steven Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 "i'm going to look for them . and before u even think about leaveing without me u can't start the ship without the key card i hold on my pocket" he grapped the card out of his pocket to show he wasn't bluffing. He ran off and began shearching for them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 Jake woke up the next morning feeling very exhausted. Aloura came in. "tired eh? well it doesn't get easier, today we will be training wiht a lightsaber." "cool" Jake followed her out to the training room, where some students were practicing. "here, you will get a training saber for now, until you build your own, but come over here and we will start the basic saber combat moves." Jake held the lightsaber infront of him and Alour came forward wiht an sweeping attack, Jake blocked an sliced at her mid section, he dodged and stabbed forward into his belly. Jake dodged and did a slice from above, Aloura rolled to the right and thurst her saber to Jake's neck. "very good, now we will get our saber master here to properly train you, he is strict but also understanding." Aloura called a jedi master over and left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 "Ah, you must be , Padawan Jake, welcome, with me you'll learn fast, but you'll have to apply lots of practice. Now, we will simply start with easy counter attacks." Calls over a new jedi kinght who was in her mid 20's, she was zabrak as well. "Kat, I need you help to show this Padawn some counter-attacks." She nodded. She swings but Fenceru hits his saber near the hilt of the saber but just above the hilt , knockeding the saber out of her hand. Fenceru did it slowly so Jake could see, but Fenceru could do it 20 times faster. "Now, right now you shouldnt be concerned on winning, you should be concered about technquie(sp). Now try it." Jake turns on his blue trainee saber. Fenceru do a slow sweep with hand on his saber, he wnt slow for the Padawan. Jake hits in the middle, which caused the saber to swing the other way, but not knocked it out of Fenceru's hand."Close, but focus on the parry itself , not the attacking that comes after." Jake trys again and he does it very good for a trainee. "Very good Jake, best Padawan parry sense , myself." Chuckles. (Sry for character control, but I think it was nercessary for this part) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 Steven ran into the cantina and saw a simliar site to what he saw on taris. There somthing triggered in steven. He began filled with anger. "AHHHHHHH!"he cried "dam those sith. Malak, your going to pay for this." he walked slowly away and carried on searching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted November 3, 2004 Share Posted November 3, 2004 Rayna obeyed and got on the ship. As she entered it, she stared at it, examining it carefully. She entered the cockpit and looked around, then left and went to examine the rest of the ship. When she was satisfied, she found a place to sit. "Good ship," she muttered, feeling sure nobody had heard her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 4, 2004 Share Posted November 4, 2004 Steve came back to the ship "i can't find them. there either dead or taken an escape pod out of here" steven sat down in the poilt seat and put in the key card "someone needs to get to the turrets!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 "That's not me," Rayna said. "I'd never do good in a fight. You don't want me defending the ship." She turned and left the cockpit, trying to find a place where she could sit without being expected to do something. "Just because I know how to fix this thing if it fell apart doesn't mean I want to," she told herself, knowing that nobody had heard her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curt-Man Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 (no problem) Jake continued throughout the day with master Fenceru doing a few different counter attacks then trying them again and again. it was dark now and jake had left to go to his dorm when a young padawan cut him off. "hi, i'm Tahari, what's your name?" "i'm jake, nice to meet you Tahari, i'd love to talk but i'm really tired from lightsaber training." "i wasn't planning on talking." with that tahari started kissing him, but jake backed away. "hey easy there, i barely even know you." "so? i think your cute." "heh, thanks but, i'm maybe we can talk tmorrow?" "hmm, playing hard to get eh? alright then, tomorrow it is, i don't care how tired you are" tahari walked off and jake shook his head then walked to his room and fell alseep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 The flare flacon lifted off the ground and left the station. "we're heading for yavin IV for Jake" shouted steven. Pete got to the turrets and started shooting sith ships who came near Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 Instead os sleeping liek the rest of the Jedi, Fenceru just trained for tell morning, then started meditating. (As you can see Fenceru is hardk working, and won't rest until he thinks he has done enoughof training, which is a lot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 The Flare Falcon reached Yavin 4 with out any major damage. "where can he be? i sence him near here" said steven as they flue over the forrest of yavin 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 Just as Fenceru was walking down a hall in teh academy he saw a ship coming towards the academy. "What could this be?" Fenceru burst into a run and went into the academy control room area. (secruity, loud speaker, etc.) Fenceru said on the loud speaker "There is a ship headed directly towards the academy, prepare for anything!" Fenceru said oer the loud speaker, which woke up most of the jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 Matt who was at the raidar said "the seems to be an academy in our path" "hmm, an academy. I bet i ant going to get many smily faces there. well we'll dock there and look for him" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 The Jedi let teh ship dock, most of the jedi inculding Fenceru and Jake went to check who it was. ((again sry for character control that was nothing big..)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redwing Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 ((OOS: So many tiny little bits of character control, JoJo...you might want to ease up on that before you upset someone )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 Steven land The Flare Falcon and saw jedi in the hangar "i wonder if all people who come here get a greating like this" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarcusLeCoy Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 Dlogar takes out a datapad. "And according to this, Jake should be inside!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 11, 2004 Share Posted November 11, 2004 Steven stopped him from in side the ship "Dlogar. Go and get him. tell him that a sith fleet is coming for us and if he dosn't want anymore to die then he should get in here now" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer Posted November 11, 2004 Share Posted November 11, 2004 Rayna shook her head in amazement. "The Jedi can take care of the Sith," she said. "Let's just find Jake and get out of here!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 12, 2004 Share Posted November 12, 2004 "it's true the jedi will be more than at match for the sith but there will be jedi who will lose there lifes. and i don't want that to happen. Now som1 go outside and get him!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarcusLeCoy Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Dlogar walked into the Jedi temple. "Dlogar!" Jake exclaimed. "I have come to rerieve Jake" Dlogar said. "I am afraid you can't" said a jedi. "I can't?" "The Jedi training is a life contributation, he can't leave." "I don't want to do this..." Dlogar said as he pulled his blaster out but in a flash the Jedi cut off his hand that held the blaster. "ARGH!" "Do not do things like that again, if you do, you shall be more than disabled, I do not wish to hurt you, it is not the Jedi way." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Fenceru made hsi way through the jedi, and came up to the Bothan. "Jake can go with you. ONLY if I come along to teach him teh way of a jedi as we go." Fenceru said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarcusLeCoy Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 "I guess that would be alright...... what do you think Jake?" Dlogar said painfully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoJoBinks Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 "Oh and about that hand, I can heal it." Fenceru's right hand started to glow white and he touched teh Bothan's wound, and his hand was back! "There." Fenceru said, then he put his hands back under his jedi robe slevees. ((I am also wearing a Tan shirt and brown pants and boots under the brown jedi robe)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted November 13, 2004 Share Posted November 13, 2004 Steven(com-link to dlogar): the sith fleet have discovered we're on yavin 4 and heading this way. But they do not know about the academy. Maybe if we get out of here fast they'll not know about the academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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