Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 23, 2002 Share Posted January 23, 2002 well this is a new poem made by myself hope you like it obviuosly is in spanish so i hope i make a good translation /*/*//**/*/*/*/*/*//* Alone, powerless The time goes on and i dont remember who i am... the solitude is my absurd companion and only tells me and remember my fear. Why? Why i can know who I am ? I want to go away from the unknown. I feel how the cold sweat runs over my forehead i feel how the tears cut my cheeks i feel the cold hand of the solitude supporting in my shoulder. Im scared. No one can remember me? no one can tell me who i am? Im really alone? Im scared. Where are you? where i am? Who i am? Help me. */*/*/*/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devil Doll Posted January 23, 2002 Share Posted January 23, 2002 I really love all your poems, sad, but it´s your kind of senses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 23, 2002 Author Share Posted January 23, 2002 thanx my love... well you know me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainRAVE Posted January 23, 2002 Share Posted January 23, 2002 That is actually pretty good.....even though it doesnt make sense, but then, what poems do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 23, 2002 Author Share Posted January 23, 2002 why you say that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redwing Posted January 24, 2002 Share Posted January 24, 2002 O.o!!!! That's a really sad poem...but really good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LQ. Posted January 24, 2002 Share Posted January 24, 2002 *has goosebumps* That's...man...i can't think of any words to describe it DSS. Powerful is one though. Good job my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle d'Tana Posted January 24, 2002 Share Posted January 24, 2002 Sad, but still good! You're a great poem sad... :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 24, 2002 Author Share Posted January 24, 2002 im a poem? jejeje thanx for your words ill keep trying better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainRAVE Posted January 24, 2002 Share Posted January 24, 2002 How can you be a poem?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 25, 2002 Author Share Posted January 25, 2002 Originally posted by Kyle d'Tana Sad, but still good! You're a great poem sad... :D this is why i wonder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvilleApplePie Posted January 25, 2002 Share Posted January 25, 2002 Originally posted by Dark Sad Shadow this is why i wonder lmao I think he meant poet...which is true, you are very good at writing poetry. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynk Former Posted January 25, 2002 Share Posted January 25, 2002 Hmmmmm a poembeing.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wraith 8 Posted January 25, 2002 Share Posted January 25, 2002 hmmm,... a dark sad poem hmmmm dark sad poetry....hmmmmmm oh well *shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 25, 2002 Author Share Posted January 25, 2002 thanx guys and my lady well... i dont know, like i said i feel what i write, its like the pen is possesing me but i like how its feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiran Halcyon Posted January 27, 2002 Share Posted January 27, 2002 Fear Fear attracts the fearful, the strong, the weak, the innocent, fear is my ally... - Darth Maul TPM TV commercial "one fear" Track 33- Duel of the Fates (dialogue version) - Original motion picture soundtrack TPM the ultimate edition. Poor Maul - did you realised that he speaked more in the TV commercial than in the movie? (Even the voice isn't Ray Park's) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 27, 2002 Author Share Posted January 27, 2002 havent noticed that i only remember: yes my master jhejajaj Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainRAVE Posted January 27, 2002 Share Posted January 27, 2002 Originally posted by Keiran_Halcyon Fear Fear attracts the fearful, the strong, the weak, the innocent, fear is my ally... - Darth Maul TPM TV commercial "one fear" Track 33- Duel of the Fates (dialogue version) - Original motion picture soundtrack TPM the ultimate edition. Poor Maul - did you realised that he speaked more in the TV commercial than in the movie? (Even the voice isn't Ray Park's) Yea, you only got those in America, but I downloaded them from the star wars site.......they showed more of the film that the trailers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiran Halcyon Posted January 27, 2002 Share Posted January 27, 2002 well In fact he says more dialogue: - Tatooine is harsly* populated, (my master) it will be not difficult to find them... - At last we will reveal ourselves to the Jedi, at last we'll have revenge... - Yes, my master... - Mmmm.....mrrnn....mrrrrrr - During the battle with the Jedi - HUmmmphhh............*clong* (his head hits the wall of the pit) How bad I am, poor Maul *I don't know if its this word (can it be hastly?) Tell me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainRAVE Posted January 27, 2002 Share Posted January 27, 2002 What he does say always sounds real cool though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redwing Posted January 28, 2002 Share Posted January 28, 2002 FYI "sparsely" not "harshly" "Tatooine is sparsely populated. If the trace was correct I shall find them quickly, Master." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiran Halcyon Posted January 28, 2002 Share Posted January 28, 2002 :DThanks:D No more mistakes when i buy the DVD (---->subtitles ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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