Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 "Kit i need to get to the kitchen, so come with me, it is on the way to the cortyared" yom says as they turn the corrner in the empty coradors. "why? this is no time for food" Kit snaps at yom. "I know that is why i am getting something eals". he says as he runs in to the kitchen and over to the walk in frezzer. "In here" he walks in to the back and opens a panel. and pusses a few buttons. then a whole new door opens to a lil armory. "wha? when did u have this put in" kit asks shock "Well, when i first cam here i had it put in. just incase something like this happend" he says as he pulls down a Missile Lancher and throws it on his shoulder and a beld of Theral Detonators and gives it to Kit and then grabs him one, and a FC-1 "well grab what u whant and lets get back to work" "ok i will take this" he says as he pulls down a Repeater mounted with a concussion launcher "lets get to work" they walk out of the frezzer and out to the court yard were they can here Ship flying over "that is not good thing to see, they must be here" just as Kit says that an explosen god off on the eastern cortyard wall as both men take cover and take out there weapons. they perpar for a battel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by Yom [ba Missile Lancher and throws it on his shoulder and a beld of Theral Detonators and gives it to Kit and then grabs him one, and a FC-1 "well grab what u whant and lets get back to work" "ok i will take this" he says as he pulls down a Repeater mounted with a concussion launcher "lets get to work" [/b] thats some heavy stuff. just dont blow up the acadamy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 as the wall fell in. 3 Darth Maul clones walked in with sabers in hands. Yom and Kit both stood up and drew arms "i thought these were going to be clone troopers" yome said as he dros his fC- and missiel launcher, and pulls out his blasers. while kit drops his Reapeter and pulls out his 2 sabers and lights them up "This is not going to be easy" kit says to him self as he gets in his ready stance. "i will take 1 and 2 and u take 3" then he brook out in to a charg at 2 of the clones as Yom Dashes stait to his clone shotting and the clone rflecting each blast back at yom but yom is zig zaging making it hard for the clone to hit as he starts to run back at the clone the clone force pushes yom to the side and then charges at yom but yom is quick to get up fall over agine due to another force push then the clone was on top of him with his foot on his yom's chest and "it is time for u to meat your maker weak one" the Clone mutterd yom yom reached up the back of his aromor and grabes his saber and says "no! it is time for u to DIE!!" then he puls it out lights it and cut the clon's leg off and gets to his feet then stabe to clone in the head "therenow that take car of that > but mean while Kit is carging at the 2 sith attaking and defending. he pushes one clone to take some time to kill of one and then gos back to the other that was allread back on his feet in a ready stancs then as the 2 fight they go in to a saber lock and kit is starting to lose then the sith fals to the gound then ther was Yom standing ther with his blaster "i though i llend u a hand" "well thank but next time u take on 2 and see how it feels" kit mutters whial he is out of breath. "lets go we nee to get back to obi" then the 2 pick up there stuff and go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C'jais Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Originally posted by Darth Slayne Don't get me wrong, but... Easy there mate! This isn't about how good they are at writing its about having fun! I'll have you know that I happen to be quite proud of all the writers here. Why, you ask? Because they have the guts to TRY. Three chears to all academy members! Both Sith and Jedi! Hey hey, I didn't get you wrong matey, but I think I need to be more clear this time.... I have no problem with your thread/story and I encourage this sort of creativity.... It's just.... It's just that I have.... *Issues*, with fanfic in general. Trust me, I've been there myself, and hopefully you and the rest of you guys aren't including any guys from the SW-storyline (haven't read the whole thing though...). *lol* - look at grumpy old me now! Anyway, get on with your story and ignore me for now... I'll go out and hunt the truly dangerous fanfic writers myself.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 great job talliusc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Your Turn Mr. White Sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kit fisto JK Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Yom and kit ran to the main building to get to obi dodging explosions all the way there. when they got to the main building they saw a maul clone with 2 clone troopers sitting there waiting for them "you ge...."Yom started but was cut off by kit " I know " they charged the 3 yom pulled out kits repeater and quickly took down the two clones "yom go ahead Ill catch up when im done here "kit said while in a saber lock with the maul clone "right"yom replied and headed off to the lower levelsthe fight with kit and the clone didnt last much longer when finaly kit cut the maul in 2 and started to head in the direction of the lower levels. when kit found the 3 standing there next to 2 dead mauls "obi dragon the battles going on up the...."kit was saying when all the suden 4 duel sabers ignited around them "um let me take that back it is now down here"kit said when the 4 started to attack them. and yom not being a jedi jumped out of the way trying to take them out from a distance when he heard the elivator start up he turned around to see a dozen clone troopers come out "****"he said firing at them with every thing when 2 more maul clones came out from behind and went to battle the jedi after taking out the clone troopers he turned around and there where 4 mauls still there so he started to fire again when he heard the elivator going again "now what" he turned around and saw dissectional and another padawan come out and start running into battle after about 3 min with the aditional help all the clones where dead. now someone elses turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 i just got back from a tortures day of agony at band camp and am too tired to write, so if anyone wants they can write how i am leading the clones of maul into battle. go me....oww. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 6, 2002 Share Posted August 6, 2002 As the 6 stand there in there ready stance and ready for the next wave. If there is going to be a next wave. But then Obi gets a com signal “sir. We have reports say the Camus and his clone have been shot down over near the mountains….” Yom says “damn it” and runs to the hanger bay to help his friend “No, Yom” obi Yells Then White tells “let him go, let him do what he can, let him get us some intel” then obi stops and starts to talk to the others. Yom Runs though the corridors to get to the hanger bay so that he can go help his friend he get on his Swoop bike and rides off to were Camus landed “I am coming buddy don’t worry” he says to him self ass he steps on the throttle. As he gets closer the sun starts to fall and black ness is a pond but then storms start to roll in and it rains, and it rains hard, by the time he is 500 yard away from the crash but he can hardly see in front of him . but he can make out 2 men on there knees with there hands behind there back and clone troopers surrounding them with there gun pointed at the two men. * * Mean While * * Camus and his clone sit there on ther knees with here hands behind there back at gunpoint. And a officer standing asking questions “what are the Defenses like to the academy?” “I won’t tell u. They will be here soon to kill u” Camus said “how about” the officers shoots to shots in to Camus 2 head “tell me now are u will look like him” “Nooooooo! Never” Camus cries out “ I will never tell u! damn u!” as the officer raises his gun and 2 blaster bolts go right to his head and he flies 4 feet to his left and then to the ground.. and there are more blasters shots every were, like a storm of blaster fire. Then it was calm nothing. By now Camus was in the mud in a ball hoping he would not get hit and then he herd. “It is all right Camus u should be fine now” then he realized it was Yom “Thank the force u came” Camus said “ but u did not come in time to save him” “ I came over the hill I saw him get shot. I am sorry there was nothing I could do,” he says as he unties his hand then there was a crash of lightning fallowed by the roar of thunder. Then the 2 men get what they can and stand in the mud with the down pore of rain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 6, 2002 Share Posted August 6, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter - an idea Reb, the Emperor could have followed you to the planet with the clones?...just an idea... That or Darth Slayne could track Reb down. After all, espionage and surveillance are his specialty. Only a suggestion... P.S. Sorry Cjais, I didn't intend to jump down your throat if thats what you think I was up to. Its just that you weren't too clear in your first post and it looked like you were poking fun. Message recieved and understood. Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 6, 2002 Share Posted August 6, 2002 ok guys and gals lets not let this tread die we must keep up the good work w must finish the story and...and...and...BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 i dont think its my place to wright next, maybe divine spirit or obi-wan13. hey maybe Reb would like a run at it again? come on people this is too interesting to die, keep the stories coming grrrr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 hi guys sorry i havent been on all day. i just bought JKI from a friend and ive been playing it all day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 it is ok white it has been down any way all day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 Malice’s Interceptor blasted out of Hyperspace above the planet Angmar. He set the craft down near his destination, then got out. He looked up at the darkening sky, fully expecting it to rain soon, then started walking soon reaching a large crater. He stood on the edge, and stared down, seeing the grand temple at the bottom. “This is it” he thought to himself. “No more running from destiny”. He jumped off the edge, and used the Force and his cape to slow his descent. He touched down at the bottom of the crater, and walked slowly towards the Ancient Sith Temple. While this was a temple that no one really wanted to enter, he was sure that it would still be well protected. He entered, and looked around in the pale light in the temple. The Dark side emanated strongly from here, and for good reason. This was the resting place of The Ring of the Sith, an ancient and dangerous artifact, even more powerful than the Sith Amulets. Created long ago, it was designed to give the wielder unimaginable power in the Dark side of the Force. However, it worked too well. This temple was built in the crater that was made when the creator of the Ring first wore it. His body could not withstand the massive amount of dark energy coursing through him, and the resulting explosion of Dark side energy destroyed him, and carved this crater. The temple had been built here in warning, and the ring was placed inside, for no one was foolish enough to use it again. That, was 2000 years ago, and the ring had lain dormant. Until now. Malice walked deeper and deeper into the temple, letting the Force guide him towards the Ring. It had a unique Dark Side presence, but it wasn’t overwhelming. This worked well for him. It would be masked by his own presence when he gained possession of it. He only wished that finding his way out of the temple would be as easy as finding his way to the Ring. He came to a large, open room. There were many torches lighting this room, burning for millennia, fueled by Dark Side magic. At the end of the room, on a pedestal, was the Ring of the Sith. He began walking towards the ring, when he suddenly stopped. Something wasn’t quite right. Sith temples were normally well protected, but he hadn’t encountered any resistance yet. However every fiber of his being told him something was wrong, and something very, very bad was about to happen. The growl was quite loud, and echoed off the walls of the large room. Malice turned around, to see ten Vornskr’s, saliva dripping from their mouths, staring straight at him. For some reason though, this didn’t scare him. The fact that the Vornskrs were slowly backing away is what scared him, for he knew that they weren’t afraid of him. He then heard a loud ‘thud’, followed by another, and another. The Vornskrs turned and ran off into the shadows. Malice then turned around, and saw what it was they were afraid of. “Oh Sith…” Malice spoke as the large Rancor emerged from a darkened passageway. It let out a deafening roar, and then began to advance towards Malice. “I’ve got a bad feeling about this…” Malice said, igniting his Lightsabres. He rolled to the side as one of the Rancor’s massive hands swiped at him. He took a swing with one of his Lightsabres, and caught one of its claws. The creature howled in pain, and then tried to step on him. Malice jumped back and took a swing at its arm, cutting it off. The creature howled and swatted at him with it’s remaining arm, this time catching him. He was sent flying through the air crashing into a support pillar. He slowly got to his feet, as the Rancor charged towards him. He dived to the side, and watched the monster crash into the stone pillar, breaking it in two. He re-ignited his Lightsabres, and threw one at the Rancor’s leg, severing it from its body. It fell on its side, and began crawling towards Malice. He backed off, knowing full well that even in this condition, the Rancor could still kill him. The only time a Rancor wasn’t dangerous, was when it was dead. He ran towards the pedestal, and snatched the Ring. He stood, staring at it in his hands. It took every ounce of his willpower to not put it on, the sheer power of the Dark side called out to him. He put the ring into a secret pocket of his pants, and then turned. He saw glowing red eyes in every darkened corner of the room, and the Rancor crawling closer and closer towards him. He ran, then used the Force to jump over the Rancor, while pulling his thrown Lightsabre from the ground to him. He continued to run for the exit of the room, and saw Vornskr’s begin to slowly walk out of the shadows. They kept walking, totally ignoring Malice, and heading for the fallen Rancor. The canine-like creatures hated Force users, and normally went out of their way to kill them, so for them to ignore him and head straight for the Rancor, they must have been very hungry. Or very angry. Rancors, being so large, needed a lot of food, and Malice could only imagine what it had been living on. He continued to run, making his way to the exit of the temple, all the while hearing the Rancor’s tortured howls as it became the Vornskr’s next meal. He finally exited the temple, to find himself in a downpour of rain. The sky opened up as bursts of lightning crackled through the air, and thunder boomed. He heard yelps and growls of Vornskrs, not far behind him. Apparently they weren’t satisfied with their last meal, and were looking for dessert. Malice ran full out for the slope of the crater, and leaped, using the Force to propel him halfway up the crater walls. He then jumped again, and made it even farther, digging his hands and feet into the rain soaked terrain, trying to not fall back down into the jaws of death nipping at his heels. The Vornskrs, charged up the crater wall, howling and snarling, desperately trying to get a taste of Force sensitive flesh. Malice took one last leap, and gripped the top edge of the crater with one hand, then looked down, to see that his last jump had set the loose soil free, and it tumbled down, landing on the Vornskrs, sending them back to the base of the crater. He gripped the edge with his other hand, and pulled himself up, and looked back down at the Vornskrs. He was safe for now. He turned around and started walking back towards his ship only to see another disturbing sight. In front of him were six dark figures, all gripping Lightsabres. “Must be my lucky day…” Malice said to himself. “Darth Malice I presume. How rude of you to keep us waiting in the rain for you.” One of the figures said. “Sorry, manners were never my strong point.” Malice said as he pushed his rain drenched hair out of his face. “Ah, defiant to the last. My master would prefer you be taken alive. Well, barely alive, but I think I’ll enjoy killing you too much.” “We’ll see who’s dead and who’s still standing by the end of this.” Said Malice, as he connected his two Lightsabres, and then ignited each end. The six figures ignited each of their red Lightsabres. “ You wanna kill me? Come and try! ” Malice said as he stood his ground staring at the figures. Two of the Dark Jedi charged at him, and he blocked each of their attacks with an end of his Lightsabre. He twisted his Lightsabre, which pushed the attackers Lightsabres back. One tried to attack him from behind, so he shifted his body, and blocked. He spun, in the opposite direction, and sliced the Dark Jedi in half across the midsection. “One down, five to go” Malice thought. He blocked another attack, and another, jumping, spinning, dodging, all while trying to attack and defend at the same time. He blocked two attacks, but one from another Dark Jedi just caught him across the right shoulder. He pushed off these two, and then swung at the one who had just injured him. The Dark Jedi blocked his attack, and another one attacked Malice. He moved his Lightsabre to block, but not before the tip of the attackers Lightsabre singed his lower left leg. “What’s the matter Starblazer?” the same voice said mockingly. “Did that hurt? Can’t handle a few Dark Jedi? Don’t worry, it’ll all be over soon, and then you’ll have failed your friends completely. Oh, you didn’t know… we’ve been following you since Nar Shaddaa, you lead us straight to the Jedi Academy. The Emperor only believed they were on Thedonias, but once we followed you there, we were sure that was their location. Your attempts to save your friends, is what has ultimately sealed their fates. Give it up Starblazer, I promise your death won’t hurt…much.” Anger swelled in Malice, and he attacked with a new fury. He was no longer on the defensive, now he was the aggressor. He struck and struck, defended when necessary, and not even noticing when a Lightsabre blow glanced of an arm or leg. Another Dark Jedi fell from the wrath of Malice’s Lightsabre, and another. There were just two left now. One raised his Lightsabre over his head and charged at Malice. Malice used the Force to push the running Dark Jedi backwards. He flew through the air, and was impaled on the final Dark Jedi’s ignited Lightsabre. He then fell to the ground, the blade slicing him in two. “ I guess you’re next” Malice said as he stood there, his Lightsabre ignited, hissing and crackling as rain drops fell on the beam. Malice was drenched from the rain, slashes in his clothing, burns on his arms and legs, but he wasn’t finished yet. “ Let’s see how well you do without your friends.” The Dark Jedi ran at Malice, and attacked. Block to parry, attack, block, a continuous cycle, and every movement was life or death. Malice then saw his opening, and he took it. He parried and then spun on his heel. The blade of the Lightsabre severed the neck of the final Dark Jedi, sending his head tumbling through the air. “I hope that didn’t hurt…much” Malice said while extinguishing his Lightsabre blades. Still, something didn’t feel right. There was another presence here, a darker one… Then everything went black for Malice as Darth Slayne struck him in base of the neck with the bottom of his Lightsabre. “The Emperor said he wanted him alive if possible, but you had to try and get some glory.” Slayne said to the decapitated body. “Well, at least you distracted him long enough for me to sneak up on him.” Darth Slayne then picked up Malice’s unconscious body and slung him over his shoulder. He took Malice’s Lightsabre and clipped it onto another spot on his own belt. He wouldn’t be needing it again. Slayne turned and walked to the waiting Stygian Wraith. Malice awoke in a cell, with a pounding headache. He looked around, and ascertained his position. He knew he was on an Imperial ship, probably a Star Destroyer, but he wasn’t sure which one. He stood up, and walked to the cell door. There wasn’t even a guard around. He sat down on the bench and took off his right boot. He stretched out with the Force and used it to activate the hidden button inside the boot. The sole of the boot fell off, and inside the hollow chamber was a Lightsabre. “I knew that would come in handy sometime” Malice said as he smiled to himself. He replaced the sole, and then put the boot back on. He ignited his Lightsabre, and an orange blade sprang out. He slashed through the cell door, turned off his blade and exited his prison. He walked over to a computer terminal, and accessed some files. He was on the FleshRender, the Emperor’s personal Super Star Destroyer. He checked in the secret pocket, and yes, the ring was still there. This was his chance. He had planned on confronting the Emperor, but couldn’t think of an excuse to go to, or an easy way to sneak aboard, the FleshRender. This couldn’t have worked out better if he had planned it. He would make his way to the Emperors throne room on this ship, but first, he had to find the weapons locker, and a Holo-projector… “ The small number of clones that we sent down to the planet performed most excellently Master” Darth Dominance said to the Emperor. “When we send down our full strike force, the Jedi will be overwhelmed. They will be no match for them, and they shall fall.” “Good, good. Lord Slayne, what of Starblazer?” “I placed him in a holding cell. He should be unconscious for another while yet master. I took his Lightsabre, that was the only weapon he had on him.” “Excellent. Bring him here. He will stand by my side and watch as his friends are destroyed. He will feel the wrath of the Dark Side, and he will join us… or he will die.” Divine Spirit said as an evil smile spread across his face. “Yes master.” Darth Slayne said as he bowed. He then turned and began walking towards the door. As the soon as the door opened, Darth Slayne was knocked backwards. Standing in the doorway was Darth Malice, his leg still in the air from side kicking Slayne. Malice then walked in, past Slayne as he was getting up. All the Sith lords were in the throne room, and each ignited their Lightsabre. “No, put away your weapons. I shall handle this personally.” Divine Spirit said rising from his throne. Each Sith extinguished their Lightsabre and replaced it on their belts. Divine Spirit began walking towards Malice, his hand reaching for his Lightsabre. “I’ve suspected your treachery since the beginning Starblazer. And it seems to have spread. Lord Talliusc appears to have sided with the Jedi. The poor fool. He will be destroyed, as will you and your friends.” Talliusc had left? He was now with the Jedi. That was excellent, Malice thought to himself. At least he’ll survive this. “Not if I can help it. I’ve come here to finish this Divine, right here, and right now. Only one of us walks away.” Said Malice as he and the Emperor circled each other, glaring. So, you’ve come to face me have you? You’re brave boy, I’ll give you that. But ultimately foolish. Of all the time that you’ve spent with us, you have yet to see the full extent of my power” “And you have yet to see mine.” Said Malice as he unhooked his Lightsabre from his belt. “What a pity. You had such potential Starblazer, it’s such a waste for you to throw it all away for a group of fools that will never truly accept you. You’re a Sith, like me. Like all of us. Join us Starblazer, give yourself fully to the ways of the Sith, become one of my allies.” “Ally? You mean cower in front of you and lick your boots? Stand idly by and watch as you massacre the Jedi and enslave the galaxy? No thanks. I’d much rather die on my feet than live on my knees.” Malice said while igniting his orange Lightsabre. “Then die you shall Starblazer.” Yelled the Emperor as he ignited his crimson blade and swung at Malice, who blocked the attempt. Malice counter attacked, which was met with a parry, followed by a block. The two Sith battled each other back and forth for what seemed like an eternity, but was actually only a few minutes. Neither gained ground, neither was willing to lose it. Suddenly, Divine Spirit parried with all his strength, and flicked his wrists, knocking the Lightsabre from Malice’s hand. He then swung down and severed Malice’s right leg, below the kneecap. Malice wouldn’t acknowledge the pain though, he wouldn’t give the Emperor the pleasure. Divine Spirit then used the Force to throw Malice backwards into a wall. As he lay on the ground, the Emperor threw Malice across the room into another wall, and then another, and another. Malice landed on the floor, bruised and bleeding as the Emperor slowly walked up to him, and then leaned down just inches in front of Malice’s face. “You’re no match for me you fool, my power is far beyond yours. You will now meet your end, as will your friends. Any final words Starblazer?” Divine Spirit said as he stood and readied his Lightsabre for the killing blow. “Yea…” said Malice as he reached behind his back and pulled out a remote detonator. “See you in hell” Malice pressed the button on the detonator and the ship rocked with explosions. “How could this have happened?” The Emperor, lying on the floor, yelled at Darth Slayne. “I don’t know sir, I locked him in that cell myself.” Slayne answered, while getting to his feet. Malice grabbed onto a piece of machinery and pulled himself up. He steadied himself on his remaining leg, wiped the blood from his mouth and started to laugh. “Yes, but I escaped. I went to the weapons locker and grabbed some remote mines. Seeing as you don’t often inform your slaves of what's going on, they found nothing strange about me walking around the engineering section, and tossing the occasional mine around when they weren’t looking. Face it Divine, that’s the trouble with clones. They may be loyal, they may be easily expendable, but they just aren’t very smart” Malice said once he stopped laughing. But something wasn’t right. The Super Star Destroyer should have exploded by now however. The chain reaction hadn’t occurred. That was when a voice came over the Comm. “Warning, drive system failure. Planetary collision in 220 seconds.” Malice knew what this could mean, and he slipped the Sith Ring onto the ring finger of his left hand. He looked down sadly at it, for this is where his wedding band should have been placed long ago. Malice could feel the Dark side energy begin to course through his very being, and he knew what was to come next. An evil grin crossed the Emperor’s face. “How simply ironic. In your attempts to destroy me, you’ve doomed your friends. This ship will fall right on top of your precious academy, wiping out all the Jedi in one quick strike. I couldn’t have planned it better myself. Why, what’s a ship worth compared to annihilating the Jedi?” The Emperor laughed evilly. “Come, to the shuttle bay. Let’s leave Starblazer to go down with the ship. I don’t think he’ll be going anywhere.” The Emperor said as he left the room, all the Sith Lords following him. “Planetary collision in 140 seconds.” Echoed over the Comm. “With this ring, I’m the most powerful being in the galaxy. Even the Emperor would bow before me. I should just leave, forget these foolish Jedi, and claim my place as this galaxy’s God.” Malice thought to himself. Then he realized the kind of thoughts he was having, he was under the influence of the Dark Side. No, he would not be like the others, he would not be like his master Darth Talon, power hungry and evil. He would take the ultimate power of the Dark Side, and use it to save the light. The irony of the situation was not lost on Malice, as he grinned, and intensified the Dark energy within him, using it to levitate himself. He built up more and more energy, watched as the bolts shot into the floor below him, spreading into the ship. If he could focus all the energy quickly enough, he may even be able to take all the Sith to hell with him, like he originally planned. If not, he’d have to settle for killing a million Maul clones. One way or the other, he was not going out alone. “Planetary collision in 90 seconds.” The Comm echoed again. “This is it” Malice thought to himself. “No more running. I’m sorry Kylaa, but this must be done..." Malice said aloud. "For the Academy!" He yelled as the energy became stronger and stronger, as his words echoed throughout the falling ship. “By the Force! Everyone, get to your ships! Evacuate, evacuate!” Obi-Wan yelled while staring at the night sky. He had seen the large explosion rock the aft end of the Super Star Destroyer, and watched as it had begun its descent towards the planet. The Emperor’s first wave of clones had been easily dispatched, and the Jedi had returned to the academy in order to prepare for the next attack. But he hadn’t expected this. Obi-Wan began running towards the space craft bay, not wanting to be caught on the ground when that Super Star Destroyer touched down. Obi-Wan had made it to just outside the hangar when he looked up again at the sky. The FleshRender’s hull was glowing red, but it couldn’t have already entered the atmosphere. Obi-Wan looked harder, this was a different kind of glow. It almost looked as if sparks and streaks of energy were moving around the gigantic vessel. This was not natural, and all of Obi-Wan’s Force abilities were not needed to tell him that. There was something else at work, and Obi-Wan could feel a tremendous Dark Side presence. He’d never felt such power in his entire life. Was it the Emperor? The energy intensified, and the ship glowed an even deeper red. Then suddenly, the huge ship exploded long before it made it near the planet. Obi-Wan felt a large disturbance in the Force and an overwhelming feeling of pain, suffering, and death struck him. The Dark Side presence he had felt before was now gone. A loud cheer spread over the Academy grounds and Obi-Wan sighed in relief. The crisis had been averted, but how and why, that was what worried him. “Master Obi-Wan.” Said Darklighter over Obi-Wan’s Comm unit. “We’ve received a holo-message. It came from the Super Star Destroyer, before it exploded.” “I’ll be there in a moment.” Obi-Wan said, then turned and started his jog towards the command centre. Upon entering, he saw the higher ranking officers all crowded around. “It’s addressed to you sir, we didn’t want to play it without you here.” Said Darklighter, as he activated the Holo-message. A blue image formed and then took shape. “Reb…” Said Obi-Wan “Greetings Master Kenobi. By the time you receive this message, I expect that I’ll be dead. I plan to confront Divine Spirit, and hopefully defeat him.” The hologram said as Obi Wan tried to hide his surprise. “If this happens, I’ll claim the title of Emperor, and dissolve the Galactic Empire, once and for all. Should this fail, I have planted remote mines in the engineering section of an above Super Star Destroyer, in hope that it will cause a chain reaction, destroying it and all the Sith on it, myself included. There are also approximately 1 million Maul clones on this vessel, which would also be destroyed. Should this plan fail, I have the Ring of the Sith, which I could use to become even more powerful than the Emperor himself. This is my last resort, and I shall only use it if it becomes absolutely necessary. Absolute power corrupts absolutely, and we don’t need another Divine Spirit running around do we? These are my plans and fail safes. You always told me to plan for the worst and hope for the best Obi-Wan.” Obi-Wan tried to hide his smile at his friends attempt at humor despite the seriousness of the situation. “As I’m already dead, I have something to ask of you Obi. Please, give the locket to Kylaa if you ever see her again. Tell her, that I’ve told her I loved her more times than I can count, but I’ve never once told her that I’m sorry. So please, tell her that I’m sorry Obi-Wan. Tell her what I’ve done, and try to explain to her why I did it. And don’t gloss it over Obi, I know you too well. Tell her and anyone else who asks my story. Tell it true, my sins and all, and let me judged accordingly. I told you that I was willing to pay for my crimes Obi-Wan, and my debt will be paid in blood. But don’t mourn me, as I am no greater than anyone else who has died for the Academy. There is nothing you can do to save me, or to stop me. We all have our paths to follow, mine was just a shorter one than yours. Remember what you told me Obi-Wan, a part of your Jedi Code, 'There is no death, there is the Force'. I’ll see you on the other side my friend.” The Hologram stood at attention, and then gave a salute. “ Mission accomplished sir. Lieutenant Starblazer… over and out.” With that, the hologram faded away into nothing. “He’s… he’s gone.” Darklighter said. “That’s what that explosion was?” “Yes, I’m afraid so. I felt an enormous Dark side presence. It could only have been Reb wearing the ring. He must have focused all of his energy inwards, destroying himself and the ship. I also felt the deaths of the clones, but I fear that Divine Spirit and the others escaped.“ Obi-Wan said, shaken back to reality by Darklighter’s question. “Well, at least we finally know whose side he was on.” Tyrion said sadly. “He lived the life of a Sith, but died the death of a Jedi. Giving his life in the protection of others. May you find the peace in death that you searced for in life my friend.” Obi-Wan said, bowing his head. Everyone filed out of the room, leaving only Darklighter and Obi-wan. “It’s such a shame. He went up there, ready to give his life in order to end this war, and yet, the Emperor and all the Sith are still alive. Why did he do it? Reb ended up dieing for nothing, his sacrifice was meaningless.” Darklighter said quietly. He had not known Reb very long or very well, but he had grown to trust and respect him. Obi-Wan sat in a chair, staring at the locket that once belonged to his friend. He thought back to the day the holo-image of the three of them had been taken. He thought of the past year of war, and the days that were to come. Then finally, after a few moments of silence, he spoke. “No my young friend. No one dies for nothing, and no sacrifice is meaningless as long you die for what you believe in. There was close to a million clones on that Super Star Destroyer. That could very well be the deciding factor in this war. Reb was not the first to die for our cause, nor will he be the last. But he’ll live on, with all of us, as long as you remember who he was, and what he died for. Reb had said he intended on paying for his crimes with his life, and that was his choice. However, Reb’s debt was paid long ago.” Obi-Wan said, and a broad smile crossed his face as he remembered his fallen friend. “That was just his way of leaving a tip.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 Nice work Reb. I have a question or two, be sure to check your PM's. I'm currently trying to compile all of the stories here so I can make some sense of where most of the characters are at this point in time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 Ooh......Heck! Eh, disregard that PM Reb (exept the shuttle part). Hadn't realised you were writing at the time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 Heh that's alright. I haven't gotten it yet though, so that's strange... Anyways, I've managed to clear up the whole "2 million clones" thing. I must say, it was a wonderful idea on Shadow Angel's part, so I didn't want to see it go to waste. I figured I'd just round the clones down to an even million, even if it was a roundabout way of doing so:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 In case you are unable to read that PM (Reb), I will just say that Darth Slayne would have used the Stygian Wraith as opposed to a shuttle. I'ts an insecurity thing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 All right! My first storie for this thread. *big intake of air* The battered Stygian Wraith hurtled through space like a wounded wamp rat. She had been unfortunate to have gotten caught in the blast radius as the dying Super Star Destroyer, FleshRender, exploded within Thedonias’ atmosphere. The battle had taken a turn for the worse, and all around X-wings, A-wings and the occasional B-wing battled a multitude of Tie fighters in a dazzling display of blaster fire. Darth Slayne had done all he could to see to it that the Emperor had made it safely into hyperspace. Many a brave pilot died never knowing that a ghostly black ship had gotten in on their six o’clock. The Stygian Wraith’s automated turrets had fired almost continually since entering the battle, spewing out red blaster bolts as fast as any hand held repeater rifle. But the damage from the capital ship’s dramatic demise had taken its toll on Slayne’s stricken vessel, and now she plummeted toward the desert planet’s atmosphere. Darth Slayne fought the controls as he looked once again at the screen displaying the ships status: Hull structure…………………………80% Deflector shield integrity……………..20% Automated turrets…………………….90% Hyper drive……………………….Off Line Lateral thrusters…………………..Off Line Port engine……………………………10% Starboard engine……………………...60% Repulser lifts………………………….35% Primary sensors……………………….95% Scrambling system………………..Nominal Automated repair systems………...Nominal Remote piloting systems………….Nominal The list went on, and it looked bad. With the damage his ship had sustained, there was no way he was going to reach a safe distance in order to power down and wait for the auto-repair systems to bring the hyper drive back on line. To top it all off the Jedi had deployed the main bulk of their fleet and were systematically destroying the Emperor’s scattered forces. His only other option was to ditch the Wraith on the planet surface and give her some time to lick her wounds. Unfortunately he would have to land in the very heart of enemy held territory. The Stygian Wraith shook violently as she was buffeted by the atmospheric conditions of Thedonias, making it near on impossible for Slayne to maintain control of his downward plight. Then just when he was beginning to think he would spin out of control, his faithful ship broke through to calmer skies, and it almost seemed as though the Wraith had sighed with relief. Darth Slayne looked out at the night darkened desert expanse before him, and hoped that there weren’t any obstructions on the sandy floor to prevent his forced landing. He reached out with the force and scanned the night-shrouded terrain, and when he had found a sufficiently clear area, he struggled with his beloved ships controls until it touched down with enough force to throw him from his seat. After regaining his composure, he powered down all systems save for the scrambling device and the auto-repair equipment. He knew that come daylight, his ship would stand out in the desert like a banther among a group of Jawas. But it would not take that long for the hyper drive to repair, so he need only hide until then. Proper repairs would have to wait. Seeing that there was little else he could do, Slayne left the cockpit and made for his private cabin. Along the way he passed various little droids that were hard at work making repairs to one system or another, but he payed scant attention to the them for the most part. Once in his cabin, he sat upon the floor and meditated upon recent events. Until now he had served his master, Darth Kaan well. He remembered his initial shock at hearing the man’s name for the first time, thinking for just a brief moment that the Emperor had resurrected the Dark lord of the Sith from ages past. But this new Lord Kaan was not the legendary leader of the Sith armies that fell on the sacred plains of Russan, over two thousand years ago. The only similarity they shared was in name only. Yes, he had served his master well. He had tracked the traitorous Darth Malice down. Had followed the fool to this very planet. It was he, Darth Slayne, that had confirmed the hidden location of the Jedi academy. The Emperor and Master Kaan were well pleased with his success, and even more pleased when he had brought the traitor in for justice. Darth Slayne frowned. He could not have known that the venomous Lord Malice would prove to be the undoing of this most crucial attack. But that was over with now, and the traitor had died aboard the FleshRender when it exploded. Slayne made an oath with himself. He swore that he would take no chances should he be required to capture another Jedi. Already some dark solutions were presenting themselves. And then he felt it; a familiar presence. Slayne reached out with the force, probing, searching, scrutinising, until he found it. It was Lord Talliusc. He was being held prisoner within the confines of the Jedi academy. Slayne cursed. So much for remaining hidden, the Emperor would not be pleased if he learned that he, Darth Slayne, had left a Sith Master to the mercy of the foul Jedi. Angry now, he rose to his feet and left his cabin, making for the cargo bay at the rear of the ship. Once there, he mounted his Sith speeder bike and blasted out into the cold night air the moment the bay door had opened. Coming to an abrupt halt, he turned to face the Stygian Wraith just as the cargo bay door resealed itself, and summoned the power of the Force. Within a few short moments his prized ship was buried under a mountain of sand, hidden from view with the naked eye, and safe from the probing scans of technology. Once more he hit the accelerator and speed off into the desert, letting the force be his guide. -------- Darklighter looked up at the night sky and shivered due to the cold of the desert night. It would be dawn in a few hours, and still the debris from the Super Star Destroyer fell from space, causing thousands of tiny streaks of light to plunge through the atmosphere. It reminded him of a beautiful display of falling stars he had seen once when he was a boy. Of course, everyone knew that they were only meteor showers, but he preferred the more romantic term for them; falling stars. But now he looked up and wondered, for tonight there was nothing romantic about the display. That beauty was stolen by the fact that a great deal of lives had been lost. One life in particular. Fallen stars more like, he found himself thinking. Once more he shivered, and then he changed his mind. Perhaps there was romance in the display after all. Reb Starblazer had given his life to save the very people that counted him among the enemy, nothing could have been more noble. He closed his eyes and sent his will flowing into the serenity that was the force. “Farewell Reb Starblazer.” He whispered. “Jedi Knight and martyr to all that is good.” But if he expected a reply, it never came. Darklighter reluctantly withdrew his questing mind, and when he did so, a vision came to him unannounced… …Darklighter stared into the red-yellow eyes of the man who had just killed him. He never could have imagined the shear pain he felt now, as the crimson red saber burned deep within his chest… …and then a small green figure stood before him and spoke. “Always in motion, is the future.”… And then the image passed and Darklighter could hear the lingering sound of a woman’s voice. “Beware good Jedi…for even now, he comes…..” For a long while he stood there in stunned disbelief. What had the vision meant? Would he die, another victim of this war? And just what did the pointy eared creature mean when he stated that the future was always in motion? He almost jumped out of his skin when a hand gently rested on his shoulder. He spun to face his friend, Obi Wan13, and noted the look on his face. “You felt it too, didn’t you?” Darklighter asked. “I did indeed my friend.” Obi wan replied. “But what does it mean? Who is this person that comes even now?” “It’s the same presence I felt back when we were based on the forest planet.” Obi Wan said. “The one that discovered us and fled.” “Then we must stop him.” Darklighter mused. “My feelings tell me that that’s what the woman was trying to say. I wonder who she was.” Obi Wan stood for a moment in thought. “I feel certain that she was once a Jedi. She had all the hallmarks of one. We should do as she warned. Assemble a task force my friend and lets go see what we can find.” “At once.” With that, Darklighter turned and headed back into the hidden academy. -------- The cloud of dust dissipated and Darth Slayne stood in the warm desert dawn, his macro binoculars raised to his eyes. Briefly he scanned the horizon in search of the academy’s hidden entrance, but he couldn’t find any evidence of its existence. The force had guided him this far, and he knew that he was close, but there was something else. Something did not feel right. Funny, he found himself wondering. Did he not get this same feeling from the traitor Malice right before he sprung his trap? Instantly Slayne dropped the binoculars and ignited his lightsabers, crouching into a ready stance. But the trap was already sprung as figures leapt up from out of the very sand to encircle him. The snap-hiss of a multitude of sabers told him he was in some very deep bantha poodo. He knew that he was vastly outmatched so he stood there and seethed at the one Jedi that stepped forward, a light blue saber in his grasp. “I wouldn’t try anything if I were you.” Obi Wan said calmly. “You may as well give it up, you’ve lost this encounter.” Slayne stared with absolute hatred at the man, but disengaged his sabers and dropped them into the sand. One of the Jedi, armed with a white saber, pulled the lifeless hilts with the force, skilfully catching them one at a time before securing them to his belt. “That’s more like it.” Obi wan said with a grin. “You see, even a Sith can be reasonable when he wants to.” “You will die for this.” Slayne Spat, then looked directly at Darklighter. “I have foreseen it!” “Why do they always say that?” Obi Wan asked nobody in particular. Then his face turned deadly serious. “Name! Rank!” “Darth Slayne.” The sith answered with a bored tone. “Apprentice in the Sith academy.” “You’re a little out of your league here, apprentice.” Obi Wan used that last word as a barb. “How did you get here and what is your purpose!” “I caught a ride on a half drunk Mynoch, so I could sell Jedi scout tid-bits to unsuspecting home owners!” “I see.” Obi Wan said flatly “So, its the funny man routine is it? Cuff him men, and lets bring him in for questioning.” A pair of binders were placed roughly about his wrists and he was rudely shoved toward the hidden transport that lay buried no too far away. Slayne noted that one of the Jedi had confiscated his Sith speeder a moment before he was bundled unceremoniously into the transport. Not too long after he was placed in a holding cell deep within the academy. He could sense Lord Talliusc nearby and reached out to him with the force. What he felt from the man was strange… EDIT: After all that I think next story should be from the Jedi perspective(Really, you don't say...). Darklighter, about what I wrote concerning your character. Worry not, all will be made clear much later on. I will speak with you about this when the time comes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 WOW, thats the only word that comes close to describing the story swarm of the recent day or two. I've thought up some directions that Talliuscs story could take but i agree with Slayne that the next part of the story should be from the jedi perspective so i will wait. and excellent story Slayne, very nice attention to detail. it was truly a pleasure to read (especially the part where you mentioned me and the SSD that i named fleshrender) im hoping that obi-wan13 will make an addition to this thread sometime soon, hes been rather quit of late. well keep up the stories everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camus Posted August 7, 2002 Share Posted August 7, 2002 Camus picked up his dead clone and walked to his ship. He put his clone into his seat and grabed both the guns. Camus held a reapeter in one hand and a concution rifle in the other hand. The two men walked over to the swoop as the rain pord down on them really hard and fast. Camus looked at the bike. "The converter is wet. This thing wont work tell its dry." Right then Camus turned around and shot a concution blast right at the bwing blowing what was left away. "If they had cheaked the records on that they wouldnt have need to intaraget me and my clone. Im just doing the final honors of my clone and distroying what little info they could have used." Camus then stripped the genorator from the swoop. "What are you doing now?" "Im getting us some supplies. We have along walk a head of us." "Oh" Yom stood there with a wierd look on his face. "Okay." Camus got every thing he needed and slung what he could over his back. Camus then started to march on to the academy. For 2 days the men walked to get back. Finally after walking so far they saw something. They saw a landing camp filled with clones getting ready to attack the Academy. Camus quickly cheaked the condition of his concution rifle. He then slowly started to get ready to sneak attack the clone troopers when he saw a few Maul clones walking around ammongst them. Camus then pulled back and looked at Yom. "Are you ready to fight some sith?" "Not really why?" "Oh nothing really I just saw a couple Maul clones walking around in there." "Okay. I guess ill use my missle launcher." "Yeah. They may be able to block blasts but they wont be able to doudge explotions." Camus pulled his concution rifle and shot right into the middle of the clones. Yom followed threw with a missle right to officerers tent. Camus picked up his repeater and fired at all the close troopers and shot concutions into the large groups. Yom fired missles all over the place where Mauls would be. With in minutes only 2 Maul clones was left and all the ammo for the concutions and missles were gone. Camus dropped his guns and removed his last resort weapon his saber. Camus ran up to one of the mauls and egnited his saber. Camus swung his sword to attack the the clone. but the clone egnited his saber just intime to block the attack. Camus and the clone fought fast and hard. Finally the clone nocked the saber out of camus hands. Camus did a cartwheel over to dead Maul bodies and picked up there dualsabers. Camus landed and egnighted all 4 blades. The maul clone activated his Dualsaber and chaged Camus. Yom walked up to the second clone really slowly. The clone opened his mouth and tilted his head watching Yoms evermovement. Yom reached down and pulled a thermal detonatior from his belt. Yom set the timer to 10 seconds. The clone watched this with an inrested look but kept his mouth open. Yom tosed the detonatior strait up into the air. the clone watched the detonatior and not Yom. Yom jumped up and did around house kick with perfect timing as the thermal came right back down hit Yoms foot just right sending the thermal right into the clones mouth. with only 2 seconds left the clone started to claw at his face but was to late the detonatior exploted senind mauls teeth into his brain. Yom looked over at Camus to see a really fast spinning battle with 6 blades and sparks flying all over the place. Both camus and the clone moved really fast as the sparks and lights just seemed to only allow a few seconds worth of viewing. Yom grabbed his saber just about to enter the fight but relized with out some training of the living force one of those blades would cut him in half in seconds. Yom just stood there watching the fight go on and on with out being able to help. Camus screamed as he faught the power of the darkside was starting to over whelm him as he tried to keep up the pace with the Sith. He knew Yom couldnt help. but Camus need help or else he would lose this fight. Camus slowly started to lose focus on the force and he was starting to slow down tramendusly. After several good swings Camus locked sabers witht he sith. Camus having 4 blades and the Sith only having two. Camus slipped the bottem of the right dualsaber up into the mauls privat area. The sith fell down and took the final blow. Camus deactivated the sabers and fell to the ground. Yom stod there looking at Camus. "Camus, That was a cheap shot and if Obi finds out about that your in deep." "If I didnt I would have lost the dual." Camus stood up slowly. Camus then looked at the two sabers. "I think I might keep these as a trophy for this long hard battle." "I dont blame you. Lets get back to the academy the invation can start any time now." Yom grabbed one of the officer speeder bikes and looked at Camus. "Are you going to borrow a ride with out ententions of returning to?" "Thats stealing." "So they are dead how many of them are going to be using it?" "Good point." Camus walked over to another speeder bike and got onto it. and both of them left for the Academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted August 8, 2002 Share Posted August 8, 2002 What's all this then? Tsk, tsk I found this thread sitting contently on page TWO!! I'm sorry but pride dictates that it deserves better than that, so I must bump. I know you guy's have some ideas floating around someplace, c'mon, the keyboard is well within reach....into it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camus Posted August 8, 2002 Share Posted August 8, 2002 Originally posted by Darth Slayne What's all this then? Tsk, tsk I found this thread sitting contently on page TWO!! I'm sorry but pride dictates that it deserves better than that, so I must bump. I know you guy's have some ideas floating around someplace, c'mon, the keyboard is well within reach....into it! I know my post on this thing are not long and very few but thats because Im bussy getting ready for family to come down for the weekend... :S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted August 8, 2002 Share Posted August 8, 2002 a few of the story makers havent posted in a long time (divine spirit is allowed because he wasnt at a comp, but people obi-wan13 shame shame). i dont think Reb will posting for a while... due to his.... ya know... death. hey how about darklighter posts something =), or maybe whitedragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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