Diego Varen Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 I've got a banner for The Sith Lord now. It was made by Sabretooth and it is above the first Chapter. Thanks Sabre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediMaster12 Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 Nice work Pottsie. I was confused about what happened between Luke and the girl padawan he had been fighting? Is she dead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 She was reedeemed. Gevallen was Farra Koo. Farra was mentioned as the "now reedeemed" Farra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 Yes,but it didn't show how she was redeemed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anakin34 Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 Good,good.Fall even deeper onto the Dark Side!Now really,good.Altough a bit short.make a jedi come and jadens anger rises so much his lightsaber turned red Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 5, 2006 Author Share Posted June 5, 2006 make a jedi come and jadens anger rises so much his lightsaber turned red His Lightsaber was already red and what good will that do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 6, 2006 Share Posted June 6, 2006 I so think there should be a sqeal but i have no idea how *Snip* connor, please do not advertise your fiction in another persons thread, please read our Forum Rules before posting again. I have deleted your advertising part of your post. -RH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 6, 2006 Author Share Posted June 6, 2006 After I finish my current Fanfic, Descendant of the Exile, I may will do a Sequel. I also have some idea what to do. Edit: Good news everyone. The Sith Lord has over 1000 views. Party down. Pottsie, I have deleted your two spam posts, you know the rules against bumping threads, an update/new chapter is one thing, these 1000 view celebratory posts are not. -RH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Skywalker Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 What a fic Pottsie!!!!!! I will now read your sequel to this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 7, 2006 Author Share Posted June 7, 2006 What a fic Pottsie!!!!!! I will now read your sequel to this! Thanks John. Your Fic is also great and one of the most original Fics I've read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Skywalker Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 Awwwww thanks Pottsie im so glad to be praised by a great writer such as yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 8, 2006 Author Share Posted June 8, 2006 Thanks a lot John. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedi_exile Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 wow, great fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 10, 2006 Author Share Posted June 10, 2006 Thanks jedi_exile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 12, 2006 Author Share Posted June 12, 2006 This may disappoint some people, but any Sequels will be cancelled, because: A. It wouldn't be good. B. I've already had two attempts at a Sequel. C. I'm not as excited as I was with this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 darnet,don't double post,btw whats wrong with TSL 2 TROM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 12, 2006 Author Share Posted June 12, 2006 darnet,don't double post,btw whats wrong with TSL 2 TROM Authors of their Fanfics are aloud to double post (eg, look at Sabretooth's, Niner's). As I've already explained in my previous post, I couldn't be bothered to write TSL II. Sorry. Expect another Fanfic soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 oh yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedi_exile Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 hey pottsie you wanna try doing another fan fic with me again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 12, 2006 Author Share Posted June 12, 2006 hey pottsie you wanna try doing another fan fic with me again? I don't think so jedi_exile. I don't think it works as well. Its better off writing our own Fanfics. Besides yours is good and you shouldn't give up with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedi_exile Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 lol, i wasnt planning on giving up anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 lol, i wasnt planning on giving up anything That's alright then. Also feel free to discuss anything about The Sith Lord. Ask me questions and answers, anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 How I thought up Malus (Jaden Korr): I wanted an evil name that people could remember (Like Vader/Sidious) and when I typed in Evil for Dutch or Latin (Can't remember which one it was) and it came up with Malus. I used that from then on. His dark personality comes from Vader, Sidious and Maul. These are just any topic you can talk about. Ask me a question and I'll give you an answer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 14, 2006 Author Share Posted June 14, 2006 I mentioned about doing this earlier in this. The Alternate Ending to the Sith Lord. Enjoy. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alternate Ending (A New Reign of Terror) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Malus slowly walked towards his wounded Master and circled around him. Malus ignited his Lightsaber and prepared to deliever the final attack. Without expecting it, Kyle pushed Malus away from him. Malus fell backwards onto several chairs. Kyle weakly got up and grabbed his Lightsaber. “The Sith won’t win today Jaden!” He shouted confidently. Malus got up. “You’ve always been arrogant Kyle!” Malus shouted. “It doesn’t matter, until I’ve killed you.” Malus told him. Before either Malus or Kyle could attack again, Luke entered the room, killing several Imperial Guards behind him. RedHawke had followed him. “Well isn’t this nice?” Kyle asked, “A reunion.” “Be quiet Kyle!” Malus shouted, “Prepare to die!” Malus ran towards Kyle attacking him. Luke joined with Kyle to help him. RedHawke stayed and watched them fight. This was entertainment. Lights of blue, green and red Lightsabers blurred about all over the room. The heat of the Lightsabers bounced back onto their faces, causing them to sweat. Malus pushed Kyle backwards and fought Luke. Luke was much stronger than Kyle. He seemed more relaxed. Malus eventually stabbed at Luke’s leg, causing him to fall over. “RedHawke!” Malus shouted, “Do your worst!” RedHawke prepared to shoot large bolts of Lightning at them. Kyle and Luke were screaming out in pain. RedHawke’s power was strong, strong enough to kill anybody in five minutes. “Jaden! Help!” Kyle shouted. Malus looked at both Kyle, Luke and RedHawke. He didn’t know what to do. Could he return to the Light Side? Could he destroy the Sith forever? Malus once again looked at Kyle, Luke and RedHawke. Malus ran towards RedHawke, but his Lightsaber was blasted out of his hand. Malus raised his hands and shot his own bolts of Lightning at RedHawke. Malus would use the rest of his power to save both Kyle and Luke. Kyle and Luke watched in shock as Malus tried to resist the Lightning. Malus pushed himself harder to try to kill RedHawke. Malus’ power increased, but it wasn’t enough to kill RedHawke. Malus immediately pulled his Lightsaber to him and threw it into RedHawke’s chest. He yelled in pain and Malus used the last of his power to kill RedHawke. RedHawke collapsed onto the floor. Dead. Malus looked at Kyle and Luke. Was Malus reedeemed? Malus grabbed his Lightsaber and slashed Kyle’s head off his body. His head rolled across the room, blood pouring onto the floor. Luke immediately got out his Lightsaber, but Malus destroyed it with one stroke. He then held his Lightsaber towards Luke. Two Royal Imperial Guards entered the room. “Take Master Skywalker and my dead Master to the medical bay,” Malus told them, “I shall deal with them later.” The Guards took Luke and the remains of Kyle and dragged them to the medical bay. An hour later, Malus entered the medical bay. Luke looked up to see Malus. “Please Jaden, return to the light.” Luke pleaded. “Never!” Malus shouted, “After your death, no one shall stand against me and my new Empire.” Malus knew this wasn’t true. All his armies had been destroyed, though they had destroyed the New Republic’s army and the Jedi. After Luke was dead, Malus would rebuild. It was time. “Say goodbye, Master Skywalker.” Malus told Luke with anger in his voice. Malus got out his Lightsaber and stabbed Luke. After two minutes of holding his Lightsaber in Luke’s body, Luke had died. Malus prepared to increase his power, by feeding on both Kyle and Luke. But before he could, the medical bay door opened. Officer Starkiller had somehow survived the battle. “My lord, what are you doing?” He asked. “We shall rebuild our new Empire,” Malus told him, “With us leading our new Empire, nothing shall stand in our way. Now go!” Officer Starkiller left. Malus called upon the dark side of the Force to feed on Kyle and Luke. Malus was the most powerful Sith in the history of the entire Galaxy. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The End ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted June 14, 2006 Share Posted June 14, 2006 Good.Maybe a neutral one,lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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