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i get short bursts of inspiration that fade after about a minute lol but if the inspiration stays with me, im determined to write it.
i do hate it when people steal ideas though!
if you ever get a good idea you should post it here.
thank you btw. ^^
ps. do you know if Mira worked for anyone consistantly as a Bounty Hunter?
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well i understand what you say, and you're far better than i am with any other language
i tried to learn spanish and french and japanese.. i basically only know how to say 'hello' and count. =/
if you want to use more 'intellegent' words, then go on http://www.thesaurus.com - i use it sometimes, when i really need a change of word and can't think of one.
but make sure you check with someone else if the word you choose is right for the sentence.
synonyms can be a nusciance.
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hope youre having a good time HOP.
i thought youd like to know i'm working on a fanfiction called 'The Huntress'
perhaps the main character will interest you haha.
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(oh and i didn't mention...)
synonyms are vital if other authors are using simple words, it won't reach the potential it could be.
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if there's a lot of typos, then yes, it takes from the story. but i saw people commenting on the fact it was 'hutt' not 'hut.' but you only made that typo once, compared to about 5 other times. you did spell padawan wrong in the first bunch of chapters, but i knew what you meant, so i ignored it.
i don't like the new Yuthura story thats out lol i read the first chapter and thought... its not as good as the one im reading and i dont fancy reading the same story twice. i liked your idea because it was original ^^
about the Atris thing? i'm all for it haha. Atris wasn't killed if you were light side - instead she stayed with the holocrons. after the defeat of the sith, she could have realised 'maybe im on the wrong side.' cause she seems like that sort of person... and when the exile goes to 'question her' about the holocrons, she could ask to be taken back, and be denied.
because we hate her. ^^
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well, the only negatives i can think of were a few spelling mistakes
but if you're as fed up as me with people talking about petty typos, you have nothing to worry about
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in your Yuthura story ive read up to the chapter where shes returning from Nar Shaddaa to Coruscant
it's so good so far.
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Well, i think keeping to a limited amount of writers would be for the best.
I think yours, mine and HOPs 'approaches' to fan fiction are similar, but also dissimilar, and it'd be a pain if loads of people submitted their ideas, and started 'debates.'
what i think would be a great idea
is to do one POV as Revan
one POV as Exile (within a Jedi enclave, or with a group of other Jedi - council members if you will.)
and one POV from the Republic
it'd be good to try and stick to a limited amount of POVs as well.
any ideas on multiple plots? i'll let you speak first. ^^;