Burnseyy

No, I think 3 posts would put the readers off, especially the more lazy ones. It'll be defined, easily, at the beginning of the thread. This is what I envision it will look like:

Star Wars: The Force Corrupted (in a bigger font (if we call it that))

Written by: Burnseyy, Darth_Yuthura and HIGH ON PIE 14

(typical SW introduction summary)

(then the story would begin)

btw, I've finished my K3 piece, it's up on the K3 group.

Well, I've finished mine *loud squeal of triumph*!

I'll just post it on K3, now, and sit back, relax and smile. I'll fix any mistakes you or DY find.

Oh, you meant characters. Oh crap.

16,789.

Yeah we'll need two posts.

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No, we couldn't possibly use up 40,000 could we? I've only written 2500, and I think DY has written a little more. It'd come to about 10,000 at most, not 40,000!

That's what I thought. We can get each of our K3 parts into 2 posts, and I'm sure that would be understood by all who read it. Next time, we won't have as much information written in each one... I'll try to end my piece now, without sounding too "wow, she ruined the end".

40,000 or 4000?

Cause if it's 40,000 - theres no problem.

but if theres 4000... then we're screwed. we'll just stick the story together, and post it one post after another. But we should say BEFORE the actual story "this is not an RPG..." because imagine if someone replied, inventing their own character and wrote an extra part of the story?

haha.

I liked him better than Luke, too! Han Solo is just the best in so many ways i always did prefer the anti-heros... (anti-heros are the heroes who don't do everything stereotypically heroic - and since Han Solo's a smuggler.. well... you get the point).

I'm not behind on writing, but DYs well ahead, in his SiD AND K3. but I've got QFR on the go, The Huntress... yeah, I've barely even started that, and with K3, I've got about 5 more paragraphs, (not included speech) left. I didn't realise how long my K3 piece had become, but I'll try and end it quickly, so the reader isn't bogged down.

I've put up a new update on K3, if you'd like to critisise it (updated it today).

I don't think it's predictable, but I think it should happen. You saw Bastila confronting Treveylan about Yuthura's and his relationship, somewhere in the middle of the story, but it was never really looked at in depth... so when Yuthura convinces Treveylan to turn into the man Bastila loves, it will cause some nice irony for the readers.

I say go for it!

Sure thing... Now to just go back to photobucket and get the html code *grumbles* it'll be up in a sec.

I feel sorry for you! And I'm going to start feeling sorry for myself when college comes around. Had a job interview today, BTW, and I'll be finding out on Monday whether I got it or not. suspenseful. At least I've got a new haircut and redying to keep myself preoccupied until then.

...And a Han Solo novel.

Nothing like a female assassin HK droid to gossip to and talk about fashion, ey?

I have but one question...

...How do the people in SW know if the droid is male or female? >_> Or is there no such thing as a female droid? (except HK of course)

Hmm... but doesn't Bastila fall in love with the your character (Revan in K1) WHEN he think's he's someone else?

Lmao.

You think that's funny? Seen the "Gossip is bad" one? that's just legendary.

w00t for above minimum wage, also! though that won't matter if I don't get the job. Thanks for the support.

Seen all of Darth Mad's comics yet?

I think it's very much important that the theme of love isn't just tossed aside, in this story... Yuthura cared for Revan. Though I have a question... What personality would Bastila have taken to - the actual Revan side of him? Because... wouldn't that have been part of Treveylan when Yuthura met him?

Good.

I wanted to start drawing my portraits, but my sister folded my last 30 sheets of plain paper in half and wrote "I <3 conor" all over it. :| I could have killed her.

No, the party started 2 hours ago. I'm too late, so I can't go now lol I haven't even gotten ready for it, so by the time I got there, I'd have to go home.

I'm staying online... besides, I didn't want to drink. I'd have been bored.

Yeah I realised that you allowed that part of you to become part of Yuthura's personality, too. Then again, she must have been like that, if she defied the order simply because they didn't want her to go and kill a load of slavers. Or something along those lines anyway.

I think I put a bit of myself into Darren, but he hasn't really developed yet. You get to see a bit more of Darren's character progressing in the next chapter, that I've started.

So in a nutshell, you're incredibly stubborn? I'm apparently the same. I don't want to be, but I think I've been called stubborn by everyone Ive known. Runs in the family, I guess...

Oops, I forgot I was supposed to be going to a party tonight... that's not really too good. Ah well, I'll wish that person happy birthday next time I see them. I got my hair cut yesterday... it's just above my jaw now - and my mum thinks it looks the same as before!

Well I'm not disliked, I just... don't have the same interests as a lot of people. I'm a good conversationalist, but I'm impatient and quirky - a little too quirky.

Anyway, I think a lot of people use smarts to trick people, or get what they want, one way or another, if not all the time, then sometimes. I can't say I'm innocent of it. Can you?

I meant one of the two that you offended. I didn't mean that people dislike you they don't, do they?

Well, I don't know your sister, and even though she sounds pretty annoying, and ungrateful, it's a completely biased view I'm recieving from you. I'm sure she's got good qualities too. Even the worst of people have good qualities!

I can't wait to start reading the Han Solo trilogy. He's one of my favourite characters, if not my favourite, from the films.

Sorry, my internet crashed when I was about to leave the house... so I left the page up, hoping it'd keep me online... it didn't.

I'll contact one of them now, and ask about it... I won't put any names until one of them guarantees that it's possible, that way one of them can't turn me away because of you.

You can say as much as you like about your sister - sometimes you just need to rant to someone besides, I'd be ranting just as much as you if I had a sister like that... oh wait, I do! Except it's on a much smaller scale. Still... $1300? God... what does she think she is?!

No offence to her or you.

I have to admit, having six months of unlimited money would sound lovely if I were in her shoes. But... I still wouldn't take it. Of course not. >_> I'm joking... though it would be tempting, if I was just offered it. Of course it stops becoming unlimited when the parents run out, ey? I bet they figure since you don't ask for much, she should be allowed it all.

Star Wars, Force Corrupted stands, unless HOP has outstanding name making skills, and can outdo that name. I'm getting ideas of how to write my stories from these SW books I've purchased, and so far I've only got about 5 chapters of Path of Destruction left. Next book is The Paradise Snare, which is a Han Solo triology.

I liked Force Corrupted too, if I do say so myself lol it just has that ring to it.

The name doesn't matter too much to me, and HOP will have his say, when his teachers stop believing him to be the ultimate multitasking drone who can complete homework in an instant.

$1300?! That's like £650... I don't think we have anything that expensive, except for a house and a car... obviously. Well, she needs to earn the money herself. She can't just expect your parents to GIVE her all that money, can she?

Ohh, if she were on the streets for one week, she'd break down.

I don't think it's so important that we need to create a whole new user. Besides, a lot of people won't know who it is, or what it stands for. No, I think if worse comes to worse, one of us should post it, and simply put in big colourful font, (so everyone sees it), our names. We can simply comment on it, saying thank you, at different times, and answer any questions in regards to our piece that people ask. It sounds fair enough, and I have no hard feelings against the person who posts the actual thread.

Did you look at any of the names I suggested, way back?