Acrylic Posted August 24, 2002 Posted August 24, 2002 Ridiculous What the hell? You never look at me? Why? Can't you see you never watched me grow up? You never looked me straight in the eye. What the hell? Sometimes you even wished we'd all die. I don't know anyone who like to yell like u. Dont you know as a little kid, I was always so blue. But don't feel bad now, no. Cuz now I can kick an ass or two for this shit. -THE END- © AcrylicGuitar ***PS. This is not of true life.... I took bits and peices from the lives of others, for the lives of others inspire me more!***
Darth Eggplant Posted August 24, 2002 Posted August 24, 2002 *snaps his fingers in appreciation and buys AcrylicGuitar a drink. It's always so good to see more poets and poetry at the Blue Casket. feel free to visit Pocky World too skeletal dude.
Isis Kaldara Posted August 24, 2002 Posted August 24, 2002 Oh, great poem man! BTW, You're a cutie! Sorry, had to say that, being female and all...
GendoTheGreat Posted August 25, 2002 Posted August 25, 2002 If I were one of those people who "get" things, I would say that it was somewhat random and confusing, yet strangely compelling. But I'm not, so I'll just say it had feeling.
Darth Eggplant Posted August 25, 2002 Posted August 25, 2002 embrace the flake inside of you Gendo poetry is just stupid sober ramblings trying desperately to acheive alcoholica.
Acrylic Posted August 25, 2002 Author Posted August 25, 2002 Quote Originally posted by Isis Kaldara Oh, great poem man! BTW, You're a cutie! Sorry, had to say that, being female and all... lol. thanks
Acrylic Posted August 10, 2004 Author Posted August 10, 2004 What the hell was I thinking when I wrote this?
VampireNaomi Posted August 10, 2004 Posted August 10, 2004 Well, I don't know... It's a nice poem. I'm more a fan of things that rhyme, but I respect anyone who can create something that doesn't. I don't have that skill.
Thrik Posted August 10, 2004 Posted August 10, 2004 Oh man, this thread totally makes me weep, As much as it tries, it's the opposite of deep. It's certainly a case of poetry gone bad, And for thinking of writing it, the author is clearly mad. This thread really ought to be forgotten forever, With all memories of it to be resurfaced never.
VampireNaomi Posted August 10, 2004 Posted August 10, 2004 Wow, Thrik! I never thought you had it in you!
Acrylic Posted August 10, 2004 Author Posted August 10, 2004 Quote Originally posted by Thrik Oh man, this thread totally makes me weep, As much as it tries, it's the opposite of deep. It's certainly a case of poetry gone bad, And for thinking of writing it, the author is clearly mad. This thread really ought to be forgotten forever, With all memories of it to be resurfaced never. Trust me. This thread makes me weep too...its too...blah, and evil, and I was listening to Eminem before too. I havent listened to him for like a year and a half, so all is good.
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