Darth Talliusc Posted August 4, 2002 Share Posted August 4, 2002 previously: "lights" said Talliusc as he entered his room. this was a deluxe appartment meant for visiting ambassadors from wealthy planets. it disgusted Talliusc. nothing like his quarters on the Dreadhold. qeuing in his personal code to the computer console he called up the first unread message. "dear god. NO" Coruscant: Talliusc sat motionless at his computer console staring at the letters on the screen, it was a transcript sent to him by one of his espionage droids. He had been curious as to why he had not been summoned to the convocate of the sith in person, and more confused when he was not told to be present via holocomm. in truth he hadnt known what to expect. and as his master had told him many times before "what you do not know will kill you surer then a lightsaber through the throat". as any good tactician would, Talliusc had provisioned several methods for finding out what would happen at the convocate. While a personal spy might be captured or at least sensed by his master a small cyber-spider would be virtually invisible and very effective. as Talliusc read over the transcript again in disbelief waves of shock outrage and betrayal fell over his body. the meeting had started out as normal as any convocate of the sith might. Talliusc had been pleased at first to see Darth Malice enter the room and take his place at the table, Darth Slayne was the newest member of the academy and the inner circle of sith. Talliusc felt a glimmer of pride that his brethren had found the jedi academy of Thedonias and curiously enough, a twinge of surprise. he had always assumed that Darth Malice would be the one to locate the academy, he had more skill in that area then many of the sith and a knack for knowing how the jedi thought. Talliusc was also surprised to find out about the siths newest weapon, lord maul. "if the master has 2 million of these warriors then his need for me will lessen" The darth maul clones had been tampered with the same as all of the other clone troopers. slightly more docile and ardently loyal to Divine Spirit. The rest of the meeting was a description of the invasion plan for Thedonias. The sith filtered out of the room, all except Darth Dominance and Divine Spirit. What Talliusc read next shattered his mental coolness. His brethren were going to kill his only friend unless he did something about it. awaking from his shocked state Talliusc gathered his weapons and his robes and started for the door when a new message came in. "lord Talliusc, priority alert code Blue 73! please respond" code blue 73 meant that Jedi had been located on the capital. "Again? these jedi visit here every week almost." thought Talliusc darkly. "i dont have time for this captain, ill send some of the lower Sith to handle it." replied Talliusc. "but my lord! these jedi have been identified as Kit fisto jk and the bounty hunter known as Yom, only a member of the inner circle stands a chance against them!" pleaded the voice once more. Yom had been known across the galaxy as one of the most fearsome bounty hunters ever to walk the trade, he had bagged more then a score of jedi at one point or another. so why was he with these jedi now? "do not interfere with me captain, i have more important matters to deal with" with that Talliusc switched off the comm and started for the door. Once into his private Tie Talliusc ordered two of the more promising lower sith to confront the jedi. whether or not these sith would be able to destroy the jedi didnt matter to Talliusc at the moment, he had a friend to save! In a matter of moments Talliusc's life had been turned upside down. he was now disobeying direct orders to remain on coruscant and interfering with his masters plans. He was now a renegade from the inner circle, but he had an advantage. none of the other Sith knew that he wasnt loyal to them any more and none but other members of the inner circle would dare order him about. He sent warnings to Reb through his private Delta channel, as soon as Reb visited his ship he would know everything and be prepared. but if Reb didnt check his messages soon then they would both probably be dead within 24 hours. at max hyperspace speeds his fighter could be there in little more then 2 hours and Talliusc was pushing it for all it had. before leaving Coruscant he had left command of coruscants defense to the commander of the Dreadhold Talliusc's private stardestroyer. he had almost wanted to take the Dreadhold with him but it was far too slow and far too recognizable. Time was running out and for Reb that meant death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 4, 2002 Share Posted August 4, 2002 @ Darth Talliusc: iam not a jedi i am a bounty hunter that collects sabers he has 16 sabers now BUT I AM NOT A JEDI!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 4, 2002 Share Posted August 4, 2002 hey Talliusc whens the saber battle between you and me going to happen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 4, 2002 Share Posted August 4, 2002 Me?? Wha!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Malice’s modified TIE Interceptor blasted out of the Renegade’s hangar and took off into space. Time was running out, and he knew that he had to warn the Jedi, no matter what. A small beeping noise notified him of a private message coming in over his Comm channel. He quickly shut down the communications system. He did not wish to hear the Emperor’s voice now, giving him new orders. He was leaving, once again alone. He would head to Thedonias, and warn the Jedi, but first, he had to make a detour. To visit an old friend. He set the co-ordinates into the nav-computer, waited for the course to be set, and then jumped to Hyperspace. Upon arriving at Nar Shaddaa, he landed his TIE Interceptor at a more remote landing pad. He knew what this place was like, and he did not want anything to happen to his only vessel. Deciding on leaving his Lightsabre behind as it would attract too much unwanted attention, Malice strapped on his two leg holsters, each with a DL-6H in them. He put on a simple civilian garb, and left, to find what he came for. Walking through the crowds, he was reminded of his last visit here, almost 3 years ago. Not long after the death of Darth Talon, he came here, to leave an “item” in safe keeping, and he had come to reclaim it. He entered the “Singing Sith”, a bar for the kind of scum on Nar Shaddaa. It wasn’t very well named, but it was popular. He made his way to the bar, and once there said “Correllian Whiskey. And tell Nassk I wish to speak to him.” The bartender got him his drink, and then disappeared into the back. A few minutes later, the bartender returned, followed by a tall Trandoshan. The Trandoshan waved Malice to follow him, and they went upstairs to the office. “I was wondering when you were gonna show up.” Said Nassk, sitting at his desk. “You knew I’d come back eventually. You do still have it, don’t you?” Malice said, a hint of authority in his voice. “Yes, yes, of course. You think I’m stupid enough to cross a Sith?” Nassk said, as he gave his best version of a human smile. He then rose from his seat, and walked over to a small safe in the room. He used his key card and opened it, reached inside and then pulled out a small black object. “You know, I never could get this damn thing to work”. Nassk said as he handed it to Malice. It had lit up and hummed to life as soon as it came within five feet of him. “That’s because it’s a Holo-cron, it’s activated by the Force. Which explains why you could never get it to work.” Malice said as he outstretched his free hand to Nassk. “Thank you.” Nassk took Malice’s hand in his much larger claw, and shook it. “It was no trouble. The least I could do.” Nassk said as he released Malice’s hand “Take care Nassk.” Malice said as he put the Holo-cron into one of his pockets, and began walking towards the door. “I believe there’s an old Jedi saying, goes something like… May the Force be with you.” Nassk said, as Malice stopped, and turned to face him. “May the Force be with you too Nassk.” Said Malice as he left the office, then made his way out of the bar. As he was walking back to his Interceptor, he heard shouts, and a scream as he passed an alleyway. He stopped, and used the Force to enhance his senses. He saw a gang of thugs, a Nikto, a Catharian, a Weequay, and a Rodian. The Catharian and the Nikto had a Blue Twi’lek girl by the arms, while the Rodian yelled at her. Malice sighed to himself. “Always was a sucker for the blue ones…” he said as he began walking down the alley. “Now, you’re coming back with me. You didn’t really think you would get away now did you?” The Rodian yelled at the blue Twi’lek. “I bought you, you’re mine. Don’t even think about running away again.” He motioned to the Weequay. “Cut off part of a head-tail, that’ll teach her not to do it again. “ The other two continued to hold each of her arms, while the Weequay drew a Vibro-blade and started walking towards the Twi’lek. “No!” She screamed. “ Please, don’t. I beg you, don’t!” “You heard the girl.” Malice said as he came closer to the group. “ She said please. Maybe you should think about not treating her so badly, hmmm? She may not want to run away then.” “Stay out of this you piece of Bantha fodder, if you want to keep your head that is. Well, go on, cut her.” Said the Rodian, as the Weequay had stopped advancing when Malice spoke. “Leave her be. This is your last warning. Don’t make me hurt you.” Malice said as he kept on walking towards them. “Seriously now, who do you think you are?” “Me? I’m just your friendly neighbourhood Sith Lord.” Malice said with a grin. “Yea, and I’m the frickin’ Emperor. To hell with her, kill him!” The Rodian said. The Nikto and Catharian let go of the Twi’lek, handing her off to the Rodian. The Weequay started walking towards Malice now, Vibro-blade in hand. He took a swipe at Malice, who dodged to the side, then connected with a knee to the Weequay’s midsection. He brought his right elbow down on the back of the Weequay’s neck, sending him unconscious, and out of the fight. The Nikto charged at him, Malice gave him a swift right kick to the stomach, then a left to the stomach, and continued his rotation with a roundhouse to the face. Malice grinned, his Teras Kasi had improved greatly in the last year, thanks to Talliusc’s training. He went into a defensive stance, stuck out his right arm, and then opened and closed his hand in a ‘come here’ motion to the Catharian. “Here kitty, kitty, kitty.” Malice said. The Catharian rushed at Malice, trying to slash him with his claws. Malice side-stepped, and backed off, avoiding all the potentially deadly strikes. He caught the Catharian’s wrists in his hands, and started bending its arms outwards. He then head butted the feline three times in the nose, then let go of its wrists as it fell to the ground. “Don’t even move.” The Rodian shouted. Malice saw the Rodian now had a Vibro-blade held to the Twi’lek’s throat. “One false move and she’s dead. Now, you let me go, and we all walk away alive.” “Oh please…” said Malice as he used the Force to pull the Vibro-blade from the Rodian’s hand, and sent it spiraling down into the depths of Nar Shaddaa. The Rodian just stared at Malice, shocked “Will you just hurry up and leave?” Malice stated firmly. The Rodian, began to reach for his holstered blaster pistol, but was dead before his hand even got near it. Malice had drawn one of his DL-6H’s and blasted the Rodian right between his large black eyes. The Rodian fell backwards to the ground, smoke rising from his death wound. The blue Twi’lek girl just stared at Malice as he twirled the gun and then replaced it in it's holster. Malice couldn’t get over how much she resembled Kylaa, but she was much younger than her. She couldn’t have been anymore than 13 or 14 standard years old. Malice was quite glad he had killed the Rodian now. “Why?” She suddenly broke the silence. “What made you decide to help me?” she asked, somewhat frightened. “Because… because I know what it’s like to be a slave. To have no free will, no hope, no destiny.” Malice said as he slowly approached her. He took a credit chip out of his pocket and tossed it to her. “Here, take this. There should be enough there to get you just about anywhere you want to go. You’re free now, make the most of it.” She stared down at the credit chip, as tears began to form in her eyes. It was the only time in her short life that anyone had been truly kind to her, and the one was, turned out to be a perfect stranger. “Thank you…” she said as she looked up, but Malice had already disappeared into the shadows. He was walking back to his Interceptor, going over the events that had just taken place. “So much for unwanted attention” he said to himself with a smile. Once he reached his Interceptor, he took out the Holo-cron, and activated it. After a few moments of searching, he found what he was looking for. Angmar, he needed to go Angmar. But first, he had to go to Thedonias, and speak with the Jedi. He left Nar Shaddaa and set the co-ordinates. “Sir, we have a TIE Interceptor coming out of Hyperspace.” Said a young officer. “Did you say ‘A’ TIE Interceptor, as in only one. What in blazes is a single Interceptor coming here for…?” Then it struck Obi-Wan. Reb, it could only be Reb. “Try to reach the Interceptor, tell him to land at point alpha niner, I’ll meet him there.” Obi-Wan said as he left the command center. He was walking to the landing point, and saw the Interceptor entering the atmosphere. He heard gasps from some of the younger students. “This, is going to attract some attention.” He thought to himself. He made it to the landing pad just as the Interceptor was touching down. A few moments later, he was joined by Tyrion and Darklighter, who were wondering what was going on. The roof hatch opened, and Darth Malice climbed out. He dropped to the ground, and walked over to where the three Jedi were standing. Darklighter’s hand reached for his Lightsabre, but only rested on it. Tyrion on the other hand, ignited his and rushed at Malice. Malice raised his hand and used the Force to push Tyrion to the ground, sliding back to lie next to Obi-Wan’s feet. Tyrion got up and composed himself. “I have no wish to fight you. Don’t make it come to that. I’ve only come to deliver a message.” Malice said. “Hello Reb, it’s been a long time.” Said Darklighter, with a hint of anger in his voice. “Please, don’t call me that. I no longer have the right to that name, I’m Darth Malice now. But yes, it has been a long time. Too long.” Malice said, and then looked around him. The new Academy was beautiful, and Malice saw Masters and Padawans practicing, just like at the old one. “ I guess some things never change” Malice said solemnly. “Yea, except for maybe the occasional allegiance.” Spat Tyrion. He was there, watched as Reb boarded the shuttle and left with Talliusc. It had hit him pretty hard. “I grew worried, I didn’t receive the monthly update from you. I wasn’t sure what had happened” Said Obi-Wan, ignoring Tyrion’s last remark. “Terrible things have happened Obi-Wan. The Emperor is creating another clone army, but this time it's not troopers. He’s created…” Malice said. “Clones of Darth Maul, yes. We’ve learned about that.” Interrupted Darklighter. “...Two million clones of the Sith Lord Darth Maul.” Malice finished. All three Jedi did their best to not gasp. “Two Million!” exclaimed Obi-Wan. “Are you sure?” “I heard it myself in a briefing, I saw Holo-Images.You must leave Obi-Wan. Save yourself and your students. Leave here, and don’t return. I’ll do what I can to help, but know that you’ll be slaughtered if you stay here.” “No, we’re not leaving. I’m tired of running. We’ll face Divine Spirit, and defeat him, or die trying.” “Very well Obi-Wan. You’ve made you decision, I hope you don’t regret it. As I hope I don’t regret mine. It seems that no matter how far we run, we must always eventually turn to face our destiny. Stare death in the eyes old friend. Just don’t blink.” Malice said as he turned and began walking to his Interceptor. “And what about you? Are you running from your destiny?” Asked Obi-Wan “No. I’m tired of running too Obi-Wan. I just have to go a little farther before I can turn and face my destiny.” Malice said as he got into the cockpit of his Interceptor. “Why leave then? Stay here, fight with us Reb. Where could you possibly need to go now?” pleaded Obi-Wan. “To become a hero.” Malice said as he closed the cockpit and fired up the engines. Moments later, the Interceptor shot off into the upper atmosphere. “So he’s made his choice then. Battle to the end, and die well Reb.” said Obi-Wan sadly as he turned and began to leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camus Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Wow that was good Reb... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 * part (fill part number here) * After The three of them got there orders. obi pulls Yom to the side to have a quick chat. "i see u gone back to to your old armor. and were did u get the helmet?" Well sir i thought i help the jedi for once and not kill them off but help them survie aginst the sit and dark jedi." Yom said. "and the helmet i stole it from a sith museum. nothing new i needed it so i took it" "Well i gess that is ok that u stoll from the Sith, but u need to go and do your mission but i need u to report back to me when u return i need to talk with u more" obi starts to walk off then he turns back " oh yes i forgot may the force be with u" Yom Replies "as well as u sir." then Yoms turns and runs to ctach up with Kit and white. as they are all ready on there on there Flare-S Swoops and about to take off. Yom jumps on and puts his helmet on " ok i am ready what are we going to do" "well we are going to head west then up north they are more likely to land a scout crew." White says then takes off then the other 2 take of as well. as they head west they see a Tie Interceptor head in for a landing "what is going on?" kit yells out "it has got to be Reb" White yells back but then they see a transport land over the trees farther west. "well lets check it out" yom yells out to the others. as they get closer they stop there Swoop bikes and walk the next mile to were the Transport landed as they get closer they here voices of clone troopers "#### man so we are here on a suicide mission that is just great i fell good, yes i am going to die to day" "Right u are" the three men say as they jump out and shoot the clone trooper, then they dash to the ship were more a wait Yom gos lef and white gos right then they turn in to the clearing were the ship is and sart shooting up the place and then yom runs in to the ship and shoots the piolt that was on the com with someone. "This is great now they know we are here lets get back to bace" white says quikly and starts to run to his swoop bike as the other 2 do the same they fallow closely behind and jump on there bikes jet in to the hanger at the academy "you think that reb lead them here?" kit askes "I dont know but they know were are here" white says *****End**** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C'jais Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 *cough* fanfic *cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camus Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by cjais *cough* fanfic *cough* ~cough~fun~cough~ Well its just a thing for our anti spam Academy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 so whats wrong with fanfic? i think its great. sorry bout the confusion yom, ill edit that post for you. keep up the great work. edit: whitedragon i have a few ideas for our saber battle, not exactly what you think though. hehe excellent, expect a pm in a day or so when ive got my thoughts compiled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by cjais *cough* fanfic *cough* Don't get me wrong, but... Easy there mate! This isn't about how good they are at writing its about having fun! I'll have you know that I happen to be quite proud of all the writers here. Why, you ask? Because they have the guts to TRY. Three chears to all academy members! Both Sith and Jedi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 I will begin my story momentarily. Thank you:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Darklighter held his head in his hands. What was happening to him, what had happened for so long he could not believe. Reb and his betrayal, Yom's past, it all didn't make any sense. "Why now?" he said to himself, "Why did I have to know now? I've been through enough haven't I?" He sat in his office, pondering over his thoughts in an endless cycle, trying to gain wisdom from past events. As he went over his thoughts in his head, he distanced back. Back to his past, what had happened to him so long ago. As he did, the thoughts and memories of one person came back to him. Someone he had almost forgotten. The three words she had said to him, right before it happen... "I love you..." he missed her. He missed her so much it hurt. A pain deep in his heart, a flame that burned. Talaria had gone, and now like before, he felt sorrow. A tear fell from his eye to the ground, and he closed his eyes to stop them. On that second Obi-wan walked in through the door, and Darkighter quickly wiped away the tear. He walked up to the desk, but said nothing, as Darklighter slowly lifted his head and their eyes met. He was partly angry at Obi-wan for what had happened. "I'm sorry..." his voice was low and sorrowful. "I'm sorry I kept it from you. I couldn't let anyone know about Reb. Not even you, my old friend." "I know..." he replied forgivingly. "Do not worry Master, I understand. Just like you have understood me before." He stood up now to face him, "I was just shocked. Reb is still a Jedi?" "He was never a Jedi" Obi-wan corrected. "He never could to be, he never turned to our side because he couldn't. But he wants to help us now, as we did before for him." "And you trust him?" Darklighter's response was blunt. "I would trust Reb with my life." Darklighter was most surprised with what he said. Reb had been a mystery figure at the Academy since he joined. It's just Darklighter never realised how highly Obi-wan thought of him. At that very second, a call came through on the comlink on Obi-wan's belt. "Master!" Kordkelly called worriedly. "We need you in the control room right away!" As he finished speaking, the two Jedi ran from the office out into the corridor. As they came to the spiral staircase at the end of the hall, the two jumped over the railing and landed on the basement floor 100 feet below. There was a door directly in front of them that lead to the control and navigation room. It was compiled with a network of computer sceens and radar scanners. "What is it?" yelled Obi-wan. "Maul clones sir." They are advancing on our position. They looked at the radar and saw the truth. Many small cloaked figures, maybe fifty to one hundred moved across the holographic radar map. Obi-wan stood staring at it, his face not worried...just concerned. Perhaps the thought that the Emperor was aware of their position was more troubling. Darklighter turned to speak quietly into his ear. "This does not look like trouble" he said calmly, "We can take them Master" Obi-wan silently nodded, but made no expression. "Ready the fleet" Obi-wan ordered. "We are going to battle." To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissectional Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Question: Am I back at the Academy or not? cuz I want to include Myself fighting Maul clones if at all possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormtroop Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 ill be posting my storys soon ive just joined the sith academy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by Dissectional Question: Am I back at the Academy or not? cuz I want to include Myself fighting Maul clones if at all possible. yeah you and the others are back at the acadamy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissectional Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Dissectional spotted Admiral Kenobi, Yom, and Darklighter sprinting down the hallway. He got the hint and bolted after them. Amidst the hustle and bustle, he managed to figure out what was going on. "WHAT?! Maul clones?! I'm not going to ask how they managed that. How many of them are there?" Dissectional was quite confused. "We aren't sure, though we suspect that there should be one for everyone in the academy to handle, possibly two." Dissectional sensed a brief glimmer of panic in Obi-wan's mind, but it was quickly dismissed. Yom was looking quite amped and ready to take on whatever faced him. "It's been a while, my saber skills have gotten rusty. Time to see if I still got what it takes, eh?" Yom had a grim smile on his face, as if he sensed something that the others didn't. Darklighter had many things going thrugh his mind, as well as mixed emotions and feelings. "Tidus, are you alright? You seem troubled." Darklighter looked back at Dissectional and detected a feeling of deep concern. "I.. I have many things clouding my mind as of now. I don't know what to feel... Well, now is certainly not the time. We'll have to talk later." Dissectional noticed a tear in Darklighter's eye, but mentioned nothing. He seemed capable of controlling his emotions. General Kenobi was far too busy helping scramble x-wings, snowspeeders, and vehicles to be spoken with. Dissectional hopped into a speeder, locked his helmet into place, and motioned for Greedo to jump in. Greedo, who had been busy recharging his blaster, leapt into the gunner's seat, as the cockpit closed and they flew off. To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 as i say once more I AM NOT A JEDI i am a freakin bounty hunter the carries a sbare like a utility knife, if he dose use it it is for backstabing some one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 when all three got back to the hanger obi-wan told them the news "maul clones" yom said. "he was one of the most powerful sith knights ever" kit said "are you serious" dragon said. obi-wan noded. dragon smiled "what a chalenge, this will be far different from these reborn weaklings" obi looked strangely at dragon. he would never understand his love of a good battle. "what did you find out" obi asked. "that trator starblazer has found our location we had better put everyone on full alert." obi went over to a loud speaker and reported the message to get defences up and stay alert. obi went back over to dragon. "your orders are to..." they all felt the desterbance in the force, even yom felt something was wrong. they all took out their lightsabers but dident activate them just yet. obi was very quiet "yom, kit you check the living quarters and the cortyard, diserectional you check the top floors, dragon you come with me to the bottom levels. they all casually put their wepons away and walked away. the lower levels were kind of like the place where obi had fought the origional maul but alot bigger they both split up and searched the entire floor. they both met in the middle of the place which was a large circle with some chairs to sit on for the mechanics. "find anything" obi said "nothing." just then a black shape came out of nowhere and began to fight obi-wan, it was a maul clone. dragon turned around and another was right their. dragon activated his light saber. as he began to charge forward he heard explosions from outside. the battle had begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 ok that was good white can i have a turn now plezzzzz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormtroop Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 The empires grip As the empire steped from his starship into the death stars hanger.The general was there to greet him with open arms like a brother or something.The empire ignored the genral rushing pass him he ran to the back of the hanger to the lift he could sense the light side here.He reached for his belt suddenly swinging his arm upwards with a red saber in his hand as he was approching the top floor.The light side was becoming even more unbarable the empire maid mara jade was shaking all though see was tring to hide it from her master.I cna sense your felling mara whats wrong with you.you know you cant hide your nerves frome me said the empire.I know master she replied.DINGGGG.Went the lifts bell.Darth vader and mara steeped fromn the lift quick go back int o th lift mara.Vader swung his light saber suddenly in a horzantall block.Smashing a young rebels saber away the empire jumped up in the air it seemed like miles he then came smashing down just missing the rebels side with his saber.So you think you can beat me young rebel.There was no reply well shouted the lord.Suddenly and swiftly vader swang his sword at the rebel while still shouting.The empire went into a frenzy suddenly probally the silence that did it.The empire was swinging and smashing anything in his way the young rebel pushed his hood off and grabbed his saber.The rebel was blocking everyswing as the twos lightsabers collinded toghether buzzing and spiiting everything of there sabers was blowing,everything inside the saber blew To be contined Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by stormtroop The empires grip As the empire steped from his starship into the death stars hanger.The general was there to greet him with open arms like a brother or something.The empire ignored the genral rushing pass him he ran to the back of the hanger to the lift he could sense the light side here.He reached for his belt suddenly swinging his arm upwards with a red saber in his hand as he was approching the top floor.The light side was becoming even more unbarable the empire maid mara jade was shaking all though see was tring to hide it from her master.I cna sense your felling mara whats wrong with you.you know you cant hide your nerves frome me said the empire.I know master she replied.DINGGGG.Went the lifts bell.Darth vader and mara steeped fromn the lift quick go back int o th lift mara.Vader swung his light saber suddenly in a horzantall block.Smashing a young rebels saber away the empire jumped up in the air it seemed like miles he then came smashing down just missing the rebels side with his saber.So you think you can beat me young rebel.There was no reply well shouted the lord.Suddenly and swiftly vader swang his sword at the rebel while still shouting.The empire went into a frenzy suddenly probally the silence that did it.The empire was swinging and smashing anything in his way the young rebel pushed his hood off and grabbed his saber.The rebel was blocking everyswing as the twos lightsabers collinded toghether buzzing and spiiting everything of there sabers was blowing,everything inside the saber blew To be contined Wrong thread dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Well, it looks as if I'm going to have to post here again soon, show my way of lowering the number of Maul clones;) Don't worry, there'll still be plenty left for you guys to take care of, but I'm just gonna drop the number down from 2 million. As for how, you'll see:D I'll probably post it here later tonight. I warn you though, it'll be a long and sad one, as it's going to be my last... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Hey guys:) I had to rush my last post cos I had to go out quick. I'm gonna go back and put in more detail. I just felt like something needed to happen quickly. I'm sorry if its a bit much...but this is only going to be a small attack, not many clones. We are going to wipe them out pretty easy, just the fear that the emperors knowing of the Academy's location will be the main concern. The story will still go on. I just wanted a little action:D Tell me if its not okay please:( - an idea Reb, the Emperor could have followed you to the planet with the clones?...just an idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Talliuscs personal fighter craft exited hyperspace in a mass of vessels. "the emperors readied most of the imperial fleet for this battle" Talliusc could tell that the real attack would be a few days away at least but that didnt shake his sense of urgency. Reb hadnt responded to Talliuscs messages and this worried him. within seconds of reversion to realspace Talliusc was hailed by a traffic controller "unidentified starfighter state your designation, port of call and business" the voice droned as if he didnt really care. "i am.... a messenger from lord Talliusc to Darth Malice, it is imperative that i speak with him. im just in from Coruscant" Talliusc hoped that the traffic controller would buy it. there was no reply for almost 2 minutes and Talliusc was getting worried when a new voice came through the comm "Lord Talliusc, i told you to remain on Coruscant you have no business here. return to the capital, i will send for you when the attack begins" Talliuscs mind reeled, that voice had been the dark emperors but how had he known?... the force is strong in him. "master, i apologize for leaving Coruscant but i cannot let you destroy lord malice!" Talliuscs voice trembled with fear of his master, but this had to be done! "Lord malice? what are you talking about Talliusc?" replied the dark emperor, there was something strange about his voice. "I know everything Divine and i will not let you kill him!" Talliusc prepped his vessel for the battle that would inevitably come. "Lord malice has been working for the jedi for some time now lord Talliusc and you should remember that you work for ME! he doesnt care about you or the sith. Lord malice will be dealt with in time, i have word that hes just visited the Jedi academy on Thedonias, would a true sith cooperate with the enemy?" Talliuscs mind threatened to close in on itself. How could Reb work with the jedi? why would he turn his back on the sith? everything in Talliuscs mind came crashing down to the point where he almost lost his sanity. Talliusc reached over and shut off the comm. "i must help Reb at all costs, I owe him my life." with those words spoken softly to himself Talliuscs mind became suddenly aware of his masters pointless cruelty, as if a dark haze had left his body and he was himself again. Talliusc couldnt believe the sensation rushing through him, it was almost.... peaceful. It wasnt long before a squadron of tie defenders were upon him. the commander of the squadron hailed him "i dont want to have to do this Sir, but i have my orders. surrender or die!" came the voice of the commander. "allow me to leave peacefully and ill not fire a shot. try to prevent me from going my way and ill burn you down. i dont have time for this!" came back Talliuscs reply. The commander said nothing more but fired his lasers into Talliuscs aft shields. setting the navicomputer to auto track he plotted the coordinates for Thedonias, all the while dancing around the incoming fire. it would take several minutes to plot the most efficient course and Talliusc had 12 fighters on his tail. Talliusc tried to steer clear of most of the big ships as they would inevitably launch more fighters to assist this squadron but that tactic was proving too hazardous for Talliuscs health. throttling down and putting his ship in a hard flat turn Talliusc shot off towards the super star destroyer FleshRender. dodging around turbolasers and shield domes Talliusc tried desperately to shake his pursuit. He ducked through the shield aperature near the bridge and was pleased to see one defender bank into the wall bounce off and crash into his wingman. "two down, and only 1 minutes until im out of here" These pilots were good, but they were clones and that gave Talliusc an advantage. Reaching out with his mind Talliusc gave the fighters the impression that there was no ship they were chasing. it would have been easier just to make them crash into each other but somehow Talliusc didnt want to kill them. Flipping his comm back on as he rushed for hyperspace Talliusc quipped "Divine spirit, consider this my resignation!" and with that Talliusc was gone, bound for Thedonias where nobody knew him as a friend and he would surely die. alone and friendless.... accept for Reb, I have to find him! thought it was over didnt you? mwhaahha! Thedonias: Talliuscs fighter careened out of hyperspace so close to the enemy held world that he could make out the planets mountains. "hmm, they arent firing at me or responding to my hails. have they evacuated already?" then Talliusc saw them, Divine Spirit had already launched a softening up attack. and from the looks of it the jedi had their hands full. Carefully Talliusc set his fighter down practically on the academy grounds. "this is suicide and i wont accomplish anything, but i must try. for Reb's sake" Running full out Talliusc made the academy grounds within 5 minutes and could feel the force battle taking place all over. one of the most intense spikes of power came from the lower levels. "whoevers down there is important and i have to help" wondering once again what he was doing and whether he had any allies on this planet Talliusc charged. He made his way down a set of stairs into the lower levels of the academy where he saw one of the most intense lightsaber fights of his life. the Jedi Whitedragon was engaged with a darth maul clone. and more clones were coming up from behind. Talliusc also saw obi-wan13 fighting off a darth maul and marveled at his skill with a lightsaber. Whitedragon parried the first mauls saber sweep and jutted his own Saber through the clones throat ending the battle instantly, barely pausing for a breath Whitedragon charged the next group of 3 clones. Whitedragon was good but taking on three of these clones was a suicide note. Talliusc charged forward igniting his saber and screamed with a feral fury. Whitedragon saw him and readied to fight defensively against four competitors, the thought never occured to whitedragon that Talliusc was here to help. Leaping clear over Whitedragons head Talliusc landed behind the third clone. These clones had been trained to recognize Talliusc as an ally and not attack, that was their downfall. As soon as he had one foot on the ground Talliusc was striking. one maul fell to the ground before he knew that a saber had been swung and the second didnt have much time to realize what was going on before he fell from a blow to the neck. the third clone was so startled that Whitedragon clipped his head clean from his shoulders before maul had a chance to defend himself. "what is your game sithlord?" spat whitedragon. "i am here looking for Reb starblazer. please i do not wish to fight you." came back Talliusc reply. "Lying sith, ill have your head for even speaking Rebs name" with that Whitedragon charged Talliusc and Talliusc had never had to fight so hard for his life in all the war. Dodging more then parrying Talliusc near lost his head more then once. but all of a sudden Whitedragon was launched backwards and slammed into the wall. Talliusc looked beyond Whitedragon to see obi-wan13 with his hand raised. "dragon stop, lets hear what he has to say" came the jedi leaders voice. "last person i ever thought would be saving my ass" replied Talliusc as he straightened up. "i dont trust you sithlord but i will hear you out" "very well, Divine spirit will be launching the full invasion within days and 2 million maul clones will be at the head. i suggest you begin making preparations for them" "we already knew that, what makes you think we should trust you" came obi-wans reply. "because all i want is to help my friend. Reb doesnt know it but the sith are trying to kill him. i need to help him. i owe him my life" Talliusc was startled to see himself revealing this much to his enemy. but somehow obi-wan13 didnt seem like an enemy anymore. "Reb, was here but he is gone now and we dont know where. im sorry but i cannot allow you to leave here. we will place you in the cellblock but you will not be harmed as long as you cooperate. that is the best that i can offer." dropping his lightsaber to the ground Talliusc raised his hands and pressed the together. "very well, i will sit in your cellblock and await judgement. you are my enemy no longer" whitedragon finally composed himself and stood up. "you're pretty handy with a saber Talliusc, for a sithlord." Talliusc almost smiled at that jibe, it felt so different here. later that day on thedonias. obi-wan13 walked into the cell where Talliusc sat. "i have spoken to my advisors and we have agreed that you are too dangerous to be allowed free reign here. we have however decided to allow you prove yourself no longer Divine Spirits servant. you will tell us all that you can of Divines army and weaknesses and in turn we will provide you with food and drink. i must warn you that many of the jedi who have faced you before wish to see you dead. they blame you personally for Reb's betrayal. but i see that you count him a friend. we will do all that we can to help him but we cannot allow you to go. "i understand" was all Talliusc said. Obi-wan13 started to walk to the door and Talliusc felt compelled to say more "and... im sorry." Obi-wan13 looked back at Talliusc and saw the genuine sorrow in Talliuscs eyes. "im sorry too" and with that Obi left the room. and Talliusc was alone with his thoughts once more. well what does everybody think? see what i mean about you not expecting that whitedragon? and as usual if anybody has a problem with my story please PM or post here your complaints and ill do what i can to edit it. thank you for reading it and please tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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