Darth InSidious Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 I, Fanficcer Long time ago in the far away galaxy... A prophecy was foreseen: "A thing will happen, and then another thing, yea a third thing also." And it did. "And now you will die Lord Darth Malak, Ruler of the Sith!!!!!!" screamed Revan at the top of his voice and very loudly. "Noooooooo!" said Malak very slowly. Then Revan kiled him with his great big purple lightsaber and stabbed him through the chest. Then Malak died. "You were a foal, Malak. Good always truants over evil." "Oh, Revan I love you, but we must escape before the Star Fodge explodes!" said Bastilla. "I love you too let's run quickly." Revan said. And run they did. They got to the Ebony Hawk just, in time. "About time" said Crath "I was about to leave without you too." "Let's go then quickly" said Raven. Then Revan and Bastilla went to the back and made sacks noisily. Then The Enob Hawk landed on the plant and everyone shouted hooray. "You have savde the galaxy" said Master Vendor and everyone shouted hooray again and he put a medal on Raven's chest. "STOP" shouted a being who pulled out a gun. He looked almost exactly like a Twi'lek except his skin was pinky-white and he didn't have lekku and he had hair and flat teeth instead of pointy ones. "That's Darth Revan. I'll kill you Revan!" And he shot at Revan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trench Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 I don't know why, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Te Darasuum Mandalor Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is this a spoof of LOH's story I, Avenian? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quanon Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Can't wait for the screwdivers... eh screwdriver... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TriggerGod Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is this a spoof of LOH's story I, Avenian? obviously not this is a completely original story and i give it 10 stars out of 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Hunger Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is this a spoof of LOH's story I, Avenian? No, it's an attempt to mock it. DI has often mocked my posts in the past and he obviously felt inclined to do the same to my fan fiction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Det. Bart Lasiter Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 No, it's an attempt to mock it. DI has often mocked my posts in the past and he obviously felt inclined to do the same to my fan fiction. that's what a spoof is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Litofsky Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 A brilliant addition to your list of fictions, Darathy. You have truly endeavored to gift upon the public a tale of excellence and mastery, with depth, elegance, and stunning dialogue all packed into half-a-page of great fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is this a spoof of LOH's story I, Avenian? Have you people never heard of the book "I, Robot"? Cut the spamming, peeps. Carry on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Posted January 9, 2010 Share Posted January 9, 2010 I have. read it, loved it, and saw the movie. Anyway, nice story DI, very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
none223 Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 It is good...once you overlook the "typoes".....and poor grammar....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trench Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 It is good...once you overlook the "typoes".....and poor grammar....... Knowing Insidious, those were most probably intentional. What I find most interesting about this is the move from "Ebony Hawk" to Enob Hawk". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quanon Posted January 10, 2010 Share Posted January 10, 2010 It is good...once you overlook the "typoes".....and poor grammar....... :rofl: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machievelli Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qui-Gon Glenn Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 :rofl: DI carnt speil wirth a dangued terd. Brilliant, DI, brilliant, even if you need remedical engrish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Te Darasuum Mandalor Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 None, you mispelled typos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
none223 Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 [sarcasm]naw dip, I didn't know that![/sarcasm] That was on purpose, hint the " " marks... So....when is part 2 gettin' released? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted February 10, 2010 Share Posted February 10, 2010 OMG!!!!!! HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHA!!! I SO needed a belly laugh today. Thanks for providing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordOfTheFish Posted February 20, 2010 Share Posted February 20, 2010 Wow cant believe I missed this. Thanks for the laugh! I need it right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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