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@Emperor D--I suppose I could set it in that year, and just declare that Revan was off fighting something else when my little band was uncovering the plot. I'd have to think about how to work Revan in a new story. Of course, all I have at the moment is an idea, anyway. :)

 

It's quite likely that he was off fighting the Sith. They may have lost the Star Forge, their leader, and are fighting a civil war, but they still have all those ships and troops.

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@Jason--that's a pretty darn good imitation. :D

 

Thanks DarthRevan73. I'm trying to keep Jolee's 'voice' as close to the game as I can.

 

I went ahead and updated ch. 17 in this thread, too. I'm working on revising ch. 18 and 19. Hopefully 18 will be done soon--Emperor Devon's made some suggestions and I have to send it off to Jiara again to check over the changes I made.

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Yeah. I think I will save it on my jump ring and read it whenever I need a good laugh when I am feeling down. Seriously Jae, I think you've got the scoop on Jolee Bindo. My humor streak runs into making fun of the characters like my 'free food' line. :D

 

I loved that 'free food' line! :lol:

And I haven't forgotten about your story, either. I so need a Kirabaros fix.... :D

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You're welcome. Are you sending these to KFM? :)

 

Yep, they go up on KFM, too. I started posting there quite a while after starting here, so it's a lot farther behind than here. Plus, you both make me work harder on the revisions than I did on the original chapters so it takes longer. :xp: Not that I mind too much--they come out quite a bit better with that help, and since they've improved and I like improved anything better, I thought I'd post them here, too.

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Plus, you both make me work harder on the revisions than I did on the original chapters so it takes longer. :xp:

 

It's not my fault you don't know many stomachs a sarlacc has. Your chapters need work to fit perfectly into the established EU. :xp:

 

Not that I mind too much--they come out quite a bit better with that help, and since they've improved and I like improved anything better, I thought I'd post them here, too.

 

You have? I checked your thread in the Jedi Archives, and didn't see any recent editing dates. Unless you're posting it here, but IMO a thread without multiple pages and comments is easier to read. :)

 

Btw, have you edited chapters 18 and 19? I've not gotten any e-mails, but then again, that could be due to the endless tranquility and relaxation in your life. :D

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It's not my fault you don't know many stomachs a sarlacc has. Your chapters need work to fit perfectly into the established EU. :xp:
Well, maybe if Doubleday was actually into this thing I might worry about being retentive about the EU issues, but this is just for fun. Not that I don't mind the help, however, because I do very much. It's better to be accurate, or at least know where to bend/break the rules as unobtrusively as possible.

 

 

You have? I checked your thread in the Jedi Archives, and didn't see any recent editing dates. Unless you're posting it here, but IMO a thread without multiple pages and comments is easier to read. :)

 

Btw, have you edited chapters 18 and 19? I've not gotten any e-mails, but then again, that could be due to the endless tranquility and relaxation in your life. :D

I put chapter 18 up in both threads. I have to post 19, too, but I want to work on that a bit more. I worked on 20 but must have done that on paper, because I can't find it on my computer anywhere. Sigh, I'll have to do that revision over again, though it'll be better for the extra attention, since that's the chapter with the 'oh, so agonizingly close' (as cutmeister put it) almost-kiss, and I need to build the Jae/Roben/Talin emotional thing better.

 

"Endless tranquility and relaxation" :rofl::rofl::rofl:

What the heck is this 'relaxation' of which you speak? I am not familiar with this concept. :lol:

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Not that I don't mind the help, however, because I do very much. It's better to be accurate, or at least know where to bend/break the rules as unobtrusively as possible.

 

Accuracy aside, there's a lot of great stuff in the EU as well.

 

I have to post 19, too, but I want to work on that a bit more.

 

Considering I made 'a few' suggestions, I'd hope so. :xp:

 

I worked on 20 but must have done that on paper, because I can't find it on my computer anywhere.

 

Well, you'd have had to have typed it up anyway. At least this way Jiara (if she's not busy) and I can look at it. :)

 

"Endless tranquility and relaxation" :rofl::rofl::rofl:

What the heck is this 'relaxation' of which you speak? I am not familiar with this concept. :lol:

 

Gawsh, even as a student I'm familiar with this concept. :lol:

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Hey Jae, I sometimes read some of this Fic, when I'm bored and it is really good, reading it more than once. You should find Lucas and see if he would allow you to get it published. Anyway I was just wondering if you had the link of this Fic on kotorfanmedia. I want to see what anyone else had to say about your Fic. And if you have any other Fics there, please post the link. Thanks and I'm awaiting the Sequel.

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You should find Lucas and see if he would allow you to get it published.

 

That would be difficult. Mach wanted to publish some of his stuff, and was told he couldn't use any copyrighted SW terms in it (such as Jedi, Revan, lightsaber, etc). :)

 

Anyway I was just wondering if you had the link of this Fic on kotorfanmedia. I want to see what anyone else had to say about your Fic.

 

Since she's offline right now, here's a link. At KFM there aren't any organized threads for the fics to go in, so the closest thing is a collection of all the author's stories. :)

 

I'm awaiting the Sequel.

 

Given how you've put 'sequel' in capitals, I can tell. :p

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