JediKnight707 Posted November 29, 2005 Share Posted November 29, 2005 Really your the best writer? With this horrible not well written story????? :lol: I'm just messing with you, I would definatly say that this is in my top 3 of stories in CEC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted November 29, 2005 Author Share Posted November 29, 2005 cool, thanks, sorry about the delay, but ill start the next chap tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 1, 2005 Author Share Posted December 1, 2005 the chapter will be posted tomorrow, promise, i have to go out today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 1, 2005 Share Posted December 1, 2005 Oooooo!!!!! Going out, eh? With who? Tara????? Can't wait for the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 2, 2005 Author Share Posted December 2, 2005 :¬: dumb joke. go out shopping for some jackets, since winter is coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 2, 2005 Author Share Posted December 2, 2005 THIRTEEN With the Pantry stocked with healthy food, The Jedi Masters took off an rose high vertically till they were above the Upper City levels, then Obi Wan opened the throttle wide and the ship, nicknamed the Last Strike, blasted into space. A few minutes later, it went into Hyperdrive. Five hours later, space rippled in front of Coruscant and the Strike exited Hyperspace and headed for the traffic channels. As they approached a huge ship, Obi Wan was very careful to stay in its sensor shadow. He directed the ship under the freighter and maintained its same velocity. Once they were in the atmosphere, Obi Wan jerked the nose away and flew off into one of the airspeeder currents. After a few minutes, they approached the Emperor’s Palace, formerly the Galactic Senate headquarters, now redesigned. “Stop Palpatine, I will,” said Yoda. “Stop Vader, Master Obi Wan must.” Obi Wan nodded. “I will search for Tara,” said Mace. “I’ll rendezvous with you in the hangars.” The plan of action was settled, the ship landed in the Visitors Bay for those who sought an audience with the Emperor. They called for the elevator and stopped at corresponding floors. Obi Wan: Vader’s personal Chambers, Level 97. Mace: Prison cells, Level 89. Yoda: Emperor’s Chambers, Level 100. Mace was dropped off first; he exited not knowing where or how to look. He went to the computer terminal and was about to begin typing when, “Hey, you there, this level is for authorized personnel only. Do you have your papers?” a Mark XII Assassin Droid demanded. Mace thought, ‘Ah, what the hell.’ and, with one stroke, took of the droid’s head with the blade of his now ignited saber. Not bothering with the panel, he plunged the lightsaber blade into the door’s heavy, titanium-plated alloy and easily cut a circular opening. Using the Force to gently lower the piece to the ground, he stepped through the hatch. “Master Windu,” a female voice said from nearby. “What an unpleasant surprise.” Mace tuned to his left and saw his student, Tara, standing a few paces away, a red lightsaber held in her hand. ************************************************************************ Obi Wan got off in a similar state of confusion as that of Mace’s. He walked pointlessly looking for a sign or arrow which led to the Dark Lord’s Chambers. Finally, he saw a sign bearing the words ‘Authorization needed to pass beyond’ and walked up to the booth. Without speaking, he beheaded the security trooper before it could react and activated the automated door mechanisms with the Force. He walked ahead and spotted his former student standing with his back turned towards him. “We meet yet again, my old Master.” Vader said. “I hope this meeting goes out well.” replied Obi Wan. Vader turned. ************************************************************************ Yoda got off on the topmost floor in, unlike his other two companions, a state of fierce determination, which was partly because he had a huge sign pointing out the right direction for him. He hid behind a corner and obstructed the guards’ breathing passages with the Force. Five minutes later, he strolled calmly into Palpatine’s Office area where the Emperor sat. A newly constructed lightsaber appeared out of his cloak sleeve. “Master Yoda, I have been expecting you.” Palpatine said jovially as he ignited the blade. “My clones were never able to recover your body and I knew that a mere fall would never kill you. This time, I will let my lightsaber do the job.” “The pleasure, you will never receive, my Lord” Yoda replied and settled in a battle stance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir-Vlada Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 Excellent. But this is a bit rushed in my opinion, but still good. for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 2, 2005 Author Share Posted December 2, 2005 ah, well, i had a promise to keep anyway, i think it would be better for three battles to begin in one chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 :¬: dumb joke. go out shopping for some jackets, since winter is coming. I try my best Ah, what the hell First Obi-Wan, now Mace? Soon Yoda will be cussing people out Good job on the chapter though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Skywalker Posted December 2, 2005 Share Posted December 2, 2005 i like this if they bring justice to the galaxy will the fanfic end? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 3, 2005 Author Share Posted December 3, 2005 wait and see @JK707: got the sig working i see. take my advice, read a joke book :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 3, 2005 Author Share Posted December 3, 2005 FOURTEEN “Tara?” Mace asked incredulously. The pupil he had trained to go against the Dark Side, the pupil who had never shown a bit of anger of fury on her face ever was now standing on front of him. Or so he thought. “No, ‘Master’.” she replied. “The real Tara would not turn to the Dark Side. I am her clone right to the midi chlorian. Your student is now a template for the Emperor’s new Sith Lord army. I am their prototype and have been promised high ranks in the army if I destroyed you.” “Don’t waste your time, tell me where she is.” “She is presently in the Prison Cells behind me. But you will never reach there in one piece.” “We shall see.” Mace used the Force to push him forward so hard that he surprised even himself. Skidding to a halt beside the clone, he swung his saber in a backhand sweep. The clone ducked and plunged her saber forward towards Mace’s stomach. Mace side-stepped the blow and brought his saber up, knocking the lightsaber out of the clone’s hands. She was not bluffing, however, about being Tara’s clone. She jumped back from Mace’s swinging blade with a back flip and called her lightsaber to herself. Mace did not become a Master for nothing, though. As the deactivated hilt flew past him, he sliced it in two and turned to face the clone. She raised her hands. “I give,” she said. Mace, suspecting a trap somewhere, did not switch off his blade. The clone put the hands on the back of her head; and drew out two Sith AA 25 Assassin Pistols. Quick as lightning, she fired off four shots, and just as quick, Mace deflected them back into the clone’s torso. “Blasters are the most useless things I’ve ever seen,” mumbled Mace. He went into the inner cell area and scanned the cells. He soon located the one containing Tara and went up to it. “Master,” she exclaimed. “Thank goodness, get me out.” Mace nodded and sliced the control panel of the cell. The circuitry sparked and the forcefield died. “Where to?” Tara asked. “We need to help Yoda.” Mace replied. “Where is your lightsaber?” “The Assassin Droid at the entrance has it.” Mace nodded and they left. Tara called her lightsaber to her as she walked out of the prison cell area. The entered the turbolift and requested the 100th level. The elevator shot up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted December 3, 2005 Share Posted December 3, 2005 +10 cool points for working clones in there, and for Mace Windu purple-saberness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir-Vlada Posted December 3, 2005 Share Posted December 3, 2005 I think that this is excellent. Although the Clone thing didn't really make sense to me IMHO; but maybe I'm just stupid that's all. for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Skywalker Posted December 4, 2005 Share Posted December 4, 2005 wicked i wasnt expecting clones why aint my fanfic in your sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just joking:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 5, 2005 Share Posted December 5, 2005 wicked i wasnt expecting clones why aint my fanfic in your sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just joking:) You have to bully him Good work, I wasn't expecting clones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 5, 2005 Author Share Posted December 5, 2005 if you bully me, ill use the special privilege known as "report bad post" anyway, in time dude, im recommending what i think are great fics. lemme just see some more and Vlad, heres the 'behind the scenes' stuff: Vader told the emp that tara was very strong in the force and could become a great asset but she did not turn, so they locked her up, took some of her DNA samples and made clones of her to make a jedi army. if you still dont understand, i dunno what to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 6, 2005 Author Share Posted December 6, 2005 ok, make that a sith army. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- FIFTEEN Vader and Obi Wan circled each other like wild animals engaged in a duel. Suddenly, Vader lunged forward with his lightsaber pointing at Obi Wan’s chest. Obi Wan jumped over the blade and landed behind Vader. Wasting no time, he swiped his saber in a backhand sweep aiming for Vader’s neck. Bringing his saber around, he barely blocked the blow and stepped back. “You would be wise to accept your fate and not fight it.” Vader said. “That depends on what my fate is, doesn’t it?” Obi Wan said. Vader launched into a dangerous flurry of attacks, advancing on Obi Wan, who was merely deflecting the attacks and not fighting back. “Your fate is to die, old man.” Vader growled. “That’s what you said to me indirectly last time, and you had your legs and arm cut off.” Obi Wan commented. “That was then. This is the now. And the Darth Vader of now is much more…” “…Powerful than before. Yeah, yeah, I’ve heard the line. Why don’t you say something new for a change, Anakin?” “My name is Darth Vader!” Vader yelled and let loose his full fury into his sweeps with his blade. Obi Wan just stepped away from the cuts and jabbed the blade into Vader’s right calf. The prosthetics died and Vader now had only one leg to support him. He fought while standing precariously poised, looking for an opening. Finally, when Obi Wan lifted his blade over his head, Vader used the Force and pushed Obi Wan away from him. He Force-jumped to the nearest window and dropped to his knees. “I have to thank Grievous for this,” he said as he lay on all fours. He looked up and pressed a button on the panel near him. The floor around him began to move down. “You lose, Master Kenobi. This time for sure.” Vader said, swiping his lightsaber through the window, and vanished into the floor, where a sliding panel covered the opening. The window gave away and exploded into the lower pressure air outside. The air flooded out of the room and the air circulation units strained to support the room. Slowly, the level of air began to drop. Obi Wan, clutching a fixed chair desperately, drew a breath-mask from his pocket and put it on. He turned his focus to the shattered window and somewhat became the Force. He grabbed the air rushing out and held it in place and all the buffeting items dropped to the ground, including him. He got to his feet, still holding the air, brushed the front of his armor and walked back to the turbolift. The door opened and he saw Mace and Tara inside. “Talk about great timing,” said Tara. Obi Wan smiled and stepped in. “That boy has lost his creativity.” he mumbled sadly to Mace. “So has the Emperor,” Mace replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MdKnightR Posted December 6, 2005 Share Posted December 6, 2005 Wait a second...vacuum of space? I thought that they were on Coruscant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 6, 2005 Author Share Posted December 6, 2005 ooooooops!! s**t! thanks for that. im gonna kick myself in the pants till i die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 great fics *blushes* Great fic->Me? Not yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 7, 2005 Author Share Posted December 7, 2005 thats what you think. ask Vlad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir-Vlada Posted December 7, 2005 Share Posted December 7, 2005 thats what you think. ask Vlad He's right you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 9, 2005 Author Share Posted December 9, 2005 SIXTEEN Yoda jumped above Palpatine’s blade and ducked to the side. He swirled around like a demented top and slashed viciously at Palpatine. The Dark Emperor stepped back and raised his blade and brought it down. Yoda dropped and rolled to the side and spin-jumped back up. He launched into a flurry of swipes and feints at Palpatine, not allowing the Sith Lord to even jab at Yoda. Suddenly, the second elevator hissed open and Vader jumped at Yoda in a snap. The Grand Master of the Jedi Order jumped forward seven meters and turned, waiting. Palpatine and his apprentice turned to face him, lightsabers held in front of them. The main elevator doors flew open and the three remaining Jedi burst into the room and targeted the Emperor at once. Tara went for Vader, who seemed to have repaired his calf prosthetics before coming. The Jedi Masters were hounding Palpatine. The Emperor ran to his desk and slapped a button. A side door slid open and a whole squad of Elite Stormtrooper bodyguards flooded out, the business ends of their blaster cannons blaring. Yoda just ignored them and continued fighting Palpatine. Mace also did likewise. Obi Wan, however, turned and shoved the troops away. He turned back; and immediately ducked to avoid being decapitated by Vader’s blade. Tara swiped from behind but Vader jumped up and landed behind Obi Wan. Palpatine decided it was time to help Vader and pushed Yoda away. He Force-jumped behind Tara and raised his blade. Tara turned. Too late. Palpatine’s blade slashed through Tara’s stomach and the Jedi Knight fell to the ground. At this point, Obi Wan and Mace, shocked by Palpatine’s move, used the Force and pushed him away simultaneously. The Dark Emperor flew across the room. Just as they were readying themselves to jump to their target, the door slid open and half a dozen Tara clones rushed in. Given the real Jedi’s affinity to the Force, they realized that the odds were heavily against them. Yoda took a ginormous leap over everything and landed just before the elevator doors. There, he hurriedly set a fragmentation mine and beckoned to the remaining Jedi. Mace levitated Tara’s limp body across the room to the elevator’s now open doors, then he and Obi Wan jumped as one over the mine into the elevator. Yoda slapped the panel and the doors whirred shut. The elevator shot down, its passengers doubled over panting for breath. At the 20th level, Hangar Bays, they were greeted, unfortunately, by another squad of troops, this time Storm Commandos. They rushed out and ran around pell-mell towards the Strike. They jumped in and Mace rushed to the cockpit, engaged the engines and took the ship out of the madhouse. As they shot into Hyperspace, Yoda shook his head sadly. “Gone, she is,” he said, referring to Tara, who was lying in the medbay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 9, 2005 Author Share Posted December 9, 2005 sorry its a bit short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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