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[FIC]Return of the Exile


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oh suuuuure, great work ,BTW JK 707, cant wait for the new chapter. though, i think Atton's no sould be just a

NO!

instead of a cheesy, sith style

OH NOOOOOO!

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oh suuuuure, great work ,BTW JK 707, cant wait for the new chapter. though, i think Atton's no sould be just a

NO!

instead of a cheesy, sith style

OH NOOOOOO!

 

Meh. I like it better with the cliche. :)

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^^^^

Not as much as the 7th grade.

* Pauses and shakes his head slowly thinking of the bad memories from the 7th grade...*

I'll try to finish the first chapter of my own... But school is very demanding (I wrote 14 A4 pages and the space battle isn't over yet![The Space battle is supposed to be the minority of that chapter... But it didn't turn out to be as short as I expected])

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Excellent work.

 

“Whoo. I’m pooped. I’m gonna go to bed,” said Thomas, tiredly.

Ohhhh... Did baby-nappy wet his wedgie-redgie? :p:D

 

“Why, with you of course.”

What?

 

The other Jedi masters had de-ranked Vrook to padawan after they learned what a prick he had been to Thomas.

LMAO!

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Thats not meant to be sexual if thats what your thinking, I just thought that they needed some alone time. You might see in the next update :) And thank you :) And I always thought that Vrook deserved to be a padawan :D

 

EDIT: Removed that part about the whole sleeping thing, it just didn't come out the way I had thought it.

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