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as i flew over coroscaunt,i saw the jedi temple with many clones there and jedi.then i saw a clone evac dropship.evacuating while droids have the upper hand?that was insane...or was it?just as i dodged a missle i saw a vulture starfighter flying to leave coroscaunt and regroup,and then his power supply just went dead and he plumetted to the ground.maybe the commander down there wasnt as crazy as i thought.but still..i have to cloak becouse they would order me to leave the area.as i flew into range of the jedi temple i punched the switch and flew in stealthily.what the clones below didnt see was a rift in the air.confedaracy cloaks werent as well as the republics.i didnt have to note where everything was to know that there was a confedaracy dropship in stealth mode.i couldnt let them touch down and release thousands of specops stealth droids!if that dropship was cloaked then they were to.i flew in and locked on the target and estimated where it would land then landed myself and switched on active camo.i saw a rift in the air touch down and before the landing gear could even deploy i set one mine where droids would be rushing out and one on the dropship.then i heard landing gear and a loading ramp unload and seconds later fifteen droids went flying and the dropship demolished.i looked up to see the clone evac ships being demolished by droids.i saw the largest group,and swapped my DC-17 rifles ammo with a devastating plasma mine,aimed and fired.BOOM! a large amount of droids flying in the air and some exploding.a couple remained and i chose to save my ammo.then the same stealthed droid feet walking by,but this time they faded away.this droid wasnt a chamelon droid and was more independant then ever.especially good with stealth,to.before i could find out where the droid was he knocked me to the ground.afterwards he came out of stealth and appeared as a gun-metal greyish droid with blue eyes and had seen many battles.the droid didnt mock me as the usual show-off droids did.i dont think this one had a vocabulator,but then if he didnt then why wasnt there a small spark around where a normal droids vocabulator was?it could speak but refused.i got up and stared at the droid,not knowing what to do.he was unarmed,and rifle to fists obviously isnt fair.before i could choose he drew a CLONE rifle that was attatched to his back,and while he was a droid!the droid aimed at my head and fired.i jumped out of the way only to see that he wasnt aiming at me.he was aiming at an aproaching droid!but then i saw the differance between that gun-metal droid and normal droids.he had the galactic republic insignia tatooed on his arm.must be a new droid, i thought.the droid walked past me with the clone rifle at his side.i thought for a second then dashed up to the balcony to take care of snipers and the snipe all droids but the droid i just met....(the gun-metal grey droid wasnt any of you guys -.-)

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(nice an ty for the help)

as the evac ships were lifting off they came under heavy fire. 1 went up in flames. then dargen 17 noticed something. it was almost unnoticable. but not quite. it was a rift in the air. he knew immidiatly that there was a cloaked ship. but on whos side? he sent 10 men using a small access tunnle that the driods couldnt use.

3 minutes after that there was an explosion. then there was a second explosion. this explosion didnt come from his men. but it came from behind the droids. he only had snipers left out there. besides the 10 men he sent. but they had reported that they hadnt even seen the explosion let alone caused it. they also reported finding no cloaked ships.

 

"scan the area with infra-red (spelling?)"

"yes sir"

a minute later they replied that infact they had found a ship. but they could not find any indication to wich side it belonged to. he decided to call into hq and ask. he also ordered 50 more men to go out and help search. mean while the rest of his team had arrived.

"welcome back sardakar" said dargen

"ha! thought i would never get out of trying to hunt down the tech leader" said sardakar.

"i thought it would have been easy for you" said dargen 17

"thats what i thought. but we did find him. about 50 times. and we killed him 48 times. but he kept sending his conciousness to another bodie." replied sardakar

"well your going to have fun with this mission" said dargen 17

"hmm, must involve blowing something up then" said sardakar smileing

"why yes, it does" said dargen.

"and judging from out location..." he looked around. "you want to blow up the generators." said sardakar

"you know me all to well" replied dargen

"when do we leave?" asked sardakar

"5 minutes. oh and send sekara here" answered dargen

sardakars expression become very sad.

"i have bad news... you know sekara, he was the bravest one of us all. he always took the most dangerous part. well on our last attempt to capture the tech leader... we were forced to retreat. and he stayed behind to cover our escape. there was an explosion... i dont know if hes alive or not."

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C53-5 called in reporting victory to the command droid and informed his troops that he and 250 trooops from the squadron were going to the Republic Senate to force the senators to proclaim Count Dooku leader of the Republic and General Grievious head general of the army. If the chancellor was there, they were commanded to capture him and bring him to Grievious's ship alive.

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(so your gonna tie this into the movie right?)

20 minutes later they reached the generators. they began planting charges. then zargen recieved an emergency message. apperently there was 251 droids heading towards the senate and they were the closest. the senate was out of the way of the explosion. so he decided to detonate once he reached the senate. he and his 170 man squad finished setting up charges. and headed for the senate.

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ZAP!ZAP!ZAP! said the EMP blasts from my DC-17 sniper attatchment.the droids fell one by one and then were attacked from the inside by the greyish droid i met earlier.then i saw the clones in full retreat.how was i supposed to know in two seconds id be flying through the air?i didnt know the clones plan.when i saw them running i was confused at why they were retreating and continued firing.then i saw the greyish droid retreating.then i looked over my shoulder only to see a heavy explosion begining to erupt from the generators.just as they exploded i jumped off the balcony and was sent flying far away from the temple.as i flew through the air i saw some confederacy dropships flying to dropoff droidekas and others i thought.it didnt seem to notice me and flew just close enough for me to jump on and took a knife related to a lightsaber (but wasnt or the jedi would attack me) from a hidden pocket in my boots.the clones records about me said that i wasnt armed with anything but what i carried at my side.the secret pockets allow me to smuggle items with me.anyway,i jabbed the knife through the confedaracy dropships roof silently and dropped through.luckily,i dropped into the armory.no one was there.to one cloaked either.what i thought was odd was the fact that there was a trando heavy repeater in the room.strange.i grabbed the trando repeaters ammo and swapped the DC-17 rifle pack into my pocket and placed the repeaters ammo in my rifle.i walked forward into the next room and then stumbled back into the armory,knowing that repeater bullets wotn work well unless their fired super fast..i grabbed the firing end of the repeater and replaced it on the tip of the DC-17 rifle and walked forward into the next room.the clones below saw the dropship and then were stunned at the fact of it blowing up.before it exploded,i jumped out as fast as i could making sure to avoid coming in contact with any clones.when i came down i found myself back to back with the grey droid facing millions of droids."you go to the right.ill take the left." the grey droid said."on my mark." this could have been the first words he ever said."go." were his final words before we dashed off into the crowds of droids...

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the explosion succeeded in killing most of the droids. but more came to replace the ones that died. although their odds had inproved they were still out numbered. the 10 soldiers that had been sent to hunt down the "intruder" were under orders to stay out of the fighting if possible. dargan ordered that the cloaked ship be placed under HEAVY guard and the ship disabled. dargen also sent a message to the capital ship in orbit requesting that they send 1000 soldiers to help fight the droids and find this "intruder"

(onboard the capital ship in orbit)

"sir dargen 17 has requested that we send 1000 more men to hlp fight the droids and find..."

"find what?"

"the message is distorted. but he said something about a cloaked ship and an intruder..."

"tell him we cant spare 1000 men. we can send him 478 men."

"yes sir"

"also have all the evac units go back and drop off the jedi masters, they can help."

"yes sir"

as the young soldier ran off to carry out his orders, the capital ship came under attack. the captian ordered all guns to open fire, and any and all star fighters not engaged to attack the enemy ship.

"sir we are recieving 2 signals."

"hmm?" said the captain looking up.

"one if a distress signal from the senate. the droids are closing in."

"order them all into the shielded chanbers. it wont stop the droids forever but it sould hold long enough for reinforcements to arrive."

"yes sr"

"what about the second signal?"

"its a satalite image sir. the one we had monituring the battle, the satalite took a picture of a man and a greyish droid fighting back to back agianst a large amount of droids."

hmmm cloaked ships unexplained explosions.. could it be him? the commander thought to him self.

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C53-5 finally landed the MAFs nearby the senate. They knew that clones were probably inside but that was not what worried C53-5. The imperial guard was an elite bodyguard that always was near the chancellor. They were powerful soldiers and C53-5 didn't want to mess with them. He finally stormed through the doors with his troops.

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Omiron 626 bashed through one of the doors as the other broke through the other door. They were out numbered and retreated out the door throwing emp grenades. The grenades caused many explsions in the room so the men poked their guns around the corner and started firing. Droids crumbled and exploded as others fell to the ground like a human.

 

Soon 626 finished off the last droid with a emp grenade. After securing the room they destroyed the Auto-Defense System and continued to the communications room. As they entered the room droid stood up from their seats and reached for their guns, but before they had a chance, 626 and his grouped fired at the droids destroying them. 626 guarded the door as the others planted the bombs they ran back and took cover.

The screen blew up and the seats and other objects flew across the room hitting the wall behind 626 and his comrades.

 

They left the room and some droids were examining the room not knowing where the clones went. The droids looked up and started firing. 638 threw an emp grenade and they retreated behind a corner firing at the droids. The droid jumped out of the way but was still to close to the explosion and exploded into pieces. The group headed to the next destination, the bridge.

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(note that his will take place in the clonewars cartoons.terribly sorry if i ruin some of the plan)

i looked around at the droid parts that was once about maybe a hundred droids.the greyish republic droid finished reloading and went off towards the senate."you grapple up to the chancelors room.ill take care of the droids." the grey droid said before changing to a sprinting speed and disappeared into the building,with blastershots following.i did as it told me,grappled up to the chancelors room to help.when i was almost there i saw somthing flying through the air.but the sun blocked my view.unluckily,he came into view and i saw it was the main target of the republic.general grievous.he landed some distance ahead of me,and i dodged out of his view quickly and continued climbing.when i was about a yard or two away from the chancelors office window i found grievous staring straight at me.i reached for a grenade locked in my belt but general grievous was faster.before i could even reach for the grenade i was trapped by grievous four-sharp edged feet and thrown across coroscaunt.but i deployed a grapple before he saw me.i hit the retract button and went flying,but grievous got there first.he was an inch away from palpatines face with jedi having sabers active and four clones.the chancelor was braver then i thought to be face to face with grievous and not even flinch.then grievous grabbed the chancelor and threw him at the jedi.or maybe it was force push...anyway the jedi caught palpatine and retreated.the clones fought their best,but ended up slashed to death,hurtled out the window to thier doom or just plain dead.now,what the jedi didnt know,was that after all the normal clones had been killed i jumped through the window and shot at grievous with everything i had.i ran out of ammo quickly,though.but the good news was that some dead clones had the new E-11 rifles and they were advanced rifles this time.i dropped the repeater DC-17 and swapped for dual advanced E-11s.grievous was nearly dead when he reached at hidden sabers somwhere in his cyborg model.i shot out everything and from the right view,i looked like i had a white upper torso clone armor with the rest of the outfit black.meaning upper torso was white and leg armor was colored blackish.anyway,grievous was actualy panting when he tossed a large item from the chancelors office at me.easy to dodge,though.grievous retreated into the hall after the jedi.obviously i followed,becouse he was the republics number one enemy right now,and i wasnt going to let him escape.when i opened the door i had to close it and dodge behind a wall to avoid having my head blown off by an ithorian battle cry.very powerful.actualy hurts to hear that battlecry since its about..oh say...THE VOLUME OF A MILLION!when i opened the door the jedi were in an elevator and grievous was drawing near.instead of fighting,i switched on active camo and dashed inside the elevator.while we were going downward,we found grievous actualy running on the wall after us and tilted his head to watch us.one stupid clone had the stupid idea of stupidly launching a stupid rocket while he was in the stupid elevator...well...yeah.really stupid to try that.just about blew him to smitherenes,to.but grievous fell off.when the elevator touched down,we were in big trouble.grievous AND his magnagaurds were waiting.i dashed out and fired,which deactivated my camoflauge.one by one the magnagaurds heads were blown off by advanced E-11 shots.only six remained and i decided it was time for me to give the jedi a hand by blasting off grievous' head.i saw him running ahead and chased him,guns blazing.he avoided most shots,but i did hit him.then he ran off and i saw the jedi headign towards a train station after nearly bening bludgeoned by magnagaurds.i ran to catch up.four awaited the three jedi.i grappled to the top of a building that wasnt very high,but i could still see.then a magnagaurd noticed me but only attacked jedi.when he was about to make his first attack i dashed forward and jumped at him,grabbing the droid and slamming him into the ground.he was temporarily stunned,but before he could react i drove about fifty advanced E-11 shots into him.i watched the jedi fight,and found a few new tricks to try.slamming a droid into a droid,crippling both droids and slamming a droid onto train tracks and letting the droid be hit by the train.i followed the jedi to a long area with a fast moving pod.then i heard thousands and thousands of those magnagaurds coming.shaak ti stayed behind while the others ran to the chancelors bunker and i always follow the soldiers code.a good soldier never leaves a man behind!i wasnt just about to let shaak ti become a mangled mess on the floor becouse of those magnagaurds!as they came i attacked and when they swarmed i used everything i could to fire,at once i actualy thought i was carrying all of my weapons and firing at once.after a short while every magnagarud was scarp metal.shaak ti didnt even notice me and ran after the pod,and i followed on a grappling hook.when i arrived,i could still hear sabers clashing,but i couldnt help becouse of the quadrouple melted durasteel walls and sheilds.when shaak ti arrived there wasnt any sound.the sheilds flashed open and the doors unlocked,and i ran inside and hid with active camo.lightsaber clashing,ithorian battlecry markings,sharp holder claws on the walls...and a dead ithorian and another creature that i couldnt recall its name.shaak ti looked around,then was ambushed by grievous and then left for dead,tangled by some wires that grievous ripped out of the wall.seconds later alot more jedi came and found waht i did,except for all the blaster marks.hehe..well i didnt say that i just let grievous escape now did i?mace windu stepped forward and asked where the chancelor was.the only response he got was "i have failed" that make any sense to you?no,me either.the jedi and shaak left to help fight the droid army,and i dashed to kill every single last droid i found until i had made a path of scrap metal leading to grievous so i could blast his head off!then i saw somthing that changed my mind.it was the grey droid,deactivated and lying slanted on a pile of rubble with some sparks around him.deactivated,but not permanantly.just a few parts missing,and they were right there.i reinstalled the droids parts and he thanked me,and then we headed off to..lets just say 'grab a first class ride'.and that certain shuttle we were taking 'first class' was a lander...

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( Sargent_Johnson, could you not write so much? it doesn't allow others to do as much and I don't like reading a fifty foot short story)

C53-5 met the jedi who were escorting the chancelor and blasted them away. C53-5 immediately took the chancelor only to find clones behind him. He pulled 50 of his troops with him while the other 200 fought the clones to hold them off. C53-5 soon found the ships after going around in a circle around the senate and jumped into a MAF.

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"sir!!! they have the chancelor!!"

"dam! send 50 men to back up sardakar. sardakar. fall back to the hangar! sekara you too! men! lets finish these droids!!!!!!!!"

"radio the jedi master obi-wan. tell him the chancelor has been taken."

"dargen. we were too late they are gone."

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It seemed to C53-5 that the battle was over and the CIS would emerge victorious. After all, Coruscant was invaded, beaten, and the chancelor removed from the senate. The stragetic move to blow the generators ended up in our favor since it controlled the electricity and heat in the jedi temple and probably costs millions or at the least thousands of dollars to fix( or whatever type of currency they use )C53-5 finally got his first rest that day. When he got up, he recieved orders to deliver the hostage then eliminate all the clones. He got up and directed his pilots to the command ship.

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626 fired walking down the hallway as he managed to kill many droids with the help of his comrades. Soon he reached the bridge and started firing on the commanding droids and some neimodians stood up to surrender themselves, once the droids were all destroyed. 626 kept aim on the neimodians as he nodded for the man to lay explosives on the droid control panel. (The control panel will only will disable the droids that came from that station.)

 

The men ran out of the room as 626 and 638 backed up towards the door, keeping aim on the neimodian leaders. As soon as the door shut 626 and 638 turned around and started running towards the hangar, to leave this place.

 

Once the men ran into the hangar, they were suprised at how many droids were standing around examing the starfighters. The clones started firing at the droids, while running towards there starfighters. 626 ran towards his starfighter as he fired at the droids around the fighter. Once he made it he fumped up the ladder and landed on the seat of the cockpit, as the window closed. Once he jumped in he pressed a button and the fighter hovered and started out into space, soon folowed by the rest of the starfighters. Once all the men were out 638 pressed a button and suddenly a fiery explosion came from where the bridge was and soon the whole station was turning into fiery red flames.

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Once in the command ship, C53-5 searched for General Grievious. When he found him, the general took the hostage and gave him more droids to wipe out the clones on coruscant. C53-5 led his soldiers to the hangar and headed back towards the planet.

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SLICE!SLICE!SLICE! said my knife as i cut through the smaller droids that were ambushing us.i couldve sworn they were buz droids,since they can peirce flesh,not just ships.i took the dual advanced E-11s i had and walked forward with the droid."so whats your name,or code,droid?" i asked.he looked at me and looked back torwards our destination.strangely,i saw some MTTs fly bvack into a lander and the lander was picked up and then detonated..and then two more landers were drawn together and crashed into eachother,exploding as soon as there was even a scratch on the other.i knew it had to be yoda.hes had..eh..maybe two hundred years to train.then i saw a purple jedi starfighter fly throughy and crash.i saw a hanger nearby and practically dragged the droid in,switched on active camo and gripped onto the railing of an ARC-170 with hands and a grappling hook.it took off and then was being pursued by five droid vulture fighters and two tri-droid fighters.the back gunner was a horrible shot and didnt even scrath the fighters.then another vulture fighter came by,blasting the other droids out of the sky."nice work,alpha 56!" the main pilot yelled.the gunners respone was,"bu--...but...but sir that..that wasnt me!" then the vulture fighter flew closer and we overheard the main pilot yell "master windu!" and there he was,standing on the vultue fighter with a dead droid in the cockpit and him flying the fighter with hands around wires.then he flew off and we drew closer to the lander.then we saw somthing odd.there was a thin unmarked fighter flying through the air,blasting away at clones.i whispered to the droid to grab onto the rail or somthing before i jumped off onto the roof of the fighter.it jerked back and forth trying to shake me off the roof of the fighter,but i had already placed a grapple.i jammed my fist through the roof and the droid pilot panicked.i jumped in and saw the droid most legendary of the wars.OOM-9.independant droid commander,his own power supply,and one of the few droid survivers from naboo.he had seen alot of battles in his days.i reached for a blaster holstered on a belt he had,grabbed the blaster and when he had the blaster pointing at me and i had my blasters pointed at him,he walked forward me,acting calm,then bashed me in the head with the but of the gun.i had the gun pointing at my head now."well it looks like yo have two options" he said."die an unknown death." at this he spun the gun so that the handle was facing a me."or you could just leave me alone and never say i was here." i took the gun and he nodded,and reprogrammed some of the fighter.the CIS programmed it,but he was an expert hacker droid.he overwrote the codes to activate stealth mode and dropped me off on the ARC-170.and to this day,i havent told anyone i met him.the ARC-170 exploded as me and the droid dropped towards a lander.we luckily landed on the roof of the bridge,and we dropped in,weapons blazing.when we were sure we were the last on the ship,we took control and headed to ambush the generals ship...

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(sorry i havnt written... ive ben grounded. it took me a week to ware down my parents will power lol...)

((((on the capital ship))))

"sir dargen has requested that we send all availible reinforcements that we just recieved from kamino."

"grant it"

"yes sir"

 

(on the planet)

"sekara, i want you to go and activate the cities deffenive turrents. and sardakar i want you to get the primary generator back online."

"well i must say blowing up the secondary generator was brilliant. you are sure that the city has been full evacuated right??"

"yes."

"good we dont was the hidden turrents attacking civilians."

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(joking for the story) as me and the droid flew through space trying to get to the generals ship,we flew off into a deserted area and in the window i saw somthing strange.it was a bunch of yellow letters flying off into space and then mysteriously dissappearing.i think it had somthing to do with an ''episode 3'' of somthing called ''starwars''.and they called it ''revenge of the sith''.how can the sith get revenge when no ones done anything?

 

(actual rp part) we flew through space,avoiding the clones becouse we didnt want to call and say we stole a lander.i saw alot of jedi starfighters,to.two i recognized as general kenobis and anakin skywalkers.they nearly destroyed our ship!when i saw anakin firing at the hanger bay to open the forcefeild,i was about to do the same before i saw that the feilds were opening for us.luckily,a couple buzz droids had jumped onto an ARC-170 and drilled through the pilots(and gunners) heads.and the ARC-170 was still active.we landed and blasted the buzz droids and all the others we saw,then continued forward.we had to duck behind a door when we saw kenobi and anakin slicing their way forward.luckily,they didnt come our way.a few droids came and and we ducked into the open space between the door and started firing.i looked up,and saw a vent and i grabbed the droids hand and grappled up,right before ten droidekas came.it was hard to crawl through tiny vents,i admit that much,but it was worth it.we came close to the bridge of the generals ship when the droid tripped and fell down a shaft,but he still owes me a favor for grabbing ahold of his foot before he fell into the ships reactor.when we finally arrived,we saw kenobi and anakin fighting dooku,and then dooku threw kenobi agains ta wall,knocking him unconsious,then sliding a bridge over him to keep him there.anakin grabbed kenobis lightsaber and started fighting with dual weild and dooku finally fell to the ground,and palpatine kept yelling at anakin to kill dooku until dooku didnt have a head.i ran past the droid in the shafts to get to the ARC-170 and he followed.we found what we feared most.droidekas.alot of droidekas.wed be attacked by droidekas in the land of droidekas for ever and droidekas would keep coming from the droideka factory on the droideka planet.but we dashed below into the ARC-170 anyway.and we made it to,luckily.we flew out to continue the fight in space,but i told the droid i had to get my ship when we landed back on coroscant and mysteriously disappear before any clones realized i saw th battle of coroscant...

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"sir the cloaked ships engins have been disabled. and the trap is set."

"good. i want you to disconnect the power. if he leaves this planet, YOU will be held responsible!!"

"i also want 25 snipers watching the ship. have them use those new rifles so that even if hes cloaked we can see him."

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C53-5's ship barely got passed the clone fleet without being destroyed. Luckily, Droid fighters came and fought them off. When we landed on the planet, we landed near the jedi temple. Most of the fighting had quieted down considering we had hardly any droids left to fight. C53-5 came out with his troops and moved to reinforce his comrades.

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"sir, we have reports that the cis have landed reinforcements."

"very well. activate the auto turrents."

"hey dargen. i ordered some of the heavy troopers to lay down mines while u were busy those reinforcments shoulw be walking into em right about..."

(a few explosions in the back ground)

"...now"

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C53-5 got up slowly. That blast had eliminated most of the reinforcements. Those that could still get up were injured. Knowing that staying here was suicide with the turrents firing on us, we headed to the Prosecuter

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Once C53-5 got to the Prosecutor, his reinforcements fired down on the few clone troops there. C53-5 knew that a victory here could gain an important foothold for the Confederacy. He called in for reinforcements from the main ship and told them to send 750 droids and 15 AATs. He thought this would eliminate the clones from here surely.

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