The_Catto Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 hullo, sorry i havent posted before this but ive just ... hmmm ... how can i put this .. kind of ... in a trance in reading, this is just ... well, excellent, in any other words it would seem an understatement at the least ... just brilliant, definitley cannot wait until the next chapter ... But i do have one question, where did visas end up, she ran off, but you havent said where she is, im just confused, and was a little disapointed in the few seconds i realised this ... but anyway ... hope to see the next chapter soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 21, 2006 Author Share Posted April 21, 2006 Ah, Visas...not one of my favorite characters...and I didn't include her, did I? Heheh, oops Well, next chapter is on the way (sorta) and that should solve things... I'm glad you liked it, BFA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Catto Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 lol its one ofthose things where you cant not like it ... anyway ... still waiting for next chapter ... but TAKE YOUR TIME lol, want a really good one as always, not a rushed one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 ^It's Forcefight writing this, she couldn't rush it if her life depended on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 no kidding >_> <_< dont let her hear ou saying that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Doctor Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 ^ He's right. She hears that, Hall, and you're in for it. Trust me... I know... *cowers in a corner to cry* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Man that was good love to see what will happen nex. Love youre story very 2 way up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Cant stop reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sith at Peace Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Seriously great stuff, you should really consider making Plight of Darkness a book,it'd sell pretty well. Could you critique my fic THE GALACTIC SCREAM whenever you get a chance, I'd really like to know your opinion on it. PS. I'm in 8th grade too, REPRESENT!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 23, 2006 Author Share Posted April 23, 2006 BFA: Lol, Hall is right. I couldn't rush a chapter if I had wanted to Hall: <That's Hall, by the way. I wonder who accidentally let that gulletine fall on him... RC: You're next Doc: Darth: Glad you liked it! Next chapter should be comming up... SaP: Meh, it'd have to be a lot longer than I'm planning on making it for it to fill up a book...I'll check out your fic as soon as I have time...which will be soon, I hope. 8 Grade rules! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Hall: <That's Hall, by the way. I wonder who accidentally let that gulletine fall on him... I wonder who accidentally misspelled guillotine. 8 Grade rules! Funny, everyone at my school hates the grade 8's, and we push them around in the halls for no reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 You guys are also in High School. <_< What're 8th Graders doing in the same building, anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Doctor Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 ^ That's what the high school people would like to know, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 What're 8th Graders doing in the same building, anyway? Getting pushed around for no reason, of course! Well here Elementary School goes from kindergarten-grade 7, and High School goes from grade 8-grade 12. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 not for me i go to 9-12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Doctor Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 That's crazy. You're supposed to be normal, Hall! Wait... no you're not. You're Canadian. We're wierd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 In star wars I when you kill malak what happens nex? I forgot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 In star wars I when you kill malak what happens nex? I forgot This isn't the place to post it. Post this is the Padawan's Lounge. Anyway ForceFight, can't wait for the next Chapter. SaP is right. You could make this a book, if you edited the mistakes with the help of Hall. I might sound like a pain, but can you check out my Fanfic, Jedi Forces - Shadows Of War? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 Pottsie: Like I told SaP, I'll check out your fic as soon as I can scrounge up enough time...though I suppose I should try and keep up with Shadows of War since I didn't really keep up with your other one...heh. Doc & Hall: Crazy Canadians Darth: That's the way it goes with us...strange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkLord_Revan Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 great story...yall people are crazy...sry i havnt commented in a while i was grounded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth_Nihilus Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 Doc & Hall: Crazy Canadians You're just saying that because we spell honour (and other words like it) with a 'u'. And centre is spelled 're' not 'er'. @Pottsie: Thank you, very few people appreciate/don't yell at me for my abilities. +10 cool points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 Doc & Hall: Crazy Canadians You're just saying that because we spell honour (and other words like it) with a 'u'. And centre is spelled 're' not 'er'. @Pottsie: Thank you, very few people appreciate/don't yell at me for my abilities. +10 cool points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 25, 2006 Author Share Posted April 25, 2006 honour...colour...centre...favourite...The list goes on and on... And you call yourself a grammar/spelling expert I do love how you use Spell Check though, Hall j/k Alright, i guess I should stop picking on Hall now, shouldn't I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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