Anakin Skywalker Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 This is my first fic about KotOR people so, it may not be any good... but I'll get progressively better... The main character in this story is Atton Rand, but it mentions Sera Tana, Pottsie's Jedi Exile, or should I say Sera Rand. This is a.... feeble attempt to say the least.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 Star Wars Atton vs. the Droids A long time ago, in a Galaxy far far away... The Jedi War was over, the bounties were called off of the Jedi. The Jedi Temple was being rebuilt on Courscant, after much deliberation at Telos... but Sera Tana, a leading member on the Jedi Council, had sided with Atton, her apprentice and husband, that the Jedi Order be rebuilt on Courscant. Of course, Visas and Brianna, being very loyal to Sera agreed with the two. During the rebuilding of the Jedi Temple, Sera had sent Atton, T3, and HK-47 out to Telos, to ensure that Citidel Station had enough gas... "Hey what do you think your doing?" Atton asked T3 as he bumped into his leg. "Beep beep dwoo wheep!" T3 replied. "Sera needs the Ebon Hawk.... what for?" Atton asked. "Deet deet doo..." T3 beeped sadly. "You don't know... why don't you know you little Trash Compactor...." Atton started. HK-47 walked into the room. "Query: What is it you require of this little one, meat-bag?" HK asked. "Look stay out of this HK..." Atton said. "Statement: Meat-bag, I would be more than happy to terminate you on Masters command..." HK said. Atton burst out laughing.... "Query: What do you find so funny, meat-bag?" HK asked. "Sera, asking me to be terminated.... oh that's rich...." Atton said. HK lifted his blaster rifle. "Warning: Meatbag.... I will kill you and tell the Master that a Telosian killed you." HK said. Atton thought nothing about it, and brought his silver blade up and cut right through the blaster rifle. "Not so strong are you now?" Atton asked. HK backed down. "Now, T3, why does Sera need the ship?" Atton asked. "Beep beep doo weep?" T3 asked. "Because, I will need it, so I'm on a need to know basis." Atton said. "Beep beep dwooooooo..." T3 said. "Well in that case, you can't have it..." Atton said. A stun bolt came firing from within a room in the Ebon Hawk. "HK-47, if I die..... tell my wife I said....... Shisen hoisen shingle hiner...." Atton said falling unconsious. "Statement: An odd way of saying 'I love you,'" HK said puzzled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Looking foward to it Anakin. Atton is one of my favourite TSL characters, after Sion. Anyway, this might not fit into my Sera Tana Saga plans since (Major major spoiler below. Read at your own risk). Sera Tana dies. Edit: Reading it, it was good, although there was a lot of dialogue. In my game, Atton has a yellow Lightsaber, but this is your short Fic, so I'll let you off. Feel free to use Sera Tana at any time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 Thanks for the comment Pottsie.... but I like silver blades... hehe.... they're so shiny and what not.... btw your spoiler hurt... I can't believe Sera dies.... although your fic, so you can do what ever you want with her.... @ Pottsie (below) Brianna is more of a purple... and you will see that later on in another fic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Believe me, I like silver Lightsabers too, but not for Atton. I use that for Brianna the Handmaiden, when I'm playing a male Exile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Lolz, neat fic. Also Pottsie, i'm astonished! PS: Fics all the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Nice fic folks. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediAthos Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Interesting, knowing how Atton feels about T-3 the arguement definitely isn't much of a stretch What language is that last line by Atton? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KotO[REvan] Posted January 2, 2007 Share Posted January 2, 2007 Good job. Though I think you're useing the phrase 'meat-bag' too much in HK-47's lines. Otherwise than that, good job. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 I only used the word Meatbag 3 times...... but thanks everyone for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 I enjoyed the verbal sparring--would have liked to see more of it, actually. Why did the stun bolt come from the middle of the ship? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrPhil2501 Posted January 15, 2007 Share Posted January 15, 2007 That was great! Atton sure showed HK-47 whose boss! Until Hk retaliated. Good stuff! I wanna hear more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabish Bini Posted January 17, 2007 Share Posted January 17, 2007 Nice fic, looking forward to more from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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