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Diego Varen

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Well, after my vacation and hosting company, I haven't had time to write. Now that my company is gone, I thought that I'd have some time. However, I was sorely mistaken. Starting tomorrow, I have five hours of football(soccer) practice every day except for Sundays. This means thirty hours of football a week. This is going to take a good chunk out of my free time. Thank you for your understanding.

 

No problem Niner. I hope Football practice goes good for you.

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I just got back from practice a little bit ago and I'm exausted. Actually, no, I'm EXAUSTED!!!! My friend almost died, lol. One kid threw up from all the running. Tomorrow's practice is double the running, too. I'm scared. My legs are achy my stomach hurts and my mind is numbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.............. I know that I'll make it through somehow and in the end it will make me better and stronger. But till then....

 

Thanks for your concern, Pottsie. :)

 

Consider drinking more water before, during, and after your practices to prevent heat problems.

OK folks, time to go back on topic....PMs are great for chatting like this. Please use it instead. Thanks, Jae

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Thanks for the tips, Jae. And yes, I'll try to get back on topic. Though, from this experience, I'll have better understanding of cramps and pains, and how your body reacts under stress and exsustion. I've already thought of some good analogies. Of course, the pain and stress that I'm feeling in my muscles and body would be very mild compared to that of the clones in this fic.

 

 

1,337, |/\|007, |=7|/\|!!!

 

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Okay, school starts tomorrow for me. This is going to mean slim to no free time. As I haven't been able to write in the past month or so, I don't think I'll be able to now.

 

However, I have had lots of time while running at soccer pactice to think about this fic. I've come up with some ideas to... juice up the story. Hopefully I'll get better at writing through school, and when I do have some free time, I'll try to work on this.

 

Thanks for being so patient everyone.

 

The Mom-erator would like to remind everyone to stay on topic, please. Chatting about school is a PM thing. Thanks, Jae

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Well I've been reading your story for the past couple of days and I want to say it's AWESOME!!!!!

 

I hope you will be able to finish it, if not then you did a good job.

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Thanks for reading it, ImpElite. I really appreciate it. Also, I will finish it, or I will try to someday. I still have motivation to write it and I haven't lost interest. I've just lost time. So thanks, and I'll do my best to finish it. :)

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Grivis, Moddies no likey bumpies!

 

I think according to the rules, it is alright to bump Fic Threads.

 

Double posting, which is not allowed in other places, is allowed in your own fic thread (say, you post a chapter, and make another post above or below for out-of-story discussion). However, bumping threads is viewed here the same as everywhere else. --Jae

 

Edit: There is one kind of 'bump' allowed, say for something you read in the Archives and you want to comment in the main thread in CEC. That's OK, as long as it's something more substantial than just a 2-word 'good story' kind of post--sorry for any confusion. --Jae

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Dear Niner_777,

 

I’ve read your story, “Amoung the Ruins” a few times and I really enjoyed it. While reading I got the idea to make a comic of it (if you don’t mind ofcourse). If you like the idea I could make some drawings.

 

Theone Thewayne

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Niner_777

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Dear Niner_777,

 

I’ve read your story, “Amoung the Ruins” a few times and I really enjoyed it. While reading I got the idea to make a comic of it (if you don’t mind ofcourse). If you like the idea I could make some drawings.

 

Theone Thewayne

 

Yes, of course you can make some drawings. :)

 

Thanks for the support everybody. Sorry I haven't been on much, at all. I'm uber-busy and will be so for at least two more weeks... maybe the rest of my life, lol.

 

Anyway, thanks for the support. I'm trying to make a writing club at my school. That way, I'll be doing a school activity while I write! :D

 

Thanks again, all.

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I'm making a one-page comic first, in black and white. It starts in chapter 2 when Storm says: yeah I hope so.

 

Questions about chapter 2:

Is Iota squad alone or are there some clones on the background? Like clone commanders in the movie (revenge of the sith)

 

And how does the squad look like: wich colours on their helmets or no colours?

 

And how does the landscape look like?

 

Edit:if you want to see the first drawings look here (they are not finished jet and I used the wrong paper) http://www.freewebs.com/theonethewayne (the site is also a little bit messy)

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thats very good, Theone. :thumbsup:

but the commando helmet seems a bit awkward, no offense. i would say that his eye-slit should be a little wider and thicker. but it's much better than what i could do, very good!! :)

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I'm making a one-page comic first, in black and white. It starts in chapter 2 when Storm says: yeah I hope so.

 

Questions about chapter 2:

Is Iota squad alone or are there some clones on the background? Like clone commanders in the movie (revenge of the sith)

 

And how does the squad look like: wich colours on their helmets or no colours?

 

And how does the landscape look like?

 

Iota Squad lands initially in a platoon of 4 squads and two AT-RT drivers. However, right from the start, they split up into their squads, so Iota Squad is alone until they meet back up at the Forward Command Post.

 

I was thinking that they'd have some blue color desings, kind of like in the game.

 

I hope that this helps. :)

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Iota Squad lands initially in a platoon of 4 squads and two AT-RT drivers. However, right from the start, they split up into their squads, so Iota Squad is alone until they meet back up at the Forward Command Post.

 

I was thinking that they'd have some blue color desings, kind of like in the game.

 

I hope that this helps. :)

 

thats very good, Theone. :thumbsup:

but the commando helmet seems a bit awkward, no offense. i would say that his eye-slit should be a little wider and thicker. but it's much better than what i could do, very good!! :)

 

Ok I will work on that. I'm trying to get the first official page done next week. Thank you everybody for your support!

 

P.s.: Niner_777 keep on writing!

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501 Journal - Planet earth

 

Amongst the pencils

 

Here are the first official drawings for the comic. The first one is made by myself (Theone Thewayne/Dwayne Becht). And the second one is in colour, a friend of mine (yorick de Ron) did this fantastic job. Enjoy and there's more to come.

 

before-jpg.jpg

 

gekkehuis-jpg.jpg

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Niner_777 Newbie

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That looks great!

 

I'd like to promise that I'll get another chapter up, but I can't be positive. :( I'll try my best. It's just that I've got so many other writing school assignments. :( :(

 

Thanks for the support!

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