DarthAve Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Milla-Your dam straight!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoidish Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 I wrote the first bit of the first chapter for our Oleander Meets Loboto fic that Klia and I are working on. We don't have an asylum name yet. Suggestions? The Unamed Fic Oleander reached once again for the crumpled; coffee stained slip of paper, buried deep within his pockets. He had looked over it a million times but his gloved hand held it once more just to see if he had read it right. It was a letter with infuriatingly small type, but it was readable and if he squinted hard enough he was able to make out the message. Dear Morceau Oleander, ___ ___ home for the mentally deranged asks for your services. We have come to understand that you specialize in the field of psychological studies. ___ ___ only asks for your services due to a slight patient overflow. Said patient has been restrained and undergone many theraputic sessions but it is felt that someone of your ability is needed. We are sure a man such as you must have a full schedule but we would greatly appreciate it if you would contact us as soon as possible and set up an appointment. Thank you for your time. Sincerely, ____ ___ ________ Oleander smirked when he read the line “A man such as you must have a full schedule…” Of course he didn’t. In fact he hadn’t been hired for months and was barely making by, and the money made from the summer camp was drying up quickly. The world just didn’t need Psychonauts anymore. The world had moved on and he had not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tahnee Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason. Here's one for a project I started but never finished (no spriters), its a pretty good asylum name, Scalper Asylum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoidish Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason. Aww thank you. I literally spent three minutes on it as the story was just a small idea. But Klia is going to write the next part otherwise I would have dropped this. Now to point out all the things wrong with it: 1. I'm sure I've heard that last line somewhere. Its probably a cliche or something, I just can't remember where. 2. I have absolutly no creativity. I STILL can't come up with a name for this asylum. 3. There isnt much known about the avalibility and reknown of Psychonauts so whatever I say is probably wrong or a continuatiy error. Because if Psychonauts weren't needed, why would there be so many? Why would so many parents send thier kids to a summer class if it proved to be so useless? Why would Sasha and Milla be widely known? So many questions. And unfortunatly I can't answer a single one of them. D@mn me and my analyticial ways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Yes. Datmn you~! What about Sparkly Home? It sounds pretty. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoidish Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Scalper. I really like that. I'll go over it with Klia though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 Yes. Datmn you~! What about Sparkly Home? It sounds pretty. :3 Uhh...Scalper is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoidish Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Wait...I like Sparkly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Scalper. I really like that. I'll go over it with Klia though. Thanks, I had to come up with a buncha names for new cities, places, and a new asylum, all the names SUCKED except for that one. Feel free to use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 Wait...I like Sparkly. While amusing I think it would detract from the insane..wait no that would be insane. However Sparkly versus Scalper. I'm actually at a tie now. I'll insert them into the blanks and see how that works out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 I did insert them into the blanks and came out with this: Ashlyn meaning vision How about that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoidish Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 I like it. Vision is sort of like psychih. I dont know, like Psychic vision. Sounds good to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Darn. Nobody would've expected a Sparkly Home for the Insane. Instead of therapy, the patients get pastries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason. I need to ass kiss Paranoidish right now. It is pretty good turned out a lot better for a rough draft then I thought it would. A nice start for me espically as I have a problem with setting up the scene. The only problem I have is following up on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 Darn. Nobody would've expected a Sparkly Home for the Insane. Instead of therapy, the patients get pastries. Now that would be an asylum that actually cured you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinzuku Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Then they'd have to go to Jenny Creig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Oh! Shinzuku, I got the next chapter. Of course, I'm still fiddling around with the first chapter but that's not the point... This one is funny. I laughed like woah. Expect to see an overly complexified version soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinzuku Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinzuku Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Hey got any idea what should happen in the next chapter. All I have is " I love you" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Hey got any idea what should happen in the next chapter. All I have is " I love you" Hm. Is chapter 3 the end of the whole story? If so, why don't we end it not with 'I love you', but with the whole untold emotions thing? Pimp, eh? And I can be pretty poetic when called for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinzuku Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 It's not the end. It's like, "I love you, but you're evil." Some denial,Then some angst. then some other stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 It's not the end. It's like, "I love you, but you're evil." Some denial,Then some angst. then some other stuff. Oooh. Denial AND angst? Going for the whole package, neh? Well, hopefully we can turn it into humorous angst, or really smart angst. Maybe the next chapter can be about a sudden breakout in huge fires about the city? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shinzuku Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Okay fires. Hmmm. Fires.... Boyd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Squid Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Okay fires. Hmmm. Fires.... Boyd No, no. Perhaps Sasha lights little fires around old buildings, so as to have them spread and turn into big fires! And all because he wants them to learn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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