Kyvios Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 ((Here are just some random songs I've written. I'll give you one just to start off. Been transferring them to the computer from notebooks.)) Ever Need: So tell me do you know what it’s like to love someone with all of your heart, just watch them fall to pieces. You want to find the words that will set they’re heart at ease, but those words never come. So you stand there in the painful silence, watching them slip further out of your reach. You try to reach out but you can’t ever seem to hang on, when all you really want to do is never let it go. Well then maybe you know what it’s like to be me. Standing in the silence as I watch her cry those very tears. I try to think of the right words to say, yeah the right words to say. But damn me if they’ll ever come. So I wish upon the falling stars to shed some light on me, just to let her know that I love her, and she’s all I’ll ever need. So tell me do you know what it’s like to love someone and hope that they’ll never go, but in the end only to stand in the door way and watch them fade away. You want to scream out at the top of your lungs, ohh don’t you remember. Seems like these days memories don’t count for much but they’re all we ever have. I bet it’s hard to believe, when the world seems to fall apart. Well then maybe you know what it’s like to be me. Standing in the faded moon light wishing you could go back just to make it all right. Just to find those words that would make her smile just a little, so she’d rethink turning that key. But damn me… but damn me if those words ever come. So I wish upon the falling stars to shed some light on me, just to let her know that I love her, and she’s all I’ll ever need. Never would have thought it hurt like this To hurt to breath like it does But without you Guess this is all I’ll ever be So I wish upon the falling stars to shed some light on me, just to let her know that I love her, and she’s all I’ll ever need… just let me tell her that I love her… she’s all I’ll ever need… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VarsityPuppet Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 So.. wait, did you write a song, or just the lyrics to the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyvios Posted January 19, 2010 Author Share Posted January 19, 2010 I'm just giving the lyrics to songs I've written. I have quite a few that I have actual music for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VarsityPuppet Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 It would be better I think if we heard the songs put to music. I used to do this sort of thing before (post song lyrics that is), but really it's not going to have much of an effect without the key element: the actual music. It's much like giving the recipe for a dish... some can imagine what it would be like but it's still lacking key things like smell, taste, look, etc.. you get my point. So yeah, moral of the story, post the songs with the music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machievelli Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 Read; but like poems, songs are not something I'm good at critiquing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkywalkerRules Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Looks great, Kyvios! You doing a band? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyvios Posted March 5, 2010 Author Share Posted March 5, 2010 did back in the day. but sometimes growing up just doesn't allow for little pleasures, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkywalkerRules Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Aaaah. *nods* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediMaster12 Posted March 18, 2010 Share Posted March 18, 2010 read. -JM12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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