Tysyacha Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 NOTE: I may not continue this. This is just an experiment. Knights of the Old Republic: Revan's Second, Redeemed The life of the galaxy once again hangs in the balance. The Republic, devastated by years of battle against the Mandalorians and the Sith Lords Revan and Malak, teeters upon the brink of collapse. The Jedi Order, once thousands strong, now boasts fewer than one hundred Knights. Under cryptic orders from a Lord hidden in shadow, the Sith are exterminating the Jedi who remain. An exile from the Order, lost to the galaxy for five years since the end of the Mandalorian Wars, clings to life near the mining colony of Peragus... ************************* A warm wetness embraced me. Cradled me like the fluid in my mother's womb. I felt safe there, asleep and enfolded in gentle darkness. It was no surprise that when the voice spoke to me, I jumped like a frightened gizka. I always was scared of loud noises, or soft ones that disturbed my sleep. All it said was: "Awaken." A whisper on the ede of hearing, yet it startled me! With my eyes still closed, I struggled against the warm fluid. Had I been asleep for a thousand years? It was so hard... Soon I lay on the cold metal floor of whatever place I was in, so weak, flat on my stomach. I saw surveillance monitors flicker into life in a wide circle around my body, from the corner of my eye. Where was I? After struggling for a while, I found the strength to stand. Kolto tanks around me burbled, and computer monitors beeped. Medical facility of some sort, I thought. But where are all the doctors, and the medical droids? I started to explore the building, cold and wet as I was. And wearing only my khaki civilian-issue mesh bodysuit. Darn kolto tanks. No privacy there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Catto Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 I liked it, i do hope you continue this ... Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted September 5, 2006 Share Posted September 5, 2006 Short but sweet. I suppose Revan's second is the Exile. I'm looking foward to it. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted September 6, 2006 Share Posted September 6, 2006 Short but sweet. I suppose Revan's second is the Exile. I'm looking foward to it. Keep it up. Quoted for emphasis. Hope we see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 Look like it's exactly line Exile. But however good chapter. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anglu Posted September 20, 2006 Share Posted September 20, 2006 NOTE: I may not continue this. This is just an experiment. [ That's why I stopped to publish incomplete stories. *gg* But it is quite good, I hope you go on with that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anakin34 Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 cool and nice and short Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kas'!m Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Not much of a chapter, but please continue. Someday, it might by chance end up better than the actual game. I just hope it doesn't end up being crappy like A Farewell to Arms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 Not much of a chapter' date=' but please continue. Someday, it might by chance end up better than the actual game. I just hope it doesn't end up being crappy like [i']A Farewell to Arms.[/i] Is that a Fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kas'!m Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 A Farewell to Arms is a crappy World War I novel by Ernest Hemingway. You not missing anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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