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lol fair enough. I understand - I used to be terrible in social situations, and I definitely embarrassed myself a few times.

I do exercise every day I never seem to get tired! It's the most frustrating thing. It's alright, because I only tend to have phases of it, so hopefully it won't affect college too much.

You used to take sleeping pills? I take it you used to not be able to sleep, then?

What social mistake could possibly have been so bad?

I thought I'd be asleep by now too. You know, if I concentrated really hard... >_>'

I don't want to take pills for it lol I don't like taking the easy way out remember?

I read the next chapter of SiD, at long last. Loved the descriptions on the hateful Republic soldiers and war ships.

Well I TRIED to sleep - even turned the computer off and everything. But no avail... I'm still up, thinking about results day. T_T;

Wasn't even thinking about K3 ideas... Wow, what a waste of time that was.

Speaking of rare, there are some strange names out there.

And thank you. Speak to you later, if I'm online. If not, good evening to you too.

Male?! Okay, she's a little gay, it doesn't mean she's a different gender the question is, how do you know that?

Yeah I've been looking at wookieepedia and stuff like that. It's not very helpful, unless there's specific parts on google that tell you what names tend to be like. I guess I'll have to use a logical imagination... oh, how I hate that.

Oh this is confusing lol

Okay, dominant personality = Revan

He calls himself Revan, because he remembers his life, now, but his friends don't.

and I'll just search for names and stick them on K3 - pick a few out for OCs and I'll also tell Revan's other name there, too.

I have a question not related to K3, just in general...

Human names are all fine and dandy to invent, but what about alien names? I tend to look at other names from the species, but it's still very difficult. And I'm going to need a lot of made up names for The Huntress.

Oh, I saw Revan the same way. I figured since he remembers being so powerful, he won't stand for anyone arguing with him. He's a good leader, but he's lost the influence he used to have, with the apparent death, 'revenge' and travelling alone. He'll be very... disagreeing, but not to the point of vanity. No.

He'll be Revan. His personality will be Revan, with inclusion of time during the Star Forge with the ebon hawk crew... that'll add to him. But he'll still be Revan. His companions will simply see him differently.

Ah, time to find more names

Of course I am! But that's not all she is. Just... the majority Plus I think it was partly her accent that made her like that.

Stupid producers.

Anyway! Sentinel sounds good for the Exile. And she was a natural leader, but it is doubtless that Revan was far greater in this field. I don't want to try and make Revan sound like he was sent from heaven, though. He, too, needs his weaknesses, which we'll discuss in K3 another time.

I never said Revan would go by his alias, but his friends may. Imagine, tomorrow, your friend found out his name was Lanselott (how ever you spell it) lol would you honestly call him that, without making a mistake every now and again?

I think it's a great idea.

And another thing, we have to decide what skills Alayna has. She can't be perfect. Same with Revan. Also, are we going to have a name for him? I know he's called Revan, but I can't imagine everyone on the K1 ebon hawk crew would want to call him that. Call it habit, or what, but it seems more realistic.

Why would Bastila be easier than Mira, Bao, Mission and Atton?

What kind of thing happens? 'realising'? lol

What ever the Exile is like, it's got to work with Bao-Dur's at least. I mean there had to be a reason she liked him above Atton and Disciple.

I'm sure you'll do a good job of describing the characters

If she thought they were just close friends, how would the romance bit come about? Would she just.. 'realise'?

And I'll make sure I do that - same with you.

If no one knows where Bao is, how will Alayna find him?

If we can overcome that problem, then Atris deleting the records would be fine. As to how she did it, wouldn't be important.

I figured that it could be a continuation from A Jedi and a Zabrak, except nothing really happened between them, if you get me. I wouldn't say they would be direct with what they feel, but they wouldn't simply 'imply' it. Kind of like, in between them.

I see, that makes sense.

Though I would advise against taking Bao prisoner... he can simply be in her presence trying to stop her, but she isn't taking any of it. Until the Exile arrives, she could convince her that it is for the many lives of Telos, and future prospect worlds. It would be good, also, if Yuthura happened to overhear or hear about Exile telling Bao that Kreia told her about Revan, and it interests her.

Don't you think taking Bao prisoner is a little dramatic? Perhaps if it was done on a toned down level, that would work... such as leaving him stranded without a ship or something.

That would be good to make sure he wouldn't return to Telos.

I think Yuthura would have to see the greater good to do so, but remember, if we aren't including your SiD story, she won't be so irrational, but if we are, she wouldn't have attacked the Hutts like that.

My uncle once built me a model of a boat. ^^ but then he liked it too much and kept it lol. Gutted.

You're awaiting results too, then? I've passed the 'fear' of the results, and I down right don't want to see them. :|

Aw cool. Where abouts was it?

I'm good, thanks. My holiday's around the corner... and I'm getting my results for my GCSEs soon. Eek.

Hallo.

Thought I'd stroll by and ask how art thou?

Sure thing.

I'll leave you with a nice message:

I really love the improvements on the story - they enrich the scenary and explain it better... Puts you in the position of Alayna, quite well. just look out for a few spelling mistakes like 'yet it is did not eclipse it.' and Nihilus... I think I only saw 3.

It's coming along very nicely.

I'll check it out right away.

And yeah, more or less. Of course I write a hell of a lot more on the actual finished version.

Yes, yes, perfect.

Now you can sleep.

Wait, so I don't get to write in chapter one?

Strange, I thought adults would be able to live with less sleep than kids.

Good morning then.

Hmm, I imagined Bastila and Carth on a different planet/aboard a ship, and being told of the rebuilding of the enclave, and then in chapter two, arriving on Dantooine, with the Exile.

Who has Carth, by the way? lol or isn't he a main character in the story?

Have you read my suggestion about Mira? I mean, I don't want her to be left out during the first part of the fic, but she's hardly got a very Jedi background/lost anything in the past few months/done anything terrible or anything to write about.