jokemaster Posted September 7, 2005 Share Posted September 7, 2005 Meanwhile david wrote the program so that the house tracked Lisa and John. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 ((Mini time skip...)) Lisa was getting a little edgy. It seemed like any time she turned around, Milo was right there. She knew he was watching her and it made her nervous. It almost made her wish Gary had not put her in this place. But she was where she was and nothing could change that now. Danni was stuck in her writing. She'd decided that there needed to be some kind of malfunction in Gary's security system... but how could such a thing be arranged? "How's it coming?" Lizza asked quietly as she entered Danni's room. Danni was so focused on her typing that she'd drowned out all other sources of input. She jumped. "Oh," she said. "I'm a little stuck. I know we want Gary's security system to malfunction, but I haven't come up with a convincing way to pull it off." "That's easy," Lizza answered. She began talking, but stopped when Danni's face went blank. "Uh, yeah," she said. "I didn't get a word of that..." Lizza laughed. "You're talking to a girl who's spent most of her life toying with security systems. Kelli and I can handle sabatoging a security system and making it look like a genuine fault." "Ok," Danni said. She typed in: (Leave sabatoge to Lizza and Kelli). Then, she looked up. "Ryan's going to be a 250 pound system repairman.... what?" Lizza was giggling. "I'm sorry... I just can't picture Ryan being 250 pounds." Danni raised an eyebrow. "Anything's possible in writing." "I'll leave you to your fantasy world," Lizza said, still giggling. She turned and left, allowing Danni to continue writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jokemaster Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 David dropped in with danni "How's the writing going?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 "Fair enough," Danni answered, looking up from her computer. "Ryan's character is settled. The conflict is decided. Now, all that's left is the basic step by step of what he needs to do." She again explained that they'd be turning her brother into a 250 pound man with a handlebar mustache and big glasses. "But we'll get him dressed up like that after we figure out how to keep Lisa and John from seeing him like that." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jokemaster Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 David broke out in laughter at the idea of a 250 pound Ryan. "we talking about the same Ryan here?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 Danni glared at him, but it was obvious she was trying to hold back her own laughter. "Yes," she answered. "Yes, we are. What, you don't think we can do it?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jokemaster Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 "Let's just say it's not going to be easy to pull it off." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 "But if we have such a hard time picturing it, Gary will too," Danni said with a laugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jokemaster Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 "But you're right, how do we get him past Lisa and John. I suppose we could use a moustache for him, tell them that's the disguise, then try to put whatever we get on him on the way over?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 "That'll work," Danni agreed. "And then have the real costume use a goatee rather than a mustache to go along with the extra weight." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 "Th-thanks Ryan" John said and took some paper into Ryan's room and then styarted writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 11, 2005 Author Share Posted September 11, 2005 "Sure thing, John," Ryan said cheerfully. "So how're the scripts coming? You're writing two, right?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted September 12, 2005 Share Posted September 12, 2005 "Heh y-yeah, t-trying to anyway." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 19, 2005 Author Share Posted September 19, 2005 "Good luck with that," Ryan offered helpfully. He turned and left. (Time skip) John finished the two versions of the script in four days. No further attacks were made on the house. Lisa could tell that the people didn't trust her and it made her nervous. She called Gary daily to plead with him to let her leave. He always refused. "If they don't know you know, you can still work for me," he said. Onthe other hand, John felt totally trusted. They talked to him about their plans for the script and made suggestions for revision. Meanwhile, Danni continued to write the real script. She finished it a day before John finished his and a meeting occurred in the computer room. John was working on his scripts, Lisa was locked away in her room. The meeting was held by Lizza, David, Milo, Ryan, Kelli, Kevin (the doctor), and Danni. These people went over the real plan. A day later, they went over the plan that John would think was the real plan. Lisa was left out of both meetings. John was left out of the first. Lisa knew she was not trusted, but John was kept clueless about how much the others knew about him. "I hope this works," Danni told the others at the second meeting (the one with John). "I'd hate to have to live on the run forever." "We won't have to," Ryan said, sporting his fake mustache, the 'disguise' John was led to believe would be the final disguise. "I'm a good actor. We'll make this work." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 "I-it better work, being around you guys is d-dangerous." John said as an attempt at humour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted September 19, 2005 Author Share Posted September 19, 2005 "I was thinking of leaking one of these to Lisa," Milo said. "But she knows we know she works for Gary. It would sort of defeat the tension if we were to pretend to trust her now. I guess what I'm saying, John, is thank you for writing two scripts... but I think now all we need is one. Without Lisa knowing about one of them, Gary wouldn't know the difference." "Maybe we should let Lisa see one," Danni said thoughtfully. "She knows we know she works for Gary. But she doesn't know we know she knows." "Don't get too mixed in your words," Ryan laughed. "You're gonna make my head spin." "You already made mine spin," Kevin laughed. Kelli nodded slowly in agreement. "I think I understand," Milo said. "Perhaps if I show Lisa one of these scripts, she will think that she was just being paranoid about us knowing she works for Gary. She'll give him the script and we'll work off the other one. She'll feel safer and we'll still get what we want." "Exactly," Danni said. "So now let's put it to a vote. We've read both scripts. Which one do we want to use? And which one are we going to give Lisa?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 "W-well this one is more serious, while that one has a bit more humour in it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jokemaster Posted September 19, 2005 Share Posted September 19, 2005 "He'll get suspicious if we use a completely serious one as the real one..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted September 20, 2005 Share Posted September 20, 2005 "T-true, s-so we use the h-humour one?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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