codj Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 Bac Rueben stopped his fire and threw thermal detonators under the table to try to hit the cunning jedi. He then continued firing at the other 5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deamonomic Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 seeing the thermal grenade, zaran used the force to throw the grenade. unfortunatly his leg started acting up and caused him to lose focus. the grenade didnt fly far enough. the explosion knocked zaran of his feet. see that he was now exposed he quickly blocked a few shots before running to the table. it was then that he had an idea. he used the force to pick up some objects and hurl them at the enemy. crushing 9 of them. he then saw his chance and lept up from the table with lightning speed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 Zion managed to reach the walls of the fortress before his fellow jedi. The young man was cut down by a large man holding duel blaster rifles. Zion turned and blocked a few shots. He then jumped up onto the wall which was a mistake. Mines had been planted around the wall and the large grunt had just stepped on one. The wall along with Zion was flung into the air. Zion landed heavily on a rock. He felt his ribs crack. He managed to stand up holding his side. His lightsaber was gone, he quickly looked around. He grabbed a torch bracket from the wall and threw it at a solider who fell back with the force of the throw. Zion was completly defenceless. He stood in the middle of the court yard. He focused. He picked up the remeains of the wall and threw them at the approaching soldiers using the force. He stumbled backwards and tripped. He backed towards a door. A Jedi opened it from the inside and looked at Zion. "Help....me" He gasped The jedi looked terrified. He shook his head and tried to close the door. Zion grabbed the door before it slammed shut and gasped... "please! help! Give me a weapon!" The jedi kicked him away and slammed the door. Zion was stunned. He rolled over. He was face to face with a man with a pike. The man rammed it into Zion's chest. He gasped and spluttered. His vision turned red. His body filled with anger and hatred. The Jedi had turned on him his anger and frustration caused him to yell...his yell went on for what seemed like an eternity. He opened his eyes. He stood up his blood soaked robes billowed in a non existant breeze. He held out his hand and a lightsaber appeared there. he ignited it. The red blade glowed. He turned to the opposing army. He showed no mercy he cut them down like animals. When most of the soliders in the keep were dead he turned to the door and stabbed his saber through it....this would be his revenge.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codj Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Bac Rueben saw the jedi spring forward and he pulled out his 16th Battlion Specialty. He ordered his troops to do the same. Then he blasted at the oncoming jedi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deamonomic Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 one of the jedi that had been following zaran saw a unused grenade on the floor. and threw it into the middle of the group of enemy soldiers. then he did a force jump into the middle and started to hack away at them. 2 other jedi had made it to the enemy also. they were too distracted by the master jedi attacking them. and he was putting up quite a fight. he ducked behind a small wall and used hios force to hurl the table that he had been using for ckver at the enemy. (your move. one of us is going to have to die soon we will have to decide me or you) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Scur started towards the back exit and started towards the group that noticed the Jedi running across the field. They fired at the jedi and Scur deflected the shots hitting some of the men with their own shots. After the group retreated and died the Jedi ran to the back of the Keep and entered. Once he entered he heard blasters going off and lighsabers buzzing. So his group continued into the Keep towards the sounds. Once he passed through a doorway he seen explosions and lightsabers buzzing wildy, with some blaster fire. Scur watched while his group ran in front guarding him. Scur walked up to the main Council room where the chancellor was watching the battle below him outside. "I destroyed the Artillery, Now what?" Scur questioned after the chancellor turned around. "You must send a squadron of Jedi Starfighters to end the blockade." The Chancellor motioned to a guard to take Scur to the hangar. As Scur followed the guard the chancellor noted, "I will have a squadron ready for you when you get there." He turned around and started watching the battle again. Scur entered the hangar where the guard stopped and motioned Scur in. the guard started back towards the Council room. Scur walked in and noticed dozens of Jedi Starfighters, lined up ready to take off. Seconds after walking in a man walked up and pointed at a blue Jedi Starfighter in the middle of the hangar. Scur walked up to the Starfighter and examined it and the ones around him. He realized his was the only one blue, as the others were orange, red, yellow, and one other green, which was the next in command. Scur grabbed his helet ands jumped into his Jedi starfighter, ready to launch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate's Decision Posted November 19, 2005 Author Share Posted November 19, 2005 Dyce frantically checked all of his communication lines. None of them were designed to reach contact with the GIs at such a far range, the atmosphere of Niaj Qad made it impossible. Several NA-ATs neared the front of the canyon, where the traitor message was transmitted. Dyce checked his final, most trusted communications line. Nothing but a faint blue light and a soft buzz. He slammed on his monitor in frustration. Through the camera on his monitor, he saw a thick haze just above the NA-ATs. Putting off too much exaust? Just then the haze exploded. Gredades! A Civic starfighter zoomed just over his head, landing a few accurate shots at a few AO-OTs. Eptima was here! Now there was a good chance in the Gis' survival. They had just filled in the gap in his gut, and with his morale boosted, began to charge through enemy lines, a few exited TIs mimicing his moves. As he entered under the shadow of the huge keep, he saw some amazing jedi in action. Though most of the lightsabers were on the ground where their dead owners had fallen, several were dancing in sync with the shots of the Empire's blasters. One perticularly skilled jedi master was using a lightsaber in each hand, with three floating around under the influence of the legendary "force". Dyce was bewildered. He ejected his electronic key and exited out of the cockpit, drawing his blaster, the TI pilots in his stead. He immediately began to gun down Empire GIs, just to make sure the jedi knew he was on good terms with them. He didn't want to try to get in range to negotiate, so he let his blaster do the work. They were convinced. Some were astonished. In their current situation, Dyce didn't blame them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate's Decision Posted November 19, 2005 Author Share Posted November 19, 2005 (by the way, at this point in time, the only droids that are any useful in battle are stationary worker droids) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Zion tore through the doors. The jedi who ahd kicked him away was gone. Zion's red blade lit up the whole room.The jedi would pay. Zion strode through the room. nothing of use was here. He entered the hanger where dozens of Jedi star fighters were. Some people turned to him surprised "What the?" The Jedi had no chance to even comprehend what they were facing Zion force chocked the man and through him onto a Jedi star fighter. He noticed a blue one....the commande? Zion used the force to throw a jedi star fighter towards a group of Jedi running in his direction. He laughed A jedi withdrew his saber and tried to attack. Zion dodged the mans efforts. Zion sliced the mans arm off and force pushed him into the wall where he sat bleeding and moaning. Zion smiled then looked around "Foolish Jedi" he said as more come towards him He screamed and the force and pitch of his scream made the jedi fall back. He had to destroy this hanger and make sure no one got out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codj Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Bac Rueben saw he had no choice. He was either going to have to run or die. He thought for a while and came up with a good plan. Bac Rueben grabbed the charge detonator and ran with only his most dedicated troops. Was he was out of the way, he pushed the button on the detonator. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 21, 2005 Share Posted November 21, 2005 Scur noticed a jedi break through the doors and start killing the other Jedi. "There is much anger and frustration in this one. I shall reason with him, later." Scur murmured to himself. "Men, ignore the jedi fool before he slices a wing off. Go!" Scur yelled into the com-links before the jedi had a chance of getting out of their Jedi intercepters/starfighters. Scur's and several other intercepters started hovering and they launched out of the hangar. Soon followed were the others that were commanded to stay and follow to ignore the angered Jedi. Soon enough other starfighter resistance tried stopping the jedi but didn't work, being blown up by Scur or another Jedi. When Scur and his group escaped the atmosphere many Civic Capitol Ships were blocading the the planet. The Civic Capitol Ship commander heard of the Intercepters coming into the blocade area and ordered the fire on the Intercepters. Only one or two Jedi intercepters were destroyed by the time Scur and group made it onto a Capitol Ship. "Land safely!" Scur announced onto the com-links, "We need to get out quickly and easily." As Scur landed his intercepter he opened the cockpit window and jumped out lightsaber igniting, slicing a marine's gun arm, while waiting for Scur to get out. The man screamed and fell to the ground, as Scur blocked and swung his lightsaber at other marines. "All marines to hangar 10-2, repeat hangar 10-2!" the speaker blared and echoed throughout the hangar. Scur grabbed a blaster from a marine and started blasting marines with it while blocking incoming shots with the lightsaber in the other hand as he made his way to the bridge, followed by his jedi partners. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deamonomic Posted November 21, 2005 Share Posted November 21, 2005 (you evil person!!!!!!!!!!!! killin ur men! lol ill right more when i get home.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate's Decision Posted November 21, 2005 Author Share Posted November 21, 2005 Dyce smiled to himself. If they did fail, it would still be a tremendous victory. He saw the shadow of civic starfighters and RIG fighters hatch in and out while he stealthily stayed unnoticed along the wall of the keep. Then his group was thrown off the wall by a sputter of force. The Empire was getting deeper into the keep. There would be little or no way out for them if action was not taken. Another explosion was even closer. Dyce then saw several Civic troops run clear out of the archway. "Off the wall!" Dyce's order were barely carried out as rubble flew over their heads. A Civic commanding officer ran out at a high dash. Dyce recognized him as Bac Rueben, an old mate of his from the same training camp. Dyce had seen him in action, and was not prepared to confront his old friend...yet. Dyce's fleet moved quickly among the rubble, avoiding being seen by the army. "All right, lets move along the inner rim. We have to get rid of any and all obsticles blocking the jedi's escape path. Spead out!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 21, 2005 Share Posted November 21, 2005 Zion screamed as the Jedi star fighters left "COWARDS!" Zion looked around. there was a jedi star fighter left. He didn't like flying but he had embraced a life of darkness it didn't matter now. He got in and put on the helmet that was in the cockpit. He pressed the ignition and flew out of the hanger he turned the ship around and started firing missiles at the ground troopers. He laughed and felw into space. Once out there he surveyed the battle. He decided to offer help to the ones fighting the jedi. He raced towards the capitol ship and docked in the hanger. He noticed other jedi star fighters. He smiled. He got out his lightsaber and sliced their controls. They wern't going anywhere. Zion dimmed the lights of the hanger and walked to the bridge slowly. Im after you Jedi Atomic muahahahahahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 21, 2005 Share Posted November 21, 2005 Luckily the astromech units were unnoticed and started fixing the controls in the starfighters, as soon as the Dark Jedi left the hangar. Meanwhile, Scur blocking and shooting the blaster as he made his way to the bridge. Soon he came to a door and all troopers were dead, so he unignited his saber and pressed the button. the door slowly opened and Scur noticed the rifles aimed at him. Scur ignited his saber and waited for the door to open all the way. Once the door was opened all the way, the blasting started and Scur and jedi partners started blocking while Scur blocked and shot his blaster. Soon the Admiral of the Capitol Ship was the only one left standing, besides the other jedi with Scur. "Don't kill me. Please." with an assasin pistol behind his back the admiral tried convincing Scur not to kill him. "Well... " Scur said without unigniting his saber. Soon the man thought he had Scur of guard and took a shot at Scur who was paying attention and blocked the shot as he fired his blaster at the admiral who fell to the ground in major pain since Scur guided the shot through the man's heart, with the force. Scur ordered the others to plant bombs next to the control panel as he watched thinking that was to easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codj Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Bac Rueben was relieved yet disappointed to lose nearly all of his men. But it was either a few or all. So he walked back to the rubble to find nething left. They first thing he saw when he got back was a tower, Still standing, but in critical condition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate's Decision Posted November 22, 2005 Author Share Posted November 22, 2005 Dyce had 4 following cover troops as he entered the inner rim. He looked around for any sign of the crimson of the new civic garb. Dyce was glad he was not yet up to date, or he could have had his head sliced off by the powerful jedi lightsabers. The earth slowly began to vibrate and a low pitch rising higher and higher, a large door of some kind being opened. Dyce instinctively ducked and quick movement behind him caught his eye. Several starfighters of an incredible model were erupting from the keep, most were already damaged. Apparently they had barely enough time to escape before some kind of civic fleet tore them apart. Lasers flared and another starfighter zoomed into Dyce's field of sight. It immediately began to gun down it's fellow replicas. He quickly analyzed that the civic fleet were now docking the ships to pursue the Jedi. But no more emerged. Maybe they ran out of ships? Back on their feet Dyce's group began to survey the walls and possible escape routs for the Jedi. No easy solutions. He had no idea how to get any more sufficient exits with portable artillery. "Let's see if we can get into the keep's chronospheric controls. You all have engineer training, correct?" All nodded. "Great..." Dyce looked back out at the field just to make sure he was making a correct choice. He then dashed into the keep, his garb trailing behind him. They eventually reached a narrow hallway where filled with enemy troops. They were firing on a few jedi trapped and leaft to fight their way out. Dyce wipped out his spread blaster, charged, and fired. Layers of crimson armor fell before him. The few remaining troops were taken into open fire among his "engineers". They brushed past the bewildered Jedi, searching for a luminated control center of some sort. The vision soon was set before him, the troops removed the end grip of their guns to reveal many hacking tools. Dyce watched them go through tons of programs, most of them were already into correct function be previous engineers. "Report, sir," said the nearest of the four. "The Jedi are guarding the main upper hideout where the younger jedi are being safeguarded. We have to find a way to lead them out without getting them all killed." Dyce nodded at every word. He thought for about a minute. "Not going to happen. Probably why they didn't rush them out in the first place. They're defenceless! The only way out of this one is...to destroy the entire Civic Army." "But sir that's-" "Now that Eptima's here I will do anything in my power to stop them. And that should be enough." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Scur walked out of the brdige and into the hallway. Nothing was in the hallway so they quickly headed down the hallway.Once he made it to the hallway, Scur sensed something, strong in the force, beyond the hangar door. He decided to wait and see who. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fate's Decision Posted November 23, 2005 Author Share Posted November 23, 2005 Dyce wandered the halls of the Jedi Keep. He was looking for anything that needed dealing with, could allow the Jedi to escape, or a safe way out for himself so he could return to the battlefield. He didn't have to use his spread blaster much, the jedi had made sure that no Civic Imperial who got in the keep would stay there. Dyce finally reached the starfighter dock, but all that he saw was torn wings, overheated thrusters and tons more unidentified parts. The cieling was identical to the previous floor, so maybe there was another dock above him. The only doors that lead up to there were locked with metal lapbars. Dyce flipped out his heat knife and began to gradually melt each bar. He then kicked the door as hard as he could and it began to cave in. It took him a while, but finally he managed to break down the door. He hurried upstairs and picked out the best-conditioned of the 3 starfighters. He went through a brief systems check, opened the takeoff gate, booted up the thusters and took off. He shot a few rounds at the opposing army, and remembered the GIs. Just as he was about to go beyond the canyon and look for them, the first commanding officer of Eptima's army stepped out from behind the plateau. No enemies around. Dyce grinned. They were prepared for an assault, the turn of the battle could be at hand. Before he could react, he was thrown forward and he saw red on all monitors. He had been hit by a plasma beam, one that only matched that of a grand starfighter. He felt it getting hotter, he was hit badly. The engines were gone. He was going down, beyond the monitor screen was the soil of Niaj Qad...his doom. He frantically looked around for a parachute exit located in all of the civic starfighters. There was none. Appearently, the Jedi used the force to help them land safely. But Dyce was not a Jedi. Right before the fighter crashed Dyce thrusted himself out of the cockpit. Then the flames reached the combustable parts and the starfighter exploded, rocketing him even higher into the air. He fell for what seemed like an hour, and then he landed on his back. It was like being electricuted at high voltage. Dyce stuggled to stay conscious. He was lying out on the edge of the battlefield, his troops on the other side. Falling unconscious was like dying, he would be killed eventually. He began to stand, but then shook uncontrolably and fell over onto the ground. The sky turned darker until he was unconscious entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codj Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 Bac Rueben saw starfighters crash land nearby. He went over to see if they still lived and found his old bud, Dyce. Bac couldn't believe it. Dyce was respected by nearly the whole army only to stab it in the back. Bac pulled out his gun and almost fired, but he suddenly felt pity for the shaking body on the ground. When he was sure he was unconscious, he ordered his troops to take him and set him on the ground outside the battlefield. A few of his troops picked him up and ran him off. When his troops returned, They went back to the keep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 (im going to make this all dramatic and corney) The lights in the hallway were Scur stood flickered and died. There was only one left, a dmily lit flickering light by the door. The door slid open and a man all in black entered. The part of his face not covered by his black hood was almost hidden by shadow but the lighting kepy flickering over his cold dark face. His eyes glared at Scur he withdrew his lightsaber and ignited it "Jedi..." he whispered "...Your time is up" He walked towards scur slowly. He meant to kill the jedi....the jedi he had lost faith in.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 ((Sorry, but I don't get it. Did your character die or is the duel starting?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 My character is about to engage your in combat. My character is not dead he has turned evil and lost all faith in the jedi order Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 ((Ahhh I see, Ok then, Well I'll start then since you haven't yet)) Scur waved the other jedi off, not to interfere. "You can still turn to the lightside, don't give in to the hatred and anger, young one. You have much to learn." Scur stood watching the angered jedi slowly walk towards him. ((Your a Jedi Knight. Since I am the Consular II I should have the advantage. I think I should like injure you instead of killing you, like Obi-wan did to Anakin on Mustafar. Your choice!)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 (ok cool. And like on Mustafar with Anakin and Obi Wan, Zions power has increased greatly and he uses his anger as a weapon) Zion laughed "Lightside? That's pathetic, all the jedi want is power. They think they can police the galaxy but they can't. Their is no good or evil, there is only power and those too weak to seak it" Zion smiled "I should warn you jedi I am a lot stronger than I was before. Counceller or not you are no match for a si-" He stopped, his red blade almost touching Scur. He glared at him and aimed a slash at the jedi.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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