Loyalty or Treason: The rise of the secret order

[Dark Sad Shadow]

I got an idea for this RPG:

 

Time line: The rise of Palpatine as an Emperor (so. Darth Sidious have a lot to do here).

 

An old Master of the Force (nor jedi or sith), living near a waterfall in the planet of Naboo, saw a ship crashed near his home, he went to saw if there were survivours. Inside the ship the view was horrible, blood, corpses all burned.

 

Using his intuition and Force powers he felt very potent prescenses inside the ships chambers, he found 4 young teens with Force skills in very bad shape, he decided to took them with him...

 

 

Meanwhile in Coruscant, the clone army was spreading through the gallaxy, and Senator (chanciller) Palpatine was growing with power and influence.

 

 

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Okey, this is the basic

 

I need 3 more players, or more if they want, ya know the rules, only the normal force powers, as apprentices we havent done our lightsabers.

 

i need 3 players to be the teenagers, (ill be one ).

 

Who wants to play? firs pls post your character BIO (a new or used one)

[Kuuki]

((

 

Name: Sirgion Chi

Age: 18

Race: Human

Bio: A headstrong apprentence whom believes in a strong connection with the force, while keeping a strict devotion to his teachings.

 

))

[topshot]

((Sounds like this may be a good and well-thought out RPG. I'll take a shot at it.))

 

Name: Dakken Sarsyn

 

Age: 17

 

Race: Human

 

Bio: An apprentice with at least a mild temper. Quick-thinking has been a strong point for him. He would often tend to risk his life in order to save another's, even if it means having to resort to killing, although situations like this rarely happen for him. He usually lets his opponents make the first move in battle.

[Dark Sad Shadow]

oky here the 2nd player

 

 

,.,.

Name: Dravek O´Cornell

Age: 18

Race: human

Trained in the Academy Dravek, was trainded as a Sniper, because his "unnatural" skill with the accuracy, always loyal to his superiors. He only knew he got a special gift that he didnt understand but always was helping him.

[Dark Sad Shadow]

((OOS:ok, we follow the story with only 3 characters...

 

if other players want to join later just follow the story pls))

 

 

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The old man took the 3 survivors with him to his house, after taking care of their wounds, 5 days passed since the accident.

 

Meanwhile one of the teens, Dravek was having nightmares...

 

"hhmpppf... no...wait...... no... NOOO"

 

Suddendly awakes without knowing where he was, he saw his sorroundings, the celling, with some glass of a many colors, representing a figure of a Lady giving water to some old man.

 

"Wh.. where am I? damn.. head hurts..."

 

He turned around his head and saw other 2 young persons in bed

 

"Sirgion !!!"

 

Dravek tried to stand up and he fell to the ground, a misterious voice was heard:

 

"Relax, you still are weak, you must rest by now, they are only sleeping, so dont worry"

 

 

Dravek replied: "who.. who are you? where am I...?"

 

The old man just passed his hand above Drave´s head and he fell asleep.

[Deac]

Name: Kercian [He doesn't remember his surname]

Age: 16

Race: Human

Bio: Kercian remembers nothing of his life before the age of one. He remembers a battle, and a castle, but nothing before. He was then trained at the temple, but remembers no padawan ceromony and has no braid in his hair.

 

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*Kercian awakes*

 

"MOTHER!"

 

*He looks around to see that he is far from the castle and the battle that still haunt his memories. He lies back down*

 

"No. That's long gone. The force...the force guides me."

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(OOS: okey now we got the 4 characters )

 

The old man went straight to Kercian, it seems the time passed through him severely, his white beard was long enough to cover his chest, rippled and old.

 

"Try to relax young one... you too are weak, like these 3"

 

Kercian saw the old man amazed, and tried to sit in the bed.

 

"well.. it looks you are in better shape than the others, so youn one, whats your name? and where are you from?

[Kuuki]

*Like Dravek and Kercian, Sirgion also had his worries. But not so like theirs, this one was with his younger brother, Jutrok. He laid still while he dreamt of his younger brother whom had been injured severely, at such a young age cybernetic implants had to be 'installed', from a entire right arm and shoulder, to parts of his right side of his head, to even some stabiliers and controllers along his spine.*

 

*It made Sirgion feel horrible for his brother's injuries.*

[topshot]

Dakken had survived the crash, but was completely unconscious at the time the old man discovered them. Slowly, he received visions of the past. Visions of a past he never existed in. Visions of an ancient battle between 2 Jedi and a Sith who wielded the powerful dual-blade. Things became a little crazy after that. Memories of the defeated Sith Lord Darth Maul rushed through his mind.

 

For some reason, Dakken had this nightmare his whole life, and couldn't become unshaken from the fear. As his nightmare continued, so did his rolling and shaking. Finally, he bolted straight out of the cot he had been placed on.

 

Not the same dream again. Why does it continue to haunt me?

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(OoS: Good, this is getting good

 

@All players: remember you dont have any weapon, or a very good use of the Force)

 

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Sitting with Kercian, the old man patched again with some herbs the severed arm of Kercian.

[jokemaster]

Name: John Ryan

Age: 16

Bio: Parents died when he was 7. He took care of himself, but was recruited and trained by the Academy at 14.

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Ryan woke up and sat straight up. He had to get to a safe place on the ship... he stood up, but fell back onto the bed. He looked around and saw that he wasn't in the ship

Ryan: Where am I?

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(OOS: OK now there are 5 players , This RPG is closed to more players with the Old Master, we need in the future some Generals and other enemies

 

 

@jokemaster: okey i saw your bio, you are from the academy too, so you , Scar and Myself are relatives in combat unit)

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Kercian was awake and he saw John in his bed resting a little.

 

The old man, raised and went to see John

 

"Child, how are your wounds healing? "

 

John saw with a strange feeling at the Old man

 

"Dont be afraid... i wont harm you... Here. drink of this potion, youll feel better"

[Kuuki]

(('Relatives in combat unit' !?! I Hope thats just meaning that these guy's are combat bud's ^_^))

 

 

*Sirgion in his sleep clentches his fists, givin gout to those whom are force sensitive, an angry form of sadness to one's self and to someone whom ment alot to him.*

[jokemaster]

*John takes the potion and warily drinks*

[Dark Sad Shadow]

Originally posted by Scar Da Kookee

(('Relatives in combat unit' !?! I Hope thats just meaning that these guy's are combat bud's ^_^))

 

 

iea i meant that sorry for the minunderstanding.... :D

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After giving the potion, the old man, stood at John and began asking about him.

 

"I hope you feel better, probably you feel alitle dizzy, but its alright, thats normal, it seems all of you got a strong accident"

 

John, tried to stand up, and walked a little, but he lost balance and almost fell in the floor, but by some misterious energy he didnt touched the floor.

 

"he he he, you shouldnt walk yet child, your wounds arent fully recovered yet, you should rest a little more, -the old man played a little with his beard with a hand, while the other was pointing at John- dont worry dont be afraid, i wont harm you"

[Deac]

["severed arm of Kercian." I don't remember him losing an arm...but, ok ]

 

*Kercian looks at the stump where his right forearm used to be*

 

Kercian: Oh god!

 

*Kercian faints*

[Kuuki]

*Sirgion slowly wakes up to a big headache. Sirgion with one hand on his forehead, and another attempting to reach to his lamp table to listen to his mini-player with Dismembered Ewok in it, for it to not be there.*

 

Sirgion *Eyes still closed and still reaching.* "I have to stop drinking those Raynorian Smoothies..."

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(oos: you didnt lost your arm, I tried to say very injured, but not lost sorry , so you can keep your arm )

 

Dravek awoke again, feeling a little bit better, he still was dizzy but he was able to walk, so he left his bed, and gave some steps

"it.. hurts..." -he said, at the moment he saw again the old man- "er.. thank you for taking care of us, where are we? who are you?"

 

The old put his hand on the lef shoulder of Dravek

 

 

"...First... your name is Cornell... Dravek Cornell," -Dravek interrupted-"how do you know that?, have i met you before?"

 

"Is not always necesary meeting with people, to know the names. I am Verlose, pleased to meet you"

 

Dravek still curious about how the old guy was able to know his name, shaked hands with him.

 

"Now, Dravek, can you tell me, where are you from? what happened to your ship?"

 

Dravek walked to a nearby window and saw the escene, green mountains, a big lake with clear water, and some animals there resting, some womprats, brontos, and other species.

 

"...honestly, I dont know how we ended here, we was traveling to coruscant, our orders were to visit the Jedi Counsil, they didnt told us any reasons.

 

The old man walked to a nearby table, and took a knife, and without any regrets he threw to Dravek´s head!

 

FFFZZZMMM!!

 

Dravek turned and saw the knife was coming straight between his eyes.

 

He saw the knife and suddendly he saw it coming like in slow motion (OOS: any similitude to Matrix is only a concidence :D) and evaded the knife grabbing it from behind and throwing it to the old man.

 

It flew again now towards the old man and before it could strike him the knife stopped in the air, and suddendly fell to the ground.

 

"HAHAHHAHAHHA just as I tought"

[jokemaster]

*John saw Dravek dodge and throw the knife*

John: Woah! what the hell was that?

[Deac]

["with Dismembered Ewok in it" Ummmm, though I love the reference to Syrnl's spoof band, they haven't been invented yet. Sorry.

 

Not going to be able to post for two weeks. Assume Kercian follows the rest of you and stays quiet, abstains in all votes and survives combat without major injuries]

[Kuuki]

((But doesn't things like adding those references make it more fun ^_^))

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(OOS: come on kids, help with the story )

 

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Dravek wondered why the old man laughed so hard.

 

"what´s so funny, and why did you attacked me?" -Dravek asked.

 

"he-he he, Im sorry, i just wanted to finish a theory..."

 

 

Dravek, was angry, he could be dead, but he know he was able to do that moves on self defense, he ran straight to the old man with his fist closed.

 

"Im not a theory subject!!!"

 

The old man let Dravek walk several steps towards him, and let throw the punch; at the last moment the Old man raised his hand and grabbed Dravek´s neck with some "magical" powers (force grip)...

 

"Calm down child, its not wise to disturb an old man. -he he he, I wont kill you, im not that kind. just be quiet and I´ll explain..."

 

Dravek was having a hard time to breathe and he nooded with effort.

[Kuuki]

Sirgion *Sitting up glaring at the old man* "Hey! I give you my gratitude for helping us, but what kind of a person saves a bunch of guys and then turns around to only give them more pain?"

 

*Sirgion stands up with a slight bit of difficulty, and walks up to the old man.*

[jokemaster]

*John was still floating inches above the ground*

John: Well, as much as I hate falling flat on the ground, i'm not to conftortable here, can you take me back to the bed, or a chair?

[Dark Sad Shadow]

(oos: ey kids: you can take contrtol of the Old Man too ))

 

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Verlose turned his head to John:

 

"Oh!, my apologies my child"- slowly the old man let John in the bed- "Now, Dravek, be quiet and let me tell you something; Verlose saw the other boys sitting on their beds- First, I am sure you have some `Strange´ feelings when you are in dangerous situations..."

 

The young ones looked each one and all nooded at the same time.

 

Verlose saw Sirgion´s eyes: "Sirgion, i can tell you that you know a little more of this "phenomena", sometimes called "magic" or "sorcery", but no, its called the Force"