JediKnight707 Posted February 3, 2006 Author Share Posted February 3, 2006 P.S. How the heck did he "pull himself together" after he was cut in half? he was never buried. I'll explain more in the next update about all of this crap... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 4, 2006 Author Share Posted February 4, 2006 Here's the next chapter _______________________________________-______________-_________________- Chapter 3 “Dad?” James whispered. “Good, you know what I look like,” he replied, nonchalantly. “But Rexes killed you!” “He got close, I’ll give him that much.” “But, when they went into your room, you weren’t there, only your clothes were.” “Yes, well, I took them off and just sort of…hopped out the window. I must say, that is not easy when you’ve just been stabbed.” “So, you were just running around naked?” “HEY!! I had my underwear.” “Then why put on this suit, and act like Rexes?” “Well, I was sure that if you guys – all Jedi really – didn’t meet a worthy opponent, you would grow arrogant. You might even try to act in a tyranny matter.” “But Jedi don’t do that!” “After seeing what happened to Bao-Dur, I wasn’t so sure. Your mother completely agreed with my idea.” “Mom knew about this??” “Well, she knew what I felt like better than anyone else. So, she just sort of assumed it was me. And, later, she was doing a normal mission, and, as she puts it ‘just noticed me in the crowd.’” “So this was all just a set up?” “No, no, only I am. I had to go deep undercover, but I found a master. He always feared that I might betray him, or he was always this paranoid; but I never met him. Contacted me on a special radio.” “Well, this is some weird stuff going on.” “You know, I never expected you to take this so well.” “Really?” “Well, it just seems to me that if I found out that my father was a Sith lord, and was alive, I’d be just a tad bit surprised.” “Well, it fits. So it must be true.” “We’ve been babbling, and yet, you still haven’t introduced me to this very young gentlewoman.” James turned to face Amanda, and said to her, “My apologies.” She smiled. “You just found out your father is alive. No need to apologize.” James turned back to his father. “This is Amanda, Atton and Visas’ other child.” Thomas shook her hand, and said to her, “You’re fortunate to have them as parents.” She bowed her head. “Thank you.” “How’s Jaq?” “Here and there.” James was pondering his next question as he asked it. “What’s your next move?” Thomas was thrown off by this question. “What do you mean?” “Well, are you going to go back to the Jedi or what exactly?” Thomas thought about it. He wanted to help catch the Sith. And, really his part was done. His ‘master’ wasn’t going to reveal anymore about himself (he assumed it was a man), so he should go back to the Jedi. And he missed Brianna so much. Finally he answered, “Yes, I shall go back to the Jedi. I wonder what Master Vandar will say when he sees me…” “Oh…I don’t know how to break this to you, but Vandar died four years ago.” “Wow, that sucks.” James laughed. I can speak into your mind. Don’t say anything. I know who my Sith master is. James flicked just a little look towards his father, telling him to continue. You’re not going to want to hear this. But it’s… James made not reaction. He was crushed inside. He couldn’t believe it. I’m sorry. James only blinked twice. Then said, “Let’s go back to the ship.” He gestured to Amanda to stay with him. “I need to talk to you.” “Yes?” “I think I know who the Sith lord is.” “Oh?” she said excitedly. He hugged her. “It’s mom.” “I’m so sorry.” He pulled out his lightsaber and stabbed her. He growled, “And you.” She grunted. “…What?” “You’re a Sith.” She coughed blood. “How did you know?” “I have my ways.” “Damn Jedi…” He shook his head. “I loved you. I really did.” “I loved you too. But I loathe Jedi.” She laughed grimly. “Goodbye.” “Goodbye,” he whispered. And he stabbed her in her heart. He walked back to the ship. He made no reaction when he saw his dad. He just started up the ship. “You should get some rest. We have a big day tomorrow.” James just laughed grimly. “Yeah.” They slept the whole ride there. As they touched down, Thomas asked, “Ready?” “Let’s kick the tires and light the fires.” They walked into Brianna’s room. “Thomas…is that you?” she whispered. “Cut the bull. We know what you’ve been doing,” he replied harshly. They both took out their lightsabers and ignited them. She appeared to not understand, then she realized that that façade as done with. She took out her lightsaber and ignited it. “Time to die.” She attacked; going after James’ legs. He jumped and slashed at her head. She blocked it easily. It was an easy fight for Thomas and James. The only one who could challenge either of them was…the other one. James saw a fault in her attacks, and chopped off her arm. She screamed. James and Thomas pointed their lightsabers at her throat. “You have lost,” James said calmly, acting as if it was a morning spar. “Damn you Jedi, DAMN YOU!” she screamed. Thomas got inches away from her ear and said, “You’ll find that we are quite pesky. Goodbye my love.” And then decapitated her. “Love’s a bas*ard sometimes isn’t it?” James said, looking at her lifeless mother. “It has its pros and cons. C’mon, let’s go.” “Where?” “Where there is evil.” “Nice cliché dad, nice cliché.” Thomas laughed. “Dad? I never thought that I’d hear that.” “Neither did I.” ____________________________________________________-____________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted February 5, 2006 Share Posted February 5, 2006 i thought hed be sad to hear vandar died. excellent work anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir-Vlada Posted February 5, 2006 Share Posted February 5, 2006 Not bad. for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 7, 2006 Author Share Posted February 7, 2006 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 13, 2006 Author Share Posted February 13, 2006 I think that the next update won't come for another like month +. This is the first time I've been on (the computer) in like a week, and when I am on, I just don't have time to write. So, it may come a lot later than I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 16, 2006 Author Share Posted February 16, 2006 Scratch that. It's time for the end, however. 'Tis a sad ending, so get your tissues. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir-Vlada Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Already? I thought that this would be longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Puma Posted February 16, 2006 Share Posted February 16, 2006 This is a very good Fic Jedi. I can't wait for the next chapter Keep up the solid work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 16, 2006 Author Share Posted February 16, 2006 It's time for the end I don't think that there's gonna be another chapter. Already? I thought that this would be longer. I just didn't feel like continuing it. I didn't like writing this one as much as I did RotE. Dunno why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Well that ending didn't really fit other Star Wars things. It was really rather quick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 17, 2006 Author Share Posted February 17, 2006 Well, it was full of tragedy 'cause I'm sad. It was quicker than anticipated, but I'd rather have it stop now then continue it with an update every month or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 ^I mean the ending was abrupt. In fact, it was like 'Hi dad, is my GF evil?' 'Yes, so is your mom' buzz buzz hack 'My evil GF and mother is dead hurray'. But, it was still good to see an ending to this fic. P.S. I put 'is' in there when it should be 'are' on purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 17, 2006 Author Share Posted February 17, 2006 Yeah, it was like midnight and I was tired P.S. Why? EDIT: Oh yeah, I'm hard at work at my next fic. It won't have anything to do with Thomas/James. Maybe some other time I'll start working on that series again. Should have the first chapter posted today/tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 I put 'is' in there for fun, and being a professional grammar fascist (I actually get paid to do it!), I have a reputation to uphold. I won't let you horny 13-year-olds ruin that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 17, 2006 Author Share Posted February 17, 2006 Oh!! I was like 'is she he trying to put a hidden meaning or something??' Had me scared crapless. Sorry for flaming you about 20 words ago, but you scared me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 ^I don't count it as flaming, but you need to know one thing: I only use hidden meanings to get a good English mark, the teachers love that crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 17, 2006 Author Share Posted February 17, 2006 the teachers love that crap. I know what you mean Don't forget, I'm just a year behind you!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Did you ever notice that English teachers are the dumbest ones around? I have yet to get one that hasn't failed Math. And it's almost two years, I'm turning 15 on the 26th. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 18, 2006 Author Share Posted February 18, 2006 Hahahahaha too true. But the stupid ones are usually the best. You're a son of a *****. Happy birthday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 take that back Hall, my english teacher aced her exams and shes one of the best in the world. she even helps some kids out in science and math occasionally and JK, great fic, sorry i couldnt post earlier but my annuals are coming up, i can spare only 1 hr on the comp per week. that sucks, but good job anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machievelli Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 finally read. Sorry about that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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