HIGH ON PIE 14

Yes, characters, not words. But if we separate each chapter into two posts, we should be fine I think. Yes, oh crap. Two posts it is then! That should give us each a little less that 27,000 characters to work with. More than enough. Give us all some wiggle room when writing too. My section won't be too long, so, we'll see.

~HOP

Yes, characters, not words. But if we separate each chapter into two posts, we should be fine I think. Yes, oh crap. Two posts it is then! That should give us each a little less that 27,000 characters to work with. More than enough. Give us all some wiggle room when writing too. My section wont be too long, so, we'll see.

~HOP

40,000

I know that seems like a lot, but my last FP chapter was over 40,000. Like DY said, we will probably have to split it into two or three posts. As to how to reply to things. I think we could each reply as we wish, though, it would be best if there was a question about Burnseyy's section, to let her adress it. I think we should each adress comments about our own parts if possible.

~HOP

This does not seem predictable to me. Earlier on, yes. Whith Yuthura on her mission, many of the readers probably are not even thinking of Revan. I like your idea very much. Though it will probably end sadly for Yuthura, I'm guessing.

~HOP

I did not see what you wrote to Burnseyy so I have no idea of the specifics of what you told her. I'd love to go over it with you either here or via pm, whichever you prefer.

~HOP

Will do. Incidentally, because of the 40000 character limit how are we going to fit all three of our stuff into one chapter?

~HOP

I've seen your hair and I would let you in just for that! (well I saw your old hair cut) Anyway, good luck with your college, I hope you get in. So you are a Solo fan? He was the favorite from the original star wars, for me, I think. I'll probably get pounded for this, but I liked him better then Luke.

Hehe, I'm behind with writing though. Well I have a three day weekend so I'll probably get some stuff done.

~HOP

Okay, I know this is long in the coming, but I finally read your rough draft. I like it very much, and I thinki that this is some of the best, if not the best, emotion you have written. The only thing I would sufggest is a bit more physical description of perhaps the robe fallling off or the surrounding area. But that is my writing style...honestly there is not much I can offer with this. Other than a bit more physical description...no other suggestions. When I read this I was like "wow!" I'll save the rest of my thoughts on the chapter for SiD.

Sorry this took so long.

~HOP

Hey Burnseyy!

Oooh, just saw your pm. Wheee! Thank you thank you thank you! Okay, I'll stop now. Unless you want to post this pic in your art thread, would you mind posting it in TFP? I would do it myself, but I don't want people accidentally giving me credit instead of you. Sorry I've been off the last few days busy with a hectic start of school. Its good to be back.

~HOP

I love them too!

I just did google images: Kotor Comics. I had seen tham on a KOTOR fan art site a long time ago but coulod not find them. There os a site for it too...

Try googling it, if you can't find it tell me and I'll check my computer's history and givve you a web site. I know the author/illustrator has his/her own sire that has all of these comics. So let me know how it goes.

28 is not old! But compared to me, yes, as I'm just a little more than half your age. *sigh* Better get to the AP Art History essay. *shudders*

Loggin off for now. Talk to you later!

~HOP

Okay, thanks! I probably wont get to it until the weekend, though.

Can you believe is only my second day of junior year and I already have three essays, a reflection, four worksheets and five chapters with annotations all due tomorrow?! Freaking insane...insane I tell you!

I have not found time to post in my TFP or the CEC for that matter since I started school. I'll make sure to read your fic when I get the chance.

~HOP

Good except today was the first day of school for me. Got loads of homework...but other than that things are going good. I'm even getting on the forums a bit which I didn't expect to do this whole week.

My writings going to slow a bit but I'll get through it. At least I'm still getting ideas, which is the important part I guess.

How are things for you?

~HOP

Hahaha, I will, but tomorrow when I'm not - er - dead. I'm off to K3 to read your rough draft. Been meaning to do that for a while now...

~HOP

Thats right, you're in college (Damn these brainfarts! ) Thats about how it works in college here as well. Thankfully I don't have a job...yet. I want one, but I don't think I can handle it on top of school. Our homework is put up online so we can check it when we get home - I already have a 9 page essay for Art History due the second day of school. Thats right, only one day to do it...and that just one class [insert long rant here] Urgh...

They WILL come. Good song for Basty!

~HOP

Fifth subject? At this "prison" I'm in I take seven. (Social Justice, Honors British Lit, A.P. U.S. Government, A.P. Art History, Honors Spanish 4, Algebra 2, and A.P. Environmental Science) How long is each class and how often. Mine are everyday for 45 mins.

Oh, we are thinking of a song for every character. Can't think of more at the moment, I'm having a brainfart. (just like JKR - better not write anything until tomorrow.) Hehe, that a good one for Mira.

~HOP

A bit random today, are we, Burnseyy?

Sorry I've been off most of today. 1st day of school tomorrow. Been running around getting pencils, pen drives and whatnot.

Juhani = "I Kissed a Girl"

Kreia = "Whicked Witch of the West" (from Wizard of Oz)

~HOP

Got a few fic ideas floating around. I know I got quiet there but thats cause I'm typin up the next chapter for TFP. Don't worry, I have not forgotten the SiD chapter you sent me via pm. I still reading it.

~HOP

That sucks for you guys! Poor British kids. School in the U.S. is pretty lax comparted to Europe. Thats why I might do Cambridge for college. (university and college are the same here.)

I don't understand your Mandy comment. Could you rephrase? Thanks!

~HOP

lol, I wonder what I'm hiding...

Those assassins had better watch themselves though or they will both wake up breathing through tubes.

~HOP

I like the invincible person idea too. But I'm introducing another character who will fill that role...don't want to give too much away.

Nobody is named Tim in my area, so I don't have that problem. Lucky! I wish I could go to college. But college is for people who have completed 4 years of High Scool in the U.S. Still, I go to private school, so you do have to pass a certainstandard to get in, so there are not too many dunderheads.

~HOP

Hello James!

(Real name is Tim in case you didn't see on Burnseyy's profile.) Hmmm...lets see...there was a kid in my Chem named James...only ever said three words to him. And thats the only James related story I have.

~HOP

Hello Sophie!

Well thats cheery.

I have never known a Sophie before. I don't think there are many people in the U.S. that share your name. With that section, I'm trying to show that she is not invincible as she has been portayed thus far.

Poor burnt shoulders. That must have been a bad burn for it to still be around. Ah, but I have school the day after tomorrow, to tend to.

~HOP

True, in order to work together we should know some stuff about eachother, makes things easier. My name is Tim.

I most certainly did get those ideas down. Now I have to refine them so they sound good. I added a whole section from Mandy's point of view. (the crazy kill everybody girl)

~HOP

OK. I'm just getting tons of new writing ideas for TFP and K3. I have to go write these down. Talk to you later!

~HOP