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Originally posted by LukeKatarn

You said he was dead, not you thought that he was dead.

Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only! :o
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Malachi felt a creeping on his neck, and turned to see a hand. With a saber. He let out a cry, and unleashed a devestating lightning blast, magnetising the hand and rendering it useless. The saber also temporarily shorted out, as well as his own. "This can't be good."

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I got up,bleeding,and struk Revan with amazing force,rendering him useless,I also spat on him and put the ship down in a dive and jumped out of it.I turned and watched the fireworks.

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Originally posted by Redwing

((

 

...although this RP is already pretty insane XD))

 

((Hope that is a joke. :D))

 

Zoric ran with Malachi but tripped when they reached the place where Htel was. Zoric got up and saw Malachi's and Htel's sabers short out. Zoric ran in and tossed Malachi one of his sabers. "Lets do this" said Zoric.

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Originally posted by DarthTDe

I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!

 

Well that kinda very god modeing.

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Originally posted by DarthTDe

I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!

 

((NO GODMODING. :p

 

No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))

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Originally posted by Redwing

((NO GODMODING. :p

 

No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))

 

 

((True but the very beginning had a story and now it is just a huge fight. :D Oh and Darth Htel is a cyborg and very tough and Malachi is very tough aswell. So is my char is you said. They are all pretty strong.))

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((Yeah and Htel is a Sith, WHY THE CRAP WERE YOU ATTACKING ME!? And not only is Htel a cyborg, he's a Cyborg combined with Durges DNA. he is also a cheif master of the sith but was though to die, but that wasn't Htel, that was Therk, after supposedly dieing he switched around his name and last name and put them backwards and got Htel Kreht. So let's continue, and BTW even if one of my sabers burns out I still have three more double bladed sabers:p )) "Get out of here. This is no place for you." i said to whatever Darth's char is (forgot the name). "And to you Malachi, what's up with the lightning? And I have THREE MORE DOUBLE BLADED SABERS!" ((And to Revan

Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only!
You can't be sure he's dead because he isn't dead. And you didn't say you were sure he was dead you said he WAS dead. Yo ushould edit it to you think he's dead because you can't be sure he's dead when he isn't.))
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"You want to know about the lightning?" Malachi said. He sensed a padawan coming to help, so he turned around and filled the learners body with electricity. "I am no longer a Jedi. But neither am I Sith. I'll use the force how I want to use the force. However, I'll team up with this Jedi. To destroy you."

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"And why do you hate me? You join with Jedi when you don't when you are nuetural, HA! You make me laugh," 3 remaining sabers go to full strength and I jump in the air and attack.

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"You took the strike against my former self, and I hold grudges." Malachi charged up his sabers and blocked the incoming attacks before jumping backwards onto a ledge. "Being neutral lets my mind stay clear. Unlike the Sith or Jedi, I work things out for myself, decide what to do. Not live in an silent, ongoing war.

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The saber hit metal in a clank, but in broke through and I fell down. Head first. "You jedi will pay, and Malachi I only fought you former self because your former self was a Jedi. So you have no reason to hold grudges, it was your own fault."

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"I was Jedi, but I was forced into it. My parents were relieved to be rid of me when I was discovered. I was raised fully at the temple, my home. Even the masters said I had anger problems but my master saw through that. The Force potential. Ignored the brash feelings of revenge and saw into my mind.

 

The Jedi, however, held me back. Weakening me. I have the right to be angry. To strike back and weaken them. But not yet. The Sith must first die. Then, the Jedi. Zoric, join me."

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"You're a fool. A complete fool." My sensors go down and my eyes shut. i was alive, but bareley. Only the Sith technicians could save me, and they'd need to get a much stronger metal.

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Malachi ran back to battle, empowered with the force and knowing that the ultra-cyborg would be back. And before then the Sith had to be destroyed before he could leave. Alone.

 

Two Sith came running towards him and soon dropped to the floor as there necks got sliced. He turned, and saw a Sith Lord gripping a Jedi and laughing maliciously only paying attention to his actions. His arm was gone, then the other arm and both legs. The Lord was a helpless torso. The Padawan tried to thank Malachi, but was knocked out as the boot of the renegade connected with his jaw. Malachi couldn't help but smile as he slaughtered a group of cowering Sith Apprentices.

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"You b*****d!" Malachi lifted Zoric into the air with the Force and threw him across the ice. He started healing himself, but the arm would never grow back. He called his sabers too him and ran to where the Jedi had landed single man snubfighters. He found an A-wing in good condition, it had had several upgrades in the shields. Malachi looked back, his anger flaring. "I will get my revenge." He flew to Coruscant, and found hospital, specialising in bionics. His saber ignited and was less than an inch away from the main doctor. "Give me a new arm."

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