Vaelastraz Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 Unbelievable. This has to be the most active thread in this forum. 10.000+ views ... amazing. Surprising, even though the fic is great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 22, 2006 Author Share Posted June 22, 2006 I'm just a special girl Anyway... ---Chapter Eighteen--- Elron groaned as he looked out the window. He hated snow. However a moment later, the sun came out. "Hallelujah!" he cried, "No more effing snow!!" ---End--- You asked for it, JK Alright, if you're really that desperate for something, I'll let you in on a little secret: I'll be entering the latest Dueling Circle Challenge on the Unofficial KotOr Fanmedia site. Stories are released on the 26th, I think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 Even though it weren't a proper Chapter, it was alright. Anyway, any updates on Two Years, Two Masters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 22, 2006 Author Share Posted June 22, 2006 TYTM will be up shortly. Well...it'll be up when my laptop can connect to the internet, seeing as my desktop no longer has a normal keyboard... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 23, 2006 Share Posted June 23, 2006 great, nice chapter [/sarcasm] maybe now you can give us the reviews you owe pottsie and me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 28, 2006 Author Share Posted June 28, 2006 You guys will never guess what... Neeeeeew Chapteeeeeerrrr![/singsong voice] A thanks to DarthOxyClean for the PM. It got me to start thinking about the Plight of Darkness again. Greatly appreciated Then I guess I can thank the rest of you all for being a pain compelling me to write <.< _____________________________________________________ ---Chapter Eighteen--- The sun broke over the horizon, its beams falling over a restless and dishelved Revan as he stood outside Khoonda, his eyes bloodshot from lack of sleep. His cloak flapped lightly in the wind, his hands jammed in pockets as he stared out across the snow-covered landscape. A lit cigarette smoked in his mouth as his eyes narrowed, trying to fend off the feeling of anguish and frustration. These dreams have left me alone for the past five years. he mused to himself as he removed the cigarette from his lips for a moment, blowing a strip of smoke from his mouth, taking a few untainted breaths of fresh air. Why do they plague me again now? Ever since rejoining Bastila and the others, the dark, prophecy-like dreams had once again disrupted his nights to the point where he was afraid to close his eyes. It won’t happen. She won’t die. I won’t let it happen. he kept telling himself, but it didn’t make the dreams any less real. “Revan?” He started at Bastila’s voice. He hadn’t heard or sensed her approached. “You weren’t in bed when I woke up…” “Couldn’t sleep.” he said gruffly without looking at her, putting the cigarette to his lips again and taking a slow pull. Her eyes narrowed at the movement. “I thought you said you quit.” “I did.” he answered, glancing at her before flinging the butt into the snow. “Revan…your eyes…” she moved over to him, placing a hand on his face and turning him to face her, “How much sleep did you get last night?” He looked at her, his eyes soft. He didn’t answer. “What’s wrong?” she asked, her voice dropping to a whisper as she moved closer to him, “Don’t shut me out.” He had to look away from her, his eyes once again scanning the landscape. “The dreams are back.” “Oh…” her hands dropped to his chest, “You mean…” “They’re worse than before.” he murmured. Darkness. Sith. Prophecy. “They’re so much more…real.” Smoke. Screaming. Blood. “We’ve been through this, Revan…” she said, laying her head on his chest, “I’m fine. They’re just dreams.” He folded his arms around her, holding her close and savoring the feeling of her body against his. He didn’t answer. ~*~*~*~ The winter sun fell brightly across Elron’s face as it spilled in through the window. He cracked his eyes open, stirring due to the extra light. He stretched a moment, then curled his arm around the waist of the woman who lay curled against him. “I was wondering when you were going to wake up.” Briana whispered at his touch, her eyes still closed. “Good morning to you too.” he said, kissing her forehead lightly, “How long have you been awake?” “Long enough.” “Which would mean…crack of dawn?” “You got it.” She slipped from beneath his arm, gracefully standing, the toned muscles in her back flexing beneath her camisole as she strode across the room. “It’s after ten.” she stated, and he rolled over, putting a pillow over his head. “Great. Wake me up after twelve.” Next thing he knew, a pile of robes and a lightsaber landed on his chest, making him jump. “Alright, I’m up, I’m up…women…” “Just for that…” his belt hit him full in the face. ~*~*~*~ “Here,” Bastila said, sitting down at the table with a tray of food in her hands, “I brought you some breakfast.” Revan smiled, giving her a quick wink, “Thanks.” He scanned the different foods, finally deciding on a plate of wheat toast and butter. When he didn’t take anything else, Bastila spoke. “Only a plate of toast?” she asked incredulously, eyebrows raised, “Don’t tell me Revan has suddenly lost his infamous appetite.” “What about you?” he countered, “I haven’t seen you eat a thing this morning.” “Oh, I’ve started watching my figure,” she joked, “My stomach’s been getting a bit larger than it should lately…” “Hey,” he said, slipping his arm around her waist and pulling her closer to him on the bench, “As long as my arm can fit around it, it’s the perfect size.” She smiled, her cheeks turning a light pink. “I’m quite partial to that color.” he commented. “Hey guys,” The pair looked up, drawing a bit further apart again as Elron and Briana sat down. “Seeing as we weren’t woken up before dawn today,” the Exile commented as he sat down, looking to Revan, “I take it we didn’t get any new leads?” “We did, actually.” he answered, “But both were false. Lead to a dead end within an hour and a half each.” “So then we have no idea where these ruins are?” Briana asked, then to Bastila as she pointed to the food, “May I?” “Of course.” she answered with a nod. “No, unfortunately.” Revan said, answering her earlier question. “It seems we’ve been to nearly every ruin on the planet’s surface.” Elron sighed, drumming his fingers on the table. “On the surface.” Bastila pointed out, “Who ever said that what we were looking for was on the surface?” “She’s right…the ruins on Manaan were beneath the sea, hundreds of leagues from the surface.” “It’d be nice if we had the records from the Enclave,” Elron commented, running a hand exasperatedly through his hair, “They’d have made a note of almost any place on the entire planet.” “One would think…” Revan murmured. _________________________________________________ Booyah, baby. ForceFight's back in action Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted June 28, 2006 Share Posted June 28, 2006 'Tis a mighty fine chapter. But why would they still use that archaic measurement (leagues), which is an Imperial unit, and therefore blasphemous to sci-fi. P.S. The line through text thingy uses [s ][/s] tags. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 28, 2006 Author Share Posted June 28, 2006 Well...they're still using archaic measurments because...well...I said so? Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Good Chapter ForceFight. I hope for more. Will you continue this now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 great chapter, FF. and for that, you still owe me something . and ill keep bothering you till i get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Catto Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Quote: "Booyah, baby. ForceFight's back in action," un-quote haha, damn straight ... Nice chapter ForceFight, really hope to see more ... i think its safe to say that, i speak for all of us here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 Thanks guys! I know this chapter didn't really progress the story at all...but...yeah. It's getting easier... I think you guys can expect a few more chapters for PoD...chances are they'll all be off the top of my head rather than planned, but....yeah... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ztalker Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Heya I just found out about this fic ( i'm sorry.. ) and it's just AMAZING! The way you describe everything is just perfect...everything that's being said is written to fit the character. Now i see why this is the nr.1 story around here! Keep it up! PS: (possible) HUGE spoiler My stomach’s been getting a bit larger than it should lately…” Is there a baby-Revan on the way? The "..." is bit to obvious imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 Thanks! I feel so special... Heheheh...now where would be the fun in answering that question? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 The fun would be finding out that there'll be an army of Revanlings taking over the galaxy. @Ztalker: That's what I thought too. Great minds think alike, eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 29, 2006 Share Posted June 29, 2006 Personally, I liked the chapter where Elron yelled, "Hallelujah!" better, bu to everyone there tastes Compared to your other chapters this one SUCKED!!!!!!! Good thing it's opposite day Great chapter, keep them coming, etc. etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted June 30, 2006 Share Posted June 30, 2006 ^Opposite day? Care to explain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 30, 2006 Author Share Posted June 30, 2006 He's saying that the chapter was actually very good @Ztalker: That's what I thought too. Great minds think alike, eh? Not tellin' And JK, I'll just have to work a little harder to come up with another chapter like the 'Hallelujah!' chapter Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKnight707 Posted June 30, 2006 Share Posted June 30, 2006 Well, FFWM, it's gonna be tough to top it Care to explain? No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 30, 2006 Share Posted June 30, 2006 ^Opposite day? Care to explain? he means that he will say the opposite of what he feels. like if hes happy hell say hes sad. i thought you knew that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ztalker Posted June 30, 2006 Share Posted June 30, 2006 @Ztalker: That's what I thought too. Great minds think alike, eh? I couldn't agree with you more! (Especially since i read VG cats too...again, great minds...) @ Topic: Just wondering...are there even cigarettes in the SW universe? putting the cigarette to his lips again and taking a slow pull. I know it fits the scene perfectly though...it makes Revan even more bad-ass. Unless he would use his saber to light it up, it couldn't have been better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted June 30, 2006 Author Share Posted June 30, 2006 Well, there aren't cigarettes...per say. In Episode III, Obi-Wan enters the bar while in pursuit of the assassin and some guy askes him if he was interested in 'deathsticks' or something along those lines. It seems to me to be basically the same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uc1 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 I just read the entire thing. Thoroughly enjoyable. Plans for new chapters coming soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaredhimself31 Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 More must have more!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 heh, don't we all? welcome to the forums uc1. @ jared: Green Day fan, i presume? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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