Dath Maximus Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 ok my story. (note: this takes place 20 years before the academy is attacked.) The rain pelted Maximus as he stood in the courtyard waiting for the right moment, all his senses were outstreached as he looked for his opponent. Opening his eyes and igniteing his two blades, maximus leapt forward dodging his opponents onslaught. "You cannot win!" he yelled spining and lashing out. Using the lightsaber in his left hand he blocked another attack giving him an opening to attack. With all his strength he swung with the other blade. Unigniting his weapons, the jedi covered himself with his cloak and proceded to his ship. As he began his assent off the world plagued by neverending rain, he began to think about the home he had lost. Branded as a traitor he would never again see the world he once protected. All of this was because of the sith. "R9" a series of beeps acknoledged him "set coordinates for the terranis system. I have an old debt to repay." to be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissectional Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 Ah, Mister Maximus's mysterious beginnings... *grabs bucket of popcorn and enormus pepsi* I gotta see this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 and so you shall. but a warning i did some things un-becoming of a jedi. and so.... the small ship exited hyperspace near the terranis systems third moon. "Good work R9 i dont think we were detected by Lord Quentin." As the ship entered the atmosphere of the first planet Maximus activated the cloaking device to avoid detection. Landing rather hard upon the rocky surface of the planet, Maximus cursed himself for it. "Ive been a pilot for 30 years and i still land horribly." Covering himself with his dark brown cloak (think aniken's from ep2), Maximus began to hurry through the underbrush of the few trees about. As he approached the summit of a small hill over a ravine, he heard several battle droids nearby. Using all his ability to conceal himself he crept by. The factory was very heavily guarded. but for a jedi master of his skills, maximus had no problem slipping in unnoticed. The sound of footsteps echoed as Maximus walked down the abandoned hallway, reading each door as he strode. "Ahh the security room" Igniting his lightsaber, Maximus carved his way into the door with a few precision slices. to be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 As Maximus finished cutting his way through the door, a force field errected itself around Maximus. Now trapped he had no choice but to wait. "Ahh maximus, i see youve returned." a deep voice spoke out. Turning to the new voice Maximus gazed upon Lord Quentin, Maximus's old master. "I thought id repay my debt to you, after all you pegged me as a traitor." A sneer grew on Quentin's face. "Very Well," a bright flash of light overwhellmed maximus, soon all he saw was black. Searing pain awoke Maximus. Grabbing his head he found blood flowing freely. After a few moments of pressure the bleeding was controled. "Damn, they took my lightsabers." he said aloud. Searching around the small room he soon noticed it was located at an arena. the sound of a cheering crowd soon became deafening. Outside he became witness to the slaughter of 2 jedi. One who he recognized. A guard entered his cell armed with a electro pike. "this way." it grunted. Following its command, Maximus stepped out into the stone arena. As he gazed up he noticed the stars were different. That he had been moved to a new planet. A slight shock of pain in his hands distracted him from his thought as he was being tied to another jedi. Turning to look he saw..... Ok all my devoted readers time for an interactive poll!! who should i be tied to? A. Obi-Wan13 B. Qui-gon, obi's master C. Darklighter's master or D. a nother jedi who you choose the name of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 bumped on request Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camus Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 A. Obi-Wan13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 27, 2002 Share Posted July 27, 2002 A. Obi-wan13 It would create a great background for how you two first met and came to work at the jedi academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Who Knows? Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 D: another Jedi Pick someone who isn't mentioned as much in the stories. Like AB_Legion or someone else on the teachers page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 I kinda agree with Who Knows?......but, I think it should be Obi-wan. It will fit in with the overall story well, and yeah it kinda makes sense to have you two meet like this:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exterminator234 Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 lol, i like how obi goes around rescuing little kids Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 Originally posted by Exterminator234 lol, i like how obi goes around rescuing little kids yeah except for one thing, im older than obi. My character is like 227 years old during the academy wars. Hes a freaky species. allright it looks like obi and i should meet. all i need is obi to say something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exterminator234 Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 wookiee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 Originally posted by Exterminator234 wookiee does my avatar look like a wookie??? NO! he looks human Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 He is made of metal *no emotion on face* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 thats good enough for me. ok in a littel while im gonna write some more if i can think of something good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 Yeah Max, that story is soooo cool:thumbsup: Can't wait for ya to write the next bit...its gonna be good:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 28, 2002 Share Posted July 28, 2002 Turning his eyes caught those of Obi-wan13's. "so how you get into this mess?" Obi asked. "tried to assasinate a sith lord." he cooly replied. Studying the arena, Maximus noticed a flaw in the restraints. "I think i can get us out of these chains" he told obi wan. receiving a nod, Maximus began to pull the chains in different directions, using the force to its fullist. A pop shot out as the chains were ripped into, freeing the two jedi. "Good Job." obi wan shouted over the angry roar of the crowd. Suddenly it got quiet. A huge gate opened up revealing a rancor, blood from its last feast still dripping from its mouth. Grabbing the chain, Maximus began swinging it like a whip. Obi ran forward distracting the beast. Sensing the perfect chance Maximus lept up landing on the beasts back. "yippie ki yi ya!" he shouted. The chain swung around the creatures neck. Pulling with all his might a loud snap sounded the beasts defeat. Obi now running through the stadium, leapt onto the seating floor and proceded to run to the hanger. Maximus however was unsuccessful in his escape. Quentin stood before him. "Such a pity, you would have made excelent food for my pet." he sneered as he soke. Pain ran through Maximus's head as the world went black. "Take him to the detention complex. On the moons of Iones." Obi wan heard this as he lifted off the planet with the listening device he had put on Maximus. "I will repay you." He spoke to himself. to be continued.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 We've got to keep this one up too...as long as everyone has told their story if they want to, thats fine:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Angel Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 Sorry, people, haven't had Internet for 3 days. I'm gonna post my next chapter up tomorrow after I edit it some. It doesn't flow well right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 Jeezum Crow! This thing has taken on a life of it's own!!! Well I would like to post a chapter about Darth Groovy's origins but I don't want to reaveal everything just as yet, and I want everything to be consistant with the previous chapters listed above. I am going to have to do my homework with this one. P.S. The Muppet Babies post was meant as a joke, but I guess it wasn't that funny because you all aren't laughing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Slayne Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 Don't know if this has any place here, I'm not part of the Sith Academy as of yet. But I've written a background story for my character. Anyhow, hope you enjoy... Location: A cloaked asteriod somewhere in deep space, along the edge of the known galaxy. Dreams. Thats all they are, just dreams. But it wasn't always so. Darth Slayne awoke with a jolt, disturbing the clear liquid he was submerged in. A moment of panic passed through him as he breathed in a lungfull of the warm liquid, causing him to thrash violently within the tight confines of the transperasteel cylinder he was encased in. But the moment of anxiety passed and he came to his senses. The tasteless liquid was designed that way, to provide oxygen to the body much like that of a mothers womb. Yet every time he awoke like this he did the same thing; panic. It was only natural he supposed, but that didn't mean he had to like it. Allowing himself to relax, he closed his eyes and began trying to make sense of the images that caused him to awaken with a start. Then something strange happened. Instictively he drew strength from something, somewhere, but he could not pin it down. Whatever it was it helped clear his mind, and then the dream came back as vivid as though he had never awoke from it. Before him stood a man, with slightly greying hair. A look of disbelief evident in his eyes... "Seth, we cannot allow you to leave this world." the man said sadly. "This must end here and now. The Sith cannot be allowed to continue. They are wrong, you know that!" Darth Slayne did not respond, he had forsaken that name a few years ago. "Lord Kaan and his minions have been crushed," the man continued, "the Sith are now extinct. You don't have to share their demise." Slayne knew where the man was headed, but it was too late. He looked around at the devestated plains of Russan and sighed. He had come to think that his brethren would win this battle, and that the enemy would be wiped out once and for all. He was mistaken. "Come with us." It was a womans voice, his beloved Niah. "Come back to the light my love, you still have hope." He looked longingly into the Twi'leks eyes, trying to find some semblance of the love that he had thought they shared. Only pitty was there now, not love. Angrily Slayne tore his eyes from her and stabbed his finger at the tiny controls of his wrist computer. A quiet beep of acknowlegment came from the small unit and he gazed whith contempt at the man he had once called master. "What have you done?" The man said in alarm. "You can't stop me old man." Slayne spat. "Leave me here in peace, I don't want to destroy you, but I will if I must!" With a snapping hiss the old mans lightsaber ignited, and he brought the green blade up high in a ready stance "I thought I had trained you better than that Seth!" He said in a tone filled with regret. Resigned to the enevitable, Darth Slayne ignited his own saber. The angry red glow from the weapon was a stark reminder that he had lost his old purple saber long ago; the day they had betrayed him. Seth, the former Jedi Knight said nothing in response. He just swung his blade at his old mentor. The old man bloked the attack without much effort, he knew in his heart that his former padawan learner was no match for him. He never was. It saddened him greatly that it had to be this way; he had shown so much potential. "Don't do this Seth!" Niah cried. She had not activated her own weapon. There was still hope for her beloved. Slayne did not want to hear her voice, so he swang again and again at the older man. He was too full of rage to care any more. It mattered little to him that his old master did not so much as break a sweat with this challenge. They had practiced much together, and he was sure of the fact that the old fool knew his every move. It sickend him to the stomach. Without warning the old man went on the offensive, and Slayne was hard pressed as he fumbled in a vain attempt to defend. The rapid clash of energy rang in his ears and time seemed to slow down as the enevitable final strike drew near. "Please, Seth!" Niah screamed. "You only have to deactivate your weapon and come with us! All will be well again, like it was before!" Slayne refused to give in. He saw his old masters saber come down for the death blow; saw the saddened look of victory in the mans eyes... Only then did Slayne give up the ruse. Impossibly quick, he parryed the blow and ignited a second red saber. He forced the old man back on the defensive with the savage force of his attack. The hum of sabers was almost a continuous drone, and the lightnig fast movement of the twin blades seemed to cast an eiry red haze around the combatants. Within a heartbeat, the spinning dance of death came to an abrupt end. The old man would never know that he had been sliced through both neck and abdomen. He never even heard the anguished scream from Niah as his lifeless body fell to the ground in three pieces. Likewise, he would never know that the beautiful Twi'lek woman had ignited her own saber in a vain attempt at justice. All he'd ever know now was that he was one with the force... Niah lunged at Slayne in righteous fury only to have her saber cut clean through in a shower of sparks that stung her hand. Then she was hurled to the ground as a bolt of lightning struck her delicate green body. She could not believe that her beloved would do this to her. "Why have you done this?" She moaned, as tears came to her eyes. "What has gone so wrong that you would kill the man who was almost a father to you?" "You betrayed me!" Slayne hissed "You left me to the mercy of the Sith back on Korriban!" "We thought you had died!" Niah cried. "We would have come for you had we known otherwise! I loved you damn it!" "No! You would have sensed it if I did die. You coveted my position as an aprentice to a great man. You left me to die so you could further your own ends!" "Thats not true and you know it!" The world seemed to spinn around him as he looked down at her pleading face. He wanted so desperately to believe her but master Bane had told him the truth. The anger swelled so much inside him that he visibly shook from it. Above him he could hear the unmistakable whine from his ships engines, and he knew that his droid had responded dutifully to his summons. Time was running out, he had to be clear of this place before other Jedi came to mop up the remains of his doomed allies. A moment of calm fell over him and he knew what he must do... Niah looked down at the red saber in disbelief as it plunged ever so slowly into her chest. She didn't scream. All she did was look into her lovers eyes with both pitty and forgiveness. "I loved you..." was all she could say before all went dark... Darth Slayne snapped back into the present and promptly banished such memories from his mind. That was over two thousand years ago, yet he could not understand why he still had nightmares over it. He contemplated on this deeply for a long while before it dawned on him that he only had these dreams when he was sleeping within the liquid filled cylinder. But the dream had never awoken him like this before. Something else had awoken him. but what? Suddenly a cold anger welled up in him. He knew now the purpose of the cylinder; it was a cloning tank. He was a clone. Slowly, his memories returned one by one. He remembered long ago that he had found a way to force his soul into a bearly living copy of his own body. That meant that he had died at some point. No, he had died many times; he remembered now. It made him angry. He would find the one responsible and destroy him. An image suddenly sprang to mind, and a name.....Darklighter.....But he knew that this was not the one who killed him. No, this memory was external. Someone had sent the image as a warning; a new threat. More images and names came to mind. More warnings... And then Darth Slayne felt a presence he had not felt in a very long time. There were sith out there, he knew it without doubt. A dark hooded figure suddenly loomed before his minds eye. It spoke to him in chilling wispers. "You will join us my dark ally....seek out the Sith accademy, and a new master. Together we will destroy these fools..." Darth Slayne, Dark Sith of the ancient order had an new name to consider...Divine Spirit... There you have it. Let me know what you think of it. I plan on adding more to this but I think I'll wait for your feedback before attempting that. Zenks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exterminator234 Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 wow that was great nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dath Maximus Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 and now the final chapter of Maximus. Maximus awoke to find himself alone in a dark, cold prison. Nothing around him to keep him sane. It would be a long time before he saw light again. 10 years later.... "this is obi-wan13, ive found the complex." Obiwan landed with no difficulty. searching the door he found what he was looking for. Slowly the large door opened up. the smell of rotting flesh filled his nostrils. Activating his flash light he looked around the room. In the corner he found maximus. He looked surprisingly good for a man who has survived on rat meat. "Its ok we are going to get you out of here. 3 months later.... Maximus awoke in the academy hospital, looking around he noticed obi wan approaching. "so?" he asked "im afraid Quentin remains alive and in power." he replied. "but if you like you can stay here where he will never find you." "alright" maximus replied. And thus began Maximus's duties as a groundskeeper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted July 30, 2002 Share Posted July 30, 2002 Yom Thyne local Master Chef at the Academy not all what people think he is. He not just a bad ass Chef with mad skill with a knife. but he is also a ex bounty hunter that would hunt done the jedi and give the heads to the sith. with the ability to get in to any base or out of any prison and also able to take out any one that would cross him. his long life started in the bars of tatooine. he hould here all the tails of many piolts jedi and sith. his own father was a bar keep on tatooine but was one day in the cross fire bwtween a bounty hunter and a jedi. the jedi saber struck his fater and he died and so did the jedi. Yom was glad to see the bounty hunter kill him. And out of pitty the bounty hunter took Yom and traind him to be a bounty hunter as well. with many years to pass hellping that bounty hunter named Ryal Tygown. The 2 of them fought many jedi and other scum. Till one day Ryal was kill in a strugel with a jedi. After the death of his teacher and Friend Yom takes mounths to hunt down and kill the Jedi that kill Ryal. then he voues to kill every jedi he comes across and he dose. but he comes across Obi-Wan13 his most dificalt jedi he has come across. after many encounters and many mouths traking down. till after one encounter he is almost nere death that Obi-Wan13 desides to spare his life and give him a chanse to change. so Yom takes this gift and becomes a chef. he put all his armor and guns away in his room and becomes a chef and goss and works of the academy. Now a master Chef Yom serves the Jedi meals and Beer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 31, 2002 Share Posted July 31, 2002 That was good Yom. I plan on posting how I ended up at the Academy as well. Just give me a while to write it. It'll probably be up here tomorrow, or maybe the next day... I never find time to write anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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