RC-1162 Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 right, so what is AOJB again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 AOJB--The Adventures Of Jolee Bindo. It's just easier to abbreviate because the title's a little long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 ah rite. i'm just at the second chapter of it, so i dunno most of the chars. great job on what i read so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkkender Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 I like the idea of a Twilek Quark. My all time favorite ST race are the Ferengi. I used to have the rules of Aquisition on my wall at one time. Infact I think I'll go hunt down another copy now that I think about it. I wouldn't mind helping either. I have no Fanfics to write at the moment. How do you feel about character development? I'm thinking I'm in desperate need of character writers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 i'd be willing to help you out in that too. just give me the basic outlines and i'll cook something up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machievelli Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 How do you feel about character development? I'm thinking I'm in desperate need of character writers. I agree. As I told someone commetning on Republic Dawn, I don't create a character that I cannot find a use for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkkender Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 I think all of my characters so far have a use even if they don't have names or leanings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabretooth Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 i'd be willing to help you out in that too. just give me the basic outlines and i'll cook something up. I second this. My next fic, the Chronicle of Thanatos is still a few weeks away, so I suppose I have the time. I'm okay in character development, I suppose, but they say I'm good at battles and other fight scenes. I can detail the warrior or ninja sort of characters, I suppose. Still, a bit of outline would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkkender Posted July 9, 2006 Author Share Posted July 9, 2006 You like Battles Sabertooth? How do you feel about helping flesh out our villains and encounters with them? In particular the Sith villians. Here are some of the Sith names. None of them have gender's except one is implied. I figure a villian battle king like yourself can dream up something Darth Masari Duke Harnash Darth Crosus Darth Droman @RC1162 how do you feel about fleshing out an alien race or two for Partymembers. Such as a LS - Sullastan - Male - Pilot You name him. You can also decide if he eventually becomes a Jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabretooth Posted July 10, 2006 Share Posted July 10, 2006 You like Battles Sabertooth? How do you feel about helping flesh out our villains and encounters with them? In particular the Sith villians. Here are some of the Sith names. None of them have gender's except one is implied. I figure a villian battle king like yourself can dream up something Darth Masari Duke Harnash Darth Crosus Darth Droman I'll suppose they're all male, so without further delay: Darth Masari Darth Masari was born as a Clawdite slave to a rich household on Onderon. He was forced to perform hard labour for very few rewards, a practice which instilled much hate in him. As he grew up, he dreamt of torturous ways of killing his tormentors. In the end, he brutally murdered all those who pained him and filled with the Dark Side, he fled Onderon for Dxun, where he found the tomb of Freedon Nadd. It was here that he was trained of the dark side of the Force under the skilled manipulator and female freelance Sith, Darth Cirvani. The slave was named "Darth Masari" and following the Sith Code, Masari treacherously killed his master. His master left a powerful Sith weapon, though. The weapon released a powerful energy and dark side blast, leaving Masari's body almost destroyed. Masari survived with the Dark Side, and using his Clawdite shapeshifting abilities in conjunction with his newfound ability to inspire fear at anytime, he became a powerful, yet paranoid Sith Lord. He wants to absorb energy from his preys and rebuild his shattered body, when he learns from a rival Sith, Darth Droman, of Revan's heir and starts hunting him for his Force potential. Battle Scene: Our hero's powers are a little dimmed, because of Masari's fear-power. Our hero enters the dark, misty room that is Masari's base. Masari steps out of the shadows. Masari: You have arrived... atlast. Hero: What do you want from me? Why have you been hunting me? Masari: Your life! Masari then ignites his lightsaber and delivers crushing swings on our medium-level hero. The combat pauses when Masari/Hero's health is 3/4th. Masari: I can feel your energy. I will have it. Hero: No, never. You're just a pawn in Darth Crosus' game. You will be killed! Masari: That matters not. I want my revenge. Hero: Revenge? From what? Masari: From this galaxy. Battle restarts and Masari becomes more powerful. More later, but what do you think of the above? Want me to write more like a fic and less like a script? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 10, 2006 Share Posted July 10, 2006 @Darkkender: thanks for employing me i'm not very familiar with the Sullustan race, so i'll do something like Twilek? i'll cook something up by tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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