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It's by Robert Frost, Nothing Gold Can Stay, which I got from The Outsiders

I knew it! I had to read that book last year for English. To bad that your fic is done. So about this sequel...;).

@RC: Your fic won't reign supreme because....

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everyone in this forum except for me and Mach are horny 13-year-old boysI've been writing a fic for the last little while, and that will be supreme!!MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

 

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I knew it! I had to read that book last year for English. To bad that your fic is done. So about this sequel...;).

@RC: Your fic won't reign supreme because....

>_>

<_<

 

everyone in this forum except for me and Mach are horny 13-year-old boysI've been writing a fic for the last little while, and that will be supreme!!MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

 

>_>

 

8th grade right?

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Sorry about resurrecting an old, long dead Thread. I fancied reading a Fic from the year of 2005 (Which was before I joined) and since Jedi_Knight_707 was a favourite Writer of mine, I decided to read his first ever Fic. It is very good and I like the humour, Darth Rexes, etc. It needs improving with spacing between dialogue, etc, but it is still good. Jedi_Knight_707, if you can get this in the Jedi Archives, that would be great. I'll have to read the Sequel, The Destruction of the Sith, when I have time.

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Well, thanks! I know that it needs some definite improvment, but it was my first :) I plan on putting it in the archives, but I a) don't really know how (I mean, I know that you put [FIN] and all that, but I'm not sure how to post my chapters and such) and b) am working on a new, more improved version. It's going to keep the same storyline, but use everything I've learned. When I first started, that was literally my first attempt at writing anything besides essays, so I had no real idea how to keep a story going. I also used to just make it all up as I typed it, which I have found, makes a story lack.

 

EDIT: Also, don't read the sequel :xp: I think its really bad :( Especially the ending. Bah! humbug to that ending :)

 

Instructions for getting a thread posted in the Jedi Archives are here. What I did was open 2 tabs in firefox (or 2 windows)--one with my new FIN thread and one with my fic. I went to each chapter in my fic, hit 'edit post', and copied everything there (so formatting is retained). Then I pasted in the 'reply' window on the FIN thread and posted it. Each of my chapters got a separate post, though you don't have to do that if you don't want to--you can consolidate several chapters into 1 post if you want. Hope that helps. --Jae

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Yeah, I was really inexpeirenced back in 7th grade. I'm not sure how often I'm going to update this story, but I hope to be done with it by the end of the summer, so ballpark the ending coming sometime around September.

 

As for a new story? Don't know about that! Not for awhile anyway. I'm too scared that I won't be able to finish it, or keep it going. But, who knows what the future may bring :D

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Why do you think I wanted to re-write this story? Nostalgia is over whelming me right now...

 

I remember the days when I first posted this story, when Plight of Darkness had 1,000 views, and there were only 2 pages of stories. Good times! The times when someone could have the time to read every story and write a good review :D

 

When there was no Jedi Archives, Outer Rim Territories, Resource Center and Tales from Jayvar's Cantina.

 

When there wasn't fifteen stickies :)

 

Aww, those were the days right?

 

EDIT: And when you saw that you had a post from Hall meant that you had a spelling mistake in your story. What happened to Hall's pro spelling fixer job?!

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Guess what? I'm finished with another chapter :) Enjoy! Criticism (or praise) is always good.

 

EDIT: And, also, I'm not sure how much of the story will make sense after the first two chapters, so if you're a first time reader, and not familiar with the story, my advice would be to not read any of the rest. :) But, maybe you can get past the crappy writing. Up to you.

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Was bored and looking at fan-fics, stumbled across your masterpiece, and it is and anyone who think otherwise....well I don't think that much of them.Got me hooked from chapter 1.Love Visas and Atton together AND definately loved Vrook's demotion ( I always hated that character so I let out a sadistic laugh when that happened.)Keep on with the greatness and a sequel( YES!) gonna go look 4 it now.

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