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Gilian: I don't know.

 

*Starr enters the room*

 

Starr: *in the general direction of Kalidor* So...the Dark Lord of the Sith just saved your entire precious planet. Humiliating, isn't it?

 

Gilian: Of course, he did manage to kill whatever innocent people happened to be in a four-block radius of here...*to Deac* What did he say to you? The creature that was controlling the Guardian... I could sense the communication, but I couldn't hear it.

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*Cracken gets up, and looks up, to see the sun shine on Coruscant.*Finally, took us long enough. if it wasn't for these half wits.....

*He cocked his head slightly, catching K'Warra's message. he mulled over a few things in his head. Marked twice? when was the first time, and what am i marked for? he dissmissed it as quickly as it left, and took a look at Starr*

 

Again, we come togeather. How ar eyou, my apprentice?

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*Sir'Din runs up to Starr and Cracken, he knows he's taking an awful large risk... He thinks twice about placing a hand near his saber.*

 

Sir'Din "Where is Irvine. Why hasn't he came back? I sensed that he needed medical attention and he left the planet, when sometime later I am not able to sense him. Where the hell is he!" 'I have lost a portion of my family already, I'm not going to lose someone who I'd consider my brother...'

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((I call vote - who wants to end this thread in a few posts?

 

Reasons:

 

A) The next section of "my" plot doesn't require taking up everyone's full attention. It can run concurrently with BD's civil war, if he wants.

 

B) This thread is now as long as a "normal" Cantina thread (C9 wasn't normal. ;))

 

C) The name of this thread is The Dawning. The Dawning story has been finished. ^_~

 

Although if I must continue here, I will make the rest of the plot fit that theme, somehow.

 

 

However not going to unless BattleDog decides to stick his head in and say something. Because it's become traditional to provide a cliffhanger at the end of the thread setting the theme for the next one, and if the next one's gonna be the civil war than BD should probably do it. :D))

 

 

 

Starr: What makes you think we know?

 

*Gilian picks up her communication unit and begins typing in a code*

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[i agree. You know, the first Cantina thread had to end after twelve pages because people's browsers couldn't load it. And now, here we are, at 24 pages and deciding to end it for plot reasons.

Very well, let nefarious cliffhanger elements begin]

 

Ulna Shardes

 

*CyberEyes stands facing a cylinder, with blast shutters closed. From the seems, bright light filters out.*

 

CyberEyes: It's just like my earlier work at Station 169. Except this time...

 

*A scientist enters*

 

Scientist: Sir. The process is complete.

 

CyberEyes: Excellent.

 

Scientist: There were some...anomalies, however.

 

*CyberEyes spins round, his face fighting back fury*

 

CyberEyes: What kind of anomalies?

 

*The cylinder opens. Suspended from breathing apparatus is a grey haired woman, tall and slender. Her eyes are wide open and are pure black.*

 

CyberEyes: That's a fairly large anomaly!

 

Scientist: Sir, there's more. Check this brain scan.

 

*CyberEyes reads the readout that is handed to him*

 

CyberEyes: Fascinating! It appears that not only have you managed to mix up chromosomes and thereby turn Synrl Darkstar into a WOMAN, but you've also messed up his...I mean HER personality.

 

Scientist: I crossed referenced it with Starkillers. His brain was constructed from the DNA left by the Avatar.

 

CyberEyes: So, it's just pure Malice in there? Interesting....very interesting....

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((Righty-o! beginz0rs teh cliffhanger process!))

 

Sir'Din "Don't ignore me..."

 

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*Ulna Shardes*

 

*Inside the chamber the other clone was also finished, strangely this clone didn't have one shread of DNA planned to be used, nto only that but the clone was only but a mere child around the age of six or seven. The other two Scientists were taking the information on the incident.*

 

Ivan "Do you know who you are?"

 

*The boy remains silent*

 

Doctor "We are detecting that the child does have a good deal of intelligence, how ever it doesn't depict that he would have any knowledge at all, even barrowed deeply into his mind, suppressed."

 

Ivan "So he's smart through who ever he was, but who ever he was won't be there..."

 

Scientist "We can now remove the Ysalimari."

 

((wiats for deac to post))

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strangely this clone didn't have one shread of DNA planned to be used

 

Doctor "We are detecting that the child does have a good deal of intelligence, how ever it doesn't depict that he would have any knowledge at all, even barrowed deeply into his mind, suppressed."

 

That's practically in the negative area of making sense. Splain? :p))

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((1) 'something other then what can be logicallly expained happened' (other wise meaning that they attempted to use the dna for one of the people that they had, but someone took the advantage to 'snag' a new body for himself)

 

2) They were running a deep scan of the chilkds mind, and can't find if he had any knowledge of who he was (which would read as an undeveloped area)

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*Cracken looks at Sir'Din. He narrows his eyes, and looks almost disgusted at him, he turns to Starr while saying* Irvine is being held as a political prisoner. you cannot sense him because of the Ysalimari whom are depriving him of the ability to be sensed and use the Force.

 

*He takes out his comlink, and it chirrps. ABord the Eclipse Class STar Destroyer, Tojo recieves the comm, relieved.*

 

Tojo: Yes, m'lord?

Cracken: I'd assume it be safe on Coruscant now, you may let the civillian population back to teh surface. then move the fleet to standererd boarder patrols.

Tojo: Yes, m'lord. what about your son?

Cracken: Keep him detained.

 

*Cracken cut off the comm, and puts a hand on Starrs shoulder.*

I know where your mind truly lies, Starr. We will find a way to free her, i promise you that.

 

*As the gruop continues to plan thier moves, the traffic lanes are bustling above Coruscant once again, as people return to thier homes.......... *

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Deac: Hey...I...

 

*Deac collapses*

 

Hell...I shoulda figured this was gonna happen sooner or later...

 

*Deac falls unconscious. His face turns completely white and cold...*

 

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Sector Fifty Nine Two Zero, Outer Edge of Galaxy.

 

*The Shipyard where the ship that nearly devastated Coruscant floats in space.

A sqaudron of B-Wings, flankied by an A-Wing escort suddenly hypers in*

 

Station Commander: What is the meaning of this? You men aren't cleared.

 

Makon Jil: This is Makon Jil of the Neo Republican Front. We have been informed of what you built here. We give you two minutes to evacuate the outpost before we open fire and destroy it!

 

Station Commander: This is Treason! It's open rebellion you're talking about!

 

Makon: When the New Republic becomes the Empire it's time for a Revolution. You have one and a half minutes.

 

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Ulna Shardes

 

CyberEyes: Beta...

 

*Beta enters*

 

Beta, the time has come for you to replace the replicant Deac Starkiller and take you life back. However, you should meet the one to remove him...

 

*Another door enters, and the reconstituted clone enters*

 

Meet Malice. She's your new sister...

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Originally posted by Scar Da Kookee

((1) 'something other then what can be logicallly expained happened' (other wise meaning that they attempted to use the dna for one of the people that they had, but someone took the advantage to 'snag' a new body for himself)

 

2) They were running a deep scan of the chilkds mind, and can't find if he had any knowledge of who he was (which would read as an undeveloped area)

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so:

 

1) spontaneous generation of DNA? k...?

 

2) Children generally don't have any knowledge of who they are before experience in the world. So if they couldn't find it why do they assume he does...?

 

Oh great. I gotta run. Will actually post later. :D))

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1 & 2) its becuase the child turned out who wasn't supposed to be, aka, they picked someone to clone (from the selection) and it didnt turn out to be that person at all, even genetically. So logically it would at least be some attempt to find out if this 'child' is aware of who he is or not...

 

(that sound like a good explanation, cus if most of you dont already know, I'M HORRIBLE WITH WORDS!!! :()

 

))

 

*Ulna Shardes*

 

*The boy frightened by the group of scientists' and Ivan's confusion, runs after Malice, and hugs her leg. Then he notices the even more disturbing people outside, and pivits her leg. He gives out a small confused and frightened whine...*

 

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*Sir'Din listened to the conversation over the comm, he gritted his teeth, for he couldn't do anything to help the situation.*

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Coruscant

*Deac opens his mouth and gasps*

 

Deac: Avatar...

 

*Several warning sounds ring from his bio monitor*

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Sector 50920

 

*The Shipyard's defenses activate*

 

Station Commander: Surrender and prepare to face a full court martial!

 

Makon: I don't think that's going to happen.

 

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Ulna Shardes [i think I get the idea Scar...]

 

*Malice looks down at the child hugging her leg*

 

Malice: A child...of this flesh...yet not of it. A child of the third helix.

 

*The metaphorical cogs and gears in CyberEyes head click until*

 

CyberEyes: Well gentlemen, not only have you turned one of the most powerful sith lords in the galaxy into a woman, but now you've created an autistic Lokpihet Darkstar.

 

*Draws a blaster and swiftly kills the both of them*

 

You just can't get the staff these days.

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