ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 15, 2006 Author Posted April 15, 2006 Not every planet. Otherwise, I fear I'll never get this finished I'm trying to decide whether or not Dantooine will be their last stop in known-space or not...
The Doctor Posted April 15, 2006 Posted April 15, 2006 Great job! Too bad I can't fix these spelling mistakes...
RC-1162 Posted April 15, 2006 Posted April 15, 2006 great work, Forcefight, awesome chapter, though i myself prefer action to mushy gushiness (as you put it ). great job anyway.
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 15, 2006 Author Posted April 15, 2006 Thanks, RC, I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though it was mushy gushy (I love that phrase ) Missing your admin powers, Doc?
Hallucination Posted April 15, 2006 Posted April 15, 2006 Great job! Too bad I can't fix these spelling mistakes... Now you know my pain....
Snafu7 Posted April 15, 2006 Posted April 15, 2006 So a long time ago Switzerland was is a galaxy far, far away? lol Anyways, great chapter ffwm
The Doctor Posted April 16, 2006 Posted April 16, 2006 Missing your admin powers, Doc? About as much as you're missing these errors....
ScieX Posted April 16, 2006 Posted April 16, 2006 i just finished reading all of the chapters. very nice wheres visas???? why did the judge sick all those mandalorians after the crew whens the big foe coming? cant wait to see more
ScieX Posted April 16, 2006 Posted April 16, 2006 Well, you're right, it was good but it was short. So a long time ago Switzerland was is a galaxy far, far away? J/K could be, could be. or maybe since was so long ago, some of the humans who came from that galaxy and settled earth named it after their town of switzerland and made it a country in Europe. its possible.
milo Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 hehehe, swiss cheese. I'm still giggling about that one... Anyways, great chapter.
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 17, 2006 Author Posted April 17, 2006 Thanks, guys, glad you like it See, I knew someone was going to pick on me for the Swiss cheese the moment I typed it. Since Switzerland doesn't exist in SW, I didn't capitalize Swiss, which makes it a common adjective. Kinda. Ah, imaginary loopholes
The Doctor Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 ^ Not as bad as 'Coruscant Breakfast Cakes'... no offense.
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 17, 2006 Author Posted April 17, 2006 Oh, shut it, Mr. 'They-can-have-a-heart-attack' man. Doc: Hey, I know! They can all have a heart attack! Kira: How 'bout they don't. Doc: Why? It'll be fun! Kira: No. Doc: Not even a minor cardiac arrest? Kira: Why do I even...
The Doctor Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 ... I hate you. I mean, I love you and everything, but... I hate you. EDIT: I hate you too, RC (see below)
RC-1162 Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 is he a retard? j/k doc, dont give me a heart attack. and about the swiss cheese, you could have typed "average manaanian sponge"
Hallucination Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 Thanks, guys, glad you like it See, I knew someone was going to pick on me for the Swiss cheese the moment I typed it. Since Switzerland doesn't exist in SW, I didn't capitalize Swiss, which makes it a common adjective. Kinda. Ah, imaginary loopholes That's a little problem, a loophole is a hole, and I can poke a hole into your loophole, but how do you put a hole in a hole? And for the 'they can have a heart attack' thing, who are 'they'?
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 17, 2006 Author Posted April 17, 2006 The 'they' would be a young Jedi Exile and Revan in one of our RPGs. At the time, we were trying to figure out the next set of posts and...that was the Doc's idea wooooords
The Doctor Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 Wait... I don't think it was a young Revan and Kira, was it? I thought it was in DF... But I could be wrong. I usually am. Especially when arguing with FFWM
Hallucination Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 Well, thanks. BTW did anyone ever tell you two you're both wierd?
The Doctor Posted April 17, 2006 Posted April 17, 2006 Yes, we tell each other that at every opportunity.
ScieX Posted April 18, 2006 Posted April 18, 2006 Thanks, guys, glad you like it See, I knew someone was going to pick on me for the Swiss cheese the moment I typed it. Since Switzerland doesn't exist in SW, I didn't capitalize Swiss, which makes it a common adjective. Kinda. Ah, imaginary loopholes loopholes?... you should be a lawyer!
JediKnight707 Posted April 18, 2006 Posted April 18, 2006 The pen is mightier than the word processor.... Hehe, I read that somewhere.
Vaelastraz Posted April 18, 2006 Posted April 18, 2006 Nice story ...I read through the entire story today, impressive! The amount of forum pages also shows that your work seems to be the taste of many different people. I bet you could make money with your talent! However, one thing i seem to have missed when reading through the last chapter, why is Elron(d) not a Jedi anymore?
ForceFightWMe12 Posted April 18, 2006 Author Posted April 18, 2006 Vaelastraz: Maybe chapter...Twelve (I think) can shed a bit of light on Elron's reasoning...anything more I can't reveal as of yet Anyway, I'm glad you like the story JK: I've seen that somewhere too...or is that just my mind playing tricks on me? Gah, who knows... Scie: Why do people always seem to tell me that... Hall: Most of my family tells me that on a daily basis
RC-1162 Posted April 19, 2006 Posted April 19, 2006 no kidding given ive asked you 10 times already to help me out:xp:
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