whitedragon Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 in my spare time ive been working on a story called "no sympathy for the devil". its about an assassin in the future named john who is haunted by memorys of his past. after WW3 man kind decided to colonise the rest of the solar system and they live in big dome citys. john had just finished an assassination when he got a new job to take out the leader of a new nazi group. for cover he decided to team up with a bounty hunter named chris. after awhile he hears on the news that the man he was sent to kill was already dead and he saw how he was killed, he suspects the man who betrayed him. the main bad guy in the story is a man named dameon, john and dameon used to work togeather in a mafia group called the red tigers, after a big job dameon shot john and left him for dead. the story between dameon and john is kindof complex and im not done with it yet. but anyway john decides to stay with chris untill he can find dameon and kill him. i mite be done with in in about another month and then theres the part about transfering it from paper to the computer. tell me what you think of my story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wacky_Baccy Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 It sounds awesome! I wanna read it as soon as possible ...Any chance of a sneak-peek once you've got a version on your computer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Might be neat to have a stories only forum, but that's just my idea. I'll run it by matt-windu when I get a chance. I have read some really really good stuff here , so I think it would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wacky_Baccy Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 That sounds like an excellent idea, Groovy - I hope the admins are still in their forum-creating mood... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Well I've submitted the idea of a Stories based forum, for both Star Wars and non-Star Wars related fan fiction. We will see what happens next. I've been tossing the idea around for some time, but the recent creation of new forums and this thread have brought the idea back on the table again. Keep your fingers crossed kids! [edit- the fact that so many forums have been created already might work against this idea but I hope not ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acdcfanbill Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 interesting story idea, hopefully the story isnt as long as that War and Peace sig u have there.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Yeah i'm a big fan of the folding chair part myself? w00t? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taos Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Hey WhiteDragon....the story sounds good to me! I want to know more about that relationship between Dameon and John.......it would have to be pretty complex. Any word on when it might be finished?? Nice job!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Don't mean to rain on your parade Dragon, but that sounds an awful lot like the premise of Cowboy Bebop. Just thought I'd let you know what I think about it. But hey, if done right, it'll still be great man. After all, imitation is the most sincere form of flattery. I get the feeling Cowboy Bebop may have an influence on my writing now as well, that show just seems to have that kind of effect on people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leXX Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 It sounds really great whitedragon, can't wait to read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clemme w/Stick Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Sounds pretty good, will you post it or something like that? well, keep me up to date! The story line sounds pretty good and sortof exciting! *Runs away* -Clemme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kstar__2 Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 it sounds great whitedragon, i'm shure going to read it ! ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Originally posted by Darth Groovy Well I've submitted the idea of a Stories based forum, for both Star Wars and non-Star Wars related fan fiction. We will see what happens next. I've been tossing the idea around for some time, but the recent creation of new forums and this thread have brought the idea back on the table again. Keep your fingers crossed kids! [edit- the fact that so many forums have been created already might work against this idea but I hope not ] That sounds really good. If a forum could be made for just stories, that would be excellent. I think people who want to post their stories on here get stuck as to whether they post in the Swamp or the RP section. So yeah, it sounds like a great idea:) I've been working on some stories for my character in the Academy Wars, and I've started writing a thriller/drama story...you guys'll have to wait and see what it's about;)heh And that sounds so cool White:)I'm a sucker for futuristic Sci-Fis (Blade Runner is one of my favourite films). Can't wait to read it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Im Yo Pusha> Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Its pretty good, but sounds kind of firmiliar. I like Groovy's idea for a story/review thread. I have a couple of finished scripts, I write alot and am going to film school at USC. But, I could pitch some of the ideas. One of the stories was sold to a guy at New Line, who could put together the film ,but Im not sure yet. Once I graduate Id like to work for a studio though. Anyways, good job man. Post back when the mods make a decision bout the story thread (if u contacted them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mex Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Cool master! Sounds pretty good to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted November 20, 2002 Author Share Posted November 20, 2002 Originally posted by Reb Starblazer Don't mean to rain on your parade Dragon, but that sounds an awful lot like the premise of Cowboy Bebop. Just thought I'd let you know what I think about it. But hey, if done right, it'll still be great man. After all, imitation is the most sincere form of flattery. I get the feeling Cowboy Bebop may have an influence on my writing now as well, that show just seems to have that kind of effect on people. wel uhhh *scratches head* i got a bunch of ideas from the show. but i have been toying with this story even before i heard of cowboy bebop though i will admit that i have to change abunch of my story because its almost too similar. but ph33r not all most all of it will be origional Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted November 20, 2002 Author Share Posted November 20, 2002 btw what do you guys think of the title Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Im Yo Pusha> Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 I like the title, keep working on the story and change some of the similarities Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taos Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 Hhmmm......the title sounds good. But I just think Devil's Advocate for some reason......*shrugs* Not that I have anything in mind. I like your ideas and btw, I've never heard of Cowboy Bebop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhantomHelix Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 cowboy bebop is an anime show. you should defnitely change some of the similarities, but other than that, its awesome dude! good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pad Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 think its gonne be a great story dragon. keep me posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted November 20, 2002 Author Share Posted November 20, 2002 i could post a quick preview if anybody wants just tell me if you want an actions scene or what ever edit: i must warn you that the story may be cool but im not sure how well its written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Gnarly Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 hmmm nice but for some reason i think Trigun in a scence but oh well and Darth Strom isnt that hannibals avatar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted November 20, 2002 Author Share Posted November 20, 2002 Originally posted by KingPin hmmm nice but for some reason i think Trigun in a scence but oh well and Darth Strom isnt that hannibals avatar? i havent seen trigun before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Gnarly Posted November 20, 2002 Share Posted November 20, 2002 well im not acussing you of anything but.....im just saying other then that i LOVE IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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