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Tierra de los Muertos, Part III


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Part III of Tierra de los Muertos is now online. The plot continues to develop, and it's making good progress. :)

 

The poll this week is concerned with the pictures I'm posting with the parts. What do you think of them, and are they worth continuing?

 

Oh, and please comment on part III, of course. I'm interested in all feedback. :D

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It does end suddenly, yes. The next part is the meeting with the Great Sage.

 

I just read through the script, thinking that harsh editing may have been why this part is a little short. A couple of lines were cut out of it, but nothing overly though. Oh well. Part IV comes this weekend. Which means I need to go to the radio station today and get more sound effects. :D

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:jawa

I will listen in tonight.

However I already voted

and gave you top marks.

after one listen I Knew

you had hit the nail in the coffin.

 

(and I am sure you are

not going to pull an Anne Rice

on us.)

 

anyway I have posts to read

posts to post

and enter keys to strike

to poetically contrive

rhyme, meter and madness

to my methods.

 

"Resistance is Futile!

Tierra de los Muertos is Incredible!

I will become one with the

Pygmy Headhunter."

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:jawa

an Anne Rice,

personnally I read a book

Interview with a Vampire

a long time ago

and it was great

and new and wonderful

she even had her vampires

sort of looking down at the goth set

pretending to be vampires

as a blessing and a curse

(however they did offer some

camelflauge)

 

any how *my opinion*

 

after many books

all dealing with vampires

and getting sillier each time

I stopped reading her.

 

you only plan 11 instalments

so you can not go too far

off course that's

what I meant.

 

I have now listened very funny

hope on cd you will fix

too abrupt ending of miguel.

(small and only critism

on my part so far)

 

amyways all Anne Rice fans

will disagree with me but that

is what it means to pull

an Anne Rice.

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Originally posted by MeddlingMonk

Whatever it is, it's gotta be better than pulling a Lizzy Borden.

 

Lizzy Borden, with an ax

Hit her father forty whacks

When she saw what she had done

She hit her mother forty-one

 

Back to the topic on hand...

 

Another job well done. Tierra de los Muertos Part III wasn't quite up to the standards of the second and first parts, but well done nonetheless.

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Okay, Darthy. You have me a little worried now. I'm going to have to explain something, and reveal some of my plans to anyone who wants to read.

 

Tierra de los Muertos is, as you'd probably guess, one complete story in ten parts. It's a journey from the beginning to the end.

 

And I did plan to do a sequal to it sometime next year. Although the sequal would have nothing to do with the gates of the afterlife. A completely new story.

 

And sometime after that... another one, dealing with the regulation and capture of ghosts still in the living land. The lost spirits.

 

What I was hoping to do eventually is to have something along the lines of Terry Pratchett's 'Discworld'. While the second story would have the characters from the first, the third story would have one, two at the most.

 

Hmmm... that reads really awkwardly without the titles. This is all planning, mind you. But...

 

1. Tierra de los Muertos

2. La Busqueda de Big Kahuna

3. Muertos de Negro

 

If the fates allow.

 

Thoughts? Do you think a sequal or two would ruin them entirely? Wait 'til time tells?

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While im here, this episode was Cut rather abruptly.... mid word even!

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