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It still seems a bit rough around the edges. What if Charles was kicked from the order, but because his technique with the lightsaber was so impressive, he was asked by Obi-wan to teach Anakin (and a few other select Jedi) as losses caused by the Clone Wars were alarmingly high.

That way Charles can have a subtle guiding role, rather than an overt one that inteferes with the Ep 3 story line.

Throughout the story line you could show that Charles also feels responsible for the fall of the Jedi order as his teachings reinforced Anakin's lust for power.

 

I like that idea alot, had we not have just come up with one that also helps smooth things out, I would have chosen it.

 

Here is what was edited. He was kicked out of the order for marrying Anna. He was kicked out before he had the chance to teach Anakin the last two stages of his saber training program. Which explains that. He comes back when he hears about hte distress signal and runs into obi-wan and yoda, that part of the story, THEN he goes to see Sidious and fights darth Gannis, and has to hurry back.

 

Another thing. Charles is not human, he is Malkazi, an ancient race that was wiped out a very long time ago. They live extended lives, much longer than humans.

 

Hope that clears some things up.

 

-GSccc

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Hmm...

 

But still......On the Site, it says Charles is 1094 years old. Is that true, or a little mistake?

I searched a bit around, and found something considering Charles exile.

When a jedi comes to the age of wearing a lightsaber, thus being a 'jedi', he has to make a commiment to the council: "A Jedi shall not know fear, a Jedi shall not know anger, a Jedi shall not know hatred, a Jedi shall not know love." Alsom they aren't alowed to have any posessions. (stuff)

That's the reason why Jedi are such emotionless people.

And Charles broke them all.

-By mariïng: 'Love'

-He had to evacuate his 'own' planet, thus having 'fear' for the Sith.

-He 'hated' Obi-Wan,

-Because of their 'anger' about Anakin.

 

And if he had awesome power, the Emperor would have killed him before the cpone wars, just like he did with Jorus C'baoth.

 

But enough criticism. Ou did a great job with the mod, but i have one more question: Will you put in some links regarding the movies/books etc?

Like a gravetomb an Yavin 4 that holds Luke's body, or meeting their heir(Ben Skywalker, Jacen and jaina Solo)? I think that would be cool.

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Erm...he Hut wars take place 100 years after the fall of the Empure and the ROTS stroy some years after that.

 

So Charles would be 120-150 years old by my calculation.

 

Like I said, don't worry. Some of us on the tam are constantly goin trough the story, again and again, proposing changes and trying ot smooth things out and make it as belivable, enjoable and realistic as possible :D

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Unfortunetally, the site is not updated on those areas due to the fact that he has gone through some significant development.

 

While he did break some of those he didnt break all of them. He felt love that was pretty much it. He never felt fear for his people he felt he had a deuty to protect them. He never hated obi wan, and to this day he hasnt. The only anger he felt was on his home planet towards Gannis and that ws for a brief moment.

 

And the emperor did infact try to get rid of him by sending Gannis after his people.

 

And since this takes place 200 years after what happened with the fall of the empire, no we will not see any of those people from the books.

 

-Gsccc

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That's cool. It supports your story very good: The Emperor wants to increase his influence on Anakin, so he needs to get rid of the poeple who influence him. Obi-Wan would be to obvious..... so Chales would be a good option. Would make the clone wars easier to win,too.

 

Really like it :)

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Okay I got it to work so that it is snowing now, and it makes me very happy :D. Like Christmas!

 

Here are some shots...

 

Walkin in a winter wonderland...

 

(Can you believe this was once Dantooine?)

 

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BEFORE:

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AFTER:

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A LITTLE different eh?

 

More updates when i got em!

 

~GSCCC

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Okay I got it to work so that it is snowing now, and it makes me very happy :D. Like Christmas!

Here are some shots...

Walkin in a winter wonderland...

A LITTLE different eh?

 

The reskinned area is looking good, and the snow weather effect always gives a certain atmosphere to an area. :)

 

Though if I may offer a small suggestion I'd remove the trees altogether. Hoth doesn't strike me as a planet that has had any vegetation, dead or not, so recently as to be visible on the surface. Perhaps they could be reskinned into rock/ice crystal formations or something?

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The reskinned area is looking good, and the snow weather effect always gives a certain atmosphere to an area. :)

 

Though if I may offer a small suggestion I'd remove the trees altogether. Hoth doesn't strike me as a planet that has had any vegetation, dead or not, so recently as to be visible on the surface. Perhaps they could be reskinned into rock/ice crystal formations or something?

 

great mod!!! played the demo and ur on to somethign really cool here!!!

however i must agree with stoffe-mkb- judging from ep V hoth is little more than an iceball... also see jedi academy as a reference...

of course u could always make ur hoth a different part of hoth, which might explain the trees, could be an area closer to the equator or something like that, still i personally would prefer this version only as a backup if u have no alternatives, but thats just me...

again great job so far!!!! :D

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The reskinned area is looking good, and the snow weather effect always gives a certain atmosphere to an area. :)

 

Though if I may offer a small suggestion I'd remove the trees altogether. Hoth doesn't strike me as a planet that has had any vegetation, dead or not, so recently as to be visible on the surface. Perhaps they could be reskinned into rock/ice crystal formations or something?

 

 

Love the idea, I can just make the trees invisible, though their collision meshes will stil be there so every now and then the player will run into a block that he cant see but it wont be a big one.

 

Thanks for the suggestion :D.

 

~Gsccc

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The acadamy looks good but to make it look more realistic shouldnt you litter the concrete patio outside the acadmey with snow? It just seems a bit strange that while the hills are covered in snow the concrete isnt. And the place is supposed to be abandoned I think?

 

Just a suggestion; ; Great work so far, ive just downloaded the demo although I havent tried it out yet.

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First of all I would like to announce that the website will undergo an update soon giving it a new layout and look, while adding a few menu options such as Progress and Job Applications. The update will most likely take place sometime either tomorrow or the weekend, depends on how much work i will get this week.

 

As for all the job applicants, thank you for signing up to be part of the team! We appreciate all of your abilities and that you want to take time out of your day to be part of the team. Sorry if that sounds like some crappy automated speech you get in an email but its true, finding a team that is dilligent is hard, and I'm happy i could find one as skilled as you.

 

However, I recieve about 3 requests for beta testing a day, I am afraid I cannot accept them all as out team is pretty large as is, but I assure you that anyone who registers on the forums will be the first ones to get the mod when it is completed.

 

We still have job openings in different areas and I will put that in the Job Applications section of the new site layout.

 

Thanks all,

~Gsccc

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I've just re-read this complete thread, and i'm wondering what could possibly have driven this genious thread from the main-page..

 

Have there been any developments on the project?

Since i have been playing the demo and seen the screens, my computer is itching to download it...

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