Sam Fisher Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 *Stole Kain's move* I think its well written, I want to see some more if you have any Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeleneRayne Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 Originally posted by Sam Fisher I want to see some more if you have any there'll be another here today, I have to write them daily And Tyrion I like yours too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrion Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 Originally posted by SeleneRayne And Tyrion I like yours too. Heh, do you want to turn this thread(or make another) into a big thread full of poems that everyone can join into? That's about the last original thing left to make in the swamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astrotoy7 Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 a poem thread....didnt mike windu do one...... *scratches head....cant remember properly* I have to admit. I write *alot* I find it very therapeutic. Im always thinking of different ways to rearrange words..... Heres one from Astro - I made it up *right now* Three Days by hn(aka astro) 3 days for you to see The sun just once, for us. The moon came twice, we caught it high, Halved in its power. In the tides of doubt we swim, and glance towards set horizons. Looking forward with closed eyes, In search of dreams to ripen * * * mtfbwya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sivy Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 some good poems here... but none as good as... Morse Code, oh how i love thy . _ _ . . _ . . _ _ _ . _ . . _ . _ _ _ . . . _ . _ _ . . . _ . _ . _ _ . _ . _ . _ _ . _ _ . . . _ . _ _ _ . . _ . _ . _ . . . _ _ . _ . _ . . . _ . . _ _ .. _ _ _ _ another? ok Skip Pip Tip Nip Snip Skip Pip Tip Nip Snip Sh*t Hit Bit Tit Cut Tut Butt Shut Brow now how cow Clown brown frown down Funny money honey Coney phoney baloney Horny corny Born horn torn Bore yore tore Pork cork York Dig pig big SIG stig Dug plug tug glug Glue pooh you Me three key tea tree House mouse moose loose SPIDERS! !!! *bows* I thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeleneRayne Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 okey here is my latest one today. It's kinda dark, sorta a different edge than the others. *Demon* Running, falling, fearing, trying to get away, the demon, it haunts me, I cannot escape, His eyes burn, like fire, dark burgundy, His touch, soft, careesing, sinister, his alluring look, piercing dark eyes, he sees right through me, right through my soul, subtle kiss, sends infinite passion through my quivering body, sweet poison, I plea for release, His power holds me, to an everlasting gaze, the last kiss, I cannot escape.... what do you guys think? Yeah thats a good idea, this thread is the thread of poems and reviews! And good poems guys! Siv that was awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie™ Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 Originally posted by SeleneRayne okey here is my latest one today. It's kinda dark, sorta a different edge than the others. *Demon* Running, falling, fearing, trying to get away, the demon, it haunts me, I cannot escape, His eyes burn, like fire, dark burgundy, His touch, soft, careesing, sinister, his alluring look, piercing dark eyes, he sees right through me, right through my soul, subtle kiss, sends infinite passion through my quivering body, sweet poison, I plea for release, His power holds me, to an everlasting gaze, the last kiss, I cannot escape.... what do you guys think? Me like I put one of my poems on my wallpaper Clicky! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kain Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 That Demon one is about ME!! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeleneRayne Posted May 1, 2004 Author Share Posted May 1, 2004 Originally posted by Kain That Demon one is about ME!! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Awww Kain how'd you know? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Wilson Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 Very nice, first is a bit 'nice' for me though. Originally posted by Kain Poetry isn't my forte', actually. Everytime I wrote a poem, it ended up with someone dead or being tortured... Mine are like that or about hypcrocay in socity. In fact heres one now:eek: : How ironic How ironic you said what you did How ironic you did what you did How ironic you died as you did Yet we are all like this, A bunch of hypocritical parrots, When will we break from the flock, And be sheared? never said it was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pie™ Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 Originally posted by Captain Wilson never said it was good That's the coolest part of poetry, it can suck, and you'll still be able to sell it to a couple of million people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icemaniax Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 hey those are pretty good ::insert thumbs up smiley here:: I sent this one in to Poetry.com , didnt win, but it did get published in a book. the book, "The Colors Of Life" -International Library of Poetry Into The Sun Free your soul & free your mind, Leave the world the world behind, Fly up high, Or fly down low, Use your heart & then you'll know, & in the sky there are no doors, You can't be stopped the choice is yours, Use your heart & then you'll see, exactly where you want to be, Don't think you can't, Don't think you won't, Open your heart & pass the doors, With that power you will flow, Up so high that you will soar, Fly out far above the sea, & within your heart you will be free. and then this one. Wondering Love I hold you close, I have no care, I kiss your lips, & touch your hair, Your hair so soft, your lips so sweet, Being with you makes me feel complete, My heart beats so lightly, My breath is so silent, I've been searching for love, and I think that I found it, Do you think, or feel the same? Do you love me? or am I insane, I want to be with you forever, No matter what I want us together, I hope you feel the same for me, If it is true love, it needs more than me. "I" think my poems all suck, but these two i have gotten awards, and one was published.. so they must be semi good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Wilson Posted May 1, 2004 Share Posted May 1, 2004 and another: Blood runs up hill Strange that with all our airs, And all our graces, Were the same inside. Strange then that we judge One another, we argue against the Obvious. All things fall up, not down, All blood flows down hill, not up, yet we still try And it makes no sense why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Windu Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 OH, NOW WE ALL SHOW A SUDDEN INTEREST IN POETRY?! *goes off to cry in a corner* I get no respect for this stuff whatsoever. I feel so left out. Man this has been a real depressing start to the weekend. EDIT: For all of you too lazy to go look at my website. For those of you who even really care: here's the entire list of poems I've freakin created. *Shells* Screams break the silent night, Awaken in fright, An unnerving flashback, Visions of another time, Eternally retold in their minds, The same fear, Every breath may be the last. They were men once, But that time has long since passed, Faded away, As the moon before dawn. They were men once, But now, They're just mere shells, Lying around the battlefield. *Cold* Slowly descend, Your morale slipping, A tragedy in the making, Sensing your own death, It flashes in your eyes, A battle you cannot win, A fight you know shall be your last. The thin mass of cold steel, It strikes where the essence of life lies, Deeply rooted, it severs the connection, leaves behind a shell, where once there stood a man. The battle is over, And as the final moments of your life pass, Before you feel the numbness take over, A hand outstretched towards all your loved ones, Soft words left unspoken on your lips. *Exile* Turn your back on a faceless town, Your task is done, There's nothing left for one such as yourself, Leave the only place you once knew, The only place you ever cared for, Where you hoped your children would play, It's now chaos, Death lurks around every corner, You are not fearful, Why do you walk away, Flee when those you love need you most? The answer lies within your scabbard, The blood flows from your hilt. *Silent as the Shadows Fly* Shadows lay naught still, but flash from thy eye, Here come the silent ones, Here come the unholy ones, They come for the bounty, Death has placed upon your head, Surrender your body, Your soul fills with fright, Death will have you, On this silver night. *Forgotten* I'm walking here, All alone, The ocean sprays my face, The water shrouds my tears, The sand, so rough, so coarse, It welcomes me, I look up, I feel cold, dead, Its taken over me, And as the ocean carries me, My numbness leaves, I realize, I'm just the shell of the man I once was, And so I'm out there, Drifting so far away, And as the water goes over my head, I shall utter a faint good-bye And leave to join her *Perfect* Sometimes I wonder How It feels To wander down that road And find utopia Where everything is just right Everyone lives happily ever after The loser gets the perfect girl And magnificent events unfurl It would feel so magical It would feel so fantastic To find the road That leads to such a special place And I believe I may have found it Because when I look into her eyes I can see it And I know everything's going to be perfect *Honor Him* It's come down to this, Our paths cross, And we meet on the battlefield There is no one else We stare each other down Our hearts beat faster The rush of adrenaline To honor our families To defend their names We charge head on And at the end of the night Our fight is ended One of us stands victor The other is lost I pay respect And leave my brother *sigh* I'll leave you all with this "I'm twisted cause one side of me wanna move on, but the other side wanna break down and cry"-Burn(Usher) So thank you, I really do feel that way. I'm just holding myself back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astrotoy7 Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Originally posted by Mike Windu OH, NOW WE ALL SHOW A SUDDEN INTEREST IN POETRY?! *goes off to cry in a corner* I get no respect for this stuff whatsoever. I feel so left out. Man this has been a real depressing start to the weekend. dont be depressed Mike. Ive been to your site only recently. I think any form of writing is very personal and rarely talk about it with anyone, unless *they ask to talk about it*...and thats only happenned twice, once with a counsellor when I was 15, and the second time with my partner, whom I met 4 years ago... yeah..chicks dig poetry.... feel free to PM me if you want to talk about writing mtfbwya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icemaniax Posted May 2, 2004 Share Posted May 2, 2004 Originally posted by Astrotoy7 dont be depressed Mike. Ive been to your site only recently. I think any form of writing is very personal and rarely talk about it with anyone, unless *they ask to talk about it*...and thats only happenned twice, once with a counsellor when I was 15, and the second time with my partner, whom I met 4 years ago... yeah..chicks dig poetry.... feel free to PM me if you want to talk about writing mtfbwya lol, he mean's he made a thread awhile back, and like 8 people posted in it, then this comes up and i believe i will make the 40th post. not sure though *pats Mike* s'ok bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeleneRayne Posted May 2, 2004 Author Share Posted May 2, 2004 awww Mike. your poems are really good! I like them, I don't think I'll ever get as good as you! and yes I did look at them. I'm sorry my fav is *Forgotten* and the rest of you guys, your poems are awesome too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrion Posted May 3, 2004 Share Posted May 3, 2004 Heh, sorry Mike, I don't look at anybody's sigs anymore so I overlooked yours. 21st Century War- It was another day Foreign was tranquility For the lords of fire lay My brothers lost thier vitality Behold; the deadly creatures Who I could not see Fear not, said the preacher Tomorrow, God disagreed My walk to home was unpleasant With each step I heard a scream Oh no, there goes another peasant Turned into a ghastly cream Yesterday, home was intact Safe, with earthly care Today however, it was not fact Destroyed by men, who I do not dare With staffs of smoke; godly armor Clearly ready to extend thier lives What prey they had, a simple farmer I knew it was me, minutes left alive They came to me, sending me down I yelled out in turmoiled fury But it was redundant, I was bound Left dead, all they took was my curry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kain Posted May 3, 2004 Share Posted May 3, 2004 Off topic, but Tyrion, do you have that quote making fun of Bush or in support of him? Oh, and again you're all nuts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Rythe Posted May 3, 2004 Share Posted May 3, 2004 I hated writing poems the take ages. Go Kain, your move. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrion Posted May 3, 2004 Share Posted May 3, 2004 Originally posted by Kain Off topic, but Tyrion, do you have that quote making fun of Bush or in support of him? Making fun of him. Really, do you think I'm stupid enough to not get the irony in that quote? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeleneRayne Posted May 4, 2004 Author Share Posted May 4, 2004 This one I made because I got mad one day at my Dad because I'm mysteriously being forced out of my house. *Red* Get out, go home, why don't you leave me alone, and calm down your tone? What's your deal lately? Why are you yelling at me? Let me be who I wanna be. Your an ass, your a d***, your the world's biggest prick, Why don't you just except it? Why are you so mad? you try to make me feel bad, but that's just sad. I'm leaving, goodbye, Don't start to make me cry, sometimes I wish you'd just.....try. You barely even know me, you NEVER even try, I hope I never see you again, Now who wants to cry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Rythe Posted May 4, 2004 Share Posted May 4, 2004 You are feeding your emotions, that leads to the Dark Side....AHEM! Thats good. Anger poems would be the easiest to write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kain Posted May 4, 2004 Share Posted May 4, 2004 Yea, he's a dirt nugget... ...whattaya mean 'WHO?'. You know who... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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