Final Warrior Posted January 16, 2005 Share Posted January 16, 2005 Quietstorm: Yes... I saw something, a quite long distance away. The gleam of a blaster. Be on your guard, they may be with or against us. OOC: It seems that I, too, have forgotten my ship specifications. Watcher Light Battle Cruiser Weapons 8 Quadlaser mounts (Usually computer-manned) 5 Ion Turrets 10 light missle launchers 5 heavy missle launchers 4 proton torpedo ports 4 hidden prton torpedo ports 10 mine layers Reinforced Quadranium and Diatium Capital Ship-class armor Modified Piloting systems 7 man crew, room for 10 passengers 4 storage cells 1 prison block 4 sleeping quarters _______________________________ Silver Eclipse Heavy Assault Fighter 8 cannon mounts w/ modrail technology so as to add/remove various cannons 3 proton torpedo tubes 2 mine layers 4 concussion missle launchers 2 ion cannons Astromech Driod port Basilisk War Droid Combat Systems Neural Pilot Interface (Allows for 'thought' piloting) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 17, 2005 Share Posted January 17, 2005 A blue flare hit lit up the clowdy day like a small blue sun. T'uune then typed a command into his wrist-mounted computer. A small countdown started on the right-hand side of his visor. 8:00 min. T'uune then activated his stealth field and slowly worked his way towards the Enclave. 6:27 min. The two Jedi he saw in his scope were still at the entrance. But T'uune didn't care. He had the ultimate defense for the powers the Jedi could weild. The two ysalamiri were still attached to the special feeding tube in his backpack, and they created a 20m wide area in which a force-sensitive user could no longer manipulate and use the Force. (for info, check here). Suddenly, the nearby Jedi could no longer feel the Force. Confused, they don't notice T'uune quietly slip past them. T'uune continued into the Enclave, and made his way to a tree in the middle. He jumped up to the branches and removed the ysalamiri from his pack. Moving very delicately, he removed the ysalamiri from their nutrient rich tubes and placed them on the tree branch. The two pregnant females immidiately dug their claws into the branches. T'uune then placed a small cloaking devise on each of them to further obstruct them from view. The Jedi had already begun to notice the gaping "hole" in the Force within the Enclave, and were now searching the area. 0:30 min. T'uune sat in the tree and waited. 0:04, 0:03, 0:02, 0:01, BOOOOOOMMMMMMMM!!!!! The blast echoed throughout the Enclave. T'uune quickly jumped down from the tree and steathily made his way out of the enclave. He headed outside and headed for the stream. Upon arrival, La'ola deactivated the cloaking field on the waiting speeder, and they left for a hidden location somewhere else on Dantooine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 17, 2005 Share Posted January 17, 2005 : Boom echoed through the enclave : Mark- "ok this is weird first the force goes then there is an explosion. somthing is very wrong : pulls out comlink : A-10, i want you to do a full scan for anything unusual. A few moments passed before A-10 responded. Mark- "ok, Quietstorm, A-10 says he sensed a speeder decloak after the explosion. i got the coordinate before it disappeared again. The jedi have enougth problems with the explosion so i dont think they will mind if we borrow a couple of speeder bikes" Walks over to the speeder bike garage and signals To Quietstorm to get on a differant bike near him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Warrior Posted January 17, 2005 Share Posted January 17, 2005 OOC: Isn't it kind of Godmoding when you dictate our character's actions and feelings? Wait, that's puppetmastering. Really, you should let us dictate our character's actions. Quietstorm is semi-exile: He has learned to live w/o the Force. Also, he's traveled a lot, and is familiar with ysalmiri. BoT: Quietstorm: Ysalmiri... *Quietstorm leaps onto a speederbike. He runs a manual diagnostics on it, making sure it is not booby-trapped.* Quietstorm: Ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 17, 2005 Share Posted January 17, 2005 Mark- we better get going. follow me. Mark turns some diles and then twists both handle bars for full acceleration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOutrider Posted January 17, 2005 Author Share Posted January 17, 2005 ((ooc: ill make little bits of dialog along the way of the story, and Char controlling is considered godmoding)) "Quietstorm, you must find Lord Revan, he is on the Endar Spire, he is destined to save us all, and if you ever wish to speak with me, go to the Republic Base on Manaan." Said Trent Trent had a plan, he would get Quietstorm and him to combine there powers. Then Quietstorm could lead the war against the Sith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 ((OCC: as this RP seems to be going somewhere I’ll give my character some depth by adding a bio for background info)) Mark Lightseeker Bio: Mark like many Jedi was given to the order at a very young age to the extent he can no longer remember his life before the order. His name is not even his first and was given to him by the Jedi when It was discovered that he continuously saw 'through the eyes of the force' (force sight) which was rear for a force user who was not blind. He grew up on Dantooine where he was told he had a great destiny, but no one knew what it was or where it would lead. On Dantooine he stayed until it was time for him to become a padawan under the Jedi knight Cin Tan. Cin tan was a kel dor who was considered un-orthodox by other Jedi. The knight often taught his padawan skills like how to hack security locks and computer terminals. Under the guidance of his master it soon became apparent that he was more than a fair pilot and was given an astromech droid (A-10) and a Jedi starfighter to help hone these abilities. When Revan began his war against the republic two of his dark Jedi assassins attacked Cin Tan and Mark while on Corillia having there fighters repaired. During the conflict Cin tan was struck down protecting his padawan and mark killed one of the assassins but the other managed to escape. For a while he tried to find the assassin who slayed his master but when he lost all trace of him he went back to Dantooine, Where it was decided although he was not ready to take the trials (due to his wanting of revenge), he also no longer needed a Master and was needed in the war against the sith. After Revan fell in battle the council assigned him to assist Edison Trent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 T'uune and La'ola arrived at a quaint house on the fields of Dantooine. T'uune did a quick scan of the area with different viewer modes on his visor to search for threats, but all he could find was the cloaked assassin droid that his employer was using for communication. T'uune and La'ola exited the speeder and walked over to the droid. The droid decloaked as they approached. T'uune-"The job is done." He pulled out the empty feeding tubes and displayed them to the droid as proof. Droid-"Very well. I will inform my master of your success. I have been instructed to now give you your payment." The droid nodded to his left, and several cloaking fields were deactivated that T'uune's visor could not detect. 10 battle droids, 25 fully armed troops, two tanks, and a transport ship were revealed. It was a mechanized Sith Company. All of the weapons in the company were trained on T'uune and La'ola. Sith Captain-(through a loudspeaker on a tank)"Put your hands behind your head and get on the ground, NOW!!!" T'uune thought quickly to himself and realized that it would be extremely improbable for them to escape. T'uune put his hands behind his head and motioned for La'ola to follow suit. As they got on the ground, the Sith troopers approached them cautiously. A hatch opened in one of the tanks, and a cloaked person stepped out. T'uune caught sight of a metallic gleam underneath the cloak, and instantly recognized it to be a lightsaber. Using the force, T'uune felt outwards and touched darkness. It was a dark jedi. Suddenly, he felt a burning pain inside his mind, and it was growing fast. He closed his eyes, and he could begin to feel flames rippling across his body. Opening them, he couldn't see any flames, but the pain was getting intense. La'ola began to scream in agony. The percieved fire was 'consuming' her alive. The pain continued to increase. His mind started to fill with images of people being burned alive. T'uune saw La'ola being burned alive in his mind and helplessly watched in both anger and horror. Suddenly, that image intensified. Now he began to writhe in both pain and rage. He wanted to do something, but he just felt so helpless to do anything about it. Then, blackness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 The speeder bikes (OCC: i don't think this is char controlling as we were both going to the same location anyway but if it is i am sorry and will change it if you pm me) comes to the top of a grassy cliff overlooking a small house on grassy fied a speeder was parked out the front. Mark layed at the edge of the cliff and saw a mandalorian and twi'lek standing near a droid when suddenly a moderate size of sith troops and droids decloaked along with two tanks. then the mandalorian and twi'lek fell to their knees as a dark jedi approached them. The jedi used the force to torture the two as they callapsed Mark contemplated if he should attack the sith force and help the two who were obviously in need. Mark (into com-link) - A10, i need you to autopilot to my location and have two concussion missile ready to fire on the sith tanks. :: puts down com-link and turns to face Quietstorm :: You can take anyone you want but the dark jedi, he's mine. Marks fighter flew over the top and fired two missiles at the tanks blowing them both up. This caused the sith force to scatter as mark activated his lightsabre and force jumped at the dark jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Warrior Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 *Quietstorm disregards the orders from Mark. and instead pilots his speederbike straight at the troops.. He primes a thermal detonator and applies it into a small wedge in between the bike's seat. Just as the speederbike is about to crash into a group of soldiers, Quietstorm leaps off, doing a backflip high through the air, landing with his sabers activated, and carves through two battle driods. He blasts the remaining ones with a Force Storm which, although it does not destroy them, severly damages and fuses much of their electronics. The thermal detonator goes off and destroys the bike, sendiing flames and shrapnel in all directions, injuring and killing some of the Sith.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 T'uune and La'ola instantly felt the pain subside, and T'uune was quick to jump to his feet. He noticed the two jedi attacking the Sith, and decided to make a break for it. The Sith soldiers never got a chance to disarm him, so T'uune pulled out his concussion rifle and fired a blast at the Sith guarding his speeder. The concussion blast hit the guard in the chest, ripping his torso open and tossing his body across the field like a rag-doll. La'ola had also gotten up and was using her repeating rifle to hold back the assassin droid by the house. T'uune grabbed her, and they jumped aboard the speeder. Without hesitating, La'ola grabbed the controls hit the accelerator. Two other battle droids got in their way, and they were thrown aside as the speeder slammed into them. T'uune fired one more quick blast at the assassin droid, destroying it. The speeder crested a hill and sped on towards Talarra's Fear, which was hidden in a remote area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOutrider Posted January 18, 2005 Author Share Posted January 18, 2005 Trent appeared in front of T'uune. He stared blankly at T'uune for a second. He then touched T'uunes hand. "Nice seeing you old friend, but there is no time, you must combine your powers with mine, you must save the galaxy." Said Trent He pulled out a golden amulet. Half of it was missing. It had a star on it. "Take this half and ill take the other, then we combine them, and combine eachothers powers, eachothers knowledge, eachothers size(you know what I mean)." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 18, 2005 Share Posted January 18, 2005 T'uune pulled his hand back from Trent, and his other hand instinctively rested on the hilt of his lightsaber. Anger flared in his mind. T'uune-(angrily)"Now why would I want save the galaxy? All that would do is reduce the number of heads I can collect, and that means less business, and that means less money. (pauses)To with the galaxy for all I care, as long as business doesn't drop. (slowly,but deliberately)Now, get out of my way, or you will become my business." T'uune pulls out his lightsaber and ignites it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOutrider Posted January 18, 2005 Author Share Posted January 18, 2005 "No, this isn't the T'uune I once knew, the T'uune that was my friend." Trent stopped "Very well, if it has to be this way it has to be this way, but you know I am stronger than ever as a force ghost." Trent pulled out a silver lightsaber. It was the glow of destiny. It was power of pure light. He ignited it. "I don't know when you got so evil." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 Mark flew down striking at the dark jedi as he raised his lightsaber to block in a lightsaber lock now mark began to feel the anger he once felt before surface but he no-longer cared all he wanted was to kill the dark jedi, as he wanted to kill them all. Mark- You are going to pay for your crimes Dark jedi- Not today child The sith acolite then used the force to push mark back. As he flew backwards in the air he managed to correct himself and flip back on to his feet. Mark then raised his saber above his right soldier and charges at the dark jedi and swung diagonally down only to be blocked once again a battle inssued with both members switching between an offensive and a defensive. until the pinultimate moment when mark kicked the dark jedi back the then thrusted his saber hand forward piersing the dark jedi's chest. Mark deactivated his light saber as the dark jedi fell on to his back. He walked over and knelled by the head of the dark jedi and removed the mask from his face. a look of distraught came across his face. Mark- Its not him. :: He looked around for the people his slayn opponant was torturing :: where have they gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 T'uune-"Evil?? Why am I suddenly evil? Because I've chosen to not save the galaxy? You must have forgotten my true motivations: my wife and money. Besides those things, I will do nothing unless the outcome will lead to one of those things. And saving the galaxy will lead to less money for me. (releasing his anger)Now, get out of my way or come with me. I have no desire to harm an old friend unless you force me to." T'uune deactivated his lightsaber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOutrider Posted January 19, 2005 Author Share Posted January 19, 2005 "I guess you care more about money than your wife, me, or the galaxy." "You know your wife will become a Twilek slave if you don't do this." Trent said with some anger He dissappeared(sp?). He appeared in front of the Talarra's Fear. He walked in, and saw what he was looking for. A envelope full of credits. Trent immediately seized the envelope and sliced it into pieces. He then started vandalizing the ship. He destroyed more credits and even sliced up the main console. Then once again. He disappeared. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Mark looked around and saw dead bodies of the sith soldiers and Quietstorm still fighting a few of them. He still felt the anger he felt from the duel and stood up to look for the Two he thought was involved with the explosion at the enclave. Knowing that quiet storm could proberly handel what was left of the sith he grabbed his speeder bike and speeded in the direction he thought they went. while on the bike he tried to shake off the festering anger he felt inside. He knew it could lead to the darkside which was the last thing he wanted as it would lead to what he hates... A Dark Jedi. He also could not give up his hatred for all dark jedi especially the one who killed his master years ago and still eludes him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 La'ola was shocked to hear the response from Trent, but knew that it would never be true. T'uune knew it as well: he would die fighting for her if anyone attempted to do so. La'ola could feel anger within her, and she pulled out her rifle and ran aboard to look for Trent. T'uune followed, with his lightsaber ready, but deactivated. La'ola looked at the damage inflicted on the ship, and became even more angry. All the work she had done to the ship, and now it was temporarily ruined by someone that was supposed to have been a friend. T'uune felt her rage, and instinctively became angered himself. He felt the darkness coming from the vandalized portions and realized that the vandalization was an act of rage. The darkside could still easily corrupt. Upon that realization, T'uune released his anger once again. There was no point in him being angry at nothing. La'ola was still quite angry herself, but T'uune walked over to her and tried to calm her down. T'uune- "Hey, calm down. He's not here." La'ola- "So I've realized. Stupid peice of . He destroyed the money and vandalized the place. I mean, just look at this panel!!! The bastard just had cut through all of that, and you remember how much time it had taken us to modify those parts. And how about that computer terminal over there? I don't even know how we're going to get this bucket of bolts off the ground." T'uune-(grabbing her by the shoulders)"Hey!! Just calm down. We've got a little bit of work to do to get this thing in shape. Don't worry about it. Everything will turn out just fine." La'ola- *sigh*(calmly)"Ya, I know. I just wish things hadn't worked out the way they did today. We did everything we were supposed to, then we get tortured for it?? Sorry, but that wasn't in the job description. Maybe we should just ruin whatever plan the guy had and point out the ysalimiri to the Jedi." T'uune- (with anger)"NO!! That is absolutely out of the question. The Jedi abandoned me, and they'd do it again if given the chance. I'm not going to take that kind of risk, and I'm not going to help those that refused to help me. You should know that by now." La'ola- "Fine, whatever. Lets just get this thing fixed up and get the out of here." With that, they began repairing the ship. Several hours later, T'uune was doing a run through on the outside of the ship to see if anything needed done out there. He looked at the horizen to see the sun beginning to set. La'ola walked up behind him and hugged him. T'uune affectionately grabbed one of her hands and continued to study the horizen. Of all the things in life that mattered most to him, T'uune knew that La'ola was the top priority in any situation, no matter what. T'uune turned around and returned the hug. With nothing else left to repair, they went back inside and decided to wait until morning to leave Dantooine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Marks bike sped into the night not knowing where he was really going, There was alot of dantooine to explore. He was about to give up when an odd blip came up on his radar it wasn't to far away so he desided to leave his bike and take the rest of the journey by foot. The walk ahloud (sp) him to collect his thoughts about the anger and hate he continuous the feel. How un-jedi like he thought to him self if the masters knew he would proberly be thrown out of the order, doughtful he had some great destiny that he didn't even really want. I'm not even that powerful and i haven't even taken the triles and i'm suppose to do somthing spectacula, Ha, I can't even resist the dark side that well. When the moon was at it highest he could see a ship on the horizon and knew thats what he was looking for. The ship appeared to be of mandalorian origin but it had obviously been modified, This made him absolutely positive that the owner was responsible for the explosion at the enclave. The owner was obviously a bounty hunter so he wondered if he should attempt to apprehend the owner as he was still weakend from his confrontation with the dark jedi and could easily be injured even killed or worse captured. That would be bad he could be sold to the sith then turned and become what he hates the most... a Dark Jedi. Anyhow he had to at least attach a tracking device to the ship so if they get away he can track them then apprehend them when is was stronger. He approached the ship quietly as not to alert the owner if he was inside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOutrider Posted January 20, 2005 Author Share Posted January 20, 2005 "Were all dead." Trent was talking to a republic soldier "Were losing the war, your plan what happened?" Asked the soldier Trent felt lots of anger. He remembered his fight with T'uune. He knew that the Sith, if they won the war, would immediately try to deplete all non humans. He decided there was only one more thing to do... Kill La'ola. He quickly appeared on Dantooine. He ran up the stairs to Talarra's Fear. It was nightime, they were still asleep. He walked in. Maybe if I vandalise the ship they will have no choice but to follow the plan. He snuck in. He walked over to T'uune and La'ola. He quickly knocked T'uune out by depleting his oxegen. Then he did the same to La'ola. He destroyed the ship once again. This time he dug his lightsaber into the engines. He also cut down the turret, and sliced the consoles. There was no way they could get this fixed thought Trent. He walked out into his old house on Dantooine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 As mark was placing his tracking device on the hull in a place he thought it would not be detected he felt a disturbanse a sudden increase in the force near the ship. He walked round to see what was causing it to find a force ghost walking into the ship. He followed to see the ghost knock out the two inhabitants, as the ghost turned around he saw that it was the man his mandate ordered him to follow but there was somthing differant from the man he met on the distant planet, it was Tainted by the darkside. The darkness became more apparant as the spirit of Edison Trent began to destroy the consoles and engines, but why would he be doing this to a mere bounty hunter and his slave (as it appeared to him as why else would a mandalorian be with a twi'lek female.) As trent left the ship Mark knew he had to save the twi'lek from her life of subjection. He left to get his boke and bring it to the fighter as the rescue would be easier if he could move her with speed. He parked His bike outside the modified mandalorian freighter and entered the ship again he quietly approached the twi'lek and reached down to pick her up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 T'uune couldn't focus. His mind jumped from different things. Darkness. He could see past bounties he had collected. His former Jedi master. La'ola. He tried to concentrate on that and somewhat succeeded. He began to remember the time they met, the time they escaped from Darth Revan's clutches. The time he swore an oath to protect her from all harm after she found out about her father. A man was reaching to pick her up. She wasn't breathing. T'uune realized that he was actually seeing this, and a rage came over him. He grabbed the man's neck with the Force and began to crush it. He reached down inside the man's body and began to cause muscle spasms inside of his lungs. He was Gripping him to death. For some odd reason, he just felt like he wasn't doing the right thing, so he released the man and pulled out his lightsaber. He activated it and placed the blade next to the man's throat. T'uune- "WHAT IN THE ARE YOU DOING TO MY WIFE?!?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 "WHAT IN THE ARE YOU DOING TO MY WIFE?!?" The man who awoke and just used the force to almost killed him said with the his lightsaber to marks throat. Mark was still weakened from the fight with the first dark Jedi now it appeared there is another. He knew he could not fight back as his inside were all most crushed by his new opponant. Mark- "I'm trying to save her from being a slave to you dark Jedi!" As he said those words he felt the dark taint swell inside him. He was weak from the multiple confrontations but he still tried to fight the darkness he became weaker and fainted from the internal struggle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted January 21, 2005 Share Posted January 21, 2005 T'uune- "Slave?? Dark Jedi?? (notices the man pass out) I'll deal with you soon enough." T'uune turned and looked at La'ola. She wasn't breathing. T'uune felt a pang of fear inside of him as he felt for a heartbeat. It was both weak and irregular. His anger was released, and T'uune began to concentrate on her. He felt her lungs. They seemed to be working fine. T'uune suddenly felt quite dizzy, and his vision was beginning to blur. Focusing in on the Force, he began to collect himself. He was being asphysciated by a lack of oxygen, as was La'ola. T'uune grabbed La'ola and dragged her into the hallway. He was stuggling to both breathe and walk. He stumbled his was to the outer hatch and opened it. Even the cool, night air couldn't fill his lungs, and he collapsed on the floor. His vision was continuing to blur, and now, it was going black. He was about to pass out. T'uune felt outwards with the Force towards the man. He had his own stuggle within him, but he could feel the man's lightsaber. Realizing the man was a Jedi, T'uune instilled as much of his life into the man as he could, healing the damage he had caused earlier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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