RC-1162 Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 nope. what, is it from another song? or is ti from your grammar text book ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 It's by Robert Frost, Nothing Gold Can Stay, which I got from The Outsiders. I had to cut out a line, cuz it said 'So Eden sank to grief' and I don't think that the Bible is popular in the Star Wars galaxy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 It's by Robert Frost, Nothing Gold Can Stay, which I got from The Outsiders I knew it! I had to read that book last year for English. To bad that your fic is done. So about this sequel.... @RC: Your fic won't reign supreme because.... >_> <_< everyone in this forum except for me and Mach are horny 13-year-old boysI've been writing a fic for the last little while, and that will be supreme!!MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 I knew it! I had to read that book last year for English. To bad that your fic is done. So about this sequel.... @RC: Your fic won't reign supreme because.... >_> <_< everyone in this forum except for me and Mach are horny 13-year-old boysI've been writing a fic for the last little while, and that will be supreme!!MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! >_> 8th grade right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 @Hall, i still call you an a$$ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 @Hall, i still call you an a$$ :nod: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted December 28, 2005 Share Posted December 28, 2005 8th grade right? Indeed. @Hall, I still call you an a$$ Capitalized! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 I'm gonna post my new Fic soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kotor_freak Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 WOW! man that seriously rocked!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait if your writing a sequel. I liked the whole vrook deranked to padawan thing, he so deserved it! Honestly i think you should make that into a book or somethin but if not that still made my day!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted February 14, 2006 Author Share Posted February 14, 2006 ummm thanks man! you know that there is a sequel? Right here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted September 2, 2006 Share Posted September 2, 2006 Sorry about resurrecting an old, long dead Thread. I fancied reading a Fic from the year of 2005 (Which was before I joined) and since Jedi_Knight_707 was a favourite Writer of mine, I decided to read his first ever Fic. It is very good and I like the humour, Darth Rexes, etc. It needs improving with spacing between dialogue, etc, but it is still good. Jedi_Knight_707, if you can get this in the Jedi Archives, that would be great. I'll have to read the Sequel, The Destruction of the Sith, when I have time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted September 3, 2006 Author Share Posted September 3, 2006 Well, thanks! I know that it needs some definite improvment, but it was my first I plan on putting it in the archives, but I a) don't really know how (I mean, I know that you put [FIN] and all that, but I'm not sure how to post my chapters and such) and b) am working on a new, more improved version. It's going to keep the same storyline, but use everything I've learned. When I first started, that was literally my first attempt at writing anything besides essays, so I had no real idea how to keep a story going. I also used to just make it all up as I typed it, which I have found, makes a story lack. EDIT: Also, don't read the sequel I think its really bad Especially the ending. Bah! humbug to that ending Instructions for getting a thread posted in the Jedi Archives are here. What I did was open 2 tabs in firefox (or 2 windows)--one with my new FIN thread and one with my fic. I went to each chapter in my fic, hit 'edit post', and copied everything there (so formatting is retained). Then I pasted in the 'reply' window on the FIN thread and posted it. Each of my chapters got a separate post, though you don't have to do that if you don't want to--you can consolidate several chapters into 1 post if you want. Hope that helps. --Jae Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthDani23 Posted October 10, 2006 Share Posted October 10, 2006 That was soooo sad*sniffle*.......... but it was sweet, awsome job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 25, 2007 Author Share Posted June 25, 2007 The first chapter has been re-written! I hope you like the changes I made. More to come, for sure. Read the paragraph I wrote and it should explain it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 26, 2007 Share Posted June 26, 2007 Nice! I like! I can see the difference in quality between the first and second chapters, great to have you back, JK. Hope to see a brand new fic sometime soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 27, 2007 Author Share Posted June 27, 2007 Yeah, I was really inexpeirenced back in 7th grade. I'm not sure how often I'm going to update this story, but I hope to be done with it by the end of the summer, so ballpark the ending coming sometime around September. As for a new story? Don't know about that! Not for awhile anyway. I'm too scared that I won't be able to finish it, or keep it going. But, who knows what the future may bring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 27, 2007 Share Posted June 27, 2007 Good edits so far JK_707. I have one question though. Will you rewrite The Destruction of the Sith afterwards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 27, 2007 Author Share Posted June 27, 2007 Possibly, but I've hated that story since I finished it. So if I do re-write it it'll be a total re-write, with a new plot and everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 27, 2007 Share Posted June 27, 2007 Well, good luck with everything, JK. *sigh* Remember the old days when we were the tops of CEC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 27, 2007 Author Share Posted June 27, 2007 Why do you think I wanted to re-write this story? Nostalgia is over whelming me right now... I remember the days when I first posted this story, when Plight of Darkness had 1,000 views, and there were only 2 pages of stories. Good times! The times when someone could have the time to read every story and write a good review When there was no Jedi Archives, Outer Rim Territories, Resource Center and Tales from Jayvar's Cantina. When there wasn't fifteen stickies Aww, those were the days right? EDIT: And when you saw that you had a post from Hall meant that you had a spelling mistake in your story. What happened to Hall's pro spelling fixer job?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 I think its the result of the tons of new fics that have come up. He doesnt have time to nitpick all of them . J/k hall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 28, 2007 Author Share Posted June 28, 2007 Apparently. I'm dissapointed in Hall's lack of concern for our spelling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted July 19, 2007 Author Share Posted July 19, 2007 Guess what? I'm finished with another chapter Enjoy! Criticism (or praise) is always good. EDIT: And, also, I'm not sure how much of the story will make sense after the first two chapters, so if you're a first time reader, and not familiar with the story, my advice would be to not read any of the rest. But, maybe you can get past the crappy writing. Up to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empress Padme Posted July 19, 2007 Share Posted July 19, 2007 Was bored and looking at fan-fics, stumbled across your masterpiece, and it is and anyone who think otherwise....well I don't think that much of them.Got me hooked from chapter 1.Love Visas and Atton together AND definately loved Vrook's demotion ( I always hated that character so I let out a sadistic laugh when that happened.)Keep on with the greatness and a sequel( YES!) gonna go look 4 it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted July 19, 2007 Author Share Posted July 19, 2007 Thank you very much But I've disowned the sequel. Some liked it, personally, I hate it. To each their own, however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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