[Fic] Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic III The Second Sith War

[Master Jimmy]

hit me about the mistakes, I want to improve on them

[Jason Skywalker]

*Hits Revanscool so he doesn't do any more mistakes*

 

I like the idea and liked the chapter. Now Revan rescues her, they escape, go to Coruscant, and have a war that lasts atleast 10 chapters. Want to see more.

[Master Jimmy]

*Hits Revanscool so he doesn't do any more mistakes*

 

I like the idea and liked the chapter. Now Revan rescues her, they escape, go to Coruscant, and have a war that lasts atleast 10 chapters. Want to see more.

heh heh, what I meant was tell me all of them. But thanks anyway.

[Master Jimmy]

"Jaden, Carth!" called Visas "Revan has left Malachor."

 

"That sure was fast! He must've not encountered the hell after all." answered Jaden.

 

"He cut it off from the Force, therefore killing it." explained Visas.

 

"It would've taken three Jedi to cut me off from the Force, and it takes a Jedi as strong as Revan to drain the one's who even tried." Jaden thought out loud.

 

"She didn't kill Vrook, wasn't strong enough for him." told Visas.

 

"Who gives a damn now?" asked Carth impatiently "Get the rest of the Jedi and we can start tracking Revan."

 

"Yes. Our apprentices have finished their training, they're fully fledged Jedi Knights now." Jaden walked over to the microphone to call the other Jedi to the hangar "Brianna, Atton, Mira, Mical, Dustil, Mikel, Emily, Zak, Jill, Jean, James, Logan, Vrook, Vandar." he called. All ran to the hangar to find Jaden. "We're going to find Revan, we owe him. He banded us as one, it's the least we can do."

 

"He defied us one to many times." told Vrook "We shouldn't help him."

 

"Whoever's with us, come, if not... Don't follow." ordered Jaden.

 

Everyone but Vrook went to go assist Revan. "Watch the acadamy." told Jaden.

 

"Whatever happens, stay with me. I'll protect you." James told to Jean. Jean kissed James.

 

 

The Ebon Hawk landed on Mustafar. "Statement: HK-47 is ready to KILL!"

 

"No you're not."

 

"Qu-"

 

"No, HK! I am going alone. This matter is personal."

 

"Irritated answer: Acknowledged."

 

"Good."

 

 

"Master, Revan has landed on Mustafar." told Plagueis.

 

"Good. Kill her." ordered Malus.

 

 

Revan ran through the lava refineries rooms and chambers frantically in search for his loved one, screaming "BASTILA! BASTILA!" Revan sensed that she was in greater danger every step he took. Revan paused his search for a while and tried to track her using the Force. He then knew the exact way to go. He followed more corridors and shortcuts through rooms. He sensed the Dark Side getting closer to her. In Bastila's prison chamber, a Sith Marauder came through the door and put a lightsaber to her belly. Bastila shut her eyes, bit her lip and prepared for the worst. To her surprise, the stab was inaccurate. To her surprise, her right chain was cut. To her surprise, the door was at the other end of the room. When the door fell, she saw crushed bones, a flattende fixture, blood and guts everywhere. Malus saw through a video camera, his assassin's failiure. He was angred and pushed a button on his desk. Revan walked into the room, the first thing he started looking for was: Bastila. Revan immediately ran over to Bastila to get the other chain cut. But when he was almost there, there were many bolts of electricity. Malus had one more trick up his sleeve for eroding Revan's will. Revan heard his wife's frantic cry for help. He looked around to see what he could do. Revan ingited his sabers and started walking into the electric field. He was unharmed, for his sabers absorbed the bolts. Revan cut Bastila's left chain and carried her out to safety. He put his finger on her neck to find a pulse. He found none. Revan stationed his hand over Bastila and began using Force Heal. Revan could feel her heart beating, but very slow and she wasn't breathing. Revan panicked and began performing CPR. "One-two-three-four-five-six-seven-eight-nine-ten." Revan said as he started pushing on her chest to get the air flowing. Revan began the mouth to mouth step. He began blowing air into her. To his surprise, her tongue shot up right into his mouth.

 

"I knew you would come for me." said Basitla in a raspy voice.

 

"I thought I lost you." whimpered Revan.

 

"Malus... He's coming. We must go." told Bastila.

 

"Yes. We'll get back to Coruscant. I'll make sure you get back to perfect health." replied Revan.

 

"We don't have time to leave. He has an army here."

 

"Then I'll meet them head on." told Revan.

 

"No... I'll fight with you." told Bastila.

 

"Look at yourself. You're in no condition to fight."

 

"I will fight with you. And for you. To whatever end." replied Bastila.

 

Revan sighed, reached into his cloak and pulled out one of his lightsabers and gave it to Bastila. Bastila took the saber and took a deep breath as well. Revan and Bastila quietly began to make their way out of the refinery.

 

 

Just coming out from hyperspase was Carth Onasi and Jaden Page, leading the newfound army to meet with Revan. "Okay blockade the planet." ordered Carth. The Republicans, the TSF forces and the Onderon Military formed a blockade around Mustafar. "Canderous, lead your men down there and raid the facility."

 

"With pleasure." replied Canderous.

 

"Zaalbar, you can go with them." told Carth.

 

"Yes sir." growled Zaalbar.

 

The Sith sent space ships to puncture the blocade so some could escape. They had little success.

 

 

Back on Mustafar, Revan continued to lead Bastila back to the Ebon Hawk, until their presence was detected. A small platoon of Sith caught up to them. Revan and Bastila ignited their Sabers and killed them all. "You know, every time I see, your battle skills get better." said Revan trying to keep Bastila's mind off of Malus' torture.

 

Revan led Bastila back to the Ebon Hawk. They were just about to get aboard, until they heard someone shout "Don't go anywhere Revan." that man was Calo.

 

"Why won't you die?" asked Revan.

 

"I'm gonna enjoy this."

 

"Your going to enjoy it on me." told a Mandalorian "Go, Go, get her out of here.

 

 

Revan took Bastila aboard the Ebon Hawk and fired her up. Canderous on the other hand had some old battles that needed winning. "So, Canderous. You're a Mandalore now." observed Calo.

 

"You could never beat me, you runt of a gikza. I'll make sure you don't multiply here." Canderous unsucessfully intimidated.

 

"Nice try." said Calo drawing his blasters. Canderous immediately raised his repeater and fired a flurry at him. Canderous walked over his burned body and kicked it into the lava.

 

 

Hours later, the battle was over. Revan told Carth that the rescue mission was a success. And that he was happy to see his old friend again, and how fast his padawans grew. Carth told Revan that two ships breached the blockade and that it might be Malus. Revan ordered them to return home, for everyone had a tough day.

[Diego Varen]

Good Chapter, but I thought it was quite fast.

[Jason Skywalker]

Yeah, liked it, although, the battle scenes were a bit fast.

[Master Jimmy]

Revan spent all of his time with Bastila the rescue misson on Mustafar. He wouldn't leave her alone, which started to irriate her a little bit. "We're on Coruscant, Revan. You don't have to watch over me every now and then." she told.

 

"Well I'm sorry for being protective." repleid Revan with a laugh.

 

"I already forgave you for that. You still have my love." reminded Bastila.

 

Revan notice Bastila working on a new lightsaber "I take it that Malus destroyed your other one."

 

"He did, I'm almost done this one." she said "I think that I've slowly began to follow you footsteps. I am walking your path as a Jedi Guardian."

 

"Well I did see improvement in your combat on Mustafar."

 

Bastila got up and ignited her new saber. Revan looked in awe to see her wife's talent. A bright Cyan light shone in their faces. Bastila turned it off and put it away. "Great work, my love." Revan complimented.

 

"Thank you." she replied.

 

 

Revan left to the council chamber to find Carth and Jaden staring out the window to the new army. "I have to admit, without your help, Bastila and I wouldn'tve walked out alive." Revan admitted "We emerged victorious."

 

"Malus lives." told Vandar walking in "Far from over this is. Begun the Second Sith War Has."

 

 

Malus fled to Korriban and was greeted by the overseer there. "Malus. Why is Plagueis not with you?" he asked.

 

"The coward fled in fear." Malus replied "When I said I'd kill him, I meant it."

 

"Well why are you here, my lord?" the overseer asked.

 

"I am here for the relics of old." told Malus.

 

"Ressurection in order?"

 

"We have begun a war and lost the first battle. I'm going to need liutenents."

 

"Yes master, I'll retrieve it now."

 

 

The overseer ran to the relic vault to grab the Sith relics. He immediatly ran back to them right to Malus. Malus took Relics and looked at The Pike Of Luyoni Skywalker. First Dark Jedi and trainer of Marka Ragnos. "Good. He'll be the first." he said.

 

 

Malus walked over to the largest tomb on Korriban, for it was the tomb of Luyoni Skywalker. Malus entered the tomb and stuck the pike into the tomb's altar. "Sith of the old, Lord of Foundation. Live again, I command you." chanted Malus. There was a big energy blast that shot Malus back against the wall. Then, from the tomb, arised the Lord of Foundation. Revan's second ansector.

 

"Who disturbs my rest?" Luyoni asked.

 

"I have come to return your pike, so you are in complete rest." explained Malus.

 

"My pike. Give it to me." he demanded.

 

"Ah ah ah. First you must do something for me first."

 

"What is it?" Luyoni asked.

 

"Bow down to me and call me master. I will give your pike back, but you must serve me." ordered Malus.

 

Luyoni bowed "Yes... Master." he growled.

 

"Good, I'll live up to my end, now you must live up to your second part. Serve me in the war which has came." Malus gave Luyoni his pike and he followed Malus out of the tomb.

 

 

Malus walked onto the tomb of Ajunta Pall, The Lord of Dispair. bribing his sword in exchange for his service.

 

 

Malus then waked to the tomb of his grandfather: Marka Ragnos. The Lord of Power. "Grandfather. I have your scepter. Please take it, and please help me."

 

"Grandson. I'll help you. Who is your enemy in the war that has come?" Marka asked.

 

"Revan. He has followed the ways of the light. And has a large army behind him."

 

"So is this why you wish to ressurect the Sith lords?" asked Marka

 

"Yes. Help me, with your scepter."

 

"Okay."

 

 

Malus then waked to the tomb of Naga Sadow, The Desiple of Power. Giving him his lightsaber and poison blade. For his service.

 

 

His journey led him to the tomb of Tulak Hord, The Lord of Combat. Promises of power were his modivation.

 

Malus' last destination was the long lost tomb of Ludo Kressh, The True Disiple of Power, in the Shyrack Caves. Malus walked the paths of Jaden Page. And found the tomb of Sadow's successor. He was pretty hard to sway. Malus lied that he wouldn't have to work with Sadow. But every promise to them was broken when they reached the great temple. Malus had corrupted their minds and bound their powers to him. Malus was now nearly unstoppable. Malus laughed in his success.

[Diego Varen]

Good Chapter, though it is short.

[Joss Kanubi]

great story, hope to see alot more

[Jason Skywalker]

Yeah, i liked it too, nice to see Marka deceive and corrupt those Siths.

[Master Jimmy]

It's Gan.. Marka is his grandfather.

[Master Jimmy]

"My liutenents. Take Freedon back from the realm of the damned. He shall join us." ordered Malus. Malus then turned to a fresh captive, her hands shackled, mouth gaged, eyes covered, and restricted from using the Force "Well, with you I won't get Revan, but I'll lure the pawns in. One by one."

 

Back on Coruscant, Revan had assembled a council meeting for discussion on a rescue mission. "We have sent one of us to examine the problems on Dxun, but that Jedi hasn't returned." explained Revan "It would take a shorter time to investgate on a moon so small. We need to send someone to do a rescue mission."

 

"But who?" asked Bastila.

 

"I'll go. And I'll take Mandalore with me." told Atton.

 

"All in favour?" asked Revan. Everyone else raised their hands. "Good. Atton will take Mandalore to go to Dxun to rescue Mira."

 

 

Canderous gathered his army and he was awaited by Atton on his stealthship: The Infiltrator. "Now don't get comfortable. This isn't a pleasure cruise."

 

"I don't think I've ever had a pleasure cruise in my whole pathetic life." replied Atton.

 

"Well as long as you know, then we won't have any problems. Muderer." taunted Canderous.

 

"Did that old bitch get to you? I admitted it to Jaden, so now it's over." Atton growled through his teeth.

 

"No, she didn't get to me." replied Canderous "But for someone so old, she packs a huge argument. I hate her as much as you do."

 

"A Jedi doen't hate, I just dislike her. Very, very, verrry... much." Atton BSed.

 

"It sounds to me that you hate her." observed Canderous.

 

"Well anyway, she's old news. She was killed by Jaden, then her ghost was cut off from the Force by Revan."

 

"Again, my old adverary shows more strength. Why did you join him in the first place?" asked Canderous.

 

"Nope! I don't think we're ready for that conversation, yet." told Atton.

 

"Okay. Then answer this: why did you volunteer for this mission?" Canderous asked again.

 

"Because I care for this woman. And we'll leave it at that."

 

"Fair enough."

 

 

The Infiltrator, reached Dxun, and landed in a jungle clearing right beside Mira's starfighter. Atton and Canderous led a small platoon of Mandalorian elites. Atton led the way. Following Mira's tracks through the Force, Atton was getting closer to Gan Ragnos. One who Atton hoped not to see. Atton followed the tunnels into the Sith field, the place where he led both Mira and Brianna. Atton navigated it well, for he remembered it well. Before Atton knew it, he was standing in front of the Tomb of Freedon Nadd: The Lord of Conquest, yet again.

 

 

"Master!" called Malus' new apprentice.

 

"What is it?" he asked.

 

"We have sensed a Force Adept. Coming our way."

 

"Excellent. Kill him." ordered Malus.

 

"But sir... It isn't Revan, we can break his will and bind him to you."

 

Malus used Force Choke on his new apprentice and brought him in closer "Do you dare question my orders?"

 

"N-n-n-no. Your w-w-word is the law."

 

"Now go kill him you incompetent gikza." ordered Malus as he threw him towards the door.

 

 

Atton, Canderous and his platoon navigated the tomb very carefully. They came across a rather large, rather locked door. Atton remembered the door. "There must be a way to open this." told Xarga.

 

"Of course there is. Split up." ordered Canderous.

 

"I'll see if there's a way to open it here." told Atton.

 

"Okay, let's move out."

 

Canderous and Xarga went in oppisite directions while Atton stayed at the door trying to find a means of unlocking it. "Mira, I'm coming." Atton said to himself. Atton couldn't find a means of opening it from there so he decided to do it the old fasioned way: Making one. Atton ignited his orange and yellow sabers and attempted to thrust them through the door. To his surprise, it worked. Atton made an opening to just fit everyone through without them getting stuck.

 

Canderous and Xarga came running back "Sir, we have found no means of opening it sir." reported Xarga. Xarga looked at the opening, then Atton turned to him. "Umm... nevermind."

 

"Yeah. Let's go." ordered Atton.

 

 

Atton, Canderous and his platoon continued to search for Mira in the tomb. They checked the prison cells, but only found her lightsaber. It was undamaged, which could definately work to his advantage. Atton then decided to continue down the path which led directly to the sarcophagus of Freedon Nadd. Atton began running towards the door until he sensed the presence of Sith Assassins lurking in the shadows. The door to the sarcophagus room began closing. "GO. FIND YOUR FRIEND." told Canderous.

 

Atton jumped through the door to be greeted by Malus' apprentice. "Malus has ordered me to kill you. But I say your will can be broken."

 

"I think you, schutta, should follow his order." taunted Atton.

 

"Back down."

 

"Deliver me Mira and I'll leave."

 

"I can't allow that. You'll have to die then."

 

"Oh no, you're scaring me. Before you're dead, what should I call you?"

 

"Sadow. Zenneth Sadow."

 

Zenneth ignited his doublesaber, while Atton ignited his. Both anticipated their moves well. Atton elbowed him in the stomach, and rolled over his back. Atton attemped to skew him from behind, but Zenneth hit the deck and used the Force to slide right under Atton. Zenneth attemped to skew Atton but Atton kicked his elbow. Zenneth started using his doublesaber as a windmill to repell Atton and possibly veer him to his master. Atton grew tired of it and raised Zenneth off the ground. Atton walked towards him and broke his saber. Atton then grabbed his neck "Where the hell is Mira?" asked Atton. Zenneth gagged "TALK! DAMN YOU!" Zenneth pointed towards the sarcophagus chamber and his foot started to twitch. "Thanks." said Atton, right before he punched him in the face, knocking him unconcious. Atton found Mira and dragged her out into the hallway. Atton pulled out the gag and Mira spit in his face. Atton gave out a little growl and pulled off the blindfolds. "Atton?"

 

"I try to rescue you and this is the thanks I get?" asked Atton wiping the spit off his face.

 

"I thoungt you were Malus." whimpered Mira.

 

"It's okay. I'm here now." told Atton unshackling Mira. Mira saw Malus following them. Mira pushed Atton out of the way but she got hit on the face with a rock Malus threw seconds before.

 

"Damn Sith. Don't you have any class?" asked Atton.

 

"You didn't show the same to that Jedi you *loved*." told Malus. Atton remembered the last Jedi he tortured before he left the Sith. The Jedi that showed him the Force. Atton took a deep breath and ignited his sabers. "I thought you were the one for talk, Rand." told Malus.

 

"Let's get this over with." demanded Atton. Malus ignited his doublesaber, but kept his cloak on. It covered his right arm. The arm that Revan took. Malus still fought like he did before. Even with only one saber. Atton fought well but Malus caught him off guard and svered his arm off. Atton lay on the ground in pain, trying not to show fear, he only grunted. Malus was then going to deliver the killing blow, but Mira stayed his hand. The sweat from Mira's hand when she was captive lost her grip. Malus almost killed Atton, if it werent for him rolling out of the way. Malus tried to slash or skew Atton but he kept on rolling. Mira caught eye of her saber, she pulled it out of Atton's jacket, ignited her viridian blade and had a brief fight with Malus. To everyone's surprise, The Mandalorians set off a permecrete and everyone flew at least ten metres. Malus got up to see no one there except for his apprentice.

 

"Master UGH... GHAAA." Malus killed Zenneth for his failiure.

 

 

Back on the infiltrator Mira saw to Atton, they had a lot to talk about. "Who sent you to come?" asked Mira.

 

"I volunteered." said Atton in a raspy voice.

 

"That doesn't sound like you."

 

"The reasone why, is because I care for you... I love you."

 

Mira shed a tear "You risked your life out of love?" she asked.

 

"I did. But it might not work between us."

 

"What?"

 

"A Jedi is too old for you."

 

"Jaden was one hundred years old at heart. That was the reason."

 

"So, what about us?"

 

"I think we hooked up a powe couplink."

[Diego Varen]

Good Chapter. I like it when Atton says the same thing to Mandalore (Which he says to the Exile in TSL). Atton and Mandalore are still funny. Keep it up. Looking foward to more.

[Master Jimmy]

one thing I'm paticularly proud of is that I started an Atton/Mira romance

[Jason Skywalker]

Good chapter, and i see you got barbecue sauce, whoops, sorry. I see you got them hooking up a power coupling, very nice.

[Master Jimmy]

You suggested, I did so.

[Jason Skywalker]

And i see you did it well, congratulations. Also, i don't think Mira will kill Atton, if ya' know what i mean.

[Master Jimmy]

Are you reffering to the part where Mira spits inhis face?

[Diego Varen]

Are you reffering to the part where Mira spits inhis face?

 

Young love .

[Joss Kanubi]

another good chapter

[Master Jimmy]

It is one year later, Revan was ready to call his wife a weapons master, Jaden and Visas got married and Mira and Atton have a working power couplink. Revan overlooked the academy, proud to see it's numbers have been growing quick. Bastila found Revan and greeted him, she put her forearm on his shoulder "How are you doing?" she asked.

 

"Fine, but not fine enough." answered Revan.

 

"How so?"

 

"Malus is still out there." he replied.

 

"I don't think that this is the time to talk about it, you have much to be proud of. I have one to be proud of." but Revan still had a vacant expression on his face "You're not fine are you?"

 

"No. I sence the dark side. It's stronger, but it's not here."

 

"Atton told us that Malus was ressurecting Freedon Nadd and many specters were there." explained Bastila.

 

"That's old news, but may be the reason why."

 

"He saw them in physical form, but very pale." she continued.

 

"Hmm, Wraiths of Darkness. There've been sightings of them for many years. Dead Sith Lords, ressurected. Bound to the will of Malus, or their *saviour*." explained Revan.

 

"No telling what Malus could do with them."

 

"That's what concerns me. For your safety."

 

Bastila closed her eyes. "I don't want you to risk your life for me."

 

"Hopefully I won't have to, but I will."

 

Bastila started crying. Revan hugged her and kissed her forehead.

 

 

At nighttime, the entire academy lay in their quarters, Revan had another vision. It was the same one he had for three years. Revan woke up. He put one of his sabers to his head and said to himself "Get out of my head damnit." Revan took a walk into the courtyard to clear his head. Revan stopped in his tracks and turned around.

 

"Well you certainly are a hard person to find Revan." said Luyoni Skywalker.

 

"Who are you?" he asked.

 

"Your darker ancestor, Luyoni."

 

"I take it your are a Wraith of Darkness." guessed Revan.

 

"You're correct."

 

"You were a fool to accept Malus' offer."

 

"With you gone, we'll finally rest in peace."

 

"He won't live up to it." told Revan.

 

"How so?"

 

"What do you expect? He want's power and he'll keep it."

 

"It's worth a shot. Time to die." told Luyoni as the rest of the Wraiths appeared. Ragnos, Hord, Kressh, Sadow, Pall, Nadd, even Nihilus and Malak.

 

All attacked him. Revan fought hard, he dodged everything he couldn't block, he fought swiftly. Bastila heard the metal clangs and saber clashes. She got up, and grabbed her saber. She joined the fight. Her new class worked for her well, she fought almost as good as Revan. Bastila and Revan struck down all the ghosts. Revan got ready to cut off their connection to the Force, but they dissapeared and fled. "It's not just your life in jeapordy anymore." told Bastila.

 

"We have to strike back." told Revan.

 

"The Second Sith War has indeed began." told Bastila.

 

(Bastila wasn't lying. In the next chapter the war begins.)

[Diego Varen]

Yes the Second Sith War is here. Why didn't Malus take Sion? I like Sion better than Nihilus. Anyway sence is spelt sense. Other than that, everything is fine.

[Master Jimmy]

Sion went to the lightside to die.

[Diego Varen]

Sion went to the lightside to die.

 

Damn, I forgot. Oh well. I'm looking foward to the next Chapter.

[Jason Skywalker]

Yeah, Sion was redeemed. And looking forward for the war, after all, that is the name of the fic.