HK-42 Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 This is a new short fic I am starting but I am stuck for a second...Does anyone know the script for the scene of when Desann fights Kyle? Thanks. ANyway this will be about if Kyle had lost to Desann... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 Wow, you sure like these Rise Shorties. And no, sorry, i never played JO so i cant help ya'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 Which one? If it is the last fight, it is this. Desann: Welcome Kyle Katarn. Welcome to the future. Kyle: Your future is looking pretty grim Desann. Desann: On the contary, thanks to you. The weakling Jedi who scorned me will soon be erased from history, replaced by a new race of warriors. Strong warriors. Warriors who know that the Force is not a shield to protect the useless, but is in reality, a weapon to empower the worthy. Kyle: None of that's going to happen Desann. Most of your Shadow Troopers are being mopped up by real Jedi, ones who have been trained to use the Force. The rest blew up with your ship. Desann: What a pathetic ruse *Gets out Comlink* Desann to Fyarr. Admiral? Admiral? Admiral Fyarr I order you to come in at once. I was wrong about you Katarn. Your failure as a Jedi hasn't made you weaker. It has only made you stronger. Come join me. You know in your heart, that you'll never truly be one of them. Kyle: Maybe maybe not. How about you Desann, even now after all this pain it's not too late. Come join us. Desann: *Gets out Lightsaber* You weak Fool! Pretty close. Hope this helps. Also I agree with Jason, you love these Rise Shorties. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 Or you could the JO Re-edited way. Anyway, looking forward for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 I think this will be a serious Fic. Also I'll read this tomorrow, since I've got School tomorrow and I need to get to bed early. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 1, 2006 Author Share Posted October 1, 2006 Thanks Pottsie^^^ Also jason: "Jason Skywalker,Rise is our specialty."-Obiwan re-edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 "But Master Kenobi, can't we just beat the kriffin' heck out of them and await for this fic?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 1, 2006 Author Share Posted October 1, 2006 LOL working on fic now...also Thanks again Pottsie:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Doctor Posted October 1, 2006 Share Posted October 1, 2006 Gah! Name changes! I assume you're connor, correct? Anyway, I look forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 1, 2006 Author Share Posted October 1, 2006 ^^^ yes Im Connor also I'll get it out soon...i hpoe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 ^^^ yes Im Connor also I'll get it out soon...i hpoe... Hope not hpoe. Anyway Darth Grivis what will you do next? Will you do: The Rise of Tavion The Rise of Alora The Rise of DS Jaden The Rise of Rosh The Rise of Jerec The Rise of Yun The Rise of Boc The Rise of Boba Fett The Rise of Malak The Rise of Traya The Rise of Nihilus The Rise of Sion The Rise of Revan I could go on forever. I'm looking foward to this Short Fic. Perhaps all your Shorties could be a collection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 ha no next is The Way of ****** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 please tell me that isnt a swear word, because one fits it perfectly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 Nah, i think he's just hiding it. But it could very well be: Sith . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 no its not a swear word...and ^^^jason's a winner im hiding it but its not sith its Darth ****** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 Bah, whatever, where's the fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 I'm about to finish it:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 Star Wars: The Rise of Desann Kyle used force speed to get past the moving walls. He zoomed past the walls before they could crush him. He then entered a huge chamber; he looked around and noticed Desann standing in the middle of the chamber. “Welcome, Kyle Katarn. Welcome to the future.” “Your future is starting to look pretty grim Desann.” “On the contrary, thanks to you. The weakling Jedi who scorned me will soon be erased from history, replaced by a new race of warriors. Strong warriors. Warriors who know that the Force is not a shield to protect the useless, but is in reality, a weapon to empower the worthy.” “None of that's going to happen Desann. Most of your Shadow Troopers are being mopped up by real Jedi, ones who have been trained to use the Force. The rest blew up with your ship.” “What a pathetic ruse” Desann said as he gets out Comlink. “Desann to Fyarr. Admiral? Admiral? Admiral Fyarr I order you to come in at once. I was wrong about you Katarn. Your failure as a Jedi hasn't made you weaker. It has only made you stronger. Come join me. You know in your heart, that you'll never truly be one of them.” “Maybe, maybe not. How about you Desann, even now after all this pain it's not too late. Come join us.” “You weak fool! Desann finished activating his saber. Kyle also activated his saber. The flashes of the sabers filled the room as they clashed them together. Desann laughed as he shot out lightning at Kyle knocking him to the ground. He picked Kyle up with his hand chocking him. He through him across the room making him grunt trying to control his pain. Kyle finally gaining control got up and charged at Desann. Though the fury was great in him, Desann thought. Kyle’s had built up high enough to even beat his. He blocked Kyle’s saber in a strong saber lock. “You have great fury Katarn, you just don’t use it.” “I never will Desann.” “Then you are weak.” Kyle slashed at Desann. Desann ducked to the side and stabbed his saber into Kyle’s leg. He yelled in pain as he fell to the ground. Desann raised his saber and brought it down through his other leg. Before Kyle could even wince in pain Desann stabbed his two arms. Kyle screamed in pain, as Desann once again prepared to stab him. The saber came down into his stomach exactly were it would cause pain but not kill him. Ignoring the screams from Kyle, Desann used the force to take boulders to put them on Kyle’s arms and legs crushing his bones and pinning him down. Desann laughed as he left the chamber leaving Kyle to die. Desann reached for his comlink. “Desagg, I order you to come in at once” “Yes brother.” “Fyarr has failed; bring your army of sith here.” “As you wish…my brother I-.” Desann ended the talk by rudely shutting off the comlink. Now he would go after Luke. Desann ran into the big quarters of Luke Skywalker’s academy. There sat Luke killing off the last of the Stormtroopers in the room. “Desann, but Kyle” “Kyle’s dead and soon you will be also.” Desann activated his blood red saber planning to strike as he moved into his battle stance. Luke also activated his saber and stood in a similar but a defensive battle stance. Desann charged preparing to break Skywalker’s stance. But look parried to the side and brought his saber down removing Desann’s lightsaber emitter. In fury Desann jumped back thinking fast. He threw his saber handle, sending the spikes on the bottom into Luke’s chest. Then Desann jumped and grabbed his saber and thurst the green blade into his head, killing him. A shocked Luke died a second later. Desann grinned he would now rule the galaxy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jason Skywalker Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 Not bad, but perhaps could have been worked better, and i hardly think Luke would die that way, Anakin was powerful, and Luke had the strength Anakin would have had he reached his full potential, and stay on the Light Side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 Good point I change it a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 I didn't think this Rise Fic was that good, considering I had to wait two or so days waiting for this Fic. It was alright though, I just think both Kyle and Luke died quite fast. As Jason said, Luke had strength from Anakin, so he would of put up more of a fight. Desann wasn't that powerful for me in the game. Anyway, I'm looking foward to the rest of Darth Yoda, since that is your best work so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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