JediKnight707 Posted November 16, 2005 Author Posted November 16, 2005 Added a little part (sorry ForceFightWMe12 I kinda stole a leaf from your your book)
Hallucination Posted November 16, 2005 Posted November 16, 2005 Its good, but unfortunatly you have commited blashpemy to sci-fi: you used the Imperial System! (All sci-fi is metric)
John Skywalker Posted November 16, 2005 Posted November 16, 2005 keep it up jedi knight! can you do the next chapter in 30 seconds:)
JediKnight707 Posted November 17, 2005 Author Posted November 17, 2005 What? Well don't you think that if you saw your love of your life get shot by somebody, you'd feel just a tad bit pissed?
JediKnight707 Posted November 17, 2005 Author Posted November 17, 2005 Added a little. I gotta stop with all this romance. Anyway, update should be soon
Vladimir-Vlada Posted November 17, 2005 Posted November 17, 2005 Well don't you think that if you saw your love of your life get shot by somebody, you'd feel just a tad bit pissed? Well yes, but I wouldn't feel hot anger, I would be pissed off.
RC-1162 Posted November 17, 2005 Posted November 17, 2005 oh suuuuure, great work ,BTW JK 707, cant wait for the new chapter. though, i think Atton's no sould be just a NO! instead of a cheesy, sith style OH NOOOOOO!
Hallucination Posted November 18, 2005 Posted November 18, 2005 Just read the update, can't wait to see what is gonna happen
JediKnight707 Posted November 18, 2005 Author Posted November 18, 2005 oh suuuuure, great work ,BTW JK 707, cant wait for the new chapter. though, i think Atton's no sould be just a NO! instead of a cheesy, sith style OH NOOOOOO! Meh. I like it better with the cliche.
JediKnight707 Posted November 21, 2005 Author Posted November 21, 2005 I'm not like trying to insult you, I just think that if I put 'NO!' it would be over in a few nano-seconds, but if I put 'NOOOOOOOO!!!!' then it kinda gives it the feeling
RC-1162 Posted November 22, 2005 Posted November 22, 2005 yeah but when you read it, it looks like its supposed to be pronounced as MOOO! <= the cow's sound
Vladimir-Vlada Posted November 22, 2005 Posted November 22, 2005 i demand you delete that right away I apologise. That was both childish and stupid. I promise that I won't make another joke like that.
JediKnight707 Posted November 23, 2005 Author Posted November 23, 2005 Should have the update pretty soon, but 8th grade is taxing.
Vladimir-Vlada Posted November 23, 2005 Posted November 23, 2005 ^^^^ Not as much as the 7th grade. * Pauses and shakes his head slowly thinking of the bad memories from the 7th grade...* I'll try to finish the first chapter of my own... But school is very demanding (I wrote 14 A4 pages and the space battle isn't over yet![The Space battle is supposed to be the minority of that chapter... But it didn't turn out to be as short as I expected])
RC-1162 Posted November 24, 2005 Posted November 24, 2005 you can just say that some unknown common enemy planted bombs on all of the ships and detonated them at one time, space battle over! :D
JediKnight707 Posted November 26, 2005 Author Posted November 26, 2005 Well this kinda (OK really) sucks. My computer just got wiped and I didn't get to save my work So, the update should be slightly delyaed now. Sorry
JediKnight707 Posted November 30, 2005 Author Posted November 30, 2005 Its here!!!!!!! The update is here!!!!!!!!! I know all of you were just dying!!!!! Added it to the.....other part... Really sorry it took me so long
Vladimir-Vlada Posted November 30, 2005 Posted November 30, 2005 Excellent work. “Whoo. I’m pooped. I’m gonna go to bed,” said Thomas, tiredly. Ohhhh... Did baby-nappy wet his wedgie-redgie? “Why, with you of course.” What? The other Jedi masters had de-ranked Vrook to padawan after they learned what a prick he had been to Thomas. LMAO!
JediKnight707 Posted December 1, 2005 Author Posted December 1, 2005 Thats not meant to be sexual if thats what your thinking, I just thought that they needed some alone time. You might see in the next update And thank you And I always thought that Vrook deserved to be a padawan EDIT: Removed that part about the whole sleeping thing, it just didn't come out the way I had thought it.
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