Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 i just started modelin about a week ago and decided to do my first model on a jedi named Pablo-Jill, u can see em in ep2 hes one of the jedi. i wanted to post some pics of what i have done before i go away for a week, just to give u guys time to tell me wut u think, and when i get back [on friday] ills tart work again with ur suggestions. ill post some pics, but dont laugh, its only my first time, only constructive critisism please... UPDATED PICS http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo11.jpg http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo13.jpg tell me what u think heres some ref pics i was usin, this is all i could find, if anyone has found any other pics, post a link, that'd be great, thx http://starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/img/curve.jpg http://starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/img/eu_bg.jpg http://massassi.yavin4.com/sw_img/cgpablo.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 aww..broken...broken...broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eets Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Just add a question mark to the end and press enter. Not bad for a beginner! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 sorry bout the links, just copy the URL, and delete http:// they should work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpYzEr Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Or you can just drag the URL up to the address bar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 just add a question mark at the end of wut...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 i know how ya feel...i just started modeling about a week ago too. Well...first I had 2 models that i chunked cuz they were so crapish:p . Now I've gotten so far on one model...that I just keep trying to fix it up with suggestions from peeps. siiiiigh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"thA dekMan" Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 dragging to the bar is easily the easiest way to go about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idontlikegeorge Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 .txt! .txt! god i hate geocities Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 quick update i just added the obis on the bak of Pablo, so he looks more complete now http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo4.jpg should i give em a robe or should i just leave em without one, i havent seen any pics with his robe off so i dunno wut i should do, wut do you all think...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kit Fisto Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Cool, I didnt even know that this character existed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZBomber Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 yes, very unique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ET Warrior Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Just remember when you get to his hands, he only had 3 fingers, Try making his feet notso tall/fat. They look really swollen, and they shouldnt. The back of his head still needs a lot of work, smoothing it all out so it's not so blocky of course, A good model, especially for only having modeled a week! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 thx, ill fix that stuff up when i get bak on friday, till then id love some more suggestions and such for this model, and if any has any more pics of him that would be a great help considering there arent that many that i could find...i think hes one of the most unique jedi, and i want to make him look the best i can, so the more help the better, ill post an update on friday/saturday when i work on it. till then, have a good week;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padawan_7 Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Pretty good for a first time modeler! Add some more polys to his head (mostly the backside) to smooth things out a bit (it looks too squarish). Also the areas to the upper-left and upper-right of his mouth (which is located on where we humans have a forehead hehe!!!) should slope along more to the tip of his head. And this tip should be more narrow and maybe a tad bit more long. Hope that helps you some. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kururin Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 If you want the links to work then go to your File Manager rename your .jpg to .txt Example http://www.geocities.com/Bobafett10186/treb1.txt It's okay but it still needs a whole lot of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 24, 2002 Author Share Posted August 24, 2002 hey people, just got bak from holidays, good times! hah i made some updates when i got home, gave pablo hands, and changed his mouth up a little bit. i also added some more polys on the bak of his head which makes it look alot better. i sized him a bit to, made him look more in porportion. tell me wut u think!! http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo7.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 24, 2002 Author Share Posted August 24, 2002 hey people, just got bak from holidays, good times! hah i made some updates when i got home, gave pablo hands, and changed his mouth up a little bit. i also added some more polys on the bak of his head which makes it look alot better. i sized him a bit to, made him look more in porportion. tell me wut u think!! edit: thanks boba, this should work. http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo7.txt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kururin Posted August 24, 2002 Share Posted August 24, 2002 This makes the link work Originally posted by bobafett101 If you want the links to work then go to your File Manager rename your .jpg to .txt Example http://www.geocities.com/Bobafett10186/treb1.txt It's okay but it still needs a whole lot of work. The front tabbards is suppose to be separate too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 24, 2002 Author Share Posted August 24, 2002 hey boba, how do u kno for sure that pablos tabbards r seperate...? does it sho for sure in any ref pics? if u got any that i havent listed then plez hook me up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padawan_7 Posted August 24, 2002 Share Posted August 24, 2002 Pablo is lookin good! The back of his head is much better. Now try making the top of his head taller and more pointy. His nose (located between his eyes ) needs to be well definded (I don't see it yet). And the area above and to the sides of his mouth (the forehead area) needs to be smoother (it's looking too squarish). Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padawan_7 Posted August 24, 2002 Share Posted August 24, 2002 Hey dAno, I just noticed something. Look here... http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/bts.html It says that Pablo has "...a multi-jointed bow-legged stance...." You can see this "multi-jointed bow-legged stance" when he is walking in this picture here.... http://starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/img/eu_bg.jpg Although you cannot add extra joints to his legs (do to the JK2 humonoid skeleton) you might be able to twist the lower section of his legs before attaching it to the skeleton so that he can walk "pigeon toed" as seen it the picture above. Also, I just noticed in this picture.... http://starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/img/curve.jpg Pablo has small tentacle-like things hanging from under his nose area. (Look close because that area is kind of shaded in that picture). I figured you would want to include those too. Also here's another pic of those tentacles shown in this early preliminary sculpt. http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/pablojill/index_bts.html -Padawan_7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 24, 2002 Author Share Posted August 24, 2002 wikked, thx padawan_7, lotsa help! ill get workin on those suggestions as soon as i can, im kinda sik right now, got a cold, but ill work when i can on it, prolly post an update later tonight, for sure tommorow. so expect that, thx again padawan_7. if anyone else thinks i should add anything or change anything, plez reply;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padawan_7 Posted August 24, 2002 Share Posted August 24, 2002 Get well soon dAno!!! I'm glad you liked my suggestions. Pablo is cool. I await your updates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elessar-Eärfalas Posted August 24, 2002 Author Share Posted August 24, 2002 update! changed his legs up a bit...i dont got that good of ref pics to tell how he looks standing still legs straight, but if theres any more suggestions on how it should look, itd be appreciated. i also added the things coming off of his chin, thanks to padawan_7 for pointing them out. i think its comin along real nice, still lots of work tho;) http://www.geocities.com/dano_pato/pablo8.txt if anyone can see any errors id appreciate it if u would reply so i can change em around and make em look real good. oh ya, im gettin better...just have a head cold... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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