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I disagree with alot of it actually :D for example...the Neimodians do not look Asian :p

 

I copy/pasted that (obviously---yes Lynk it probably was :D) which you all would have realized if you had clicked on the title :p (which is a link to the site)

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Originally posted by Redwing

STAR WARS: THE PHANTOM MENACE: THE ABRIDGED SCRIPT

 

 

FADE IN:

 

INT. SPACESHIP

 

LIAM NEESON

It is vitally important we enter trade

negotiations with the federation.

 

EWAN MCGREGOR

I agree. This one planet and how it

trades with other planets is certainly

an important enough topic to be the

entire plot of a Star Wars film.

 

INT. SPACESHIP - MAIN DECK

 

EVIL ALIEN

Werr. What wirr we do now? My evil,

obviousry Asian race must prevair. I

wirr not face de Jedi. Send de droid.

 

INT. SPACESHIP - BACK TO THE JEDI

 

A droid enters.

 

LIAM NEESON

I sense a disturbance in the force.

 

EWAN MCGREGOR

Well, shit.

 

Suddenly, numerous pieces of CGI enter and begin

attacking the Jedi. The Jedi use the high concentration

of midichlorians in their bodies to use the force to

destroy the CGI. They run outside.

 

EXT. NABOO

 

They run until they smack into some more CGI.

 

JAR JAR

Who might you be?

 

LIAM NEESON

(staring in the general

direction of Jar Jar, but

not really staring at him)

I am a Jedi. There are bad things

coming. Take me to your homeland.

 

JAR JAR

I see. That is quite interesting. I

will guide you to the land from which

I have come.

 

Suddenly, GEORGE LUCAS realizes the Jar Jar toys aren't

selling well enough.

 

JAR JAR (contUd)

Oh! Meesa sorry! Meesa ment to

saysa: Weesa can go back to Jamaica

mon, okeyday?

 

EWAN MCGREGOR

(staring at something right

above Jar Jar)

Good. Do you have a hotel room for me

and Liam? We have..uh..Jedi business

to attend to.

 

JAR JAR

Weesa can smokesa some ganja, mon.

 

AUDIENCE

Die. Die, Jar Jar. Nobody likes you.

 

INT. SPACESHIP - MAIN DECK

 

The queen appears over some kind of thing which appears

to be better in technology than the kinds of things in

the original trilogy.

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

I am the queen. You've gone too far

this time. I will tell the senate and

you will be in a lot of trouble.

 

EVIL ALIEN

I'm so sorry, Amidala.

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

No, no, I'm Padme now.

 

EVIL ALIEN

I thought when in the makeup, you were

the queen.

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

No, I'm whoever is playing the queen

at the time. The voice changes don't

help you figure this out.

 

EVIL ALIEN

Stop trying to confoose me! Droids,

capture the queen.. or Padme.. er..

just capture everyone!

 

LIAM and EWAN and, ****, JAR JAR too take NATALIE PORTMAN

and other members of her staff onto a ship and they

escape. They go to Tatooine.

 

INT. TATOOINE - SOME SHOP WHERE JAKE LLOYD IS HELD SLAVE

 

JAKE LLOYD

Hi there! Golly I'm cute.

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

You certainly are, little boy.

 

JAKE LLOYD

I'm the only one disturbed by the fact

that I'm gonna bone you in episode

two?

 

LIAM NEESON

Jake, I need you to have a pod race so

I can get the parts I need and free

you.

 

JAKE'S MOM

No, I won't allow him to pod race.

He'll get hurt.

(pause)

Ok, I will. Nevermind. Good luck.

 

They pod race. It looks really COOL.

 

GEORGE LUCAS

(attempting subtlety)

Oh! Look! There's a video game of

this scene... uh.. buy it! Hey, I had

to sacrifice a part of my grand vision

for these movies to include a part

that could be turned into a game, so

buy it or I'll do it even more in

episode 2.

 

JAKE wins! He has to leave his mother, which will become

very important in the next movie. He also has to leave

his protocol droid, THREEPIO.

 

AUDIENCE

He built C-3PO? Why wasn't this ever

mentioned in the original trilogy?

 

GEORGE LUCAS

Because I just made it up. Speaking

of stuff I'm just making up, how do

you like the midichlorian bull**** I

pulled out of my ass?

 

They all get into their ship and go to Coruscant.

 

INT. CORUSCANT - JEDI COUNCIL

 

LIAM NEESON

I want to train this boy.

 

YODA

Nope. Sorry. Too old the boy is.

Clouded his future seems. Vague my

worries are.

 

LIAM NEESON

Well, he is the chosen one. He will

bring balance to the force. I'm

training him.

 

SAMUEL L. JACKSON

Yoda told you no, mutha****a. What

the **** is wrong with you, bitchass?

I'll ****in' kill you! I'm gonna be a

****in bad ass in the next two ****in

movies, you know. My toy has a

****in lightsaber.

 

LIAM NEESON

I'm going to go over your head and

train him myself, then. So there.

 

He exits.

 

INT. GALACTIC SENATE MEETING

 

IAN MCDIARMID

Damn I'm evil.

 

Suddenly, we see E.T! This does not make the film HYPER-

CUTESEY like Return of the Jedi, but CLEVER.

 

EXT. NABOO

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

I am either the queen or Padme now.

Regardless, your cheesy-looking race

of annoying, unrealistic characters

need to ally with our badly acting

race of creatures so we can capture

this one guy.

 

BOSS NASS

One guy? The climax of this film

revolves entirely around us capturing

one, pretty insignificant guy?

Doesn't that make this whole thing

kinda pointless?

 

NATALIE PORTMAN

No more pointless than the fact that

this entire film revolves around taxes

on trade and the cutting off of one,

pathetic little planet half-filled

with annoying creatures.

 

They go after the bad guy or whatever. Who cares?

 

Finally DARTH MAUL shows up for a prolonged fight

sequence. Darth wears black boots, a black cloak, a

black shirt, has a red lightsaber, wears red and black

face paint, and has horns. He is EVIL.

 

Meanwhile, the Naboo people go after this one

insignificant guy and we really don't care.

 

Meanwhile, the Gungans go against a bunch of droids and

we really don't care except we want the Gungans to die.

 

Meanwhile, Anakin takes off into space to join the space-

battle, which is mostly over by the time he arrives. We

care a little bit.

 

INT. SOME KIND OF THINGY WITH SOME RED FORCE FIELDS

 

MAUL, LIAM, and EWAN all have a huge lightsaber battle

which has had a lot of effort put into the choreography

and is thousands of times better than any other

lightsaber battle in a Star Wars film.

 

AUDIENCE

Whoa! This is really cool!

 

Suddenly, we go back to one of the other three stupid

battles going on at the time. Eventually, we return to

the good one.

 

DARTH MAUL

(menacing as hell)

Grrr.

 

Eventually, MAUL stabs LIAM, which is very surprising,

especially to those of us who bought the film score which

has a song whose title gives away the ending. He then

kicks EWAN into a shaft. EWAN grabs onto something on

the side and holds on for dear life.

 

EWAN MCGREGOR

Well, you certainly are an experienced

fighter and there is little question

you could kick pretty much anyone's

ass.

 

DARTH MAUL (contUd)

Muahahahaha.

 

Slowly, EWAN uses the force to grab LIAM'S lightsaber,

jump up out of the shaft, over MAUL, press the button

on the saber, and slice MAUL in half while MAUL stands

there like an idiot and does nothing at all. He dies.

 

EXT. SPACE

 

JAKE LLOYD

Whoaaaaa! I'm in space! Now this is

pod racing! Yipee! Uh oh! Man, I'm

so cute.

 

JAKE goes into a hangar, where the main reactor for the

ship is kept. He accidentally blows it to ****.

 

JAKE LLOYD (contUd)

Uh oh! I better leave! Let's leave

Artoo!

 

They exit quickly. The ship explodes, which stops all

the droids and just makes everything great, because it's

always enjoyable when a serious conflict is resolved with

a slapstick accident.

 

EXT. THE STREETS OF NABOO

 

The Gungans are dancing and such, still alive. A huge

party ensues.

 

AUDIENCE

Wow! Watching this party and all this

celebration has convinced me that the

tiny, pathetic problem that has been

taken care of is actually really

significant! Hooray!

 

Suddenly, the AUDIENCE realizes that behind all the

mindless celebration and kiddie cartoon bull****, what

actually happened was the future-emperor has actually

manipulated everything, come into great power, and that

one tiny problem has actually been resolved, but

thousands more have been created.

 

GEORGE LUCAS

Three years, suckers. I'd make them

come out sooner, but I work very hard

on my films, as I am an independent

filmmaker due to my disgust with

Hollywood's commercialism. Now go buy

some Star Wars toys!

 

END

 

 

 

 

haw haw haw haw!!!! man, red, you're damn funny! i loved that.

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while we are on the subject of bad SW movies...

 

 

EPISODE 2 SUCKED. BAD.

 

Anakin acted like he had a stick up his ass the entire time

 

Yoda fought, sure, but only for like 10 seconds.

 

Anakin fought, sure, but he lost his friggen arm, and that happend in the first ten seconds.

 

Mace Windu fought... one dude, and simply chopped his head off. wow.

 

the jedi fought in a giant battle! what giant battle? the giant battle advertised as a giant battle that is really just the rescue of that girl with half her clothes gone (only good part in movie) which ends not with the jedi whooping up, but THE FRIGGEN CLONES SHOWING UP LIKE SOME DUP-O-MATIC CALVARY

 

No one bothers to listen to dooku. dooku is smart, and i would be on his side if i had the choice.

 

Why the **** did they get rid of jengo... the only promising guy in the movie next to mace. And the scot clones that he works for. (heh eh)

 

AND THEN THERES THE-

 

*giant crowd of drunken trailer park guys wearing jar-jar binks t-shirts led by George Lucas attacks S1DC*

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A) You wanted Anakin to act angelic the entire time? The kid's gonna become Darth Vader for crying out loud!

 

10 second fight scenes? :confused: They sure as heck were longer than that...specially Yoda's...Obi-Wan's was a little short, Anakin's was longer but got "cut off"...but Yoda's was nice and long (note: the Force battle counts :p)

 

You missed all the Mace vs droid fight scenes in the arena?

 

Did you miss the giant battle that happened after the clones came? :p

 

You know that Dooku was playing everybody for a fool, don't you? ...don't you?

 

Why did they get rid of Jango? C'mon, how many people's deaths can you fit into Episode III? ;)

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Originally posted by S1DC

AND THEN THERES THE-

 

*giant crowd of drunken trailer park guys wearing jar-jar binks t-shirts led by George Lucas attacks S1DC*

*checks to see if any of her family members are in that crowd* :D I think i see cousin Delmer!
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well i personally thought tpm was a splendid movie. i could handle jake lloyde's bad acting just like i handled mark hammil's. it was definitely the most complex of the star wars movies, plot-wise. this should be expected, of course, since it's the "first" movie of the trilogy.

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Originally posted by Wraith 8

uhmm.. i loved ep2.... I LOVED IT BIG TIME!

i mean.. coruscant ROCKED... it was so beautiful...

 

i cant see anything wrong with ep2 other than it told to little to connect with the original trilogy.

 

You're just mad cuz they didn't have Tarkin like you told everybody :p:D

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Originally posted by Redwing

 

You're just mad cuz they didn't have Tarkin like you told everybody :p:D

yeah.. well.. he needs to be in it dammit.. or else it doesnt make sence why he is the boss of vader in ep 4.. and why vader is the boss of every other big admiral later on..
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Originally posted by Lynk Former

no! join the insomniac club! we even got a club song!

 

"I wanna rock n roll all night, and party everyday!" :D

LOL!! *is awake...seeing double...but awake* :D I also have to pee so bad my back teeth are floating.
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Originally posted by Lynk Former

...hmm i remember the AIM convo u had u were just like this... i seem to recall the words "the yellow rivers of releif" being used by u at one stage :D

:D Ah yes, they have flowed once again.
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