. "Good fight, you where on a roll for a while. More practice, and you will be wualified to be my assistant." "Thank you Master." The young man said, as he bowed, Put the Wooden saber on the table, and walked off. "Good fight. The boy is learning a lot from you." Obi-wan told WhiteDragon. "Yes, he is one of my best students. He practices hours on end every day. He will not stop until he is perfect, either. Thats the third time this week he has challenged me, and the third time he has lossed." WhiteDragon said, as both of the men laughed. "He is an asset to this academy. We all are. I am going to need you to keep the student's spirit's up. These are very stressful times, and we need to keep our heads calm and cool." Obi-wan said, and WhiteDragon agreed. "Have you seen Admrial Darklighter?" Obi-wan asked. "No, I have no clue as to his location." WhiteDragon said. Obi-wan and whitedragon said their goodbye's, and Obi-wan walked off. He went back to his Quarters, to meditate on the location of Darklighter. He hadn't seen him for a while, and neither has anyone else. He had to find his old freind, and soon, because this worried him a great deal. to be continued........ (I'll finish this part too, I have something special planned. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
s0ulblihtr Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Oh and by the way... I wanted to give props to all of the guys who have already posted. Looking good. You make my monday here at work go by faster. Thanks. Very Entertaining. Now, I will work on my little vignet to help in making this a masterpiece, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 you started a war and im missing it. *bam* die pig die youll never take the white dragon alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Agen_Terminator woke with pain all over, with guards been torturing him over and over again and trying to obtain infromation, he had not yet spilled but he himself knew that he woudl be able to last much longer. Knowing that the time had almost come for him. He was strapped up and his force drained by a machine. Tho he could not use the force physically he could still feel that things were going wrong outside. He lifted his head to view the room aroudn him, very dark and dusty floor with a few chains on the ceiling, the only light was coming from the machine, he had no weapons and had been stripped of his robes. Soon after a while he felt a new hope of saviour and sensed that it was darklgihter but Agen lost his consciousness and konked out. After an hour or so a regiment of troopers came in and took him to a room with all sorts of scriptures but by this time Agen was limp and had to be carried by the troopers, he was lifted by soem sort of beam thing and trapped (liek in ep 2 that obi is in) The dark lord himself came in and and the troopers walked away swiftly while one caem to report news but limped and went dead and divinespirit said " i know. Well Terminator, a high member of the academy trapped and weak liek the rest of that pitiful association, i have a good mind o tell you my secret plans but this is no james bond film." Croaking and finding it hard to breathe Agen coughed out " you will not prevail from this war" "oh but you are wrong, you see you jedi are always to sure of everything, i mean you think that Darklighter is going to save you right now, but you are wrong." With a swift movement Divine gripped Darklgihter out of the vents and whacked him off the wall and let him slump to the floor where he lifted him by the throat and placed him in the beam beside Agen. "Farewell jedi" said Divine as he left the room and his robes waved abotu as he walked away. By this time Agen had figured he was udnergroudn and now concentrated on trying to get lighter to snap out of it. Edit: oh yeh obi about your part 2, i didn't actually read the end about it and darklighter properly and i really hope my part doesn't interfere with your part or you can get it to fit around itt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 oh dont be so melodromatic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by Agen_Terminator hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho. ok what ever. *takes out rocket luauncher and fires it at a coupel dark jedi* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 *splat* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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